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Penname: be_my_escape [ Contact]
Real name: Lia
Status: Member
Member Since: November 01, 2008
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Beta-reader: No
Hey!
I'm Lia and I live in Australia. I read the Twilight Series after a friend recommended it to me and I was totally sucked in.
I'm more of a read-and-review person than a writer. But I will share any good ideas if I have any.
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Summary: NOW COMPLETE
 
Edward returns to Forks to find that Bella is stronger than he is. Their relationship must be redefined, but first he'll have
to catch sight of her. He's not the only one to track her down; Aro threatens the whole family when he uses Alice to get
to Bella and her troubled friend, Britt. EXB NM AU, MULTIPLE POV.
Additional banner by Rianeau!
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alec, Alice, Aro, Bella, Carlisle, Corin, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jane, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie, Santiago
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes
Word count: 77742
[Report This] Published: September 20, 2009 Updated: March 29, 2010
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed 
Date: January 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Britt is short for Brittany
I just started this fic but I really like it so far. I like Britt. Can't wait to read more. Author's Response: Thank you!! Glad you like it so far...
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: May 29, 2010
Title: Chapter 20: How far we've come
Omg I can't believe I've only just come over to read the end of this. Where have I been?! The last few months have just been a blurrrrrrrr of work, bleh. Anyway, I'm so glad I finally found the time to finish reading this story. I loved it and the ending was perfect. Can't wait to read more from you in the future. Author's Response: Glad you made it back for the end. :) A lot of pressure on the ending, so it's good that you thought it went alright. Thanks for the final review!
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: January 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Please forgive me
Great chapter. I'm glad Bella and Edward finally talked and Edward explained everything. You did a great job portraying their emotions. Hope Bella can forgive him. Personally, I liked your reunion a lot better than SM's. Can't wait to read more, but I have to head off to work. I will be back in 4hrs :) Author's Response: I had to click through to your profile when you said you were going to work when most readers are tucked in bed. Yup, you're from my side of the world. :) I'm in NZ.
Finally, E x B are in the same place together! I had to get him on his knees to start to pay back for leaving. She actually speaks up a bit more in a later chapter, but right now, I think Bella is just so relieved to know he still loves her.
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: January 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: I'm not sure I should be here
Great chapter. Can't wait to read more. Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback and rating!
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: January 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: She's one of us now
Great chapter. Hoep they find Bella and Britt before they can disappear again. Love the graffiti :) Author's Response: You are so nice to have reviewed as you were reading. Thanks!
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: January 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Be brave enough to try
Great chapter. Hope Bella does give Edward a chance. Can't wait to read more. Author's Response: Thanks you!
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: January 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: She is my mate
Great chapter. Glad Britt met with the Cullens. Loved her random thoughts around Edward: 'that would feel better if he moved his hand a little to the left' moments. Lol. Can't wait to read more. Author's Response: I think it would be terrible to date a mind reader. When I think of someone knowing every random thought... yikes.
Thanks for reviewing again! :)
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: January 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: I forgive you
Great chapter. I'm glad Jasper and Bella talked and things are good between them. Can't wait to read more. Author's Response: Thanks. I'm a big Jasper fan.
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: January 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: We pay a visit tonight
Great chapter. I really like the changes you've added to Jane's character. What is Aro planning to do? Can't wait to read more. Author's Response: This was my second fav chapter to write. I liked coming up with details for Jane a little too much. I'd mention what Aro plans, but you've already read ahead to his big move...
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: January 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: She's family to me
I should be asleep right now, it's 2am but I can't stop reading. This story just keeps getting better and better. Everytime I say, 'okay this is the last chapter' something else happens and I have to keep reading. Maybe one more chapter...?
I'll be right back, I need a midnight snack. Author's Response: That's so nice. I think I expect people to stop caring after the BxE reunion in ch 6, since there's so much build up to that moment, but there's certainly more to come...
