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Penname: be_my_escape [Contact]
Real name: Lia
Status: Member
Member Since: November 01, 2008
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Hey!


 


I'm Lia and I live in Australia. I read the Twilight Series after a friend recommended it to me and I was totally sucked in.


I'm more of a read-and-review person than a writer. But I will share any good ideas if I have any.


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Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights by A_Cullen_Wannabe Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2934]
Summary:

Bella has grown from an orphaned sixteen year old raised by her older brother Emmett and his friends affectionately known as ‘her boys’, to an up and coming first year medical intern. When a day in the ER turns dangerous can her boys, now members of the best SWAT team in Chicago save her? Eventual Canon pairings. Rated 'NC-17' for strong language, lemons.

 

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Outtakes Now posting on Twilighted.  This banner by yours truly :)


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 71 Completed: Yes Word count: 482203
[Report This] Published: September 17, 2009 Updated: March 22, 2010


Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Femme Docs and Self Conscious Sluts

Great chapter. I really liked EPOV. Looking forward to seeing how Edward plans to change. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Femme Docs and Self Conscious Sluts

Great chapter. I really liked EPOV. Looking forward to seeing how Edward plans to change. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.



Author's Response:

Thanks...I'm so glad you are enjoying it.  I already have it mostly written so it should go up pretty fast with most of our downtime being the wait in the queue.  Thanks for taking the time to review!

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: The Day From Hell

Don't pause between chapters. I'm impatient and this story is just too good. Edward kissed Bella! Hope now he can just convince her that he doesn't regret it.

I'm glad Andy's okay. Hope there isn't much long term damage. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.



Author's Response:

I promise to update as quickly as the process and my RL allows :)  Glad you liked it and thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Avoidance and Disappointment

Oh Edward. Of all the horrible things to do...

Poor Bella. Hope Edward cam find a way to fix things. And how many more times does Edward need to be yelled at before he realises, they are not just friends.

Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.



Author's Response:

He's going to figure it out soon...just give it a few chapters.  Glad you enjoyed it.  Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice

Great chapter. Hope Edward finds a way to fix things. I'm glad Bella's arranged a girls' night. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Puppet Master J

Great chapter. How thick is Edward? Seriously? Someone please hit him over the head with a blunt object.

Looking forward to girls' night. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Femmes Night Out

Great chapter. I'm glad the boys are safe. What's Trevor's job? Is it somehow related to the boys being called out? Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Sleeping With An Angel

Greeat chapter. I really liked the SWAT stuff. EPOV was really good. I'm glad he's finally realised that he's in love with her. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: McDreamy, McSteamy, and McCreamy

Great chapter. I'm glad Edward's going to fight for Bella. Hope they can all help out and get rid of Trevor. Can't wait to read more.

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Heart to Hearts and Really Bad Timing

I'm starting to really freak out for Edward. Why does Bella react badly to everything he does? I'm getting a little confused about who to blame. Did Edward do something stupid again or is Bella overreacting? See it's hard! They're both flawed.

I'm glad Edward finally told Bella that he loved her. In a dark alley behind a bar... hmm maybe not so great, but at least he said it. Hope she'll believe him eventually.

Can't wait to read more. Hope Edward can fix things.



Author's Response:

Well the main reason she flipped on him was because instead of saying it the night before, he waited until she was in the middle of a date with the guy waiting inside for her.  Even though it was a first date, as a woman who had been cheated on multiple times, she felt like he was turning her into a cheater.  She also thought he didn't mean it and instead it was a reaction to seeing her with someone and not real.  So between him turning her into a cheater and then saying it when he didn't really mean it (in her mind at least) she got pissed.  Don't worry...things will resolve soon.

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Be Careful What You Wish For

Great chapter. I'm glad Edward was there for Bella and they kinda went on a date. Can't wait to read about the real date. Please update soon.

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Perfection

Great chapter. The date was perfect. It was so different from all the other dates I've read about in other fics. I think you did an amazing job with it. I'm glad Edward put so much thought into it, oh and thank God they kissed at the end of the night. Sexual tension was killing me. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: The Inner Sanctum

Great chapter. I'm glad Bella's 'broken up' with Trevor/James but I hope Edward and Emmett can find a way to keep her safe. Can't wait to read more.

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Bonding and Plotting

Great chapter. I like how E/B's relationship is developing. Is what James has planned part of the prologue? Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: New Heat and Old Flames

Great chapter. The sexual tension is killing me! Can't wait to read about their night out. Please update soon.

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: The Unexpected

Great chapter. Hope Bella, Alice and Rose are okay while the boys are gone. Can't wait to read more. Bring them home soon! Please update soon.

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Missing and Misunderstandings

Great chapter. Can't believe Bella had to walk in just at that moment. Hope Edward can convince Bella that it was a misunderstanding. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Runaway Rollercoaster

Wow. That really was a rollercoaser.

I'm glad Bella's okay and Edward explained everything and they talked. Too bad they didn't catch Trager. Though if they did, then there wouldn't be much more plot to get through, huh?

Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Decoys and Deprecation

Great chapter. I'm glad Bella told Edward all about how she's felt over the years, and not just about the Tanya incident. The songs that you chose for the game were perfect and really sweet. I'm glad Edward was able to bring Bella back to Minnesota with him. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Getting Reacquainted

Great chapter. I really liked all the Tanya stuff. I'm glad Bella and Tanya can be friends. Smut = wow. Can't wait to meet Elizabeth. Please update soon.

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Truth Revealed

Great chapter. I'm glad Edward went to see Elizabeth and they sorted some things out and Elizabeth apologised to Bella and they became friends. I have Sex on Fire playing right now. I almost forgot how great this song is. Can't wait til Friday. What special day has Edward planned? Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Empowering and Contentment

Great chapter. I'm glad Bella's almost found a way for Tanya to move to Chicago and E/B might be moving in together. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: For the First Time

Wow that was... wow. Definitely worth the wait. Damn it Edward why aren't you real?! Hope Bella agrees to move in with him. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Rearrangements and Rock Stars

Great chapter. I'm glad Trager seems to be getting closer to being caught but with what happened in the prologue I'm still a little worried.

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Moving Ahead and Protective Mama Bears

Great chapter. I'm glad Esme stood up to Elizabeth and Edward said what he said to Esme. It was really sweet. Can't wait to read more. Prologue!! Please update soon.

 



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