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Penname: Dulcinea21bella [ Contact]
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Summary: More than a missing moment, it's a missing weekend from Eclipse! Experience Bella and Edward's visit to Florida from Edward's POV. Can Edward monitor Victoria's attack, pass for human, keep Bella happy, win Renee's approval and stay out of the sun?
Summer '09 Indie TwiFic finalist for Most Romantic Moment!
Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward, Phil, Renee
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes
Word count: 13463
[Report This] Published: December 09, 2008 Updated: January 09, 2009
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 18, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Great idea. I'm grateful to your daughter for thinking of it. I look forward to reading it as it develops! Author's Response: Thanks! She really loves this story because it was her idea.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 18, 2008
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
LOL. I love your note at the end of this chapter. If only writing about him could will him to exist.... what a wonderful thought. You should enjoy writing fluff, you are good at it. This beach scene was very romantic and very sensual as well. I thoroughly enjoyed it!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 22, 2008
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Great update! I love Edward being "human".
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 23, 2008
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
I think you did a great job with the boys! I, of course, am eager for more Edward and Bella. This is a very enjoyable story!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 28, 2008
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
I love that he is listening to Renee's thoughts about their relationship. I am really enjoying this story. It fits effortlessly into Eclipse. I can't wait to read more! Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 31, 2008
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
I just read the new chapter and I wanted to let you know that I reallyenjoyed Edward opening up a bit to Renee and Phil. He loves Bella so much and I love how he is always caring for her! More, please. I want to know what is going to happen in her bedroom!!!!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
”No. Renee is just worried that we’re too wrapped up in each other. I can’t help that. I can walk slowly and eat food and ignore everyone’s thoughts, but I can’t pretend that you’re not everything to me. I wouldn’t know how.”
- (sigh) Oh, Edward. What I wouldn't give to have you be mine.... This was so HIM! I loved this chapter So, So very much. You really have the characters written so true to canon. Its amazing. Author's Response: Thank you so much. "so HIM" and "so true to canon" is exactly what I hope to do in this story, and it's just the best feeling to hear that people think I'm succeeding.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Great chapter. It honestly never occurred to me that Edward would assume that his family would have destroyed Victoria during this trip, but, of course, it would have been true. I love how Edward is taking in the mother- daughter bond between Bella and Renee and applying that to Bella's future and the sacrifices she will make by becoming immortal. Very good insight for Edward in this chapter. Great job! Author's Response: Thanks! I'm really glad the thoughts & feelings I portrayed Edward make sense to you.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
He is seriously the most romantic man EVER. Oh, what I wouldn't give to have a piece of him... you write him so well.... Author's Response: Yes, I have been warning my daughters, "Don't expect to find a man who acts like this"! Thanks so much for the compliment. Since I can't really have him, I just want to understand him.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
I was hooked on this story from the first chapter and I thoroughly enjoyed the journey. It was a remarkable story and you wrote Edward and Bella so true to their canon characters. They were so compelling and the force that binded them was evident in the dialogue. I hope you continue to write about them. This was mesmerizing. Great job! Author's Response: Thanks so much for being a fan all the way! When I write I have to say that I really surprise myself with what I come up. Like Bella on her honeymoon, I have definitely not had enough!
Summary:
 What if the wolf pack hadn't interrupted Laurent before he bit Bella? This is the story of Bella being changed despite Edward leaving her to prevent it from happening.
Rated for later chapters. Just like in New Moon, Edward will make an appearance eventually!
