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Penname: be_my_escape [Contact]
Real name: Lia
Status: Member
Member Since: November 01, 2008
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Hey!


 


I'm Lia and I live in Australia. I read the Twilight Series after a friend recommended it to me and I was totally sucked in.


I'm more of a read-and-review person than a writer. But I will share any good ideas if I have any.


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Summary:

Isabella Swan has lived too many lifetimes and made too many mistakes. So after her release from the Volturi, nearly 600 years of service later, she has gone in search of one of her mistakes: Carlisle.

She appears on the Cullens' doorstep with little expectation of what is to come.


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Categories: AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No Word count: 69994
[Report This] Published: February 11, 2010 Updated: May 27, 2012


Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Welcome Reminders

Great chapter. Glad she's finally met the Cullens! Can't wait to read more.

 
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Date: May 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Reconciled

Great chapter. Glad Bella's staying, hope she gets to stay longer than just a few days though. Why is Edward so upset? I don't want to sound hopeful but maybe he's intrigued by her? Hmm.... can't wait to read more. Please update soon.



Author's Response:

Wait and see! :) Twilighted is taking a very long time to validate a competition entry I made so I can't post the next chapter in the queue until that's gone. It's very frustrating. Thank you for you review though!

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Knowledge

Great chapter. Glad Bella's getting to know some of the other members of the family and Jasper's offered her a truce.
Did Bella know Edward? Was that the reason Edward was upset? Alice told him Bella saw him as a baby? Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

Author's Response:

We shall see... ;) Thank you for your review!

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Absent Rules

Oh! So it was Edward's grandmother...
Glad Bella and Carlisle talked but where did Carlisle go?
I liked the Esme/Bella interaction too. It's nice to see that even though Bella's older in your story, Esme is still the nurturer.
Great chapter. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

Author's Response:

Yeah, I'm trying to keep the characters in character. :) And I'm pleased you like the relationships developing. I will try to update the next chapter before I go on holiday.

 
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Date: August 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: The Wolves

Great chapter. Glad Bella's going to school :) How will she go? Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

 
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Date: April 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 13: The Best Laid Plans

Great chapter. Oh poor innocent Bella. Hope someone explains things for her. She needs to catch up with modern culture. Glad Bella is starting to think of the Cullens as family. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.



Author's Response:

Haha, yeah, Isabella is just a little out of touch. :P Thank you for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Frustrations

Great chapter. Poor Bella, I can't imagine how she must feel right now, with all the school work and then dealing with her past. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing and sticking with me! :D Your thoughts are much appreciated.

 
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Date: February 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Moving On

Great chapter. Glad Bella's started school, hope she can continue controlling herself, and she gets bumped up eventually. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

Author's Response:

Me too. :) Thank you for reading and reviewing! The next chapter is in the queue. 

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Somewhere between Hope and Happiness

Great chapter. Glad Jasper taught Bella to hunt and Bella's now got 4 friends. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

Author's Response:

Thank you very much. :) I'm glad you're enjoy it. Thank you for reading and reviewing.

 
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Date: April 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Kindness

Great chapter. I liked the glimpses into Bella's past and her relationship with Iago. Glad she's going to stay with the Cullens for when Iago comes. Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response:

Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

 
Summary:

An old, dilapidated hospital residing in the outskirts of Forks, Washington, sits untouched - other than being the occasional setting of a teenage party. Everyone knows the rumors, and it's because of those rumors rebellious teens are lured there. They want to be the first to spy the young man who supposedly lives inside its walls, the man who's either a ghost or crazed maniac that murders those courageous enough to enter the building.

No one has ever seen him, or at least no one that's ever lived to tell the tale. But it's all just rumors, right? Well, Bella Swan is about to find out.

 

Rated for subject matter and content. OOC. Canon pairings.

 

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Warning: There is mention of physical abuse in this story.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Jessica, Marcus, Mike, Rosalie, Tyler
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No Word count: 89825
[Report This] Published: February 13, 2010 Updated: July 12, 2010


Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Hide and Seek

I just started this fic but I really like it so far. Can't wait to read more.

 
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Date: February 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Enigma

Great chapter. How long has he been at the hospital? Can he talk? Can't wait to read more.

 
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Date: February 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Don't Go

She should probably leave to tell everyone she's okay but she definitely needs to go back soon. I think she should tell someone he's there but maybe not until she knows a little more about why he's there. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Don't Go

Great chapter. I think Bella should go home, let everyone know she's okay, then definitely go back to the hospital. Maybe she should tell someone, but after she's gotten to know a little more about why Edward's at the hospital. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

 
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Date: March 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Home Again

God that's scary! Who is it? Carlisle? Can't wait to read more. Please update soon. You can't leave us hanging like that!

 
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Date: March 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Puzzle Piece

Great chapter. Glad Marcus let Bella see Edward. How long has Edward been at the hospital and who hurt him? Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.



Author's Response:

Edward has been at the hospital for about seven years. Marcus told Bella this as he explained why he never told anyone about Edward. As to who hurt him, you'll find this out soon...I promise. Thank you so much for the read and review!

 
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Date: March 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: A Slight Progression

Great chapter. Will Bella stay for Edward? How much longer can she lie to Charlie and Alice? Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

 
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Date: March 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: The Plan

Great chapter. Glad Bella could stay. Can't wait to find out more. Please update soon.

 
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Date: March 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Meet the Parent

Great chapter. Glad Charlie's approved of Bella's new job. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

 
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Date: March 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Acquiesce

Great chapter. Glad we've found out a little more about Edward. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

 
Waking Up by RiaMaria Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 847]
Summary:

Set in the summer after Twilight, 2 weeks before the beginning of senior year, Bella wakes up one Saturday morning to find a sleeping, HUMAN Edward beside her.

"It was late August and we were going back to school in two weeks, so every single day had become invaluable to me. To be treasured, remembered forever, saved for a time I must leave to allow her to pick up her life as if I had never disturbed it.

But what about now? If I am truly human, that is no longer the case. I can give Bella everything she ever wants, everything she deserves. A real life, a husband... children? I have no need to leave her. I can stay and love her forever... If she’ll have me."

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: No Word count: 214413
[Report This] Published: February 14, 2010 Updated: November 05, 2010


Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Waking Up with Edward

I just started this fic but I really like it so far. How did Edward become human and is it permanent?

 
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Date: March 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Waking Up with Bella

Great chapter. Can't wait to read more.

 
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Date: March 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Being Human

Lol! Love Human Edward. Can't wait to read more.

 
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Date: March 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: What Control?

Great chapter. Can't wait to read more.

 
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Date: March 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: The Search for Equilibrium

Great chapter. Looking forward to seeing how the rest of their night goes. Can't wait to read more. What if this change isn't permanent? Please update soon.



Author's Response:

The next update is already awaiting validation...

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Ria

 




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