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Penname: be_my_escape [Contact]
Real name: Lia
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Member Since: November 01, 2008
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Hey!


 


I'm Lia and I live in Australia. I read the Twilight Series after a friend recommended it to me and I was totally sucked in.


I'm more of a read-and-review person than a writer. But I will share any good ideas if I have any.


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Consumed by Kreative Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 310]
Summary:

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Edward left Bella broken, but not alone. She still had her father, her mother, the pack and Jake. When a vengeful Victoria puts all her efforts into changing that, however, Bella decides to run before more damage could be done. But she soon realizes there is no way she can outrun a superfast vampiress bent on revenge. So...she stops running,... waits... and leaves it all up to fate.


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Irina, Jacob, Jasper, Kachiri, Kate, Laurent, Renee, Rosalie, Senna, Tanya, Victoria, Zafrina
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 35396
[Report This] Published: May 28, 2010 Updated: August 25, 2010


Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Fight for me

Great chapter. Glad everyone yelled and screamed and fought and let it all out. Hope they can all start working on rebuilding their family now. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: The Heady Smell of Flowers

Great chapter. Glad Edward and Bella are getting closer. Why Emmett why?! What's Edward going to tell Bella? Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

 
Summary:

Edward&Bella

High school softball star Bella Swan’s life is immediately halted and turned upside-down when her father dies. In a blink of an eye, Bella is forced to leave the comfort of her hometown of Phoenix and everything else she has known to live with her estranged mother of six years and her new family in the small town of Forks, Washington. Though still in mourning over the death of her father, Bella decides to get back on her feet and find some sense of normality by going back to doing something her and her father had the best memories enjoying together--playing softball. But, Bella soon realizes that along with moving to small towns from big cities, there are consequences: No softball team.

When Bella decides not to take this news lying down, she soon finds herself in a world where she’s never been before.

The boys’ baseball team.

Oh, what green-eyed adventures wait for her there…

Many thanks to my best friend babymonsta for making my banner and who is also my Alpha before I turn in my chapters to the Beta. You are the Hayley Williams to my Paramore, love.

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 53196
[Report This] Published: June 03, 2010 Updated: May 11, 2011


Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Mourning Sickness

I just started this fic but I really like it so far. Can't wait to read more.

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Mourning Sickness

I just started this fic but I really like it so far. Can't wait to read more.

 
Summary:

A twist on the relationship between Alice and Bella.  Coming out isn't easy, even for a vampire.  Lemony, with a splash of lemon for good measure.  I swear, there's a plot in here somewhere, hidden behind a stack of lemons.....;) 

Femslash, Vamp/human.  BxA, ExJ.  OOC. 

 Rated for good reason. 

Fabulous banner by FhionaBridges1504


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 26664
[Report This] Published: June 06, 2010 Updated: October 30, 2010


Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hey I thought I'd try something different so I checked out your fic. I really like it so far. Can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking a chance on different!  It's a ball to write this, and I love hearing what others thing about it.  Hope you'll stick around for the ride!  :)

Appreciate the review!  :)

 
Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1969]
Summary:

 

After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Other Character
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes Word count: 146076
[Report This] Published: June 20, 2010 Updated: February 03, 2011


Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34

Great chapter. Sex against the bookshelves :) Loved it. Hope the next two months fly by. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

I'm saddened each week that brings us closer to the end, but I'm happy for E, B and Jack to get their HEA.

The promised EPOV from Chapters 31/32 is up now, as well as the Jack POV outtake! Go check them out!

Chapter 35 is with my Beta now, so hopefully we'll have it up here in the queue shortly! 

♥ Shel ♥

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"Garrett was just telling us about the Flag Football team sign ups. I really want to play this year. Please?"

She placed her hands on her hips, eyeing her son carefully. "Let me talk to your dad and we'll see."

Garrett's eyes widened and he looked at Jack, grinning. "Is that weird?"

Jack's brow scrunched in confusion. "Is what weird?"

"That you have a dad now."

"I always did have a dad," Jack responded. "I just couldn't remember where he was."

"But still," Garrett continued, "after all of this time apart, is it weird now?"

Jack thought for a moment before shaking his head. "No, not really. It feels right."

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Great chapter. Loved all the family interaction and I'm glad Esme shared her story with Bella. So Edward is actually Esme's brother? Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! Just in case you're unaware, the story updates every Friday on FFnet. I try to get it in the queue here on Thursdays, so it's hit or miss when it gets put up here! I post teasers on Mondays; the latest teases are up on the Parachute Blog as we speak!

My computer is having issues at the moment, but I don't anticipate any delays for Friday! I normally respond to reviews on Monday afternoons, but said computer issues kept me from it until today! 

