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Penname: zephyersky [ Contact]
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Member Since: October 27, 2008
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Summary: 
Four years after Edward left Bella in the forest; Bella is finally moving forward with her life but it is someone from her past that helps her truly heal and obtain the future that she was always meant to have.
Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Jacob, Jasper
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 51 Completed: Yes
Word count: 167857
[Report This] Published: June 11, 2008 Updated: August 14, 2009
Reviewer: zephyersky Signed 
Date: December 16, 2008
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
This is a great story. At first I wasn't sure I would like it because I love Edward but now I kinda think this would have been an interesting turn of events. Please keep writing more.
[Report This] Published: December 05, 2008 Updated: December 16, 2008
Reviewer: zephyersky Signed 
Date: December 27, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: The Sum of Him
This was very beautiful. Author's Response: Thank you muchly! :D
Reviewer: zephyersky Signed
Date: July 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: The Sum of Him
I was just rereading this as I linked it to a list of my fav. fan fics. I wanted to tell you again that this is an absolutely beautiful one shot. I only hope someday to be as detailed and descriptive as you are. You are an amazing writer.
Author's Response: Oh, wow. That... wow! Thank you so, so much. That means a lot to me. *hugs* Thank you again.
Summary: Jasper, Rosalie, Bella, Alice, Emmett & Edward become interwoven, making their mark at Seattle's Fremont Park Preparatory boarding school. Wealth and war, friendship and love ensue.
AU/AH. Rated M for language and sexual themes. Slightly OOC.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: No
Word count: 146911
[Report This] Published: December 19, 2008 Updated: September 12, 2010
Reviewer: zephyersky Signed
Date: February 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 20: Rain, Rain Go Away
Oh, conflicted Jasper. If only he would just say what he's thinking, but then it wouldn't be as fun to read. Rose is totally justified being that mad at him. I just hope that she will forgive him at some point. Another good chapter, I can't wait for more.
Reviewer: zephyersky Signed
Date: April 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 23: For Want of a Nail
Another good chapter. I did have a little trouble following Bella at first but then it all clicked together. I want to see Edward go after her. I hate that Jasper is leaving Alice behind. I'm sure it will all turn out.
ZephyerSky Author's Response: I am so happy it all eventually clicked for you! Edward tracking her, huh? That certainly gives me some ideas:) Thank you so much for your review.
If you'd like the EPOV outtake Lavender's Blue, please PM your email address to me and I'll send a PDF your way. I promise to use the email you provide only this one time. Thank you so much again, RAE
(Email should look like this ilovegabcotp[at]yahoo[dot]com )!!!!!!
Summary: Rather than sitting silently by Bella as she transforms, Edward pours out his heart. Listen to the hopes, fears, memories, insights, love and promises he shares with his wife during her change.
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 2677
[Report This] Published: December 25, 2008 Updated: January 03, 2009
Reviewer: zephyersky Signed
Date: January 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
that was just beautiful. Very touching. It made me cry.
Summary: All his life, Edward has been hiding a secret that nobody outside his family and girlfriend knows. It mentally tortures him, but he refuses to acknowledge that it is really there. When the mental images come to face him again in reality, how will he handle it? Does everyone deserve a second chance in life?
All Human, Canon Pairings. Underage drinking/drug use/sex. Language. Violence.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes
Word count: 50001
[Report This] Published: December 26, 2008 Updated: May 14, 2009
Reviewer: zephyersky Signed
Date: January 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Too Early
I like it so far. I'm very interested in where you're going with Jasper. Eagerly awaiting more.
Summary:
"It was my fault, my decision, my resignation, and my destruction."
The evening immediately after Edward leaves Bella in "New Moon."
