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Penname: MCGT [Contact]
Real name: MCGT
Status: Member
Member Since: May 15, 2009
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Just a lover of all great B/E fic. 


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Reviews by MCGT
 
Summary:

It was a moment of deliciously impaired judgment.

Bella thought she would never see her one-night stand again.

She was wrong.

E/B AH


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: No Word count: 57020
[Report This] Published: January 16, 2009 Updated: July 16, 2010


Reviewer: MCGT Signed
Date: July 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 (vjgm)

Nice job!!  Really liked your story.



Author's Response:

Thank youu!!

 
Summary:

Bella takes a vacation to Hilton Head Island in South Carolina to meet Alice's new boyfriend, Jasper. Rosalie and Emmett come along, too, just in case Bella didn't feel like enough of a fifth wheel. With Jasper's roommate out of town, Bella has his nice big bed all to herself. Until Edward comes home in the middle of the night...

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human , SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 36 Completed: Yes Word count: 163211
[Report This] Published: March 02, 2009 Updated: December 21, 2011


Reviewer: MCGT Signed
Date: February 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 Babies, Babes & Bribes

Lovely ending.  Hope the epi brings with it babies and laughter.

Wonderful & sad to see it over.

 
Summary:

After suffering heartbreak at the end of her relationship with Jacob, Bella decides to play the field on her own, disappointing Alice and Rosalie. Morning after morning, she finds herself stumbling office after a long, unfulfilling night. That is until Rosalie and Alice take her to a charity date auction and help Bella bid on the gorgeous Edward Cullen. Used to going after what she wants, Bella finds herself falling into bed with Edward with complete disregard.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Makenna
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 7675
[Report This] Published: April 29, 2009 Updated: May 11, 2009


Reviewer: MCGT Signed
Date: May 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Auction Block

wow... really enjoyed this.  I know it's a one shot... but hopefully you'll continue these characters in another story..

 
Summary: Feature

A story about love, about death, about keeping secrets, and dealing with the consequences.  Bella and Edward meet at a hospital when she is diagnosed with a life threatening disease and he is recovering from knee surgery.  She confides her fears to him; he changes his life because of her.  This is a story about their journey through the confusion, awkwardness, pain, and beauty of first love.

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Excerpt from Chapter 2:
“What are you most afraid of?”  Edward asks one last question.

“I'm not afraid of dying,” I answer truthfully.

“You're not afraid of dying?” he repeats, incredulous.

“No.  There's so much more.  I'm afraid of losing my hair but that's not my biggest fear.  I'm afraid of leaving my mom and dad all alone.  I'm afraid that if I survive, I'll never have children of my own.”  I yawn again.  Edward is quiet and I think for a moment that he's fallen asleep.  “Edward,” I whisper, in case he is asleep, “What are you most afraid of?”

“I'm afraid I'm falling for you,” he whispers back so softly that I'm unsure if I've heard him correctly. 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 82940
[Report This] Published: August 09, 2009 Updated: October 03, 2011


Reviewer: MCGT Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Luminescence

I adore this story... although pieces broke my heart - I have a baby girl who I was reading this while feeding her and tears were streaming down my face at the thought of losing her like Maddie.  Anyhow, I found your story yesterday and read it cover to cover.  Hope to see the next chapter soon.  Wonderful Job!!



Author's Response:

I nurse while reading FF too.  =)

I'm so excited to see I have new readers after a hiatus.  Glad you're enjoying the story!

Thanks for the review!

-Melanie

 

 
Reviewer: MCGT Signed starstarstarstar
Date: May 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: The Hospital

So good.  I forgot how much I liked this story.  Thanks for the update.  Can't wait for the one to follow it.



Author's Response:

 Thank you!  The next chapter is already in queue.  Hope you enjoy it!

-april09

 
Reviewer: MCGT Signed starstarstarstar
Date: May 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: The Interim

This story is really well done.  Excellent job



Author's Response:

Thank you--it's so nice to 'see' familiar readers as I finally finish up this story! 

Thanks for continuing to read and review!

-Melanie

 
Summary:

Edward Masen is an accomplished pianist who is searching for 'the one' - a dancer for his new fall tour. Bella Swan decides to take a chance and see if she has what it takes to prove she's more than what she seems.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 25113
[Report This] Published: February 18, 2010 Updated: March 19, 2011


Reviewer: MCGT Signed
Date: September 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 (tmr)

Okay - I like the story, but I just want to give you a little constructive criticism - I hope that's okay.   Putting song lyrics into a story is kind of repetitive.  If you want to put in one or two lines is one thing, but to have the lyrics of almost the whole song repeated in two separate chapters is just kind of annoying.   You can mention the song in the story and then describe around it without actually writing the lyrics.    Hopefully the future chapters will be more descriptive and less lyrics.   I like the concept. 



Author's Response:

I always appreciate constructive criticism, so thank you. I'm glad you like the concept of the story and I hope you keep reading!  :-)

 
Amore Vietato by blackjacklily Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 213]
Summary:

 

Amore Vietato - Forbidden Love. That's what 18 year old Bella Swan found when she moved to the small town of Forks, Washington. 

Dating a century old vampire and best friends with a werewolf, Bella is thrust into a supernatural world where all the stories she thought were fiction turn out to be reality.

A momentary lapse of control by Edward leaves Bella with broken bones and all alone. So begins her fall from grace.  Until she awakes to find a different vampire in her room. One who warns her that danger is searching for her.

With the help of a rogue vampire, can Bella find the Cullens in time to do what she was born to do - fulfill her destiny and destroy the Volturi?

 

Story is rated NC-17 for adult language, brief and mild drug abuse and perhaps a few lemons! All canon pairings and slightly OOC.

