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Legal Briefs by blueheronpl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 166]
Summary: AU, all human. Edward and Emmett are attorneys in Carlisle's law firm, Cullen Law Offices, PSC. They have had really bad luck trying to find a paralegal to work with, and finally take matters into their own hands and call a temp agency. Alice and Rose run a temp to hire agency and recommend their friend Bella for the position when Emmett calls. Bella is a recent graduate and is having a hard time finding a position because of her lack of experience.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 46395
[Report This] Published: May 30, 2008 Updated: May 21, 2009


Reviewer: diamondtopaz Signed
Date: May 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

the story line and everything is fabulous, but i can't stand the darn formatting! one day its spaced too tightly together, and another chapter has these random words between every line!

sorry, i'm done ranting. great story thus far

 
Summary:

How it happened. How it began. How it ended and how it was revived. 

This is the story of Esme Cullen. 


Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Carlisle, Esme, Other Character
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No Word count: 29684
[Report This] Published: July 14, 2008 Updated: February 16, 2009


Reviewer: diamondtopaz Signed
Date: November 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

 

i am very interested in how the rest of this story will play out...how esme will react to carlisle, how she learns to love him, etc.

this is a very realistic portryal of what i believe is really possible of what happened.

please update soon!

 
Their Singer by SarahJayne Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 500]
Summary:

In Twilight, Edward told Bella that if her blood sang to James like it had to Edward, it would've meant a fight right there in the field. What if this was the case? Follow Bella as she is kidnapped and turned by James, and the Cullens' fevered attempts to get her back. Features James/Bella, but this is ultimately an Edward/Bella story. "NC-17" for language, situations, and eventual sexual content.

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Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Jessica, Laurent, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 34456
[Report This] Published: July 24, 2008 Updated: November 01, 2008


Reviewer: diamondtopaz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

This was an amazing chapter. This whole story is captivating and interesting. I really, really liked the story line and the raw emotion in the words.

I just wish that there was one more chapter. i think the sex was a bit rushed and a bit awkward, but it was still lovely!

 
The Preview by TheMrsCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary: Bella and Edward are only two weeks away from there wedding.  Bella has been more than patient, and craves his body.  Edward must do something to appease her before the big day. One-Shot, just some smut.
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1328
[Report This] Published: July 30, 2008 Updated: July 30, 2008


Reviewer: diamondtopaz Signed
Date: November 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was a cool story and idea...

I wish you would make some sequels, though! It's an entertaining story plotline.

 
Summary:

Ever since Bella and Edward were kids, they have always despied eachother. What happens when they are locked in a classroom together for one whole weekend. Will the hate for eachother increase or will they become friends and possibly even more then friends?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Laurent, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 7846
[Report This] Published: August 17, 2008 Updated: December 30, 2008


Reviewer: diamondtopaz Signed
Date: October 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

 

Love it! You're really talented at writing sex scenes

 
Betrayal by rozebudz Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 36]
Summary: Feature

What really happened on the return journey back to Forks after Edward and Bella's honeymoon? How did Edward deal with the fact that Bella wanted to keep the baby?

Sorrow Winner


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3517
[Report This] Published: August 18, 2008 Updated: August 18, 2008


Reviewer: diamondtopaz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved this missing moment!
The descriptions seem very accurate to what probably happened. I see that unlike some authors, you kept to all of the facts, which I prefer over stories where people overlook some facts.

This was so soulful and I absolutely enjoyed reading this so much! Keep up the good work!

 
Reviewer: diamondtopaz Signed
Date: January 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

 

This is so realistic and accurate (to me, at least), that I would love it if you wrote a one-shot showing what Edward is thinking when he first sees Renesmee.

Great job!

 
Summary:

Bella Swan meets a beautiful stranger, lawyer Edward Masen on a holiday in Rome. The chemistry is palpable, the sex passionate - and a physical relationship grows into something more. The days fly in a whirlwind of clothes, sand, sex and wine. After a painful realisation that the fantasy has come to an end, Bella returns apprehensively to Seattle, heartbroken at the loss of her love. 


But, little does she know that the 'beautiful stranger' isn't such a stranger, after all.

 

A surprise awaits Bella Swan in Seattle.

 

 

Rated for explicitly detailed sex scenes and language.

 

 

Beautifully accurate banner by the beautifully talented MrsC. Thank you!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 65735
[Report This] Published: August 18, 2008 Updated: September 09, 2009


Reviewer: diamondtopaz Signed
Date: January 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Beauty, Bolognese and Boarding

 

Thank you so much for this chapter! I love how your chapters are always long and satisfying, without taking too much time to update. Your writing is exquisite. Also, when I first read the summary, I expected there to be a quick lemon, and then WHAM! they meet again. However, you exceeded my expectations. There are wonderful lemons, a great storyline, and even the little bit of angst I love!

Great job! Please update soon!

I am curious, though...About how many chapters do you think will be left?

 
Reviewer: diamondtopaz Signed
Date: July 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Introducing Jalice and Irreversible Heartbreak (shabby my love)

THREE WEEKS?! I'm going to die in that period!