Categories: New Moon Characters: Carlisle, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 2101
[Report This] Published: January 09, 2009 Updated: January 09, 2009
Reviewer: zephyersky Signed
Date: January 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Detach (one-shot)
Very, very well done. I imagaine that this is how Edward felt. Author's Response: I'm glad to hear you felt I successfully captured the character, it was something I was rather concerned with on this one, so thank you muchly :-)
Summary: The much anticipated sequel to A Lesson in Release. Jasper has won the girl of his dreams and they are beginning a new life together at college. But what happens when fate intercedes? Will he be able to hold onto her or will fate return her to Edward?
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges: Series: The Lessons Saga
Chapters: 49 Completed: Yes
Word count: 171842
[Report This] Published: January 09, 2009 Updated: October 28, 2009
Summary:  Scarred by events in her past, Bella relies heavily on her best friend and roommate, Jasper. When Jasper falls in love with a girl named Alice, Bella is excited for him but can’t help but wonder – where will she fit in? Her answer partially arrives in the form of Alice's older brother, Edward, but as their friendship grows, Bella comes to realize that she may be too broken to give Edward everything he needs. Canon pairings, AH/AU
This contains explicit content, elements which may be offensive to some, and dark themes. It is intended for a mature audience.
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: No
Word count: 256064
[Report This] Published: February 21, 2009 Updated: March 09, 2010
Reviewer: zephyersky Signed
Date: May 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 19: The Aftermath
This is such a great story. You are doing an amazing job with it. I look forward to every new chapter. I can't wait to meet the rest of the guys and see how they react to Edward.
Reviewer: zephyersky Signed
Date: June 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 20: The Horde Descends
Another great chapter. Love that he turned Morphine on. One of my all time favorite bands.
Summary: Things get interesting around the Cullen household when Rosilie and Jacob's verbal agression becomes physical. One-shot. Lemon. Humor ensued!
Categories: Crackfic Characters: Jacob, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 1981
[Report This] Published: February 21, 2009 Updated: March 03, 2009
Reviewer: zephyersky Signed
Date: March 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: "One-Shot"
I think you should write more. Those 2 are so explosive together. Great idea. Author's Response: Thanks!
I don't know, I think this is good as just a one-shot, but who knows, I might add more in the future. :)
~Mystic
Summary: 
He's a young but jaded keyboard player writing lyrics for his band, Breaking Dawn, and she's a naive and frustrated poet looking to break out of her shell; their words collide on-line.
What happens when they meet in high school, unaware of their literary connection?
OOC, canon at heart.
Banner by FatApolloLove
Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes
Word count: 146168
[Report This] Published: February 22, 2009 Updated: August 26, 2009
Reviewer: zephyersky Signed
Date: July 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 29: Party Favors
my costumes have been pretty normal but I was at one halloween party where a guy was naked spotted man. He was completely naked with big spots painted on him. I love this story. You're amazing.
Summary: Edward is adopted by the Cullens after living a nightmare. He meets Bella, and she tries to fight his inner monster. AH
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Edward Masen, Sr., Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes
Word count: 104014
[Report This] Published: February 23, 2009 Updated: April 06, 2009
Reviewer: zephyersky Signed
Date: March 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
I think this chapter was great. You worried for nothing. It really did keep me hanging. I knew that was who it was but I kept waiting for Edward to figure it out. You kept the suspence up through the whole chapter and I can't wait for the next one to see what goes down.
Summary: Edward's POV while Bella is in the hospital in Phoenix. Song fic to Robert Pattinson's Never Think.
Categories: Twilight Characters: Bella, Edward, Renee
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 1673
[Report This] Published: March 09, 2009 Updated: March 15, 2009
Reviewer: zephyersky Signed
Date: March 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Very good. I never realized just how well that song fits their love story. Author's Response: Thank you! As soon as I bought the songtrack I knew I needed to write this.
Summary: Reclusive computer prodigy Edward Cullen needs a personal assistant and single mom Bella Swan needs a job. What happens when their worlds collide? Will Bella learn to trust the shy genius and will he be willing to open up to her as well?
