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Penname: be_my_escape [ Contact]
Real name: Lia
Status: Member
Member Since: November 01, 2008
Website:
Beta-reader: No
Hey!
I'm Lia and I live in Australia. I read the Twilight Series after a friend recommended it to me and I was totally sucked in.
I'm more of a read-and-review person than a writer. But I will share any good ideas if I have any.
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[Report This] Published: September 25, 2008 Updated: September 25, 2008
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed 
Date: January 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
HAHAHHAHHAHHA!! i loved it! suicidal edward is funny. maybe its because he was drunk. but im glad he wasnt all depressed. that was the funniest thing ive read in a while. i cant wait for more one-shots. ladders is an amazing story.
Summary: Bella works for the Volturi as chief interrogator. She passes her nights toying with the souls of the lost, hearing their confessions before wiping them away. At night she toys with the heart of a fellow member of the elite Guard.
But soon she will meet a vampire that will change her life forever. Is she willing to accept these feelings? Can finding love cause Bella to leave behind the only world she'd ever known, or will some things never change?
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Carlisle, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Heidi, Jane, Jasper, Marcus, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes
Word count: 66195
[Report This] Published: September 26, 2008 Updated: January 28, 2009
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: December 13, 2008
Title: Chapter 11: Shark
i loved this chapter. more emmett was definitely a good idea. it cut some of the tension and bella is finally feeling a little better. this story is amazing.
keep writing,
xoxo
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: December 18, 2008
Title: Chapter 12: Sacrifice
wow. this chapter was... depressing. poor edward. *sigh*
please keep writing,
xoxo
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: December 22, 2008
Title: Chapter 13: Sell Your Soul
wow. that was intense. i like your felix. he's not the bad guy in this story. i hope he can help bella through this. take her back to the cullens.
keep writing,
xoxo
happy holidays!
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: December 25, 2008
Title: Changing Sides
wow. i loved it! and the last line... “It will be your empire soon enough.”... woah. i cant wait for bella to go back to edward.
i cant believe this story is ending soon. as i was reading, i was glad that things were working out, but then i realised that that probably meant that this story would finish soon. so now i have mixed feelings. ill miss this story but im also glad that things are going to be ok... hopefully.
update soon. merry christmas!
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: December 29, 2008
Title: Chapter 14: Truth and Lies
this chapter was... confusing, but i think i got it now. just when everything was working out, something else happens. *sigh*
ok please update soon. everything in APOV really freaked me out. i hope everyones alright.
hope you had a good christmas. happy new year!
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: December 29, 2008
Title: Chapter 15: The Fall of an Empire
thank you for reposting. things are making sense now. and now i know what jasper and edward were doing at the end of the last chapter. thank god theyre ok.
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: January 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: The Wives
just when it looked like everything was going to be okay.. the wives come back! i was so freaked out with the image of felix just hanging. thank god the cullens are ok. i hope felix does wake up though. he was a good guy in this story.
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: January 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Circles
Great chapter. I'm glad they figured things out but I'm glad you're going to add another chapter to end this story. It doesn't feel right ending it here and in Volterra too.
Please update soon.
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: January 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: Epilogue
The ending was perfect. I loved it. You did a great job. I'll definitely miss this story. It was so different from anything I'd ever read and I was completely hooked, from the beginning. I'll miss waiting for the updates to this story.
I hope you write more stories in the future. I look forward to reading them :)
Summary: 
A small shout out to WillBeAWriterSomeday for the amazing banner!
What if Edward left Bella again, after returning from Volterra? What if thirty years later he returns to Italy, in hopes the Volturi will end his existence this time? But what if Bella's among there coven and she's one of them?
Rated NC-17 for future chapters, will have a few different POV's but mostly Bella & Edward
GOOD NEWS!!! Tigress5cubs has honored me by taking on my story and being my beta. I love you...you are my saviour.
Twilightzoner has also honored me by becoming apart of my team for this story. Thank you dear. I love your work and all your advice.
Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No
Word count: 12422
[Report This] Published: September 26, 2008 Updated: April 07, 2009
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed 
Date: November 13, 2008
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Unforgettable Memories
hey, i loved it. ive been waiting so long for an update. im so glad you found a beta. cant wait to see what will happen next. Author's Response: Thank you...the next chapter should be up in a couple of days, just waiting for the final okay. I am glad you enjoy it.
[Report This] Published: September 27, 2008 Updated: January 21, 2009
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: November 06, 2008
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Swan Dive
edward and bella sitting in a tree... lol this story is awesome. please update soon!
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: December 22, 2008
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Broken
thank you for updating before the holidays! this chapter was worth the wait. i feel for you. learning all the bones in the body... *shudder* i had a hard enough time remembering the main ones. hope you get some time to relax over these holidays!
xoxo Author's Response: Thank you for the review :)
And it seems as if I am taking way too much time to relax and not much time to actually do my homework.
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: January 21, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Have You Ever Seen the Rain?