Amazing writing. I am anxious for Edward and Bella's meeting to the point where I want to pull my hair out! (my poor hair!)

Please update soon!

 
Reviewer: diamondtopaz Signed
Date: September 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Cocktails with Jalice (shabbyapple)

Sigh... I was really looking forward to this one, but I think the one that I'm waiting for is probably either the next one, or the one after that one! Not to say that this one is bad, though. It's still awesome!

Please update soon!

 
Summary:

Life has dealt Edward and Bella their fair share of problems, but just as they begin to get their marriage back on track tragedy strikes. What happens when the only love you have ever known may be taken away? Will the guilt and memories tear you apart or is there something left worth fighting for?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 15516
[Report This] Published: August 29, 2008 Updated: December 30, 2008


Reviewer: diamondtopaz Signed
Date: January 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 (S)

 

This story really tugs on those heartstrings! In my opinion, I think this ws written to show Bella and Edward's everlasting love rather than just written as a quick lemon...

I can't help but wonder: What sickness does Bella have? I may have just missed it while reading, but I am curious as to what it is.

Please update soon!

 
Vertigo by FallenFlowers Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 227]
Summary:

Alternate Universe

Bella has had a less than perfect childhood, and due to certain circumstances she is now the human pet of James's coven.

Now the Cullens have kidnapped her to lure James out. How will Edward react to her blood? Will Bella ever find love again?

In various POVs, rated NC-17 just in case.

 

Vertigo is officially on HIATUS LEAVE

because I have gotten slightly bored of it and I think everyone else has too.

I will continue (and finish it; I think in several more chapters - maybe 5?), when inspiration chooses to pop back into my mind.

Please check out my other stories!

(if you don't mind a little advertising... ;))

XX/XY: The Story of Cesario if you like AH and/or Hana Kimi

Seraphim, if you like AU Twilight/Fantasy-Scifi themes

Charcoal: A One-shot if you like AH/JasperXBella pairings.

Orange if you like AH and a significant age difference between Edward (older) and Bella (younger)

 

 


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Laurent, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No Word count: 58371
[Report This] Published: September 02, 2008 Updated: March 27, 2009


Reviewer: diamondtopaz Signed
Date: November 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: 12: Aftertaste

 

OMG! You have to update soon!

I am hoping that some vampire did something or whatever to control or blackmail Bella into saying that to Edward...but I am hoping more for the controlling, since Bella isn't a good liar



Author's Response:

I'll try! 

I'll reveal what happened in the next or next few chapters (:

Thanks for reading!

 
Desperate by Angeliss Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 55]
Summary:

Rosalie's actions in Breaking Dawn are considered atrocious by some. But how would they react if they truly understood her motives? This is Rosalie's chance to tell her story. Warning: while the first two chapters can stand on their own, without spoilers, the rest of the fic will have major Breaking Dawn Spoilers.

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Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Nessie, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 26002
[Report This] Published: September 08, 2008 Updated: May 19, 2009


Reviewer: diamondtopaz Signed
Date: November 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

 

I am loving this! I can really imagine this as what was happening. I don't like people to portray Rosalie as a really evil person.

 This makes her seem more real, and more feeling. Please update soon! I am anticipating angst, but hopefully happiness afterwards!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  Rosalie isn't evil, and I don't like it when she's written like that, either.  And you definitely pegged this!  Lots of angst, leading on to happiness.

 
Summary:

A masquerade ball, an amazing dance, and a heart pounding moment. Cinderbella meets her Prince Charming but where in the fairy tale did it say he wasn't single?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: No Word count: 31279
[Report This] Published: September 10, 2008 Updated: February 04, 2009


Reviewer: diamondtopaz Signed
Date: November 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: Horror Tale

 

I love your story so much! I also really like how Tanya is not as evil as other people seem to always depict her as.

I have an idea/ suggestion sort of thing.

Since I really don't want you to kill off Tanya or something, why don't you send her somewhere far away and get her lost?

Edward and Bella can get together

Then, Tanya can return but she has a new man in tow, the one that saved her while she was lost. She blesses Edward and Bella's relationship.

Yay!

But it's just what I like...you can just totally ignore this review.

anyway, please update soon!

 
Reviewer: diamondtopaz Signed
Date: November 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: Choice

 

I am honestly hoping that its neither "now" nor "never." I really don't want Bella to ruin the wedding...anyone but her! Maybe some sort of emergency happens, or Tanya or Alice or somebody else (maybe even Edward) calls the wedding off, but I'm begging that you don't make Bella to be the one.

 
Summary:

Full Summary: "Forever is not a word... rather a place where two lovers go when true love takes them there."- Unknown. It has often been said that one never forgets their first love. What happens when the memory of that love haunts you? Bella and Edward have spent years apart, each living a semi-contented life. When fate unexpectedly brings them together once more can they find a way to heal the wound's they've inflicted on each other and find a way to be happy again?

 

AU/AH Story.

