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Penname: be_my_escape [Contact]
Real name: Lia
Status: Member
Member Since: November 01, 2008
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Hey!


 


I'm Lia and I live in Australia. I read the Twilight Series after a friend recommended it to me and I was totally sucked in.


I'm more of a read-and-review person than a writer. But I will share any good ideas if I have any.


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Reviews by be_my_escape
 
Summary:

A sweet fluffy and slightly lemon like one shot based on the song by Tim McGraw called Don't Take the Girl.  Warning Lemon and you may need a tissue or two.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: Song Based One Shots
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2607
[Report This] Published: December 03, 2008 Updated: December 03, 2008


Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Needed a break from all my homework so i decided to come here and read something. Loved this one-shot and how it followed them from age 8 to 23. Beautiful story :)

 
Summary:

Bella Swan has been a vampire for almost 100 years, and she has an extraordinary gift-one which opens the world to her yet makes her feel all the more lonely, even among her own kind. When she starts over again in the small town of Forks and discovers another coven living there-a coven who also survives on the bloods of animals, can another lonely vampire-a vampire named Edward whose ability doesn't work on her and vice versa-change her life?


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 4765
[Report This] Published: December 04, 2008 Updated: August 02, 2009


Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

you have my attention! im intrigued and i cant wait to read more. so far im liking this story but there isnt enough to tell me what will happen next and whether ill like it or not. but you have me and i will definitely read more of this story. keep writing!

xoxo

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

...and they meet. yay! i really like this story so far. keep writing!

xoxo

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

omg i am in love! i really really really want to know what bella's talent is now. i dont know why i didnt mind waiting to find out before, but you spiked my curiousity and now i cant wait. this story is wonderful. please update soon.

keep writing,

xoxo

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 (vjgm)

Great chapter. I'm loving this story more and more with each chapter. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

 
Summary:

We always want what we can't have, but their love for each other was so much more than just temptation. He was the eager young teacher, Bella's friend and her inspiration in a high school world where she didn't quite fit. She was the bright young woman who took Edward completely by surprise, his saving grace after years of closing himself off from life and love. When their days are turned upside down by their secret relationship, will they find a way to be together?

 

 

Rated for subject matter and sexually explicit material in later chapters. Huge thanks to Anne Cullen for the awesome new banner and to m81170 the beautiful fan art/banner below! You are both amazing!  

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie, Tanya, Tyler
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 64999
[Report This] Published: December 04, 2008 Updated: May 07, 2010


Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 06, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Boundaries

oh no! stupid edward...

im intrigued and i do want to read more. keep writing!

xoxo



Author's Response: Haha, thanks so much! I'll keep writing, I promise ^_^

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Killing Me Softly

poor bella and edward. thank god for alice.

please update soon. i really like this story so far.

xoxo



Author's Response: I do love Alice in this story. She's one heck of a Bestie. Thanks so much for the review!

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Words of Wisdom

oh thank you jesus for the beautiful person that is alice. thank you thank you thank you. someone had to tell edward and im glad alice did it - blunt and all.

kep writing,

xoxo



Author's Response: Alice is rather amazing ^_^ Thanks so much for the review!

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 15, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Pain Killers

just when i thought things would work out, they take a horribe turn for the worse. i hope things do work out ok though. this is just too depressing.

keep writing,

xoxo



Author's Response:

They will! Things will work out! I promise!

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Reconciliation

omg i loved it!! im so glad someone wrote a fanfic where edward and rose are actually... close? i cant think of the right word for it but its definitely nice to see a change. this chapter was so sweet and touching. i actually cried. the phone call was really nice. i cant wait to read more about rose and edward.

keep writing,

xoxo 



Author's Response:

Rose and Edward have always been the most like siblings to me. I'm going to have fun exploring their relationship ^_^ Thanks so much for the awesome review and the next chqpter is coming, I promise. I'm sorry it took so long!

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Dangerous Encounters

oh god not a cliffie! who grabbed her?! and why is alice acting weird? hmm... these are the mysteries of life. please update soon. im really worried for bella. did someone spike her drink? why did she pass out? oh god did james spike her drink? and is he the one that grabbed her?! poor bella cant catch a break. please be okay!



Author's Response:

haha, she does have a rough life. I'm sorry I didn't get to your review until just now, but I wanted to let you know that I truly appreciate it ^_^ Thank you so much!

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Tears and Fears

Oh my god I'm so glad Bella's okay. I was worried for a while there. And now that James is gone, Emmett and Rose can get together. I love Edward trying to be a good brother and talking to Emmett. I cried in all the Edward/Rose moments. They were wonderful.

