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Penname: Dulcinea21bella [ Contact]
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Summary: Bella, has spent her life hating and loving the arrogant Edward Cullen. When she returns to Forks after ten years, will she fall for Dr Black, or will Edward see that he wants her to have a change of heart?
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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes
Word count: 201161
[Report This] Published: January 29, 2009 Updated: February 10, 2010
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28(s)
Wow. This was a happy place to stop, thank goodness, but I am desperate to read more! I have been so spoiled the last few days being able to read all of these chapters together. I feel so connected to them. This sory is epic in nature and I can't wait to continue on this journey! I love it!!! Author's Response: Thank you, thank you. I'm doing the happy dance. SOmetimes it's hard to get that someone can like your story as much as you like others. I am working on the next chapter. I'll try not to make you wait too long. Thanks for all of your reviews, they've been funt o read these last couple of days.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 31, 2009
Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
I am sad this is coming to an end too! I love it. I am proud of Edward for putting it all on the line and telling Bella that he is ready to start their Happily Ever After together. I hope she doesn't freak out, she is ready for it, too! Excellent update! Author's Response: Thanks, I am glad you likeit. I know there are only three more chapters and an epilogue. Edward is taking a big old step I hope Bella's ready. You'll find out next chapter. It will be up this week. Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 08, 2010
Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
I love this story. I thought their chemistry was HOT. I am proud of Edward for stopping them, it had to be difficult. They are so close to getting what they both want- eachother!!! I am so excited for Hawaii!!! Author's Response: Thanks I am glad you appreciate Edward stopping them. You are right they are so close, closer than everyone thinks ;) Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
Excellent chapter. I love how freaked out Edward got when Bella went under the water. He needs her so much. It was the perfect proposal for them. I am so excited for their wedding! Author's Response: Thank you. I am glad you liked it. Sometimes men need to think they lost something to really know how much they needit. I am glad you liked the proposal. Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: February 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33
This was a beautiful chapter. Some of the things Edward was saying to Bella on their wedding night made me swoon. You truly captured the depth of their love for one another. From decorating the tree to their wedding preparations to their wedding night, the tone was romantic, sensual, and heartfelt. It was a lovely change of heart for Bella to be ready to start a family with Edward. I do hope you are going to write an epilogue, maybe a few months down the line, with Bella pregnant, and/or the delivery, and/or after the baby has been born. I would love a glimpse into their married life! I have loved this story and will truly miss these characters! Author's Response: Thank you so much. What a lovely review. That was so sweet. I am glad you liked it and I could capture those emotions in you. The epilogue is with my betas so it shoulod be up soon. Thanks again for your wonderful review.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: March 31, 2010
Title: Chapter 34: Epilogue
I have thoroughly enjoyed this story and I am going to miss these characters dearly! Excellent ending!!! Author's Response: Thank you so much for leaving me a review. I am glad you enjoyed the story.
Summary: 
If you loved someone, how much would you be willing to sacrifice? Bella makes the most difficult decision of her life; now she has to live with the consequences. A Bella/Edward story.
Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes
Word count: 68203
[Report This] Published: February 02, 2009 Updated: November 24, 2009
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: February 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Carnival
Wow. This is very intriguing. I can't wait to read how it develops! Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: February 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Desolation/Desperation
Wow. This is intense. So, Edward won't remember anything??? Or will he have flashes and start to recollect her? I hope so. I want him to appreciate what she did for him. I can't wait to read more!!! Author's Response: Oh, we have such a long way to go, and I think some of what you would like to see will be realized, although maybe not in the way you're thinking. Thanks for reviewing; I'm glad you're enjoying the story!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: February 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Diligence
Wow. Very intense. My heart is breaking for her. I can't wait until she finds him!!!! Great storyline! Author's Response: Thanks again! It means a lot that you're following the story.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: February 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Lost
Ugh. The end of this chapter actually made me want to vomit. Please update soon- I cannot function in this dismal limbo.... I mean, they had an instant attraction, right? Soul mates and all!!! I need that to be true. I need it. Author's Response: Don't worry too much; I'm a romantic at heart! Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: February 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Found
I cannot tell you the relief that I felt when you wrote that she was his sister. I was actually a little sick to my stomach when I saw that you updated because I was so afraid of what I would find.. Ah, I could just hug you right now. This was excellent. I ADORE human Edward. I love how he was drawn to her immediately. I wonder if he will start to remember her? I love this story. I can't wait to read how it will develop- especially now that I don't have to vomit out of anxiety that they won't be together. What a wonderful premise. Fantastic job. I am eager for more!!! Author's Response: Thank you so much! You leave AWESOME reviews. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter, and please know that I adore Bella/Edward.
