Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
October 20, 2009
Chapter 10: Heart to Hearts and Really Bad Timing
I'm starting to really freak out for Edward. Why does Bella react badly to everything he does? I'm getting a little confused about who to blame. Did Edward do something stupid again or is Bella overreacting? See it's hard! They're both flawed.
I'm glad Edward finally told Bella that he loved her. In a dark alley behind a bar... hmm maybe not so great, but at least he said it. Hope she'll believe him eventually.
Can't wait to read more. Hope Edward can fix things.Author's Response:
Well the main reason she flipped on him was because instead of saying it the night before, he waited until she was in the middle of a date with the guy waiting inside for her. Even though it was a first date, as a woman who had been cheated on multiple times, she felt like he was turning her into a cheater. She also thought he didn't mean it and instead it was a reaction to seeing her with someone and not real. So between him turning her into a cheater and then saying it when he didn't really mean it (in her mind at least) she got pissed. Don't worry...things will resolve soon.