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Summary: What was Edward thinking while Bella slept during the first night of their honeymoon? Not explicit.
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: Paradise Lost
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 992
[Report This] Published: December 01, 2008 Updated: December 06, 2008
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 06, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Great job! I really enjoyed reading it. I'm looking forward to what's next in the series!
Summary: A moment from the honeymoon, from Edward's POV: Why did he give in to Bella on the night of her good dream? Not explicit.
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: Paradise Lost
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 1823
[Report This] Published: December 01, 2008 Updated: December 03, 2008
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 04, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
This was fabulous. Intoxicating. It was a wonderful interpretation of what Edward was thinking at the time- very true to the character. The feeling of love was very powerful. Great job!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your wonderful compliments!
Summary: Bella ruins her friendship with Edward by confessing her feelings to him which he doesn't return. She goes back to Arizona for college but returns to Washington after graduation due to Charlie's illness. Can she and Edward be friends again?
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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes
Word count: 112590
[Report This] Published: December 01, 2008 Updated: March 24, 2009
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 03, 2008
Title: Chapter 5: Reciprocity?
I just read this story and I am really enjoying it. The chemistry is fantastic! I can't wait to read the next chapter. Great job!!!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 03, 2008
Title: Chapter 6: Love Jones
Oh My! What a cliffhanger!!! This story is so enjoyable. I love the tension and I can't wait for them to finally take their friendship to the next level. I can't wait to read what happens next!!!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 30, 2008
Title: Chapter 13: Smurfin' A! Afternoon Delight!
That was smurfing incredible!
Summary: It’s their first night together as husband and wife… it follows on from that gorgeous scene just after their arrival at Isle Esme in ‘Breaking Dawn’.
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 3846
[Report This] Published: December 02, 2008 Updated: December 23, 2008
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 24, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Unquenchable First
This was very romantic and very erotic. I hope you continue to write more stories. I enjoyed this very much! Author's Response: Thankyou very much :D
[Report This] Published: December 02, 2008 Updated: December 09, 2008
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 02, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Oh, so very sweet. Very touching. I enjoyed it very much.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 09, 2008
Title: Chapter 2: TO BELLA, FROM SANTA
How precious. I am so happy that you decided to add another chapter. After all of the suffering Edward and Bella had to endure over the past few years to be together its so nice to be able to revel in some truly happy times. I'd like to think that their Happily Ever After included days like the ones you have described here. Great job. I hope you continue to write this little happy scenes, you do it so well!
Summary: Esme watches over Bella while she sleeps. Post New Moon.
Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Esme, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 1334
[Report This] Published: December 02, 2008 Updated: December 03, 2008
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 03, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I loved this. It was such a sweet moment. Well done! Please write more!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I am planning on writing fics like this with all the Cullens - seeing their POV on Bella after NM - so I should have more up soonish :).
Summary:
I know that many people felt let down by the fight scene and ending to breaking dawn. I was one of these readers. I decide to write my own version. I think it is a good balance between the happy ending that so many wanted, but the action that was needed. When I posted this intitally I was only considering a one-shot fight scene. Once I became aware of the opportunity, I decided to see where else the story might take me...
“This is disturbing indeed,” Marcus stated to no one in particular. “We have little time to prepare our defenses… We need to flee. The only reason you won the last battle is because they did not realize your power. They will not make the same mistake. We must find refuge until we can develop a better plan.”
Favorite Review so far:
"HELL YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!! That's what I have to say about that!! You did an amazing job with the fight scene and I loved it!!!! When everyone always talked about wanting a better fight, I wanted that too, but I still wanted the Cullens to win!! You did both and I love Bella's abilities. I thought it was great that ***** left the Volturi too!! I look forward to your next chapters, I think you've got something awesome going here!!!!!!!!!!!!"
BANNER BY THE AMAZING RedRose15
Categories: AU, Breaking Dawn Characters: Aro, Bella, Caius, Chelsea, Edward, Jacob, Marcus
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes
Word count: 8721
[Report This] Published: December 02, 2008 Updated: February 14, 2009
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 02, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I have often thought about Bella being able to uses her shield to bounce other powers like that. I think its a great idea. I'm thrilled that you were able to flush it out in a story. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review. After reading the reviews I have decided to continue the story. Chapter 2 is written. I am just waiting for it to be approved... *taps desk impatiently*
Summary: Carlisle is worried about Edward's impending wedding night and comes up with an unorthodox solution in order to help Edward.
I WARN YOU THIS IS OUT THERE. MAY NOT BE A STORY FOR EVERYONE SO PLEASE BE WARNED.
Also, this story will be complete in 3 chapters...4 at the most.
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Categories: Breaking Dawn, Crackfic Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No
Word count: 5670
[Report This] Published: December 02, 2008 Updated: February 20, 2009
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 18, 2008
Title: Chapter 2: It's All About Control
Its s fun read! I love it! Author's Response: Thank you! I had fun in mind when I wrote it outside of the pure craziness of it. Another chapter is finally on the way. Thanks for giving it a chance and thanks for the review.
