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Summary:

Bella and Edward settle happily into married life at Dartmouth but Bella’s dreams of a mysterious child persist, drawing them into a centuries old deception with devastating consequences.

A Breaking Dawn AU.


Categories: Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Irina, Jacob, Jasper, Kate, Other Character, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No Word count: 75617
[Report This] Published: September 13, 2008 Updated: May 02, 2009


Reviewer: smisa Signed
Date: February 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19: Duel

love it!  i love a good fight scene!  can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it! Oh, and there will be definitely be more fighting before this story is over... ;)

 
Reviewer: smisa Signed
Date: March 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20: Gabriel

wow!  interesting story of gabriel.  very interesting.



Author's Response:

Thank you, interesting is what I was aiming for...interesting, yet halfway believable within the world Stephenie gave us to play in :)

 
Reviewer: smisa Signed
Date: March 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21 - In-Flight

c'mon!  i was really looking forward to the comments and the teasing!  their better be some in the next chapter!!  despite that fact it was very good.  OH!  wonder what jacob thought!



Author's Response:

Hehe, don't worry you'll get to read about everyone's reactions next chapter, promise ;)

Thanks, and you may be surprised how Jacob reacts...

 
Reviewer: smisa Signed
Date: April 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22: Contact

loved the fun making!  well done.  can't wait for the excitement.



Author's Response:

Thank you, the action is definitely coming soon!

 
Reviewer: smisa Signed
Date: May 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23: Search and Rescue

ok, you got me.  what's up?  this is getting exciting though.  please update soon.

 
Summary:

*An explanation for my recent behavior*

So... it's been a while.  I'M SO SORRY!  I started a new AU-H fic called Primary Colors and it has taken over my fic-writing life.  I know you're never supposed to do that.  It's not cool to start a new story when you already have one going, it's not fair and people hate it.  I'm sorry that I have no self-control, I'm sorry I left you hanging.

The good news is that I AM going to finish this story.  I'm not giving it up.  I have it mapped out in my head and it's going to happen.  I just can't seem to focus on it and my writing really, really, really, sucks when I try to force it.  Primary Colors is just pouring out right now, so I'm taking advantage of that.  I really am sorry.  I've been consumed with guilt over this.  I hope you won't hate me, and I hope you'll still be here when I come back.  If you delete this fic from your favorites list right now I'll completely understand.  Please accept this apology.  Thank you so much for reading, have an excellent twilight. :)

It's page 449 of New Moon.   Bella is running across the plaza in Italy.  She has to get to Edward before the clock chimes.  Before the Volturi do.  His life depends on it. 

fanficbanner2.jpg picture by Jaxidy

This time Bella stumbles and doesn't get there in time.  What will happen to Edward now?  Will Alice make it out of Volterra and keep her promise to Jasper?  Will Bella be able to survive, thinking she's failed... alone in Volterra?

Thanks to MrsC for the banner!


Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No Word count: 38464
[Report This] Published: September 16, 2008 Updated: May 10, 2009


Reviewer: smisa Signed
Date: November 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

please keep going!

 
Reviewer: smisa Signed
Date: December 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

nice turn.  i love this story.

 
Reviewer: smisa Signed
Date: January 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

i know exactly where you are coming from with your son.  i have 2 boys of my own who are both about to turn 4 and 1.  both of them are already obsessed with computers, laptop or desktop.  can't so anything without one or both getting into it. 

all that is to say, take your time.  and i love your story.  i can't wait for the next chapter.

 
Reviewer: smisa Signed
Date: March 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

aahh!  hope it comes quickly!

 
Reviewer: smisa Signed
Date: April 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

that was unexpected indeed!  great twist.  can't wait to see how this unravels.

 
Reviewer: smisa Signed
Date: May 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

WOW!!  can't wait for more!

 
Summary:

Bella works for the Volturi as chief interrogator.  She passes her nights toying with the souls of the lost, hearing their confessions before wiping them away.  At night she toys with the heart of a fellow member of the elite Guard.

 

But soon she will meet a vampire that will change her life forever.  Is she willing to accept these feelings? Can finding love cause Bella to leave behind the only world she'd ever known, or will some things never change? 

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Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Carlisle, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Heidi, Jane, Jasper, Marcus, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 66195
[Report This] Published: September 26, 2008 Updated: January 28, 2009


Reviewer: smisa Signed
Date: December 24, 2008 Title: Changing Sides

fabulous!!  i love it!

