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Real name: Alice
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My name is Allyson but I prefer Alice, and you're looking at your new best friend. Or not. I'm a real friendly person and I appreciate everyone who reads my stories--that's right, everyone! If you leave me a review, I love you more, that's the only difference.


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Summary:

After the battle with the newborns, Carlisle assiduously attended the victims.  But what if he inadvertently neglected the one most important to him?  Short, fluffy one-shot.


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Alice, Carlisle, Esme, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2395
[Report This] Published: November 02, 2009 Updated: November 05, 2009


Reviewer: Lunar Siren Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aww, I love some Carlisle and Esme fluff. This was really well written, seals up the time after the fight quite nicely (:



Author's Response:

Thanks so much.  I've always wondered how the rest of the family reacted after the fight, so it was interesting to explore that a bit.  I'm glad you enjoyed it, too.

 
Vignettes by CalendulaM Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

Five incidents in Edward and Carlisle’s relationship spanning from shortly after Edward's change to the end of 'New Moon'. Vaguely Edward/Carlisle.


Categories: Pre-Twilight, New Moon Characters: Carlisle, Edward, Esme
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4699
[Report This] Published: November 29, 2009 Updated: December 10, 2009


Reviewer: Lunar Siren Signed
Date: December 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Bravo! It's not very often that I review, but this was simply amazing. At first I was a little nervous with your direction, but as it all progressed, I was blown away. Keeping them in character throughout the whole thing--perfect! I love the relationship between Carlisle and Edward you have here. Maybe there will be expansion? (:



Author's Response:

I'm so honoured that I wrote something that made you want to review. I do have a longer story plotted out that will tie in with this one, but I haven't gotten around to beginning it as of yet. Some day. :) Thank you!

 
Summary:

Renesmee Cullen, now sixteen years old, has lived a very blessed life filled with friendship and family. Life gets complicated when she becomes closer to her best friend, Jacob Black. Not only is she unsure whether she's ready to change their relationship, if she does give in to the imprint and love him as destiny predicts, could it put the lives of her love, her friends, and her family in danger? When destiny, love, and duty are all pulling in different directions, which one would you sacrifice?

 

Life In Technicolor

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*Rated for much later chapters which may include some violent situations, adult content, and possibly some lemons.

Huge thanks to KariAnn for adding me to the Imprint Archives!

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Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Jacob, Renesmee
Challenges:
Series: Imprint Me: The Jacob and Nessie Archives
Chapters: 30 Completed: No Word count: 278276
[Report This] Published: February 25, 2010 Updated: April 01, 2012


Reviewer: Lunar Siren Signed
Date: March 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Home

I'm back, and with another review!
Like others, I like that you made the imprint a choice. But this begs the question, if someone in the imprint fought against it, could they break it? Hmm...

Ness and Nahuel still seem like an interesting couple. They wouldn't be as good for each other as her and Jake, but interesting nonetheless. Quick, write a crackfic before someone else steals it! Ha ha!

Nessie's confusion is so believable. Gotta love those awkward, coming-of-age years. Poor girl gets them a lot faster than other kids.
And why can't men just say what they're thinking? Come on, Jake! Just talk about it; it doesn't make you a girl, you won't instantly grow a vagina.

Also, how dare she try to hurt Chopin. With Chopin's music, there's absolutely no room for anger. Should have tried something from Liszt. The beginning of Concerto no. 1 (Movt. 1) would be much better suited. For shame, Ness, for shame! ;)



Author's Response:

See I love that you know Chopin is usually calm. That's what I was going for. With Nessie in a way she seems to get things late now that she's literally sixteen and fully grown for 9 years now. But if she were human, this would be totally normal lol. The imprint is a choice yeah, but I don't think anyone in history has ever denied that kind of devotion. Emily tried to in the beginning with Sam and we see how well that worked out.

The level of devotion from the wolf is overwhelming, and how they fit together is effortless and perfect. Which is another reason why no one has ever rejected their wolf. It's true they do have a choice, Nessie could reject Jake as a mate. However why would she want to? He's her soul mate, and she knows that.

