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Penname: be_my_escape [ Contact]
Real name: Lia
Status: Member
Member Since: November 01, 2008
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Beta-reader: No
Hey!
I'm Lia and I live in Australia. I read the Twilight Series after a friend recommended it to me and I was totally sucked in.
I'm more of a read-and-review person than a writer. But I will share any good ideas if I have any.
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Summary:
Bella Swan has had a tragic and abusive childhood; everyone knew it. But not everyone knew of the bronze-haired boy who visited her in her dreams. He was the only one who knew the true Bella. But Edward wasn't real, was he?
Thank Anne Cullen for the banner :)
Categories: AU, AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Renee
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No
Word count: 29613
[Report This] Published: February 01, 2009 Updated: January 22, 2010
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed 
Date: September 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Moving Onward
Great chapter. Poor Bella. Can't wait to read more. Looking forward to when Edward and Bella meet. Has he been having the dreams too?
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: September 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: It's Downhill from Here
Great chapter. I assumed Edward was a real person until I read this chapter and that's why I asked if he was having the dreams too but I'm not sure now. Is he a real person? Or is he only a part of Bella's dreamworld that becomes real later on in the fic because Bella needs help?
Okay that sounded stupid. Ignore my rambling. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: September 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Just Keep Digging, I Can't Feel
Great chapter. Why does Rosalie like Bella? Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: September 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: The Ugly Duckling
Great chapter. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: September 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Time Means Nothing
Great chapter. What was Alice's vision about? Can't wait to read more. Author's Response: Thank you for all your lovely reviews :D
Summary:  
In the darkest depths of Port Angeles, a war has begun. Sociopathic vampire Edward seeks revenge on a Hunter, Jacob, and as images of a girl haunt Jacob’s mind, Edward is determined that he will hunt her down...
AU, Non–canon and Canon pairings, a bit OOC... maybe a lot OOC.
Rated NC–17 for violence, lemons, bad language & overall dark themes.
Disclaimer: Stephenie Meyer owns everything Twilight – I own a rather active imagination and a tendency towards vivid nightmares. No copyright infringement is intended.
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, James, Mike, Other Character, Rosalie, Tanya, Tyler
Challenges: Series: Lex Talionis
Chapters: 14 Completed: No
Word count: 81157
[Report This] Published: February 04, 2009 Updated: April 25, 2009
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: February 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Predator
I just started this story cause I have biology homework that i dont want to do and I'm really glad that I did. So far this story is really good. Looking forward to read more. Author's Response: Is it ironic that I'm avoiding my own biology homework replying to this? LOL Photosynthesis drives me mental... thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: February 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Shades Of Grey
I liked this chapter. It's really interesting reading about your characters and how different yet similar they are. I like the slight alterations with your story like the whole dead man's blood thing. It makes this story really different and unique.
I'm glad I started it.
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: February 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Rendezvous
Great chapter. Now I'm going to patiently wait for chapter four and not skip over to FF. *Resisting* SO hard...
Please update soon.
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: February 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Lex Talionis
Great story. I really like the way you portray your characters. Can't wait to see what happens after this. Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: April 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Come Crawling
I love how Edward is so careful with Bella. And how she isn't afraid of him and doesn't back down. I love the conversations they have.
Can't believe Jake punched her!
Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: April 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Return Of The Prodigal Conscience
I loved this chapter. I'm so glad Edward knows the truth now and has told Bella. I loved this bit:
“Edward?”
“Hmm?”
“I’m going to kiss you,” I told him softly.
“That’s not a very good idea.” He still didn’t open his eyes, or move his head.
“It’s the only idea I have.” Slowly, I moved onto my knees, lifting our joined hands between us as I moved closer, meeting no resistance.
Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: April 21, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Welcome To The Dark Side, Traitor
Great chapter. Love your characters. So glad Rose got there before Jake could do anything serious.
Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Summary:
The Cullens and the Hales are rival families in Forks High School, and everyone knows it. Every student to pass through the doors has known to pick a family to side with, and stay loyal to that family. That is, until Isabella Swan arrives, and her decision becomes increasingly more important.
Huge thanks to m81170 for the awesome banner.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No
Word count: 38173
[Report This] Published: February 10, 2009 Updated: May 26, 2009
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: February 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Preface
I really really liked this chapter. Great start! This is a really original idea. I haven't read anything like it before. You definitely have my attention. I can't wait to read more of this story.
I hope we can find out more about the conversation in the parking lot. I guess I'll just keep reading. Can't wait to meet Bella.
Please update soon Author's Response: Thanks for the r&r. You think it's original? Brilliant! I haven't come across anything like it before, but I knew I easily could have missed it. It's great to hear other people say they've never seen anything like it before.
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: February 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1
Great chapter. This story is starting to get really interesting. I can't wait to read more. There are so many things that haven't been revealed yet - that I hope will be in the story later on - like the confrontation between the Cullens and Hales on the first day of school.
Please update soon. Author's Response: Thanks so much. Next chapter up in either tomorrow of Tuesday, if things go well.
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: February 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2
Great chapter. I loved "I am not gay." Hehe.
Please update soon. Btw, a BPOV would be nice, or at least a few more conversations between Bella and.. anyone? Preferably Edward :)
Author's Response: Thank-you. I'll admit, I quite liked that bit myself. I could just picture his face in my head... (which was v.v. nice).
I don't think I'll be doing BPOV yet, but maybe once she becomes more involved and has more interesting things to say. But she will be featured in more conversations.
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: February 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3
Great chapter. Can't wait to read more. Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Good to hear you're enjoying it. :)
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: March 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4
Great chapter. I'm glad Edward and Bella got to talk a little more in this chapter.
Can't wait to read more. Please update soon. Author's Response: Thank-you. Just to give you a little heads up, there won't be a lot of Edward/Bella-ness in the next chapter. But there will be plenty more in future chapters. Just hold in there ;). I'm glad they got to talk too, I think that's why the chapter ended up being longer, because they just wouldn't stop talking. *sigh* Thanks for reviewing, update next Monday. (that seems to be working pretty well at the moment.)
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: March 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5
Jasper likes Bella too! I thought I noticed something in the earlier chapters but I ignored it. He likes her!
Can't wait to read more. Looking forward to the party! Author's Response: I've had so many mixed reactions to the Edward/Bella/Jasper thing. It'll be interesting to see what people think of the final product.
I'm really glad you enjoyed it, thanks for reviewing. :) Author's Response: I've had so many mixed reactions to the Edward/Bella/Jasper thing. It'll be interesting to see what people think of the final product.
I'm really glad you enjoyed it, thanks for reviewing. :)
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: March 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6
Great chapter. Thank you for finally updating. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon. Author's Response: Thank-you. And I know how long it was between updates, and I definitely don't want it to happen again. Unfortunately, it looks as though I have another busy week ahead of me, so it's back to Mondays again.
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