*happy dance* HE HUGGED HER!! (Can't imagine what I'll do if/when their relationship develops and he kisses her, lol)
I loved this chapter. I'm glad you included the Denali clan into your story. I like the stuff about Tanya too. She does deserve some sympathy. She's been in love with him for decades and then he goes and falls in love with Bella. I'm definitely Team E/B but Tanya deserves some love too. I'm also glad Tanya's not a 'bad guy' in this story. She isn't exactly every fanfic author's favourite character.
Anyway, thank you for updating. Can't wait to read more.
Summary: 
Bella Swan is agian pulled into the life of a vampire. When William Drake, a vampire, comes to be a new student at Forks High, what will happen to Bella as she immediatly knows what he is? When their friendship blooms and a very familiar and favorite vampire returns, what will Bella choose to do? Favorite review for Chapter 2 : Dinner Booksgalore said : Again, William is interesting. He clearly has been studying Bella. Can't wait to find out what his agenda is. Poor Bella is doing such a great job trying to not freak out. Good job! I would like to see how William decides to approach Bella. She's clearly skittish, he knows she knows too much, but she hasn't run screaming into the hills. That has to fascinate him. He strikes me as the thoughtful type. In terms of plot I would find it interesting for him to go on a detecting mission of sorts and learn about the wolves and Bella before he talks to her. Also, does he notice the scent of vampires in her room - can he?
Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob, Other Character
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Word count: 3647
[Report This] Published: September 27, 2008 Updated: October 27, 2008
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: November 02, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Arrival
O-M-G you have my intrigued and hooked i love the name you picked out for him and i cant wait to find out what happens please update soon
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: November 22, 2008
Title: Chapter 2: Dinner
its almost been a month! please update soon. im definitely interested in this story. i cant wait to see what happens. i wanna see what happens when william finally gets to talk to bella. and what happens if/when edward comes back. please please please please please update soon. xoxo
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: November 29, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Arrival
please tell me you havent stopped updating this story. i really like this story and hope you'll write more. please keep writing. this story is too good to let go of. i hope you'll update soon. please do. the whole idea is original and great and the characters are amazing. i really want to see what type of character william turns out to be and how he decides to approach bella. please come back and update. i know im not the only one who wants to read more. xoxo
Summary: Stranded in a strange town by stormy weather, Bella is befriended by Edward, a gorgeous man with a mysterious past. While she’s immediately attracted to him, she quickly discovers that the rest of the town doesn’t share her affections for the bronze-haired one, so she sets out to prove to them, and to Edward, that he’s anything but a monster.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Laurent, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes
Word count: 108250
[Report This] Published: September 29, 2008 Updated: November 28, 2008
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: November 02, 2008
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 Mine
omg you have no idea how freaked out i am whenever bella's alone i start getting anxious and when bella came home, i almost had a heart attack i keep expecting it to be james and not edward to greet her oh my poor heart please update soon. you have me hooked!
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: November 03, 2008
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Hopes and Dreams
im so glad edward and bella are finally gonna get married but NOOOOOO!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!! that is such a bad cliffy! i am not gonna be able to sleep
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: November 06, 2008
Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 The News
omg when i heard james and bella were alive, I almost had a heart attack! I thought you said someone would die and with them alive that only left edward! omg i almot started crying! *death glare* but i like the way this chapter ended so you're forgiven lol. please update soon. xoxo
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: November 13, 2008
Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 Arrested Development
ok ok ok dont hold any chapters hostage! lol i love this story! you've done such a great job and i cant wait to see how it ends, though ill be sad that its over xoxo
Summary: Edward finally gives in to his desire to "check up" on Bella after he left. He vowed only to watch her from a distance, but how can he resist the force of the love that brought him back in the first place? When Bella's life is in danger again, will Edward be able to save her one last time?
This is a story that's been bouncing around in my head so much it finally demanded to be written. Edward's POV.
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes
Word count: 51875
[Report This] Published: September 29, 2008 Updated: March 21, 2012
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: November 13, 2008
Title: Chapter 10: 10. - Making A Concession
i love your story. youve done a wonderful job capturing the characters. *praying for an E/B ending* xoxo Author's Response: Thank you!! :o)
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: November 28, 2008
Title: Chapter 12: 12. - How To Save A Life
dw we wont throw tomatoes. this chapter was my favourite so far. i completely forgot about the treaty until you mentioned it. omg i loved the edward/bella moment. stupid wolves... jacob's blown it. please update soon. you have me hooked. xoxo Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I have had zero time to write this weekend, due to my crazy Christmas work schedule, but hopefully I will get time to finish Chapter 13 later this week. ;o)
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: December 03, 2008
Title: Chapter 13: 13. - No More Lies
*sigh* stupid bella. though guys like edward do seem to only exist in dreams. please keep writing. i really love your story. its different from all the ff ive read. xoxo Author's Response: Heheh... I always thought that Bella thinking Edward was a dream in NM was both a little ridiculous and somewhat exaggerated, but I also thought that it was such an essential part of her character that I should keep it. She feels so unworthy of even being in Edward's presence, that she wouldn't believe that he is real no matter what. Thank you so much for reviewing!! :o)
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