Hope you enjoy the teasers!

XoXo  Shel


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The pair got lost in each other's eyes until they were interrupted by the pounding of feet on steps.

Jack skidded to a halt in the hallway at the top of the stairs. He looked between his parents curiously, not quite sure what to make of them standing so close to each other. He walked over to his mother's side and looked up at his father. 

"Is everything okay here, Mom?" he asked Bella, while never taking his eyes off of Edward. 

Bella suppressed a giggle at Jack's attempt at bravado. She placed a hand on her son's shoulder, which caused him to look up at her. She smiled at him and nodded. 

"Everything is just fine, Jack. We were just about to head outside."

 

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

Great chapter. Glad Bella told Esme Marcus' plan and they managed to talk out their disagreement. Yay Edward asked Bella out! Is there really any chance she'll say no? Can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! I have it on good authority that it's a *squeal*-worthy one!

I play TwiFicTrivia on Twitter every Tuesday at 9 pm EST. It is so much freaking fun. Check it out if you get the chance! We had a bunch of new players this past week, so I figured I'd mention it one more time. I won't bring it up again for awhile.

=)

Shel

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Bella sighed and smiled, her eyes closed and facing the sky, as the classical notes of Tchaicovsky's 1812 Overture swirled around the air. She felt Edward's hand gently begin to play with her hair and she bit her lip to stifle a sigh. He had been nothing short of amazing today and she didn't want their date to come to a close any time soon.

She opened her eyes and turned her face slightly to the left.

Edward's fingers still held onto a strand of hair as he smiled down at her.

"Enjoying the concert?" he asked, in a low husky voice. She smiled widely and nodded happily.

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

Great chapter. Glad Bella, Edward, Esme and Tanya met with the Prestons and they got to meet Jack. Loved the Tanya/Edward moments. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I'm so sorry that I wasn't able to hop on here sooner and get your review to you! I'll definitely try better! The next chapter should be up here soon!

A huge thank you to everyone who sent their birthday wishes and/or nominated Jack & Parachute in the Twilight Original Character Awards! If you'd like to jump up and nom an OC that you love, do eeet!


XoXo

Shel

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She watched her son carefully as he made his way downstairs, with Alice by his side. Something wasn't right. Sure, he was smiling and acting jovial, but there was something that was just off. Their gazes met and her worry increased exponentially. Jack's eyes were dull and missing his usual spark.

She pulled him quietly to the side and whispered in his ear.

"What's wrong, baby?"

He smiled genuinely at her and shook his head.

"Nothing, Mom. I'm just a little nervous."

She narrowed her eyes and nodded, although she wasn't convinced that he was telling the truth, but starting an argument right now wasn't really an option at the moment.

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35

Oh my God please tell me Bella say yes! She has to! Glad Edward came to spend Bella's birthday with her. The proposal was so sweet, even though there weren't any words spoken. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! Over 1000 for this chapter alone between here and FFnet! You guys amaze me! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

Parachute is up for three Walk of Fame Awards: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year. It's up against some major big ones like University of Edward Masen, Master of the Universe and Emancipation Proclamation, so I don't hold any expectation other than getting squashed like a bug. I am also up for three writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.

I would adore winning the Hopelessly Devoted award. It's for the one writer that you know you can always count on. I think I've proven to you guys over and over that I'm "hopelessly devoted" to you, with the weekly updates and review replies to each and every reviewer. If you head over there and end up feeling that another author up for the award deserves it more, please follow your heart and vote for them. I just ask you to please keep me in consideration. ^_^

That being said, here are your promised teasers! The first from the next chapter of Parachute and the second from Victoria POV that I've written for the Fandom Against Domestic Violence fundraiser. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Parachute ~ Chapter 36 Teaser:

Bella stood, drenched head to toe, in the middle of her front lawn. Hot tears streamed down her face as the chilly rain pelted her skin. Her mouth was open slightly in shock, as she gazed down with wide eyes at the man she loved more than life itself. Edward's hopeful, joyous face grinned up at her from his stance on one knee. The ring held in his hand was a single brilliant diamond that was simple, yet elegant.

"Isabella Swan, I have been captivated by you since the moment I first laid eyes on you. That love only grew and expanded as I got to know you and saw first hand what a wonderful mother you are to our son. Forever could never be long enough for me, to feel like I've had long enough with you. Marry me?"

She covered her mouth and let out a sob, before throwing her arms around him and shouting, "Yes!"

They fell together, a mass a limbs and lips, their hearts beating both beating wildly. He pulled away slightly and pushed a lock of rain-saturated hair from her face.

"Let's go inside, please. I don't want you to catch a cold."

