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Penname: be_my_escape [Contact]
Real name: Lia
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Member Since: November 01, 2008
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Hey!


 


I'm Lia and I live in Australia. I read the Twilight Series after a friend recommended it to me and I was totally sucked in.


I'm more of a read-and-review person than a writer. But I will share any good ideas if I have any.


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Overtime by Dreamrider Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2242]
Summary:

Bella Swan is a writer for a Women's Magazine in Florida, a magazine that she writes the self help column for...Something she really wants to escape. The good news, she is escaping self help, the bad news, she's covering the lives of women behind sports stars...In Denver.

Here she meets three amazing women; the girlfriend, fiance, and wife to two players and the coach of the team, but what will happen when the team superstar, Edward, takes an interest in Bella?

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Warnings: It's NC-17, so basically... Smut, Language.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes Word count: 129668
[Report This] Published: March 23, 2009 Updated: January 18, 2011


Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21 - A Night to Remember (V)

Oh no! Don't let Bella go! How are Edward and Bella going to fix things so they can stay together?

Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

 
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Date: February 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23 - Reunion (V)

Great chapter. Thank God they've been reunited. Hope Bella can continue doing the articles. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

 
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Date: March 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24 - Back in the Game (V)

Great chapter. Glad Bella got her job back and is going back to Denver with the Cullens. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

 
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Date: December 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30 - Nothing Left to Hide (V)

Great chapter. Glad Bella got the truth out there before James started spreading rumours. Too bad she lost her job, but she'll be with Edward now. Hope she can find another job though. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31 - A Center Ice Finale (V)

Yay they won! I was so excited reading this chapter. Literally on the edge of my seat. The proposal was so sweet and just perfect! I was actually thinking while reading this, wouldn't it be cool if Edward proposed on the ice after a game. Glad that's what you got him to do. It was fantastic! Can't wait to read the epi. Please update soon.

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Epilogue (V)

I can't believe it's really over. The ending was perfect and so sweet! I'll really miss this story and reading about all the hot hockey players. Glad Edward and Bella, and the rest of the Cullens all got their happy ever after. Looking forward to reading more from you in the future.

 
Summary:

 

Bella meets Edward when he picks up his nephew from her Pre-K class and the sparks fly.  As their feelings for each other grow, Edward has a prior commitment that he is convinced must be seen through. A commitment that is effectively keeping them apart. Are there some complications that even the strongest hearts can't overcome? Can they resist the one thing they can't have--Each other?

To get to the prize, they'll have to survive the temptation of one another, in this emotional waiting game.

Show and Don't Tell.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Kate, Rosalie, Sam, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 124914
[Report This] Published: March 25, 2009 Updated: December 16, 2009


Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Great chapter. I'm so glad Alice called and gave Bella her 'sexin' list'. Lol. Can't wait to read more How will they get rid of Tanya? Please update soon.

 
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Date: August 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Great chapter. I'm so glad Edward's finally broken up with Tanya. Can't wait to read more.

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I just started this fic but I really like it so far. Love Masen! Can't wait to read more.

 
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Date: June 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Great chapter. Loved the E/B interaction. Can't wait to read more.

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Great chapter. I love the conversations Bella has with herself. What happened to Edward? Can't wait to read more.

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Great chapter. Why doesn't Bella ever listen to explanations? I wanted to know! In almost every fic I've read, Bella always walks away before hearing Edward out. Maybe that's just how she is and we're not trying to make her OOC... hmm...

 Can't wait to read more.

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Great chapter. Have I mentioned how much I love Masen. Can't wait to read more. Now go plant a tree or kiss a baby or something :)

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh my god I love Jake and drunk Bella. I laughed so much in this chapter. It definitely made up for the lack of Edward. Can't wait to read more.

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Wow. Poor Edward. How is he going to get out of the relationship? I'm glad he and Bella are going to be friends now though.

Can't wait to read more but I have a 4am flight to catch tmr and it's 1:22am (ok a flight to catch later today...)

I love this story so I'll try and find internet access during my holiday but if I don't, I'll be back in two weeks!

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Great chapter. I'm glad Bella and Edward talked. Love Masen. Can't wait to read more.

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Great chapter. Loved the E/B interaction. I'm all aboard team Edward/Bella. Can't wait to read more.

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Great chapter. Loved the E/B interaction. Hope these three weeks go by fast. Can't wait to read more.

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Great chapter. I'm starting to get really behind in reading. Damn homework.

This chapter was really sweet. I like the E/B interaction. Alice is having a baby! :) Love Masen.

Can't wait to read more.

 
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Date: August 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Great chapter. Loved the E/B interaction. Can't wait to read more.

 
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Date: August 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Wow. That was... wow. Edward has to get rid of Tanya, now! I think I'm going to implode... then explode. Can't wait to read more.

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Great chapter. Can't wait for Edward to resolve the whole Tanya issue. E/B are so cute and happy together. I keep on worrying that Tanya won't go away at the end of the three weeks Edward set.

Can't wait to read more.

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Great chapter. I feel so warm and fuzzy inside. They love each other :D

Can't wait to read more. Get rid of Tanya!!

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Great chapter. The E/B stuff was really sweet. I can't imagine then without each other. Can't wait to read more.

 
Reviewer: be_my_escape Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Great chapter. Loved the E/B interaction. Hope Tanya gets fired and Edward can leave her and then be with Bella. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

 




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