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Penname: Dulcinea21bella [ Contact]
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Summary:  "Once upon a time, there was girl that just wanted to get swept off her feet. Little did I know my co-star would be the one to do it. And with texting no less."
A fictional tale of Rob and Kristen realizing their feelings for each other and getting their signals crossed.
Thanks to falconcranelove for the banner!
Sequel: Behind the Lens http://twilighted.net/viewstory.php?sid=11639
Categories: Other Characters: Kristen Stewart, Robert Pattinson
Challenges: Series: The Robsten Files
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes
Word count: 193022
[Report This] Published: December 24, 2008 Updated: April 09, 2010
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: November 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28
Great update! I love that Rob is so trusting, but also so nervous, about being away from Kristen. Their relationship is still so new and they are so overwhelmed with the depth of their feelings that they don't know how to act or be secure when their happiness depends so wholely on another person. Wonderful chapter!!! Author's Response: Yay! I'm so glad you liked it! Yes, you hit it straight on the head. He trusts her, but is still so very nervous being away from her. And so is she. YES! They really don't know how to act and to be secure since it really depends so wholely on the other person. But they are learning and this issue was just another part of that.
Thank you for your comments and for reading this one. You have been with me since the start of this and I thank you from the bottom of my heart for staying with me for eleven months with this little story.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: July 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
Woo Hoo! Excellent update. I LOVE that Rob got jealous over Kris going to talk to Taylor. I love how possessive they are over eachother. I love this story!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: July 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
Ahhhh. I don't mind a cliffy that eds in Rob "began to kiss me..." NICE! GL with your lines!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: March 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 32
I love them. I was lucky enough to attend the Remember Me Premiere in NYC and I couldn't keep my eyes off of them. We had dinner in the same restaurant the night before and there is no doubt that they are a couple. She had her hands all over them. They really were cute together.
This was an excellent chapter. I can't wait to read how they handle the summer apart!!!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: April 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 33
I am UBER excited for the sequel! You literally just made my day. I love these guys. I got to meet them at the Remember Me premiere (we lucked out and got tix to the premiere and after party). I ate dinner at the table next to them the night before. They are SO adorable together. Always touching. You putting it all in words is SO enjoyable to read! I am looking forward to more!!!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: August 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
Ahhh, this was SOOO enjoyable. The more we learn, the more I think they are really together behind closed doors. Excellent update. I can't wait to read how the whole Nikki game plays out!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: August 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
Ahhh, this was SOOO enjoyable. The more we learn, the more I think they are really together behind closed doors. Excellent update. I can't wait to read how the whole Nikki game plays out!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
Ah, so very good. I love how sensitive Rob is, being thrilled by Kristen referring to him as her boyfriend. I think he would likely have the same reaction in RL. I LOVE how into eachother they are!!! I can't wait for Nikki to find out about them! I WANT A SEQUEL!!!!! Are you kidding? I NEED it. I can't let them go now....... I love this story so much. Is it wrong how obsessed with them I am????
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
Ah, so very good. I love how sensitive Rob is, being thrilled by Kristen referring to him as her boyfriend. I think he would likely have the same reaction in RL. I LOVE how into eachother they are!!! I can't wait for Nikki to find out about them! I WANT A SEQUEL!!!!! Are you kidding? I NEED it. I can't let them go now....... I love this story so much. Is it wrong how obsessed with them I am????
