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Penname: be_my_escape [ Contact]
Real name: Lia
Status: Member
Member Since: November 01, 2008
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Hey!
I'm Lia and I live in Australia. I read the Twilight Series after a friend recommended it to me and I was totally sucked in.
I'm more of a read-and-review person than a writer. But I will share any good ideas if I have any.
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Summary: When the Cullens move back to Forks, Edward decides to follow in Carlisle's footsteps and become a doctor. As he becomes more and more frustrated with his monotonous life, Bella is admitted with a serious illness.
Will he be able to resist?
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Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes
Word count: 82473
[Report This] Published: May 07, 2009 Updated: October 18, 2009
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed 
Date: September 21, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Great chapter. Bella's reaction was... interesting. I've never had to be with a loved one with cancer so I don't know how people usually react (pretty badly I imagine) but I think you did a good job portraying Bella's emotions. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: September 21, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Great chapter. Bella's reaction was... interesting. I've never had to be with a loved one with cancer so I don't know how people usually react (pretty badly I imagine) but I think you did a good job portraying Bella's emotions. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: September 21, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
I'm glad Edward is feeling happier. Can't wait to read more. Where are Bella's parents?
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: September 21, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
I'm glad Edward is feeling happier. Can't wait to read more. Where are Bella's parents?
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: September 21, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
He... she... what?! Why?
I'm not going to rip your arms off cause I trust you with this story. On to the next chapter.
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: September 21, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Great chapter. Poor Edward. Glad he's not going to stay away from Bella though, or at least giving in. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: September 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Great chapter. Love the Edward/Carlisle conversations. I'm glad Edward went to see Bella, even though he misread her reactions and ended up running home. Can't wait to read more. Hope their next meeting goes better.
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: September 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Great chapter. Poor Alice. I'm glad Edward has finally realised that he's in love with Bella, but will he change her? Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: September 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Great chapter. I'm glad Edward went back and I like the talk he had with Carlisle. They are both being so obvious with their feeling for each other. How do they not see? *Sigh* On to the next chapter!
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: September 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Great chapter. I'm glad Edward went back and I like the talk he had with Carlisle. They are both being so obvious with their feeling for each other. How do they not see? *Sigh* On to the next chapter!
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: September 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Great chapter. He kissed her (kinda...)! And he told her how he felt about her (kinda...)! Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: September 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Great chapter. I'm glad Edward told Charlie off for not visiting Bella but I feel bad for Charlie too cause he obviously has no idea how to handle this situation. Hope he figures it out soon though, Bella needs family with her too. I liked the E/B interaction. I'm glad they are helping each other to be happy. Can't wait to read more. Oh and why the sudden change in Sally? Author's Response: I was going to write a Sally outtake, but I never got around to it. She was supposed to have gotten a boyfriend. lol. Thanks!
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: September 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Great chapter. I'm glad Edward went back. It kind of felt like a role reversal sorta thing when Edward wanted to go to Bella but she said it was best if he didn't keep coming back. Can't wait to read more. That cliffie was mean, but I'm glad I don't have to wait to find out what happens.
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: September 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
I'm really nervous now. How will Bella react to everything that's happened?
Reading on...
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: September 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Great chapter. I like your Bella. She's a lot more fun to read about. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: September 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Great chapter. I'm glad they talked though it wasn't what I expected. Can't wait to read more. Hope Edward tells Bella the truth soon. Author's Response: Well, I'm glad you liked it. Sometimes things are unexpected for a reason. Thanks!
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: September 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
Great chapter. I'm glad Edward and Bella talked some more. Hope Bella can accept the things Edward says to her soon, instead of closing herself off when he tries to show her how he feels. Can't wait to read more. Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Also, if I forget to mention it, thank you so much for reviewing each chapter as you read them. Not many ppl review back chapters when they start reading. That is pretty awesome of you!!
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: September 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
Great chapter. I'm glad Bella knows the truth now about Charlie and Renee. I liked the E/B interaction in the tree. Can't wait to read more. Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it and that you are ejoying the way the relationship is progressing. Thanks!!!
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: September 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
Great chapter. Can Edward just tell her already?! He better tell her soon or someone else has to do it for him.
Can't wait to read more. Please update soon. Author's Response: Next chapter is big. I hope you'll like it! Thanks!! Also, I am going to try to respond to each of your reviews for the multiple chapters, but if I don't, know that I read and loved each one. I'm serious!!
Thanks!
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: September 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
Great chapter. I'm glad Alice is okay. Thank God Edward finally told Bella he loves her. Hope she'll stay. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon. Author's Response: Thanks!! I am glad you enjoed it. I appreciate you reading and reviewing!!
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: October 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
Fiiiinally! They kissed! And it was worth the wait. You did a great job with this chapter. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed
Date: October 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
Omg I can't believe that was the last chapter. I feel like I just started this fic but when I look back, it's obvious how far they've come.
Loved it. Can't wait to read the epi. Author's Response: I guess if it feels as though you just started, that's a good thing right? All good things fly by...
Thank you for reading and reviewing. I really loved hearing your opinions! Thanks!
Summary: 
When Bella's parents divorced Charlie moved to Destin, Florida instead of staying in Forks and Bella grew up in Phoenix with her mom. After Bella suffers through a 10 month long verbally abusive relationship with James, he threatens to take from her physically what she would not give him so she moves to Destin to live with Charlie. Here she meets Edward Cullen who has sworn off all women because of a horribly destroyed relationship with his ex, Tanya. Can they save each other from there respective pasts and make a future together?
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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No
Word count: 22769
[Report This] Published: May 07, 2009 Updated: August 12, 2009
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed 
Date: June 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: School, The Beach, and Awkward Introductions
I just started this story but I like it so far. Can't wait to read more.
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