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Summary:

A Breaking Dawn alternative story.  Edward and Bella marry and go on a very romantic honeymoon.  Complications interrupt and they return to Forks.  Decisions must be made and the family has to move quickly.  This story is an A/U from BD.  There is no pregnancy and no more love triangle.  It is about how Edward and Bella were meant to be together and then must stand together against all odds.

Canon Pairings.  Lots of romantic lemons.  AU because some story lines from Breaking Dawn were completely abandoned in place of ones that I like better! Rated NC-17 for the lemons and for possible future violence and occasional language when the characters get really stressed out and stuff!


Categories: Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Eleazar, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Leah, Mike, Other Character, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Tanya
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Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: Yes Word count: 193651
[Report This] Published: December 05, 2008 Updated: May 09, 2009


Reviewer: alice_jasper_lover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

Awsome story!, I really enjoyed reading it, it made me forget all about my bad days when I settled down to read it at night. It was so good, and showed many diffrent moods for the book. I was laughing, awwing, crying and sitting at the eged of my chair every time i read this story. I think that this is a better way to end the twilight books then Breaking Dawn, sorry Stephine. I just liked the way that Bella and Edward didn't have a baby, because the whole Bella and Edward thing was about the things that Edward would take from Bella and one of the bigger things, other then her life, was the fact that he can't give her a child. I think that the way you went was very good. I also like the way that there was a fight at the end, I think that by not having a fight in the end made it harder to see in my mind. And you made the feeling when Jacob died so strong, I didn't even like Jacob all that much and wanted him to just leave Bella and Edward alone but then when he died I was crying so hard that i was late for class trying to make my face less red.

thank you very much for writing this story. it;s people with talent like you that i look at and wish I had even half as much talent as you.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad that my story could cheer you up some!  I'm also happy that it was an emotional experience for you.  It was so much fun for me to write.  I'm glad that you didn't mind not having the baby.  I just felt distracted by that in BD and wanted to explore E/B's fated love more.  Sorry I made you late for class, but I'm glad that it affected you so much.  I really am not a Jacob fan either but I knew that I had to include him just because of how much he was in BD so I knew from before I started writing that this was how the story was going to end for him, but I didn't expect it to affect me so.  I found that it was really hard for me to write that and almost cut it, but decided that was the way the story was supposed to go and I was sticking by my guns.  I'm glad I did.

Thanks so much for you kind words and for reading my story!

 
Summary:

Bella is excited to give Renesmee the perfect Christmas, but Edward seems a little wary. She decides to give Edward the perfect Christmas and she has 12 days to so!


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Nessie, Renesmee, Rosalie
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 2112
[Report This] Published: December 21, 2008 Updated: December 22, 2008


Reviewer: alice_jasper_lover Signed
Date: May 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: The Perfect Christmas

this is so good! i can't wait till you write more, but it is may so i think i'm gonna have to wait. hope you write soon!!

 
Summary:

After twenty blissful years of marriage and happiness as a vampire, Bella and the rest of the Cullens embark on yet another college experience-Yale will most certainly, never be the same. A dark figure from Bella's past pops up-suddenly human, throwing the Cullens for a loop. As they struggle to keep their secret, Bella's past becomes fixated on her, desperate to claim her. How can they protect themselves when the enemy is human? 

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Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Rosalie
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Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes Word count: 63993
[Report This] Published: February 04, 2009 Updated: July 30, 2010


Reviewer: alice_jasper_lover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: One. As Thick as Thieves [Edward]

mann, why can't bella ever learn? she should know that she can tell edward ANYTHING! i hope she tells him soon, and i can't wait to find out what alice does!!!

 

and i'm lovin' this fic btw. one of the best on here. and i read some of the books you talked about. like marked in the house of night books by p.c and kristen cast, it's great!

hurry and write the next chapter please..

 
Reviewer: alice_jasper_lover Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Eighteen. Gotta Be Somebody's Blues [Edward]

First of all, i would like to say I am very sorry for your break up, even though i don't know you and you don't know me I just wanted to say something. When I broke up with my boyfriend three weeks ago, it was hell. I was almost as bad as Bella. but then my best friends, that i couldn't live without, forced me to have a slumber party with them, they let me cry it out to them, watched all my favorite movies even though they hate them and danced around and sang with me all night. Thats really what you should do it really helps.

Second, I love your story, i wish i could right like you. I can't wait for you to update again. just don't rush yourself to get back to this when you are going though a hard time. just get though it and then start writing again. Good luck with that and I hope you find your Edward.

 
Summary:

Bella and Edward have happily been together for decades but Bella craves something new and exciting in their sex life. Jasper steps up to the plate to fill the void in Bella. Where do they go from here and who else will help them along the way? One-shot turned into a lemony story.

 

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Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 18995
[Report This] Published: April 06, 2009 Updated: July 16, 2010


Reviewer: alice_jasper_lover Signed
Date: May 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

that was really good. i can't wait to see what happens next. are you gonna post again soon?



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. Yes, I plan to post soon with a reason as to why I've been gone for so long.





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