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Penname: Nightmare1991 [ Contact]
Real name: Nikki
Status: Member
Member Since: June 15, 2008
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Hi! I'm an 18-year old student and aspiring writer. So far, I've written quite a few short stories, but I have yet to gather the guts to try and get something published...
I have a couple of fanfic ideas floating around in my head, but I have yet to put anything down on paper. While biding my time, I'm reading and reviewing as many stories as I can get my hands on...
I am most definitely on Team Edward! (GO Edward!) Still, I love Jacob too...
I think poor Jake is a little disadvantaged, though... I mean, Edward just has that whole supernatural pull going for him... If Bella chooses Edward (which she has) then she gets to live forever, get rid of her clumsiness (to an extent)... Need I say more?
Then, there's Jake (who I'd still take any day, if offered ; ) )... He'd get to live forever (or, at least, a really long time)... and Bella would just stay Bella... Then, of course, there's the whole imprinting issue...
Just my thoughts... If you'd care to tell me your opinion (or yell at me... but please... I'd prefer the former) I'm all ears. Just contact me! I won't bite! : B
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Summary: What if fate took a different course for Bella Swan? What if, after Edward left her to keep her safe, the werewolves were just a minute too late to save her from Laurent in the meadow? Would she eventually find her way back into Edward's arms?
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: No
Word count: 76778
[Report This] Published: May 05, 2008 Updated: September 20, 2008
Reviewer: Nightmare1991 Signed 
Date: July 21, 2008
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Needs
Oh! It just clicked! Riley was the one who was working with Victoria *slaps forehead*... Hmm... Maybe he's working with her again... It seems like too much of a coincidence... Hmm... (Don't mind my thought vomit...) Yay! Edward and Bella are finally back together! Hah! Take that, Tanya! And that, Riley! And he was humming her lullaby! How sweet!
Reviewer: Nightmare1991 Signed
Date: June 21, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Bella
You transitioned from the novel to your own narrative beautifully! It's nice to see that Bella is thinking/worrying about othes when she's in so much pain... It's so sad that Edward can't be there to help her through the change...
Reviewer: Nightmare1991 Signed
Date: June 21, 2008
Title: Chapter 2: Remembering
Since you're switching POVs, it would be nice if you could mention whose it is. Unless you want to keep us wondering until it is revealed... Sneaky, sneaky... Oh, no! I just had a horrible thought! What if Bella forgets about her human life in Forks/ with the Cullens / with Edward / with Jacob, etc... Some of the others have forgotten... Oh, no! *bitting nails* Oh! It's so sad! The family has been torn apart! For Alice to not smile or laugh, it must be really bad... : (
Reviewer: Nightmare1991 Signed
Date: June 21, 2008
Title: Chapter 3: Disccovery
Yay! You're telling us whose POV it is! They found her! Go Alice! Go Jasper! Yay! And she remembers... My fears have been put to rest! Another great chapte! (I'm moving on to the next one right now... Hehe! Late arrivals don't have to wait...) *sly look*
Reviewer: Nightmare1991 Signed
Date: June 21, 2008
Title: Chapter 4: Reunion
How did Edward manage to get cell phone reception in the deep, dark jungle of South America? Who's his provider? I've got to know! lol Poor Bella! She's been so delusional these past few months that she doesn't believe her mind -- even when it's real! Jasper asks if she'd like the fourth deer and she says, "I think I'm good. It's all yours." ... Oh! I crack up every time I think about it! You might have just made my day! (How sad is that?) Poor Bella! She thinks Edward doesn't love her... : ( Author's Response: OK, I'm cracking up over this review...I never even thought about cell service in South America, I'm dying here!! Love Total Eclipse
Reviewer: Nightmare1991 Signed
Date: June 21, 2008
Title: Chapter 5: Goodbye
Okay! I'll admit! I cried like a baby! I hope you're happy! No, really, though... It was a beautiful chapter. It's definitely my favorite so far! Poor Charlie... I can't imagine his pain... At least he has the picture... *tear*
Reviewer: Nightmare1991 Signed
Date: June 21, 2008
Title: Chapter 6: Instinct
Looks like Bella's abilities are finally showing... Duh duh duh dun... Hmmm... I wonder how Jacob's taking all of this...
Reviewer: Nightmare1991 Signed
Date: June 21, 2008
Title: Chapter 7: Jacob
Poor Jacob... I'll admit, I almost cried again; I know, I'm a wuss... Well, at least Jacob and Edward were civil toward each othere... That's a first...