Anyways thank you so much for reading and reviewing!! 

 
Reviewer: Lunar Siren Signed
Date: April 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: On the Street Where You Live

Distractions, distractions, distractions. But seriously, Ness, stop being such a freak, ha ha!

I think it's so cute Jake bought a place, and actually asked the Cullens for help. I thought he'd be more of a man and do that whole, "I'm a man, I can do this myself, gruntgrunt" kind of thing. But really, it was about time he got out of Billy's place.

The conversation between these two is just so fluid. I still can't believe it. Seriously, after this fic, SM shouldn't even try to write Ness. It just wouldn't compare.

I understand their want to keep the relationship under wraps. I'd hate to be in the Cullen household with a secret like that. Obviously they expect it to happen--probably a lot sooner than this, actually--but I have a feeling they don't want all the details. He is a mangy mutt out for Ness, after all ;)

I really need to buckle down and read all these chapters again, that way it'll all be fresh in my mind when 16 comes out, but I hate having little to no time. I will review every chapter! I promise!



Author's Response:

haha! awesome. i love your reviews! so much! 16 is being posted tomorrow so if you wanted to get caught up by then you best get a move on girlie! lol. Either way I know you're good for it. Dialogue between them isn't easy to write - though it might look effortless. Sometimes Jake is like "can I just kiss her already?" and then I have to explain alllllll over again why the imprint would make him wait, drawing it out. He sighs, kicks the floor with his foot and nods and goes back to being cockblocked like a good lil boy. LOL.

SM will probably hate me for writing this. I can see this plotline as what she would follow only I did it first haha! Who knows maybe she'd go really cliche and make them start bumpin uglies when she's just barely reaching maturity. Which would be weird. 

As always thnx bb!

 
Reviewer: Lunar Siren Signed
Date: March 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Of Rainforests and Jet Planes

It's hormones, Ren/Ness/Nessie! So many nicknames, it's hard to choose. Anyway, yes, that undescribable feeling is the imprint fueled by hormones. Come on, Ness, you're smarter than that!

I've read this up to a point on FFn, but I wanted to reread and review it here. Once again, one word: outtakes! I want to see some girl love ;)
Also, Ness and Nahuel? Who woulda thunk it? Eesh... don't let me use that word again, please.

Now then, after my busy day, I shall devote my time to sitting and reviewing every chapter. I hate busy days :(



Author's Response:

I hate busy days too! Thank you for reading and reviewing sweets! Nessie is a bit naive when it comes to this stuff, she's learning though!

 
Reviewer: Lunar Siren Signed
Date: March 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Muffin Briberies and Long Talks

Always the darn surprises.

Ah, finally got back to reading. I started chapter 3 a few days ago but never had time to finish. I shoved the RL stuff aside for a few more minutes to do this.

I swear while I was reading and came to this line, "so maybe he was just being territorial of our friendship?" I scream, "Friendship? BAH! It's your virtue!" Yeah, I'm a weird one.

It's strange to see someone so willing to jump into marriage. Is Claire sure she really wants that? I think a certain imprintee is trying to jump the shark, ha ha! ;)

I love watching your Jake and Ness interact. He's much more well behaved than my Jake; that one needed enough tranquilizer to take down an elephant. Yours is so sweet, even when he's jealous.
And, I know, it's a guy thing, but really... where does Jacob get the crazy idea Ness and Nahuel could work? That's just insane. He's imprinted on her, darn it! Use your head, Jake! She is hook-line-and sinker about you. Okay, I don't think that can be used in this setting, but I totally did it anyway.