As for the vomiting...I'm a mom and a medical student, so I can handle it. :D
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: February 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Past
Poor Edward, he has suffered a great deal in his human existence. I am so happy that he found his Bella. I'm glad Bella realized that they belogn together, no matter what. When is he going to kiss her???? I loved the gentle way they held hands in her kitchen. Their romance is deep, soulful, all encompassing. I love how they lay side by side and read together. Its all so very romantic. And that he didn't want her to leave--- swoon. I am so addicted to this story. I can't wait to read more. You write them so compelling, so REAL. Its wonderful. Author's Response: Thank you so much! I have seen you reply more than once, and I appreciate it more than I can say. I really am trying to express that their love trascends everything, and it's exciting to see that the concept is being expressed as I'd hoped. Thank you again for such a wonderful review.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: March 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Forks
I so love this story. So very much. I love that Edward was all possessive and protective over Bella- it is SO him! I can't wait to read more!!! Author's Response: Thank you! It's not at all modern of me, but possessive and protective are two of the things I love most about Edward. Take those away, and what's left??? (I mean sure, other stuff, but still...)
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: November 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Story of a Life
I know I already reviewed this on FF but I just couldn't stop myself from reading it again. It is SO endearing. They made such sacrifices for eachother. WHat an amazing story. I thoroughly enjoyed this journey. THank you for sharing it with us!
Summary: 
Summer Light welcomes you into Bella Swan's happiest summer ever, the summer after Bella's junior year. During this rainy summer, Bella and Edward's relationship grows. Bella explores her feelings for Edward and considers her place in the mythical world she has come to know. Lose yourself in the happiness of Summer Light.
Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes
Word count: 53515
[Report This] Published: February 03, 2009 Updated: March 02, 2009
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: February 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Preface & 1. AFTER PROM
I really enjoyed reading this. I have always wondered how they spent that summer together, growing closer as a couple. I am looking forward to reading more!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: February 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: 2. AWAY
This is so light and fluffy. Its really refreshing to read about the happier times in their relationship. I am very much enjoying this. Great update!!!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: February 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: 3. GRADUATION
This is such a fun story to read. I am really enjoying reading about Edward and Bella just enjoying being together. You re doing a great job with Bella and her desires to become a vampire. I love it!!!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: February 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: 4. SIGNIFICANT
I ADORED the ending of this chapter. How very touching. Keeping you safe...
Great update. I love their playful interactions!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: February 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: 5. PLANS
Great update. I love the sexual tension that built between them during the movie. Poor kids. I mean, they are teenagers in love and want to be able to touch eachother. It must be so difficult to restrain themselves... I enjoy reading this!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: March 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: 7. SUMMER'S END & EPILOGUE
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story. It filled a void between Twilight and New Moon. I am sad its over! I hope you are going to continue to write! You characterize Edward and Bella so well. Have you ever thought of writing about the time between New Moon and Eclipse? Those few weeks of Bella learning to trust Edward again? Struggling with her abandonment issues and daling with Edward's guilt? Its not a topic that has been addressed a lot. I would love to read it. Anyway, I hope you choose to write something!!! This was a wonderful read. You did an excellent job!!! Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I may just tackle the New Moon/Eclipse idea next. I'm finishing up a short crossover story now.
I genuinely appreciate suggestions for stories that anyone wants to read!
Summary: I was not a big fan of the transformation of Bella, so here's another cute and short alternative to the one Stephanie Meyer gave us. It's involves the newly married couple and the Cullens in Alaska, and Bella prepping, going through, and shortly after the transformation.
Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No
Word count: 9719
[Report This] Published: February 03, 2009 Updated: March 11, 2010
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: February 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Playing and Forgetting
Good job. Very flirty and fun. This was fun to read!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: February 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Honesty and a Moose
Great update! Its funny, I just watched Queen of the Damned and yes, they really ARE sexy.... Great chapter!
Summary: ~From the author of In Pursuit of Normalcy and Missing Dawn~ 
What if, during the early stages of their relationship, Edward lost some of his carefully-maintained control with Bella one night? What if his urges were precipitated by a force mundanely human and unavoidable? This 3-part story is complete! This story is a part of Twilight After Dark: A Naughty Smut Anthology Series. Be sure & check out the other naughty stories in Twilight After Dark! 
Smokin' hot TAD banner & TM&TM banner by the fabulous, talented, amazing achelle131, author of Vanity and Patience!
Categories: Twilight, Eclipse, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Esme
Challenges: Series: Twilight After Dark: A Naughty Smut Anthology Series
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes
Word count: 20519
[Report This] Published: February 04, 2009 Updated: July 04, 2009
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: February 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: The Monster and the Man
Um, this was Hot. Great job! Author's Response: 'Hot' is definitely what I was going for! :) Thanks!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 21, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Reciprocation
I am thrilled that you are going to add a third installment to this story. I love it. It is so erotc. It shows them as typical teenagers. Horny teenagers who have discovered lust for each other. I think, maybe in canon they didn't do it, but they DEFINITELY thought about it. I love being able to read it acted out. WOnderfully done!!! Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you love this story so much! Although technically Edward isn't really a teenager... ;)
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: July 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Mutual Satisfaction
This was incredibly erotic. I feel wholly satisfied now. Excellent trilogy!!!! Author's Response: As always, thank you so much for reading and for letting me know what you think! It's very much appreciated! ;)
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