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: January 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Why didn't I see
See! That's exactly what I'm talking about. I said one more chapter, and what happens? A cliffie! To read or not to read? What to choose?! Author's Response: I think that's the biggest cliffie so far. Whoops. :O
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: January 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: We meet at last
Great chapter. Hope Alice gets out of this okay. What are the Cullens planning? Will Anil help Alice? Can't wait to read more. Author's Response: More details about the Cullen plan in ch 13 & 14...
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: January 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: It's you and me
Woah. That was... wow. There are no words. Or maybe it's my sleep deproved brain... Either way I definitely need to get to bed now. 3:24am? Damn. I'll be back tomorrow... or later today, I guess. TTFN! Author's Response: Oh good. Maybe it was the sleep deprivation, but I'm glad you liked this one. It was the hardest to write and also my first lemon.
Thanks for reviewing as you go!! That's the best.
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: January 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: He will make you a widow
Great chapter. Hope Jasper does change his mind so Aro doesn't find them by looking at Alice's vision. Glad Anil and Lhame helped Alice get some blood. Will they help in the fight? Can't wait to read more. Author's Response: Thanks! The twins will be involved one way or the other...
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: January 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: He smells like wool and copper
Great chapter. Britt found her mate? Maybe Lhame will be more willing to switch sides now? Can't wait to read more. Please update soon. A teaser would be great! Author's Response: As you might be able to tell from the teaser on the forum. Lhame's not thrilled about this turn of events. He likes things nice and orderly. I was updating once each week, but there's so much going on with this part that I've started updating every two weeks instead. Anyway, next ch will be submitted for validation this Sunday or Monday. I won't leave you hanging...
Thanks again!!!
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: January 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: The frickin' Capulets and Montagues
Great chapter. I'm glad Lhame and Britt had their moment :) Hope Anil can help the Cullens in and out of the castle safely. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon. Author's Response: Thank you! More on the way...
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: January 26, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: Everything we do is a risk
Great chapter. I'm glad they've made it into the castle. What's wrong? Is Alice okay? Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing again! I appreciate it. More on the way within 2 weeks.
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: February 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: So it's a fight
Great chapter. Glad they managed to save Alice and all escape. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon. Author's Response: Thanks! More coming soon. Probably about a week and a half.
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: February 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 18: I knew you would come for me
Great chapter. Who's she going to choose? Can't wait to read more. Please update soon. Author's Response: Thanks again. And thanks for the stars. :)
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: March 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 19: You are my life now
Great chapter. Glad everyone's safe and things are returning back to normal. I'm glad Britt doesn't have to choose. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon. Author's Response: Thank you again.
Summary: Edward leaves Bella alone in the woods after telling her he didn’t want her any more. As she is lying on the cold forest floor; Bella remembers three important things. Edward made a promise not to leave her, and Edward never broke a promise, and third it was her body, her heart, what right did he have to decide what was good for her? All in all Bella realizes that Edward was covering up his true feeling about her. Bella goes to bring Edward home.
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Laurent, Marcus, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes
Word count: 57466
[Report This] Published: October 05, 2009 Updated: September 14, 2011
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: December 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Dark Abyss
I just started this fic but I really like it so far. Can't wait to read more.
Summary: Edward is forced to leave his playboy life behind in Chicago and come home to Washington. When he is stripped of everything he knows, will he change his ways or risk losing everything? All human, cannon couples, OOC.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No
Word count: 27704
[Report This] Published: October 11, 2009 Updated: May 24, 2010
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: October 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
Great start. Looking forward to reading more. Please update soon.
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: October 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Homecoming
Great chapter. I'm glad we got to meet Rose and Emmett and their family. Brianna is so cute. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: November 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Reality
Great chapter. As much as I love Edward, I'm glad he's being taught a lesson. I like your Bella so far. Hope she tortures Edward a little too. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: November 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Annoyance & Amusement
Great chapter. I love how Bella didn't back down against Edward and Alice's messages were hilarious. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
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