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Penname: steflynno [Contact]
Real name: Stephanie
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Ethan Church by Dryler Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 503]
Summary:

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*Banner by time_lights over at Livejournal*

After receiving an invitation to write the biography of the severely reclusive author Ethan Church, Bella develops a reluctant obsession with his novels and by extension him. When she accepts his offer, the old, dying man she's presented with and the young, too perfect man she comes across on the nearly empty estate have her convinced she's missing some very important parts of the story.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 36732
[Report This] Published: May 26, 2009 Updated: May 13, 2010


Reviewer: steflynno Signed
Date: September 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Obsession

Wonderful chapter. this story keeps getting better and better.



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

 
Reviewer: steflynno Signed
Date: October 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Revelation

great chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks

 
Rabbit Hole by profmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 329]
Summary:

Summary: Edward leaves Bella in Forks before revealing that he and his family are vampires.  Bella’s curiosity gets the best of her, and she spends years researching her theories and suspicions about Edward and his kind, drawing attention from unwanted and dangerous sources.  Can Edward find a way to save Bella from the Rabbit Hole she’s fallen into?  Set at the beginning of Twilight and then alternate universe. Like New Moon, he leaves to protect her. Unlike NM, he doesn't leave her to her own devices. AU

 


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: No Word count: 107008
[Report This] Published: May 28, 2009 Updated: December 20, 2009


Reviewer: steflynno Signed
Date: July 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Pieces and Pawns

Beautifully written. Can't wait to finish the rest, and start on your other stories. The words flow like velvet. Also I love stories from EPOV.

 
daybreak by SirenSongx Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 1100]
Summary:

It's basically a retelling of Twilight, with a few twists. Edward isn't the only one who can hear thoughts. Bella can also, but like Edward there is that one exception...him. What happens when she learns their secret? And what happens when the Cullen's find out that she already knows? Written from Bellla's point of view.

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Set during early 2006.


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Laurent, Mike, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: The Daybreak Saga
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 89577
[Report This] Published: May 28, 2009 Updated: October 15, 2009


Reviewer: steflynno Signed
Date: July 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: 13: Reality

Thanks for another wonderful chapter. Only Edward would get jealous over dream Edward. He's definately a 17 year old boy.

 
Reviewer: steflynno Signed
Date: July 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: 7: Three

love this story. great job!!!!!!!!!!!

 
Reviewer: steflynno Signed
Date: July 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: 8: Killer

I just love this story. And the line with Edward was wondering who was the predator and who was the prey, would make me swoon too. I never read that in another story. Very original. I can't wait for another week. Keep up the great job.

 
Reviewer: steflynno Signed
Date: July 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: 9: Trust

Another great chapter. That was a very quick update. I think you should stick with baseball. You've followed the events in "Twilight", I think you should continue. Whatever you decide though I know it'll be great.

 
Reviewer: steflynno Signed
Date: July 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: 10: Proof

Another wonderful chapter. Thanks for the quick update.

 
Captive by Erotillectual Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 344]
Summary:

 

As the time for Bella to join the Cullen family as a vampire draws near, Edward becomes convinced that allowing her to be changed would be a mistake. Out of options, he resorts to drastic measures to keep Bella human, and takes them both on a journey of discovery across five states, ultimately forcing Carlisle and the rest of the family to intervene. Alice, in the meanwhile, seems to have her own agenda concerning Edward and Bella.

Made it to the final round in the Summer 2009 Indie TwiFic Award in five categories. No cigar, however.


Categories: Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 65947
[Report This] Published: May 29, 2009 Updated: August 05, 2009


Reviewer: steflynno Signed
Date: July 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Thank you, thank you, thank you. I think its awesome that Bella killed Victoria. As much grief that girl put her through, its only fair that Bella was the one to tear her apart.

 
Reviewer: steflynno Signed
Date: July 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I completely agree with Bella having it way to easy. I read one story on here where she actually killed some humans, and it was completely believable. Come on she's a newborn vampire. Edward killed humans for 10 years!!! All of them except for Rosalie and Carlisle have slipped. Even Esme, the sweet mother, so why not Bella? Can't wait for the sequel.

 
Reviewer: steflynno Signed
Date: June 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I'm glad that Edward came to his senses.