Thank you to Shug for my beautiful banner!!!!!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No
Word count: 17994
[Report This] Published: March 16, 2009 Updated: April 08, 2009
Reviewer: zephyersky Signed
Date: April 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Yes he needs vocal cords without them he wouldn't be able to call out my name. I love the story and Geekward is so sweet I truly want my own. I love the set up you have going. I can't wait to see him interact with Charlie. Author's Response: thank you he's coming with an on/off switch on the vocal cords
Summary: Irrevocable change wrought from tragedy brings these two families together while their own personal demons threaten to tear them apart. Can they overcome the consequences of their actions or will the repercussions and guilt consume them?
*WARNING* This story contains references to cutting/suicidal tendencies, slight alcholism, adult language and rape along with a litany of psychological issues and is rated as it is for a reason. If you have an issue with any of these things, please refrain from reading.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No
Word count: 41836
[Report This] Published: March 16, 2009 Updated: October 18, 2009
Reviewer: zephyersky Signed
Date: March 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
Very intriigueing, I can't wait toread the next chapter. Stop biting your nails, the chapter was good. From the summery the story sounds very interesting. Author's Response: Thank you for your review. The next chapter will be submitted for validation shortly and I look forward to hearing your thoughts on that, and all future chapters. And no worries, I've given my nails a break ... for now, at least. ~ stolenXsanity
Summary: 
When Charlie is diagnosed with cancer, Bella decides to move to Forks to help him through his treatment and recovery. What happens when the resentful son of the new cancer doctor meets up with the reason he was dragged to this small town? AH. E/B.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Renee
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes
Word count: 99780
[Report This] Published: March 20, 2009 Updated: December 27, 2009
Reviewer: zephyersky Signed
Date: May 31, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: These Are The Days
Get better soon. This is such a sweet story. I can't wait to read more. Author's Response: I am better, and I am happy you are enjoying the story! More soon!
Summary: Bella Swan is a writer for a Women's Magazine in Florida, a magazine that she writes the self help column for...Something she really wants to escape. The good news, she is escaping self help, the bad news, she's covering the lives of women behind sports stars...In Denver.
Here she meets three amazing women; the girlfriend, fiance, and wife to two players and the coach of the team, but what will happen when the team superstar, Edward, takes an interest in Bella?
Warnings: It's NC-17, so basically... Smut, Language.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes
Word count: 129668
[Report This] Published: March 23, 2009 Updated: January 18, 2011
Reviewer: zephyersky Signed
Date: July 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14 - Recovery?
I hope they talk about it but I trust your choice for where you're taking the story. I still really like the story. Great job.
Reviewer: zephyersky Signed
Date: July 31, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15 - Planning
I'm liking this story a lot. I can't wait for the wedding now and to see how their plan for Alice goes.
Summary: 
One stormy Seattle night, the last person Bella expects to see appears without warning at her door. How will history - hers and his - impact their unexpected and growing friendship?
FitV art by Touchstone.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Jasper
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes
Word count: 97977
[Report This] Published: June 05, 2009 Updated: August 27, 2009
Reviewer: zephyersky Signed
Date: November 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 20: In Which Everybody Needs Somebody
I'm so glad he saw reason. I wish she could have stayed but it's good that Rose did.
Reviewer: zephyersky Signed
Date: November 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 21: In Which a Lot Happens in Sixty-Seven Days
Thank you for addressing what roses problem was. I really hope things are on the up swing from here on out.
Reviewer: zephyersky Signed
Date: November 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 19: In Which Love Is a Battlefield
Wow. This was an untense chapter. I have to tell you the lizzy borden refrence made me laugh. I liked the tension and the drama and the underlying current that they were all there for him. I hope this is a turning point. I love how you couldn't explain the love more than just feeling it. That was the perfect way to sum it up.
Reviewer: zephyersky Signed
Date: November 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: In Which There Is No One Home
Very good chapter. I know how worried bella was wondering where he was. You nailed all her emotions in this excellent job.
Reviewer: zephyersky Signed
Date: November 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: In Which All Is Fun in Love and Football
Oh I hope she can start to get along with rose now. On to the next chapter cause I can't wait.
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