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Thanks to the incredible MrsC for the faboulous banner!! 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 67563
[Report This] Published: September 10, 2008 Updated: July 09, 2009


Reviewer: diamondtopaz Signed
Date: July 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

This remains one of my favorite stories on the website! Your writing is fantastic, and you undeniably have a talent to draw in readers and spin a great plot. Maybe you can write a novel, like Bella!

Please update soon!



Author's Response:

wow *blushes furiously* thank you so  much!! I'm just happy you guys are still with me, I love writing, I just have to find a balance between this and RL..

Next chapter is coming soon!! :D

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Summary:

Bella is a witness in peril. Emmett Cullen is the deputy assigned to protect her. When the witness protection program proves unsafe, Emmett has Bella pose as his brother Edward's fiancée. ExB. AU/AH.

 

 

Hiding in Plain Sight

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 138506
[Report This] Published: September 15, 2008 Updated: June 14, 2012


Reviewer: diamondtopaz Signed
Date: June 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: June 7 - June 13, 2008

The ending was lovely! But anyway, of course your faithful readers are still here! This is still one of my absolute favorite stories on here!

Please update this soon!

P.S. I'll have to look into the smut monday with your writing!

 
Reviewer: diamondtopaz Signed
Date: July 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: June 14 - June 20, 2008

This remains one of my favorites on this site (if not my very favorite) and I still think your writing is awesome! It's just so amazing I want to cry for not being able to spin these tales like you can!

Please update soon!

 
Reviewer: diamondtopaz Signed
Date: January 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: June 20 - June 24, 2008

Fabulous work!

Thanks for the update- I was starting to think that you gave up on this story. :]

I'm a little put off because "Bella" is probably more comfortable with "Marie." I wonder what she'll call herself at the end of the story?

Anyway, excellent writing. I enjoyed it very much.

Please update soon!

 
Reviewer: diamondtopaz Signed
Date: January 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: August 1 - September 4, 2008

Suddenly can't wait for the next Sunday even though I'm en joying this weekend tremendously.

Keep up the fantastic work and writing!

Please update soon!

 
Reviewer: diamondtopaz Signed
Date: January 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: September 4 - December 13, 2008

Thanks for the awesome, quick update! I really enjoyed the chapter, although I think of it as almost filler, compared to the other chapters.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Keep up the great work!

Please update soon!

 
Reviewer: diamondtopaz Signed
Date: February 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: September 4 - December 23, 2008

Marie sounds so wrong to me, but I'm sure that I'll get over it.

Keep up the awesome work!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Please update soon!

 
Hindsight by elizabeth18 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 481]
Summary:

When Bella's roommate Alice tells her that her brother Edward is coming to stay with them she is not exactly thrilled.  In fact, she wants nothing to do with him.  Can Edward change her mind?  Or is the past too powerful?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 52590
[Report This] Published: September 21, 2008 Updated: July 12, 2009


Reviewer: diamondtopaz Signed
Date: July 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Wow! A twenty year break between chapters! I love how there was a Edward-Elle moment in there!

Amazing writing, as usual.

 
Gifted by nofangsallowed Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 257]
Summary:

The Armando Voltarino School for the Gifted seems almost too good to be true.  All students receive full tuition, housing and meals free of charge.  Students are also allowed to drive a myriad of school cars and are given a limittless credit card.  This seems like every kid's dream come true--or is it really a nightmare?

Follow six students as they unravel the mysteries behind the school and discover a plot that could affect all mankind.


Categories: AU Characters: Alec, Alice, Angela, Aro, Bella, Bree, Caius, Carlisle, Carmen, Corin, Demetri, Edward, Eleazar, Emmett, Eric, Esme, Felix, Gianna, Heidi, Irina, Jacob, James, Jane, Jasper, Jessica, Kate, Lauren, Laurent, Marcus, Mike, Rosalie, Santiago, Tanya, Tyler, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No Word count: 42072
[Report This] Published: September 28, 2008 Updated: February 06, 2009


Reviewer: diamondtopaz Signed
Date: January 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Research

 

Why do i have a feeling that this is going to be the part where she almost gets raped in Twilight?

But I can be worng...It's just the part where Edwrad said he couldn't find her easily without hearing her thoughts that reminded me of it.

Great job! Please update soon!



Author's Response:

Nope.  We won't see James for a while--we will see him again, however.  Thanks for reading.

 
Blue Moon by Porcelain Mortal Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 600]
Summary:

Edward finally gives in to his desire to "check up" on Bella after he left. He vowed only to watch her from a distance, but how can he resist the force of the love that brought him back in the first place? When Bella's life is in danger again, will Edward be able to save her one last time?

This is a story that's been bouncing around in my head so much it finally demanded to be written. Edward's POV.

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Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 51875
[Report This] Published: September 29, 2008 Updated: March 22, 2012


Reviewer: diamondtopaz Signed
Date: November 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: 8. - Running Away

 

Please update soon!

I am really liking how the plot is taking Edward! I am curious how you are planning on getting them together... and when they do, I'm hoping it'll be emotional and difficult (for some strange reason...)

 



Author's Response: Haha! I am all about the turbulent emotion, so have no fear. The reunion will not be easy on either of them. ;o)

 




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