When they stood, his eyes were drawn to her white shirt, now completely plastered against her bare breasts, her nipples hard and straining against the fabric. His hand reached out to brush against her breast, causing her to become self conscious and cross her arms across her chest. She laughed lightly and nodded her head towards the house.

"Come on, let's get dry."

Edward let out a loud guffaw. "I'd rather keep you wet, love."

His hands wrapped around her waist and he pulled her back to his chest as they tumbled into the house. Sopping wet clothes soon littered the foyer floor and hands roamed greedily.

"Where is our bedroom?" he asked huskily, sweeping her into his arms.

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Victoria POV Outtake ~ "In the End" teaser:

I won't ever be remembered for my common sense. I know most of you hate me and I'm fine with that. I deserve it. I was a bad, bad girl. For those of you who don't know my story, I'll start at the beginning.

My mother married my father for his money and power. When she'd finally had enough, she left and took half of his net worth, including me. He never seemed to mind. He sent an obscenely large support check once a month, but it always felt like a buy-off. Once he re-married and began a family with his new wife, our interactions were even fewer. Who knows how I would have turned out if he had made more of an effort? He's just as much to blame for my upbringing as my mother is. He knew how she was, yet he still didn't lift a finger to keep me.

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

Great chapter. Glad E/B's relationship is progressing, hope they can stay together at the end of summer. What's wrong with Jack? Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teasers are up on the Parachute Blog! http://kitsushel.blogspot.com

Don't forget to nominate your favorite OC character and their story in the Twilight Original Character Awards! If you'd like to jump and nom an OC that you love, the link is up on the blog and on my profile! Keep Jack and Parachute in mind if you decide to head over there, but if not, we'll still love you anyway! =)

♥ Shel ♥ 

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"Are you bored, too, Mom?"

Bella huffed and sat back. "Yeah, so sue me."

Jack looked around the room and then back at his Mom. "How about we make a quick escape."

She cocked her head to the side. "Go on, you've intrigued Mother."    

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

Great chapter. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.



Author's Response:

Sorry about not being to respond to Chapter 21's review! Hopefully I'm forgiven! <3

Chapter 23 should be up shortly! 

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27

Great chapter. Hope they can find a way to rid Victoria from their lives. Glad Edward's considering moving to Seattle :) Hopefully, this solves the whole end of summer separation problem. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The next chapter is in the queue now as a special early update! Hopefully, it will be up soon! The Monday teasers are already up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)  

I just posted a O/S to my FFnet account called "I'm not that Girl." I'm proud to announce that it won one of the two First Place spots in the Public Vote for the FanFicAddicts Anon 100 Pictures contest!

Also peaking of oneshots, I have another one in the OSS Contest called "Misery Business." It's my second time writing a lemon, so consider it preparing for your Parachute one. ;-) Check it out - vote and leave some love for the authors, even it's not for me!

♥ Shel ♥

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"What has you smiling so beautifully?" Esme asked curiously, just before the flight attendants announced that they were free to exit the plane.

Bella wasn't sure exactly how to respond. Edward wanted to be the one to sit down and explain his desire to relocate to his parents. Plus, nothing was set in stone, like he himself has said. She decided to go with the partial truth.

"I was just thinking about Jack and Edward. I thought my life was complete with Jack, but Edward adds a whole other dimension. I can't picture our lives without him."    

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

Great chapter. The date was sooo sweet. E/B are really cute. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up sometime tomorrow on FFnet. I'll do my best to get it up here quickly as well! It's a bit shorter than normal, but on the plus side, you'll be getting a full chapter again hopefully on Friday. Oh, and have you checked out the Blog teasers yet? There is doozy of a one up there this week! Plus the one for Chapter 22 will go up Wednesday night. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

Thanks for all of the love and support!

=)

Shel

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Now that she had fallen in adoration with the Cullen clan, she couldn't imagine leaving them. But on the same token, she couldn't imagine leaving her own family and friends behind. The questions whirled around like a tornado, forcing her to blink back tears at their sudden force. She felt a nudge and turned to Esme, who was smiling at her.

"Hey, no frowning," she half-whispered. "Try to enjoy the day, sweetie."

Bella shook her head and smiled sadly. "I'm sorry, Esme. Too many thoughts running around in my head. I don't know what I'm doing."

Esme laughed lightly. "Oh, sweetheart! None of us know what we're doing. Life's a dance that we learn as we go. Everything will work out for the best, you'll see."

"How can you be so sure, Esme? I can't see how this will end happily."

Bella sniffed and looked down at her plate.

"How can I not, Bella? Fate stepped in and brought you to love and keep Jack safe. Fate brought you and Jack back to us. I can't help but be hopeful for the future, especially knowing that my grandson is alive and safe and loved."