 
Reviewer: steflynno Signed
Date: July 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Oh its getting good. Especially since Edward isn't allow to visit with Bella. Serves him right.

 
Reviewer: steflynno Signed
Date: July 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Oh this is getting good. I was wondering how you were going to bring Victoria is this. And does Alice's sketchy vision have to do with Bella's talent when she is changed? Can't wait to find out.

 
Reviewer: steflynno Signed
Date: July 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Oh know you could not leave it there. Did Edward die?

 
Reviewer: steflynno Signed
Date: August 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

This was a wonderful story, and I'm going to fanfiction.net to read the sequel now.

 
Force of Impact by asheltate24 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 212]
Summary:

 Bella Swan has to leave her home, so goes to the only place she can think of where she can be accepted and live as she is; Forks. But she didn't expect to see others like herself there... with pale skin and golden eyes.

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Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 8772
[Report This] Published: June 02, 2009 Updated: September 26, 2009


Reviewer: steflynno Signed
Date: June 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh I've been waiting for someone to write a story like this. Please update soon. Can't wait for the next chapter.

 
Reviewer: steflynno Signed
Date: June 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh my goodness. What a cliffhanger? Please do an EPOV. I just love his side of stories. Great chapter. I'm glad your excited about writing this story, because I'm excited about reading it.

 
Reviewer: steflynno Signed
Date: July 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I've been waiting for this update. I can't wait to see how the Cullens react to her. Keep the story coming. Very interesting.

 
Reviewer: steflynno Signed
Date: July 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh i can't wait for her to attend school, and her discovery by all the Cullens. Enjoy your vacation.

 
Reviewer: steflynno Signed
Date: September 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 (Ninapolitan)

a wonderful chapter. i'm so glad you updated. i was getting worried that you wouldn't finish the story. great story.

 
Summary:

Edward Cullen is a hot, bad, gangsta fella who is a new kid in the Chicago underworld. But refusing to pay his respects to the big, ruling Godfather, his arrival is not welcomed. Bella is said Godfather’s estranged daughter who fled his father’s world in an attempt at a normal life.

Both men keep clashing and bumping heads, Edward’s power grows rapidly, men are tired of the old regime, and so a sort of gangster war ensues. Bella is caught in the mayhem when she becomes a prisoner in the hands of her father’s most hated enemy and rival. With Bella as a prisioner, Edward knows her father will have no choice but to do as he is told.

But does Edward have other motives to capture Bella?

**There is rape involved in one of the later chapters. If that topic offends you, please do not read** 

 

Thanks to the awesome Caius for my banner! I absolutely love it!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 61861
[Report This] Published: June 06, 2009 Updated: July 29, 2014


Reviewer: steflynno Signed
Date: July 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8- Jealousy

I found this story today, and it is absolutely wonderful. Bella throwing a fit was priceless, but definately worth it. Edward needs to be murdered. For the fact that Bella was attempting to make the best out of her situation, and he did something like that. Please update soon!!!!



Author's Response:

I'll try, I promise! I'm so glad you found this story and that you are liking it, it's a wonderful reward! :)

 
Reviewer: steflynno Signed
Date: July 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Imprisonment

Have you thought about doing EPOV any? I would love to know what he is thinking.



Author's Response:

So many people ask me for one! I never even considered it, to be honest, but I might do an epilogue in his pov.

Thanks for reading :)

 
Reviewer: steflynno Signed
Date: July 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9- Surrender

Oh my goodness. What a twist, but a good twist. Bella is quite intelligent in this story. The power of a woman. The fact that she was able to make Edward become submissive to her spoke volumes. Trust me I glad the way you took the story. I was afraid that he would try to harm her in a physical way, so I was not dissapointed with the twist. Keep writing.



Author's Response:

Yeeeey, I'm happy you liked! I know, so many people said they were terrified he would get violent with her once again. No, I'd never do that to you guys, that would be beyond horrible. Thanks for reading, I'm so glad you are liking the story :)

 
Reviewer: steflynno Signed
Date: July 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10- Regret

great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

 
Reviewer: steflynno Signed
Date: August 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12- Trust

What kind of ending is that. AHHHHH!!!! Update soon. Please. The suspense is killing me.



Author's Response:

Next chapter is up! Although there are still so many unanswered questions you might still hate me... ;)

 




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