Reviewer: Nightmare1991 Signed
Date: June 22, 2008
Title: Chapter 9: Storm Front
It seemed like Rosalie deserved a chance to have her say. No one liked what she had to say, but she had to say it. I mean, everyone's always hated her attitude toward Bella, but we have never heard her side of the story... Well, anyway... Yay! Edward's back! Poor Bella... Who knows what/who she might meet out in the wilderness... all alone...
Reviewer: Nightmare1991 Signed
Date: June 22, 2008
Title: Chapter 10: Perception
Bravo, Rosalie! And yay! Edward and Bella have finally been reunited (well, almost)!
Reviewer: Nightmare1991 Signed
Date: June 22, 2008
Title: Chapter 11: Constellations
Yay! Family reunion! Rosalie like Grease? Weird... Aww... Edward and Bella are so oblivious to each other's feeling... How cute...
Reviewer: Nightmare1991 Signed
Date: June 23, 2008
Title: Chapter 12: Tanya
Ooo... Tanya makes an entrance... finally... Special ability to attract guys, eh? Pretty interesting, if I do say so myself...
Reviewer: Nightmare1991 Signed
Date: June 23, 2008
Title: Chapter 13: Introduction
Duh duh duh dun... What will happen next? What is wrong with Riley? What will Tanya do? Looks like this is the last posted chapter... Oh, well, I guess I have to wait patiently with everyone else... It was good while it lasted... ; ) Author's Response: What will happen next? The next chapter will be out soon and then everyone will know! :) I'm not sure what you mean by "what is wrong with Riley?" but I'm sure that you'll get more info soon! Thanks for reading & reviewing!
Summary: 
Jacob/OC. Post-Eclipse. Elizabeth Foster is your typical grad student. When she interns on a summer research project looking for dire wolves in the Olympic Peninsula, she finds more than she bargained for.
Disclaimer: Twilight and all associated characters and concepts are the property of Stephenie Meyer. I'm just borrowing them and wreaking mild havoc~ Elizabeth Foster and Katrina McAllister are the property of Jennifer Beacham.
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Carlisle, Embry, Emily, Jacob, Leah, Quil, Sam
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No
Word count: 49511
[Report This] Published: May 14, 2008 Updated: August 24, 2010
Reviewer: Nightmare1991 Signed
Date: June 18, 2008
Title: Chapter 18: The Caterpillar Mating Dance
Very nice! It's nice to see Jake happy... He deserves it. It's wonderfully written. I can't wait for more! (I can honestly say that you're quickly becoming one of m favorite authors on this site!) ;) Keep up the great work!
Summary: Did you ever wonder what the other Fork High Schoolers must have been thinking as Jacob Black walked onto the school compound like a James Dean wannabe? Did they think it was a gang war? A teenage abuse ring? Or just a normal love triangle, this is my take.
Categories: Eclipse Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Edward, Eric, Jacob, Jessica, Lauren, Mike, Tyler
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No
Word count: 4207
[Report This] Published: May 22, 2008 Updated: July 20, 2008
Reviewer: Nightmare1991 Signed
Date: July 20, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: That One
I really liked this! I think that it's really interesting to see what the other students thought about the incident... And I think that you're right... They're not as shallow-minded as we all like to think. It's only fair to let them have their say... I mean, SM doesn't develop their characters too much, because they're not pertinent to the story. Plus, Bella (the narrator) finds them annoying. But then again, we find them annoying too... Don't we...? Isn't that why we're all too keen to accept Bella's opinion of their character...? Hmm...
Reviewer: Nightmare1991 Signed
Date: July 20, 2008
Title: Chapter 2: A Bet
"By the time my van almost killed her, and we connected..." Hehe! "Connected" That's great... You gotta love the clueslessness... Love it! Author's Response: Yeah, guys like Tyler are all about ignoring your hints to 'Back away'. He's not even the chess club, sweetly clueless type. Even after Edward said that Bella won't ever be free for dates with anyone besides himself, Tyler persisted. Fun to laugh at though. Thanks for Reviewing!
Summary: What's the farthest thing from The Cleavers? The Cullens. How will Bella fair being a human, in a house full of vampires, with a past that might come back to bite her? 