Speaking of anyway...
Thanks for including the other Quileutes. They never get any love, seeing as how they are itty bitty secondary characters. Don't you just love bringing them to center stage? (:

Waiting for the new chapter, but onto the next! ...Eventually :(



Author's Response:

hehe I love the other Quileutes too. Nessie I think would feel extremely attached to them. They are an extension of her family. She has soft spots for Claire, Emily, Kim and Rachel, they're the original imprints after all. Jake is trying to make sure Nessie's ready for a relationship with him. He's seen Claire and Quil's evolution into a couple and he learned a lot about what to do and what not to do. Claire is still young only 19 almost 20 so she's wanting the whole fairy tale package right now. Quil's hesitating to make sure she's ready (and well educated with a degree) before they tie the knot. He proposed her first Christmas home from college hoping for a long engagement.

hehe they are totally cute aren't they? Ness is a lil clueless at this stage right now, she'll get better I promise lol.

 

As always thank you for r&r-ing! 



Author's Response:

hehe I love the other Quileutes too. Nessie I think would feel extremely attached to them. They are an extension of her family. She has soft spots for Claire, Emily, Kim and Rachel, they're the original imprints after all. Jake is trying to make sure Nessie's ready for a relationship with him. He's seen Claire and Quil's evolution into a couple and he learned a lot about what to do and what not to do. Claire is still young only 19 almost 20 so she's wanting the whole fairy tale package right now. Quil's hesitating to make sure she's ready (and well educated with a degree) before they tie the knot. He proposed her first Christmas home from college hoping for a long engagement.

hehe they are totally cute aren't they? Ness is a lil clueless at this stage right now, she'll get better I promise lol.

 

As always thank you for r&r-ing! 

 
LOVING EDWARD by SammiCat15 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 302]
Summary:

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A Breaking Dawn story, this is a tale about Edward & Bella’s voyage of sexual discovery and their introduction to parenthood.

The timeline runs from September, when they first go to their cottage in the woods, after Bella wakes up as a vampire, until the arrival of the Volturi at the end of December.

Bella & Edward have to balance their sexual desires with the challenges of new parenthood and Bella's adjustment to being a newborn vampire.

The story is told almost entirely from Bella's point of view.

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Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Leah, Nessie, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: No Word count: 95786
[Report This] Published: February 26, 2010 Updated: December 18, 2011


Reviewer: Lunar Siren Signed
Date: April 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - CARPET BURN

"Mate properly." I giggled, I really did. Come on, Edward, we're not in the 1900s! However, the rest of that sentence was pure gold. You captured his lust nicely with that single sentence.

I have to be honest, I despise "Feel Like Making Love" to no end, but that's all I could hear while I read this chapter. And I liked it.

Looking forward to the next chapter! (:



Author's Response:

thanks for your kind review.  I'm a Bad Company girl through and through - sorry about that! Also a Foos girl.....

hope you enjoy the ride.  Edward ramps it up.

 
Reviewer: Lunar Siren Signed
Date: March 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - GENTLY DOES IT

Yes, it definitely feels like Bella has really grown up here. I didn't get that sense at all from BD...

I like how you're showing us Bella's maturity, and I love all the fluffiness in this chapter. I expect good things will come from this fic. A great start (:



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for taking the time to review.  I am very pleased that you liked the start.

 
Summary:

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On their first Christmas back in Forks, Jasper's resolve is put to the test.


Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Alice, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2614
[Report This] Published: March 13, 2010 Updated: March 30, 2010


Reviewer: Lunar Siren Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love it!

Pointless Jasper love is always a good thing; he doesn't get nearly enough. He's always thrown into some hardcore fic or made into a cowboy. But this, this is perfect.

You capture his Pre-Twilight years wonderfully. The anxiety, the uncertainty. He wanted to please Alice and fit in with the Cullens, and this really showed that. Everyone was very in character, and that's always a plus.

It's amazing what children can do, isn't it? He just wants to chomp on her, but she's sitting there, so naive, like only a little girl could. It's kind of cute. Kind of stupid, but cute. And I like the Star Trek reference thrown in; I don't watch it much, but that was great.

I like Edward's line: "We're a family. We look out for each other. If we succeed, we succeed together. If we fail, we fail together." Captures the Cullen mentality perfectly.

Very well done! Beautifully done! I hope to see more of these little one-shots from you! (:





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