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
How could I hate you for this? I thought Rob and Kristen did a great job of sticking together and protecting eachother. Nikki is a bitch and she's got some shit coming to her. Are you going to write Michael's visit? I would love to read about that. I DO hope you are going to do a sequel. I am SOOO addicted to this! Excellent update!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
Wow. It is quite fitting actually, that he fell asleep in his room the night before they film the breakup. I hope they really go at it sexually after they are done filming it. They will both have experienced some pretty raw emotions. I love this story. I can't help but hope this is how it actually happened with them..... Excellent update!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 ~Part One~
I feel so emotionally drained after reading this scene. I am raw. I need my Rob hug as well. I would imagine their lovemaking tonight to be very primal, very deep, their souls touching. After the emotional day they have just had, they will fall deep into eachother, right? Ah, I can't wait! Excellent update. This had to be a hard one!!!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27 ~Part Two~
God, I seriously love them. You write them so real. THeir love is so powerful and so all consuming. I feel so caught up in their desires and their needs. I always get so excited to find that you have updated this story. It is my favorite. Excellent update!!!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29 ~Part One~
This was great. I can't help but want them to humiliate Nikki.... she needs to keep her hands off of what belongs to me- I mean, Kristen.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 29 ~Part Two~
Excellent chapter. This was thoroughly fulfilling! Were they together for Christmas? I know he is in London but I haven't seen ANY photos of him- or her in weeks! WTF? Where are those two?? I assume he spent Thanksgiving with her family.... is she in London???
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 30
Ah, this was a touching chapter. I love how sentimental they both are and how they both crave that physical connection. Great chapter. I am looking forward to more. Are you planning on taking us through the NM Premiere? I am eager to read about their reunion after their summer spent apart amidst the rumors of Rob hooking up with his Remember Me costar... I love it!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: February 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 31
I am so sad this story is winding down. I will miss it terribly. They are so very adorable.
Summary: Rather than sitting silently by Bella as she transforms, Edward pours out his heart. Listen to the hopes, fears, memories, insights, love and promises he shares with his wife during her change.
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 2677
[Report This] Published: December 25, 2008 Updated: January 03, 2009
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
"I wanted us to be connected that way. That's how we were meant to be. Your blood in my body. My venom, my essence, in yours."
This was my favorite line. I loved this. I agree with you, a human would have talked to her the whole time! Ah, Edward, how I love you so...
Author's Response: Thank you! Edward is just beyond amazing, isn't he? I have to give credit to a friend who acted as a beta for this piece and urged me to expand the section on Edward's feelings about changing Bella. As soon as she said that, I thought, yes! That really should have been in there, and I wrote those lines you singled out.
Summary: 
Four weeks before her wedding to Edward, Bella is frustrated. She knows there's little-to-no chance of getting him to bend his rules and boundaries now, but there's no harm in fantasizing about what could happen later. So she begins compiling a list of things that she and Edward can do together once they're happily married. She's surprised to find she might be able to cross some things off earlier than she thought...
Story contains mature themes and is not intended for younger readers.
Thanks to Mandi, aka m81170, for the great banner!
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes
Word count: 187877
[Report This] Published: December 28, 2008 Updated: March 18, 2010
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
Wow. I am in desperate need of a long cold shower.... although those have a different meaning now after reading this story! Excellent. I can't wait to read more!!! Author's Response: I had that very thought--this story ruins the effectiveness of cold showers now for me!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Games
So hot!!!!! I love it! Author's Response: I'm glad!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: February 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Control
This was so freaking good. So Hot. I LOVE when Edward says Fuck. I can literally feel it. Excellent chapter. I am thinking about this story all of the time..... great job. More, please. Author's Response: Wow--that's great! Thanks!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: February 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Music
Seriously SO hot. I wanted them to do it on teh piano so badly. Its amazing how you are able to get me all riled up with these chapters, them not have sex, but still leave me feeling satisfied. Three weeks. I have to repeat it to myself as well.... three weeks. Fantastic chapter. Wow. Author's Response: THREEWEEKSTHREEWEEKSTHREEWEEKS I'm right there with ya!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: February 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
I LOVE IT!!!!! Author's Response: SO GLAD!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: February 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Teasing
Wow. This was so incredibly hot. Love it. SO Fucking Much. Great job! Author's Response: SO glad you enjoyed! Thanks!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: March 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
Oh, so very hot. I can't wait to read about this weekend!!! Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Soon!
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