I just read this story and I am intrigued by it.  I am eager to read how it is going to develop!   Great job!

I love it!!!

Great chapter.  They are all so emotionallly invested in eachother. 

Holy crap.  This is excellent.  I am lready addicted to this story.  My heart was actually pounding in my chest when I read this.  You ARE going to continue this, right???  Oh my God, for all that is good in the world, you MUST continue this. 

I know Bella and Edward belong together, but I don't think she's going to be jumping back into his arms anytime soon.  This is a little much to swallow.  I agree with her that it wouldn't have been a big deal had she known all of this from the start- and I understand his perspective, but still, it feels like a huge betrayal and I am just reading it!  I hope Bella DOES have a few reservations about him for awhile....  I can't wait to read more.  Please, please, PLEASE update soon.  This has the makings of an epic storyline.  I love it!!!

The last line is hysterical!  I love it!!!  This story has me so very captivated.  Poor Edward.  He was so afraid he was going to lose her.  Lucy was really something.  She used Edward.  I'm thrilled that he is going to hold Bella tonight.  They are working through this together, but they still have some issues to work out.  I mean, Lucy's presence still lingers in the midst of their sexual relationship.  They should be working on desensitizing Edward to Bella physically, but its a little bit more complicated now... I can't wait to read more!  This story is written so well and its so very compelling.  Great job!!!!

Oh this was... I actually can't think of an adjective that does it justice!!!  I bow down to you!  First, the dream in the car- so well done.  I have been thinking the same thoughts, myself, as if I were Bella and Edward was mine.  How do you get her out of your head?  How do you NOT think of Lucy when you are being intimate with Edward.  His reaction was SO in character.  His pain, his guilt, all of it.  The way he pulled over and needed to pace in front of the car.  It was so powerful.  I loved his Everest comparision.  I love how he reminded Bella of that towards the end of the chapter when she was comfronted with the phot of Edward and Lucy together.  That is a visual that would be difficult to rid her mind of, certainly.  I am so eager to read more.  I am thinking about this story ALL OF THE TIME!!!  I want to know how Bella and Edward are going to be able to make love on their wedding night without Lucy's presence being there.  Don't they need to work on his self control in the mean time?  I mean, the first time he touched her, he almost killed her... don't they need to desensitize him?  How can they build up to that when all of these lingering fears are still swarming about them.  I think Edward did a great job of helping Bella with these fear in this chapter and they are making strides towards their goal.  Edward has his own fears as well.  I know he worries that Bella will never feel the same level of oneness with him as she once did.  He feels like he's forever lost a part of her...  the same way she feels like she's forever lost a part of him...  but they way they are handling this together, the new openness they have between them is so monumentally powerful.  I am so very much enjoying this story.  So Very Much.  I can't wait to read more.  I do hope you are planning on taking this through their wedding and their honeymoon!  I want to know it all!!!  Great, great job!!!!!!!!!!!!

I truly love this story.  It is one of my all time favorites.  You write the characters so very compelling!  It is such an intense storyline and I can see them react exactly as you have described.  I thought the Snoopy t-shirt was brilliant.  I loved his comment. "Just for us".  I thought that it was a tender intimate moment they shared.  They are growing so much as a couple.  Edward took a huge step when he pulled Bella flush against him.  Your descriptions are highly erotic.  You do an excellent job with it!   I am excited to read how their relationship continues to grow.  Will we see more of teh boundary pushing?  I am addicted to your version on things.  I want it all.  I beg of you to give us the honeymoon night.

Would you consider a sequel?  In my mind I have been going through scenarios of how your storyline would affect the conversations between Edward and Bella during her pregnancy.  It definitely would create some tension- need for Bella to give him a child, guilt for Edward.  Just a request. 

If not, I DO hope you continue to write Edward/Bella stories.  You have a gift!  I love your writing style.  I am so sad to see this story ending, I love it so very much.  It is excellent!!

Holy crap!  Ummm.... I am still in a state of shock.  You have completely shaken me to my core with this!!!  

I thoroughly enjoyed the rest of the Chicago trip.  Your writing is SO erotic, you descriptions, your dialogue... it is all so very mesmerizing.  You simply write them so very well. 

The "Edward beaming" was pure bliss to read.

The ending is shocking.  Simply shocking.  God, I love this story.  So.  Very.  Much.  I can't wait to read what happens next!!!

This was such a beautiful chapter.  I want to bow down to you for invoking that level of emotion, that intimacy, between them.  Their newfound openness is refreshing.  I loved how Edward opened up to her and spoke honestly about his hunting.  I adore the changes this story has brought forth in him.  It's like he has finally found peace within himself.  He's truly not alone anymore.  I want THIS to be what really happened in the books, and to me, I think I will always envision this as part of their "true" history.  You have provided us with such a romantic insight into his persona.  You've given us such a heartfelt storyline what has helped me to really understand Edward, his insecurities, and the true importance of Bella in his life.  Their relationship has made such huge strides throughout this experience and I feel that they are now able to face anything together, as one. 

Oh, this was so very beautiful.  He is SO happy.  I feel so lucky to have been able to share this journey with them.  I beg of you not to stop... please take us through their wedding, their honeymoon, her pregnancy ... you write them so well, I am simply intoxicated by it.  I don't want this to end.  Their chemistry, their love, is so magical.  It is all encompassing.  Please, more.  Please.

Oh my Goodness, this was so very precious.  I love the emotion you have captured with all of these scenes.  It is especially nice to enjoy their happy times together after experiencing all of their angst.  I love this story so very much.  THe scene on the kitchen floor is so endearing.  I can't wait to read more!

Wow.  Excellent chapter.  I love the intimacy between Bella and Edward.  Their relationship is so very powerful  I can feel the bond between them through your writing.  Your characterizations are so THEM!  Him bringing her the peanut butter and overreacting and bursting through the door on instinct to protect Bella at the shower.  Brilliantly done.  I love this story so very much. 

Oh My,  this chapter was beautiful from start to finish!  My heart swelled during the conversation between them about Lucy.  I had those same thoughts!  The flow of the conversation was so natural, but it was so charged with emotions.  I felt what each of them was feeling, the intensity, the fear, the hurt.  It was written so passionately.  It was excellent. 

The birth was brilliantly done!  I LOVE that Bella's water broke in the "special occasion" car!  So, is her birthday the annivesary of their meadow trip?  THat was a clever idea.  I have been captivated by this story from the very first chapter.  I do hope you continue it, or consider a sequel.   I so would love to read about them as parents.  I am enjoying this so very much.  Congratulations.  This is simply breathtakingly good!