 
Reviewer: smisa Signed
Date: January 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: The Wives

i love your story.  it's good to have one so action packed.  i hate to admit i like a little violence here and there.  your story has been fun to read.  i really look forward to your updates.  i can't wait for the next one.

 
Summary:

Alice has a vision that leaves Edward stunned. Will he get what he has secretly wanted or will he think with his head and not his heart? And what happens when Bella finds out and becomes determined to have this particular vision become a reality?    


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Leah, Mike, Renee, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 35981
[Report This] Published: September 29, 2008 Updated: November 03, 2009


Reviewer: smisa Signed
Date: October 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Turning Heads

i'm a little late getting to read your story, but i love it so far.  please update again soon.  can't wait!

 
Reviewer: smisa Signed
Date: October 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Peek-a-boo

HOT, HOT, HOT... DAMNIT CHARLIE!!!  love it. 

 
Reviewer: smisa Signed
Date: November 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Masen House

excellent chapter!!  i love that he took her to a place from his past.  very well done.  i love this story.

 
Reviewer: smisa Signed
Date: December 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: Boundaries? What Boundaries?

ok, you are just mean.  i mean, i am glad she decided to confess, but what timing.  c'mon!! 

 
Reviewer: smisa Signed
Date: November 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Hunger

glad you're back!

 
Summary:

She was sought after for her scent, but soon revealed to be more than just a monster's drug. It was her destiny to embrace destruction, and nothing could have prepared Bella for what lay ahead in the dark chambers and corridors of Volterra Castle. As far as she was concerned, her life ended the day she stepped foot in that cursed city. She didn't count on Edward Cullen.

With a soul as kind and pure as Bella's, how could anything evil come from her? Edward and Carlisle are willing to take the risk in rescuing this broken, beautiful girl, but the challenges are more than any of them could have imagined.

Carlisle on left, Aro in middle, Edward and Bella on right with angelic glow. Title in the middle with Aro.


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Carlisle, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Gianna, Heidi, Jane, Jasper, Marcus, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: The Destiny Series
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 47068
[Report This] Published: September 29, 2008 Updated: December 03, 2008


Reviewer: smisa Signed
Date: October 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: Everything Changes

absolutely LOVE your story.  please don't keep us waiting long.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. After the day that I've had, I really needed a great review. I'll try to get the next one up asap, but tis day from hell kind of put a kink in my writing. I'm back to it though and I doubt no later than monday. I hope it's worth the wait.

 
Reviewer: smisa Signed
Date: October 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 11: Heaven Awaits

i love what you did with the climax of those 2 chapters.  when reading BD before getting to end, i had pictured bella reacting to the threat of all she holds dear with a force of shear power, hopefully taking out the volturi in the process.  so to see that type of scene played out here was very gratifying for me (even if we aren't sure what exactly happened yet).  don't get me wrong, i enjoyed BD very much, but my personality craves a little bloodlust here and there.  thank you for giving bella such a power.  i LOVE it!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I loved BD too, but I always loved the idea of Bella being something more. Hey, maybe SM will decide to write a fifth book! we can only dream haha. I hope the end will be satisfying for you. I can't see it going any other way. Wow, only a few more chapters left!

 
Reviewer: smisa Signed
Date: October 31, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: Peace, Love, and Understanding

i am really enjoying your story.  i always get excited everytime i see an update.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! It means a lot to me to hear...well see you say that, haha.

 
Reviewer: smisa Signed
Date: November 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 15: Will to Fight

that was not very nice.  i really love your story though.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! It wasn't very nice, but I'm hoping that the next chapter will make up for it :-)

 
Reviewer: smisa Signed
Date: November 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 16: Saying Goodbye, part 1

love it!!  i especially love how you managed the separation without killing anyone off (anyone important anyway).  please don't keep us waiting long!!

Author's Response: I'll try not too. I pretty much know exactly what I'm going to write so it shouldn't be long. Thank you so much for the awesome review! It means a lot that you liked it, really. Thank you!

 
L'Heure Bleue by stress Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 96]
Summary:

After that fateful spring break, Bella never really got over James's attack.  She just pretended she did, burying her fears until even she's convinced she's okay.  Will a new arrival in Forks help her face the truth -- that's she's not only a danger magnet, but a vampire magnet, too?

Set Post-Twilight, Pre-New Moon.

L'Heure Bleue


Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Mike, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 68624
[Report This] Published: October 02, 2008 Updated: June 13, 2009


Reviewer: smisa Signed
Date: March 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Intentions

this is getting interesting.

 
Reviewer: smisa Signed
Date: April 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Blame

uh oh!  can't wait for more.

 




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