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Penname: steflynno [ Contact]
Real name: Stephanie
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Member Since: May 12, 2009
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Summary: What if Edward wasn't single when he met Bella? Will he stay with his mate out of loyalty and obligation or will he take a chance and pursue true love? AU for the first book.
I had always viewed my existence since changing into a vampire as being like a starry night; mostly darkness but with a few scattered bright spots. I had thus far only been able to escape the tedium and misery of this life with a modicum of sanity due to the rare occasions that I was able to make my mate happy.
That was before. Before the Gods of Fate had intervened and made a mockery of my existence, chewing it up and spitting out the pieces. Before Bella Swan had moved to town and I proved unable just to leave her alone. Before my relationship with my mate violently combusted in an act of sadistic pleasure. Now, the storm clouds had rolled in and blocked out all the stars, and my life was a grey, depressing mess.
Rated for some swearing and lemons later on.
Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: No
Word count: 81934
[Report This] Published: April 13, 2009 Updated: July 28, 2009
Reviewer: steflynno Signed
Date: May 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Love, love, and love some more. Can't wait for more updates.
Reviewer: steflynno Signed
Date: May 21, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Once again another wonderful chapter. Keep them coming, you truly have a wonderful gift.
Reviewer: steflynno Signed
Date: May 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Oh another wonderful chapter. Truly an original. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: steflynno Signed
Date: May 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Great chapter. Can't wait for another one.
Reviewer: steflynno Signed
Date: May 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Oh I just love Emmett. Great chapter!!!
Reviewer: steflynno Signed
Date: June 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Oh I hope Edward dumps Rosalie's ass. She definately deserves it. Great chapter!!!
Reviewer: steflynno Signed
Date: June 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
I just love this story. You're a wonderful writer.
Reviewer: steflynno Signed
Date: June 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Finally they broke up. They are just not right for one another. Now its time to get to the good stuff. Please don't make Bella weak. I like a feisty Bella.
Reviewer: steflynno Signed
Date: June 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
I thought it was a good chapter. Keep the story coming. It is wonderful.
Reviewer: steflynno Signed
Date: June 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
I just love this story, and I'm already laughing at the teaser for the next chapter. I love Emmett.
Reviewer: steflynno Signed
Date: June 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Hilarious chapter. I laughed so hard. Can't wait for an update.
Reviewer: steflynno Signed
Date: June 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
Another wonderful chapter. This is one of my FAVORITE stories. Keep updating.
Reviewer: steflynno Signed
Date: June 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
Another excellent chapter. Thank you so much for giving insights to the next chapter. Its get me even more excited. That was a surprise that Bella stopped the romance first. Didn't expect to see that.
Reviewer: steflynno Signed
Date: June 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
I thought the way you wrote Bella's interaction with the Cullens were perfect. It got to the point. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: steflynno Signed
Date: June 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
No I don't think the 3rd bear was an overkill. That is how the earlier Emmett McCarty died, and I think fate brought this Emmett in place of the earlier one, so it just makes since for him to die from a bear. I'm glad that Edward saved him this time. Is Bella going to become a vampire in this story?
Reviewer: steflynno Signed
Date: June 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
Thankyou, Thankyou, for not letting Edward leave Bella. That would be so messed up.
Reviewer: steflynno Signed
Date: July 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
I'm glad you brought the werewolves in this story. I'm already getting worked up over the teaser for the next chapter. Great work!!!!
Reviewer: steflynno Signed
Date: July 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
Another great chapter, and I'm so glad that Edward is willing to lose control. Can't wait for an update. Thank you for the quick updates. You're great.
Reviewer: steflynno Signed
Date: July 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
Great chapter. And how could Edward not change Bella? Especially since Emmett has been changed, so unfair.
Reviewer: steflynno Signed
Date: July 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
What a twist with Charlie? Thanks for letting Edward compromise with Bella about being turned. Hopefully Bella will runaway instead of going to her mother's house.
Reviewer: steflynno Signed
Date: July 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
Oh that was definately a suprise that Bella went to Alaska. Classic. I love this independent Bella. Great chapter.
Reviewer: steflynno Signed
Date: July 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
This Bella definately has balls. And the part about her putting him in his place about his 17 year old mind was priceless. Can't wait for the next update. The teaser is great.
Reviewer: steflynno Signed
Date: July 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
Another fantastic chapter. I truly love your Edward.
Summary: "Do you have any idea how close I came to crossing the line today?" How close was it? What went through Edward's mind when Bella went to La Push and how does he come to terms with her visits? An emotional Eclipse missing moment from Edward's POV!
Categories: Eclipse Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Jasper
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes
Word count: 6173
[Report This] Published: April 17, 2009 Updated: June 01, 2009
Reviewer: steflynno Signed
Date: May 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Very good EPOV.
Summary: What if someone was watching when Edward left? What if they found sympathy for Bella to replace thier anger? This story explores that possibility and throws in the fact that Bella blocks out her year in Forks completely from her memory too.
The rating is for future chapters, in case you were wondering.
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes
Word count: 25549
[Report This] Published: April 18, 2009 Updated: July 29, 2009
Reviewer: steflynno Signed
Date: May 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Vanity Flaunted
Wonderful story. Can't wait for Edward to come along. Please make him sweat it a little.
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