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Laurent, Quil, Rosalie, Sam, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes
Word count: 71429
[Report This] Published: December 09, 2008 Updated: November 24, 2009
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 23, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Meadow
I love this so far. I can't wait to read how this all unfolds. Great, great job. Please don't abandon it! Author's Response: Chapter 2 is in the submission pipeline!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Decisions
I am so intrigued by this story. I can't wait to read how it develops. More, please!!!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Visions
Oooohh! I would think that Alice would tell Edward what she saw at this point. I mean, is she see Bella as a vampire, then why wouldn't Edward want to know. He would feel responsible for Bella, that he did this to her by leaving her unguarded. I would hope that he would want to take care of her and that Bella would feel that he was there only out of guilt or obligation. This was a great chapter! I can't wait to read what happens next! Author's Response: Don't worry--Edward will be making his first appearance...soon!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 21, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Revelations
Ooooooh, I can't wait to read what happens next. I am SO into this story! Great job! Author's Response: Wow--thanks so much!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Waiting
Argh! I don't want to wait! I want to read it all now! You are doing a spectacular job with this story. I don't understand why you don't have more reviews. You are writing the characters so passionately. I am hypnotized. I can't wait to read what happens when they see eachother! Great job!!! Author's Response: These are great comments--thanks so much!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Reunions
Wow. Great update. I love that she woke up not remembering anybody. I can't wait to read what her reaction to all of this will be. You do a great job with the characters! I can't wait to read more!!! Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback--appreciate it!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: February 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Reunions, Part II
I got the warm fuzzies during the last scene. I loved the string of "I love you, Bella"... each one was so wrought with emotion. I can't wait to read more. This was sensational! Author's Response: Thanks so much! I really liked the way that scene came together too!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: February 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Reunions, Part III
Excellent chapter. I hope Edward struggles a little bit over his jealousy. He DID leave her... I love Jake. Don't get me wrong- I am Edward/Bella all the way. I just want him to have to work a little bit to earn her trust back. I think its realistic, under the circumstances, that Bella lean a little bit on Alice and Jacob, instead of Edward. She has reason to have trust issues with Edward. It will take time. I am looking forward to reading about it! Great job! Author's Response: I agree completely, and SM didn't deal with this AT ALL in NM. One minute Bella thought she was dreaming, and the next she had this great epiphany that Edward's love was true all along. And that was that. I'm going to be very curious to see how they handle this in the movie.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: February 21, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Decisions, Reprised
Wow. Great ending there. I hope you pick it up right at that point. I thoroughly enjoyed reading about how Bella picked her name- from both Bella and Edward's perspective. Your characters are very engaging and passionate. I am anxious to read how they will do in Alaska- I'm sure Tanya will be a bit surprised to find Edward so entranced by Bellla. This was a wonderful chapter. I can't wait to read more! Author's Response: I can say that I will pick it up where this left off...Glad you enjoyed!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: March 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Beginnings
Wow. I feel like I should be smoking a cigarette right now. That was an emotionally charged reunions scene. It was romantic, erotic, and sensual. Excellent job. I could feel their emotional connection. Wonderful chapte.r I can't wait to read more. This story is fantastic!!! I am curious to see how Tanya reacts to Bella and how Bella reacts to Tanya. Bella doesn't know yet about her infactuation with Edward... Author's Response: Yes, that's true about Tanya. To come... Glad you enjoyed the reunion scene and found it to be both romantic as well as erotic--that was my goal. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: April 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Alaska
I am SO loving how things are progressing. Wonderful update. I hope this means they will start communicating to each other. I loved when Bella referred to Edward as Her Territory. I loved that he heard that and liked it! More, please. I want more!!!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: April 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Us
Wonderful update! I love their growing intimacy. The way Edward told her he wanted her was so sensual. The possessiveness is erotic. Your characters are heartwarming. I so enjoyed the way they were lounging around together. Comfortable. I can 't wait to read more!!!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: The Date
This is one of my favorite stories. THey are so very passionate about each other. One of my all time favorite scenes is in Reunions Part2 . ... the whole "I love you, Bella"... takes my breath away. You write them beautifully. I can't wait for more.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Attack
Great update. I love it!! The Tanya ass kicking was wonderful!!!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
I think this was a great twist. I had always wondered about Bella's dreams in the books as well. Wonderful tie in. I can't wait to read more!
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