Categories: AU Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes
Word count: 49288
[Report This] Published: May 25, 2008 Updated: January 02, 2009
Reviewer: Nightmare1991 Signed
Date: July 21, 2008
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
I was wondering... Are they really moving to Seatle... or is it like it is in Illinois? Even though someone doesn't live in Chicago, they usually say they do...because it's "close enough"... (I was, by the way, one of those people... in case you were wondering... which you probably weren't)Are they, perhaps, really moving to Forks? *puppy dog eyes* Also, I was thinking (Ooh! Better watch out! She's thinking and wondering... And now, apparantly, she's referring to herself iin the third person! Hehe!) Well, anyway... I was thinking about how Bella's father is Phil... and why... Is it because you really don't like him and wanted to kill him off/make him abandon his daughter (sorry can't remember which...) Or because you wanted to us Charlie later on in the story... and didn't want there to be any rekindled father/daughter flame? (*giggle*) Wow! All this ^ and I haven't even started reading yet! 8o Well... anyway... First and ssecond born?!? WOW! ... Doesn't seem like she really believes in the sanctity of life... does it? I mean, Alice would turn the kid into a walking barbie doll... I was thinking again... Bella's still in the city where her mom left her... isn't she...? I mean, the scene at the hospital definitely suggested that.... Did they leave and come back? 'Cause it seems like people might get a little suspicious if the Cullens were trying to pull off 16-19 year olds for ten years... .Oo. “Umm…I kind of have to potty.” Yeah... Not much I can say to that... I think it's kinda cool that Bella doesn't hate her mom for leaving her... I don't know if I could be so noble... How old was Bella when she went to live with the Cullens? Okay... so... yeah... I finished reading this chapter, and it looks like you answered my question before I even posted it... Man, you're good! Sneaky, sneaky... Looks like Phil died instead of leaving... Hmm... it also appears that you like him... So... I must say, I'm kinda leaning toward my other theory... Hmm... Author's Response: Ha. Ok, that was hilarious to read...really. I would love to answer all of your questions but Im afraid some might ruin the story for you so I'm going to answer what I can. They are moving to Seattle, because they are enrolled in college. I was going to send them to Forks but I mean where would i send them to school...Spoon University? Bella was five (almost six) when she started to live with the Cullens and she has been there 12 years. Yes, they have stayed in the same place for those years because Esme and Carlisle did not want to up root her. They wanted her to have a normal life. They were very careful with the rest of the kids "go away for school' or different things like that to help with any suspicion. The fact that Bella did grow older also helped. Not to mention, guys dont usually show age as much as women (sucks huh?) so Carlisle was able to pull off the age gap...or plastic surgery any one? j/k Hopefully, more of your questions will be answered as the story progresses. If not, feel free to ask. Thanks for reading and making me laugh.
Reviewer: Nightmare1991 Signed
Date: June 18, 2008
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Yay! Edward’s here! Finally!“I just want to play with his hair and lick him. This can’t be normal.” Lick him, ehh? That’s… different—quite a way to show one’s affection, I’ll say! But wait… What? Isn’t he drawn to here scent? Hmm… Love the story; can’t wait for more! Author's Response: haha....Edward can do that to a woman! Thanks so much for reading!
Reviewer: Nightmare1991 Signed
Date: July 21, 2008
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Oh! In my last comment, I forgot to tell you that I absolutely love your title for this chapter! It's very clever... But then again... that's not all that surprising... Your titles are usually pure genious *watches in awe as Guineapigbarbie's head inflates like a hot-air balloon* Hehe! =D Author's Response: My titles are actually the hardest thing for me to come up with, so I'm glad you like them. Do you happen to come in a pocket size? i just want to carry you around for whenever I have a bad day. Thanks again.
Reviewer: Nightmare1991 Signed
Date: July 21, 2008
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
“Bella, no one in this world will ever deserve you, but if there was any person that I ever thought would come remotely close to accomplishing that, it’s Edward." Aww! How sweet! Emmett has a sweet side! Who would've thunk? Hehe! Really, though, it's nice to see that he's there for Bella... Very adorable... The "teddy bear" emerges... “Nah, I’m not too worried. I speak fluent sarcasm, Alice took smart-assness as a second language, and Rosalie is thinking about majoring in Bitchism. I think we have all the bases covered.” Now, that's good stuff... I wonder where I can find some clases... Hmm... I gotta give Bella props for spiilling the beans... It must've taken a lot of guts... and I doubt that I would've had 'em if I were in her shoes... “I wish I could promise that those eyes would never have to shed a tear again, but unfortunately I can’t. What I can promise is that they will never have to shed a tear because of me.” Now, that's just beautiful! Yay! Go Edward! Let's just hope that something similar doesn't happen to the last time he made a promise like that... (refer to New Moon if you have any doubts as to what I'm referring...) I know, I know... I'm a pessimist... but someone's got to be... Author's Response: Oh hunny, i understand. You cant read Twilight and not think...ok where's the twist? Unfortunately, Bella and Edward relationship can't always be kittens and roses.