 

 


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Marcus, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 50826
[Report This] Published: March 12, 2010 Updated: September 23, 2011


Reviewer: MCGT Signed
Date: July 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Make Me Believe

Hmmm... I am intrigued, I don't have a clue - aside from what the summary of the story gave me...

BTW - thanks for the story rec.  You're a sweetheart!!  :D 

 
Reviewer: MCGT Signed
Date: September 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Crossroads

Just love you so freaking much!  Happy to help.  XoXo

 
Reviewer: MCGT Signed
Date: April 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Love/Hate Heartbreak

I'm digging the story.  Great job.  Can't wait for the next chapter.

& thanks again for being such a great beta!! 



Author's Response:

Aww thanks! And I'm totally proud to be a part of your wonderful story.

For anyone reading...go check out "Twilight Reflected in Brown Eyes"...positively amazing!

 
Bella? Marie? by Nyomi Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1284]
Summary: Feature

ON HIATUS. [sorry guys :-(]

Bella (22) longs for love and acceptance, yet her fear of rejection keeps her guarded and single. Her craving to feel needed is fulfilled by working as a live-in nanny to Rosalie, who's a single mom to four-year old Henry.

For months, Bella has been secretly infatuated with Rosalie's ex-husband, Edward (29), but he barely acknowledges Bella during their brief encounters. That is, until one night when she bumps into him at a club.

However, he doesn't recognize her at all.

Afraid for her job, she tells him her name is Marie. He acceptes her pseudonym, and feeling safe with anonymity, Bella reveals her wild side. 

She makes the most of the night, but what happens when he tries to find the mysterous Marie?

When Mr. Cullen gets to know Bella, will he still want Marie?

How will that one incredible night shake their worlds?

AH/OOC/MA

*Rated for language, adult situations and sexual content from early chapters.

 

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: No Word count: 129626
[Report This] Published: May 01, 2010 Updated: September 30, 2011


Reviewer: MCGT Signed starstarstar
Date: October 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Sex Kitten

Interesting chapter, although Rose hanging out with her son in a skimpy nightie kind of squicked me out a bit.  Other than that, well done.  Can't wait for the rest.

 
Reviewer: MCGT Signed
Date: April 26, 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Unexpected Events

I hope that it's stress and yes, I've had mine once disappear for almost 3 months.  Was scary at the time.   Good luck w/ your studies

 
100 Hours by wytchwmn75 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 514]
Summary:

Bella has a 4.0 GPA, is President of the Student Council and volunteers at Forks Community Hospital. Edward is pierced, has tattoos, and has to serve 100 hours community service at the hospital. What happens when the bad boy finds out the good girl has a wild side? ExB, AH, OOC, Rated NC-17

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 70144
[Report This] Published: May 05, 2010 Updated: July 07, 2011


Reviewer: MCGT Signed
Date: August 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: 20 Hours Part Two

Okay - I really like this story, but I'm a little confused.  What's the age for people to legally get tattoos in WA?  It's 18 where I live, so I sort of keep thinking that these two are older if they have that many tattoos.  But maybe I"m just showing my age.  ha ha.  Great job!



Author's Response:

In Washington its 18, and it doesn't even matter if its w/parental consent. Let's just say that I'm taking some artistic liberties w/it, lol. I would say Bella had her parents consent, I believe that's in Chapter 1 and Edward knows the owner so he would've done it regardless. I'm glad you're enjoying the story! And you're not showing you're age, I'm 35 and was 19 when I got m y first one so I really didn't know what the legal ages were.

xo

 
Summary:

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Bella Swan had led a very ordinary life.  She'd married her college boyfriend only to be betrayed when he left her for another girl.  After the death of her father, she pulled out a map and threw a dart.  The implications of that one simple act would send her life in a direction that would surprise her beyond belief.  She found a home...she found a job...could she find love again after surviving a cheating husband?  Only time will tell...What secrets will the beautiful stranger she meets have and how will she deal with them?

AU/AH...Canon Couples...with a twist.  NC-17 for smut, dirty language, a smattering of BDSM, and the usual lemons. 

Stephanie Meyer owns all things Twilight.  I like to put them into awkward positions and see what happens.  Take the ride?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes Word count: 264490
[Report This] Published: June 14, 2010 Updated: March 10, 2011


Reviewer: MCGT Signed
Date: December 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Christmas Scheming

I am enjoying your story, but I gotta say the BSDM at the parents place over xmas while everyone was there kinda squicked me out.  Sorry.

 
Exclusively by BoydBlog Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 67]
Summary:

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WINNER - TEXTS FROM LAST NIGHT CONTEST - hosted on Fanfiction.net

 

Edward was a sexual predator. The bars and clubs of Manhattan were his hunting ground. Would he let the ultimate prize slip through his fingers?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 22729
[Report This] Published: July 10, 2010 Updated: June 01, 2011


Reviewer: MCGT Signed
Date: July 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Exclusively Bella's POV

Love to see an epi...

 
Commute by Kris Salvador Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

 

Take a ride, get off. EXPLICIT fun.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 2768
[Report This] Published: August 19, 2010 Updated: September 13, 2010


Reviewer: MCGT Signed
Date: September 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Can't wait for "part 2" :D

 
Summary:

Bella's life was irrevocably changed by the vampires who left her behind. Alone in the world now, she finds herself drawn to another. Fighting for her life has changed her and now, the new family she has found will change her as well...


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Peter
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 62409
[Report This] Published: January 17, 2011 Updated: June 22, 2011


Reviewer: MCGT Signed
Date: April 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: All Kinds of Awesome

Aw... I like the way you write these three.  Excellent job.

 
Reviewer: MCGT Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Red's

Great Story.  I'm really enjoying it so far.  Can't wait to read the next chapter.  Onward ho!





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