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Great chapter. Loved the bonding time, and glad Alice is finally here. I've missed her. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The next Outtake, titled: Save Me San Francisco, is looking to be finished up Wednesday at this point. I though it'd be up sooner, but I got sidetracked, lol. As soon as it's ready, I'll put up in the queue here!

Listen, I love you guys, which is why I take the time to reply to everyone who reviews and post the teasers and pics to the Blog. It's why I do silly little things, like posting polls and questions via Facebook and Twitter and checking out the Twilighted Thread. I want you guys to feel like you are a part of the story. I hope I'm succeeding!

<3 Shel

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Bella laughed brightly during their back and forth banter, but noticed Emmett's stiff posture out of the corner of her eye. She bit her lip and decided that there was no time like the present to find out just what his problem was. She looked up into Edward's face and smiled.

"Do you think you could go check on Jack, to make sure he remembers his helmet and pads? He has a tendency to forget things when he gets excited."

Edward nodded and grinned before turning and heading up the stairs. When he was out of sight, she whirled to face Emmett and put her hands on her hips.

"What is your problem?"

"I don't know what you're talking about," he replied in a voice as blank as his face. She narrowed her eyes and took a step forward, so she wouldn't have to raise her voice.

"Yes, yes you do. I want to know what problem you have with me, that makes you feel the need to glower at the back of my head whenever you don't think I'm looking. Pretty soon Edward or Jack are going to notice, too, and I'll be damned if I let that happen. Both of them have already been hurt too much without adding you to the pile."

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28

HAPPY THANKSGIVING!
We don't celebrate it in Australia but my family in America does so I get to hear about all the amazing festivites (FOOD) you guys have while I'm over here ordering pizza :P

Great chapter. Glad Esme and Bella got some bonding time, it was sweet to see Esme there for Bella when Renee showed up. How will Renee and Bella's relationship develop? Glad Edward and Jack came to see Bella, hope they stay for the rest of the book tour. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are already up on the Blog now. It's pretty, umm, hot? (kitsushel.blogspot.com)  I'll try and have this in the queue here at Twilighted asap this week!

Just a couple of things before I leave you with your teaser! Parachute is up for two Avant Garde Awards, Best Bella and Best Kid. Voting ends on the 4th so please vote if you can! We have some tough competition!

Also, we've been nom'med for three Original Character Awards! Most Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough against A Rough Start's Anthony, who is one of my fave kiddos! But, alas, I do love Jack more! Voting for those open up today!

♥ Shel ♥

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"Jack?" Bella called anxiously. Her head whipped from side to side frantically. "Jack!"

Edward's hand squeezed her tightly as he pulled her towards the customer service department. The crowd was heavy with people and her heart pounded in her chest painfully.  She pulled her hand away and started to push through the crowd, heading back towards where she last saw her son.

"Bella, wait!" Edward called, but she was too far gone in panic to listen.

She stopped for a minute and tried to think clearly. What would Jack most want to see in this store?

Immediately thinking of the answer, Bella tore off towards the escalators.    

 

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I just started this fic but I really like it so far. Looking forward to reading more :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday on FFnet/TWCS and post teasers on Mondays. I try to get this is in the validation queue the night before, so hopefully you guys don't have to wait too long! The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!


<3  Shel

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"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.    

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Great chapter. How did Jack end up in the alley? Can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday on FFnet/TWCS and post teasers on Mondays. I try to get this is in the validation queue the night before, so hopefully you guys don't have to wait too long! The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!


<3  Shel

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"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.    

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Great chapter. How did Jack end up in the alley? Can't wait to read more.

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Great chapter. I feel the same as Bella. From what Jack's said, his family is wonderful and probably miss him, but I would feel bad for Bella if she was separated from Jack. Can't wait to read more.

 
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Date: August 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Great chapter. Love Bella and Jack's relationship. Glad Jack got help to stop the nightmares. Can't wait to read more.

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Poor Bella, can't believe Jacob would do something like that to her! Glad he got what he deserved though and Leah and Bella are now closer.

LOL Jack Attack! Love it. Why hasn't his family filed a missing persons report or anything yet? Don't they want him back?

Can't wait to read more.

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Great chapter. Can't wait to meet the Cullens.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday on FFnet/TWCS and post teasers on Mondays. I try to get this is in the validation queue the night before, so hopefully you guys don't have to wait too long! The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!


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"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.    

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Great chapter. Glad Bella's getting her books published. Absolutely loved the Bella/Jack moment at his party. Can't wait to read more.

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Great chapter. Glad Bella's book has been published. Jack was so cute at the signing! Wow... what issues does Renee have? Can't believe she said those things about Jack. Can't wait to read more.

 




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