Reviewer: Nightmare1991 Signed
Date: July 21, 2008
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
“…but then, Jasper bit me and Emmett thought that if he blew in my mouth he could make the venom come out. It was a close call, but other than that everything’s peachy.” I actually almost completely believed that... I just totally sounds like something Emmett would do... and we all know about Jasper... "Kids in the front seat cause accidents. Accidents in the back seat cause kids." Oh! That's rich! Surprisingly, I've never heard that one before... gotta give you props for that one... Hehe! "Wait until you hear me spout off the name of the 20 lucky bachelors from ‘I Heart N.Y.’ Season 1." First and last names...? Now, that would be impressing... But that's coming from the girl who's lucky if she can remember the two finalists on The Bachelor... Hehe! ' “Easy, tell her she smells nice. Women always like to hear that.” / “Um Emmett, I don’t think that would be to smart. I mean, would you tell a turkey on Thanksgiving morning that it smelled nice?” ' Oh! That's... *bursts out laughing* Yeah... *grin* ' “Yeah, she’s the hot human that wants to have your little vampire babies,” Emmett added.' Oh! Leave it to Emmett... If anyone else had said that... it would have just been plain wrong... But, siince it's Emmett, it's... still wrong, mind you... but it's just so funny! It seems kinda weird that Esme's all for Edward going after Bella... I mean, I know that he's her son and that she wants him to be happy... But... Bella's her daughter... You'd think that she'd be a little more protective... You know... like trying to protect her "innocense and virtue" or something like that... Hmm... I can't remember... Is Edward totally obsessed with her blood or not... 'Cause if he is... I don't think that it was very wise of her to stick her finger into his mouth... right next to those "fangs"... Clever line though... *grin* 8D Hmm... It seems like thi Edward is not nearly as careful as the other... I mean... tongues!?! I really like it though... I will admit, I am intrigued as to why she ran away crying... Could this possiibly be "the past that will come back to bite her"? Hehe! Author's Response: This is how i view the Esme stuff. She just want to see her kids happy. Edward has been a long for like a decade and Bella has gone through so much over the last couple of years. If they make each other whole again, then thats all that matters. Edward is attracted to Bella blood, but not as strongly as in Twilight. He didnt have a desire to kill her when he saw her. He has been traveling around helping the Volturi so he has had a lot of practice with self control. Also, Bellas in the vamps so he doesnt have that whole worry. Thanks for the review and hope that helped some.
Reviewer: Nightmare1991 Signed
Date: June 30, 2008
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
I was just thinking about how clever it was that you decided to send Edward away for the majority of Bella's childhood. It would be so awkard if they developed feelings foor each other after living like brother and sister for so long... *shudders* Well, back to this chapter... *bursts out laughing* I LOVED it! Wonderful last line, by the way... : ) Author's Response: Yeah i thought it would have been a little creepy too...would have made for a great Sally Jessy Raphael episode though! Glad it's making you giggle. Thanks.
Reviewer: Nightmare1991 Signed
Date: July 08, 2008
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
'“Uh Tanya, this is a rake and shovel conversation,” pointing between Edward and me. “no hoes allowed."' Hehe! I love Bella's 'maturity'... "Nana booboo" Hehe! Priceless! Her thoughts just crack me up! Love the little "Day's of Our Lives" allusion, by the way! “The Hard and the Beautiful”? Could that possibly be anythting like "The Young and the Restless"? lol "Polar bear crisis"? Could that be "Captain Planet" again? hehe... Emmet as a vampire... You're right... Only Emmet! *rolling on the floor laughing* Hehe! The whole chapter was great, but I loved the ending especially! "... I was alive." That's beautiful! I can't wait for the next chapter! Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm really glad you enjoyed the last chapter. If i could just make one person laugh...oh who am i kidding im just in it for the reviews. Just joking. hehe
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