I can't believe Edward lied to the paramedic. Isn't there something else he could have said? Isn't being her teacher enough? I was so worried that that lie would get blown way out of proportion and Edward would end up in trouble... again. But things are going well so far.

I loved Tanya. I think this is the first time I've read about a gay Tanya. But I like it. She was funny in this chapter and helpful to Edward. I hope we see a little of her in the next chapter.

Please update soon.

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you like Tanya! She is one of my favorite characters to write in this story ^_^ As for Edward lying to the paramedics, Just being her teacher would not have allowed him to stay with her through everything. To go to the hospital, yes, but he wouldn't have gotten updates on her condition or been aloowed to stay with her in her room past visiting hours or without her consent(which she can't give because she's unconscious, haha.) Don't worry about it being a big deal, it could go that way in real life, but I'm not going to have this story turn that way. And the husband remark does come into play when Bella wakes up ;-)

I'm really gald you like the chappy ^_^ The Rose/Edward moments were very difficult to write(emotional wise), but I'm so proud of how they turned out. Thanks so much for both of your reviews ^_^

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Changing Perspective

EmPOV was great. I really liked this chapter. I can't wait for things to go back to EPOV or BPOV though. I wanna know what's happening.

Thank you for the great chapter. Please update soon.



Author's Response:

BPOV is coming up next! Thanks for the review! I'm so glad you liked the chapter!

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Together

Great chapter. Thank you for finally updating. Can't wait to read more. Please update sooner next time.

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Glue for Broken Pieces (vjgm)

Great chapter. I liked all the E/B interaction. I'm glad Edward was there for Bella when they told Charlie about what happened. Hope Rose gets better soon and I really like Tanya's character. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

 
Summary:

 

stories/2326/images/gonebanner.jpgWhat if the wolf pack hadn't interrupted Laurent before he bit Bella?  This is the story of Bella being changed despite Edward leaving her to prevent it from happening.

Rated for later chapters.  Just like in New Moon, Edward will make an appearance eventually!

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Laurent, Quil, Rosalie, Sam, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 71429
[Report This] Published: December 09, 2008 Updated: November 24, 2009


Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Decisions

great story. keep writing!

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Visions

great chapter. i cant wait to read more. looking forward to reading about the cullens going back to forks and seeing bella.



Author's Response:

Yes, this will be an interesting reunion now, eh?

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Revelations

You left it on a cliffie!! NO!! *breathe in. breathe out*

What's Edward going to do? He will go back to her won't he? He won't do something stupid again like in New Moon will he?

I can't wait to see what happens next. Will there be a fight? Will Bella wake up and stop the fight if there is one? Or will Edward come back and stop it? Hmm... maybe it's none of them. Maybe they'll just talk about it and Jake will let them in.

Please update soon.



Author's Response:

He was stupid in New Moon, wasn't he?  Thanks for the thoughts!

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Waiting

Yay Edward's coming back :D

I'm glad The Cullens and Jacob are all there to help Bella. Can't wait for Edward to arrive. What'll happen to Charlie?

Please update soon.



Author's Response:

Charlie will make a reappearance shortly!

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Reunions

Yay Edward's back!! I almost had a heart attack when Bella couldn't remmeber who everyone was. But she remembered!! Thank God!

I can't wait to read more. Please update soon.



Author's Response:

Yes, she remembered, but I really felt the trauma the change had inflicted on her body would cause at least temporary memory loss...

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Reunions, Part II

Wow. That kiss...

I loved this chapter. The E/B and the A/B moments.

Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it--thanks!

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Reunions, Part III

Great chapter. I'm glad Edward and Bella are getting there. I'm Team Edward so I'm not a big fan of Jake but Bella's a vampire now so it's okay... I think.

Please update soon.



Author's Response:

Don't worry, I'm with ya!

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Decisions, Reprised

:D Have I told you how much I love this story? Well I do. I love your writing. Amazing stuff!

I'm glad we got to find out a little more about Bella's gift and E/B's relationship.

Can't wait to read more. How will Edward respond to Bella?

Please update soon.



Author's Response:

How Edward will respond is a good question...glad you're enjoying!

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Beginnings

LOL "So, things are...well?"

Loved this chapter. Can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

So very Carlisle!  Glad you enjoyed!

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Alaska

Great chapter. I'm so glad they worked things out. I had a minor freak out and thought Bella would leave them. I like the idea of a date. It's really sweet.

"I hoped and prayed that nothing ever would again." Foreshadowing?

Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

 




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