Summary: We always want what we can't have, but their love for each other was so much more than just temptation. He was the eager young teacher, Bella's friend and her inspiration in a high school world where she didn't quite fit. She was the bright young woman who took Edward completely by surprise, his saving grace after years of closing himself off from life and love. When their days are turned upside down by their secret relationship, will they find a way to be together?
Rated for subject matter and sexually explicit material in later chapters. Huge thanks to Anne Cullen for the awesome new banner and to m81170 the beautiful fan art/banner below! You are both amazing!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie, Tanya, Tyler
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No
Word count: 64999
[Report This] Published: December 04, 2008 Updated: May 07, 2010
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: April 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Changing Perspective
I just read this over on FF.net and was hoping to find more over here. I need more!! Author's Response: Nope, haha. It usually goes up on FFn a day before here. Sometimes more. But the next chapter is up there.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Together
I so love this story. I can't wait to read more. I'm sorry your RL has been so difficult. I hope things have gotten better for you. This story is SO worth the wait. I am so into these characters. They are right on the edge of something amazing!!! Author's Response: Thanks so much! And I am sorry for the wait. There's not much I can do about that but beg forgiveness.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Glue for Broken Pieces (vjgm)
Wow. I am so enamored with this story it isn;t funny. I actually squeal when I get the update notice. I just feel so invested in their relationship. I can't wait until their passion boils over. Are they really going to make it until graduation? God, I hope not. Excellent update!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: A Month of Solitude (VJGM)
I love this story so very much. I am proud of Bella for finding ways to see Edward out of school. He has been so distant. She really doesn't know how hard that has been for him. How long can they stay away from one another? I am SO eager for that first kiss. Great update! Author's Response: Lol, thanks so much! I've had mixed reactions about Bella's plans, but I think it's kind of cute. Their fist kiss is coming soon!
Summary: 
A Breaking Dawn alternative story. Edward and Bella marry and go on a very romantic honeymoon. Complications interrupt and they return to Forks. Decisions must be made and the family has to move quickly. This story is an A/U from BD. There is no pregnancy and no more love triangle. It is about how Edward and Bella were meant to be together and then must stand together against all odds.
Canon Pairings. Lots of romantic lemons. AU because some story lines from Breaking Dawn were completely abandoned in place of ones that I like better! Rated NC-17 for the lemons and for possible future violence and occasional language when the characters get really stressed out and stuff!
Categories: Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Eleazar, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Leah, Mike, Other Character, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: Yes
Word count: 193651
[Report This] Published: December 05, 2008 Updated: May 09, 2009
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 16, 2008
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Gifts
I am really enjoying this story. Its very sweet and romantic. You are doig a nice job. I am looking forward to reading it as the story develops. Great job! Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing and thanks for the kudos. I will be posting again soon!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - The Honeymoon BPOV
I love this story. You have a great insight into the characters. I can actually hear them saying your words. Things are starting to get tense... I can't wait to read what is going to happen next! Author's Response: Thank you! You are so kind! I really appreciate your taking the time to leave me a review! I will be posting again tomorrow, so hopefully by Wednesday the new chapter will be up!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Flight
This was a great update. I am glad that Edward finally opened up to Bella and told her what was going on. I'm glad Bella confronted him about it too! Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, Edward needs to come clean with Bella, I certainly agree, and it is absolutely high time that Bella stands up for herself with Edward! Glad you enjoyed!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Alice's Place
This was a fantastic chapter. I love that Bella and Edward are growing more comfortable with the intimate aspect of their relationship. Their lovemaking is primal, yet laced with tenderness. I can really feel the need they have for each other. Its very well written. I can't wait to read what happens next! Author's Response: Thank you again for another lovely review! I am glad that you are still enjoying the story. Yes, Bella and Edward do need each other. They have a lot of pent-up sexual frustration! lol (or maybe I do? LOL)
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Paris
This was a great chapter. I really enjoyed reading about the "change" conversation. Its evident that they are growing as a couple. They are comfortable and trusting. Edward is opening up to her about these issues that a few months ago, he would have kept to himself. I am looking forward to reading more! Great job! Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really do appreciate everyone's kind comments! I am so glad that you are still enjoying the story. Thanks a bunch for the review!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - The Louvre
I love this story. Your characters are SO realistic. They are so compelling. I adore the fact that they can't keep their hands off of each other. I think that's entirely realistic. I imagine they would want to be making love constantly after everything they've been through and the way they feel about each other. Its just so romantic. I love that Edward was honest with her at the end about Jane wanting to follow them. He's starting to treat her as an equal. You are doing such a wonderful job with this story. I love it. Author's Response: Thanks so much Dulcinea! I have tried to write them as I think newlywed lovers should be, and how I think Edward really would want to be, if he could just step away from his control issues for a bit! I am so glad that you like it. I am a hopeless romantic so I am really enjoying writing all the romance more than the lemons even! Thanks for leaving love as you passed through!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Dessert
Wow. Of my F-ing God! This was fantastic. And, no, I don't mind the "activities" at all. I love that they are acting like a real honeymooning couple! I want more!!!! Author's Response: Dulcinea! Great to hear from you again! I hope Bella survives this chapter to have more activities in the next...tee hee hee
Summary: Cute, sweet, funny post-BD fluff! Edward plans a special night out for Bella. When Bella reciprocates, he's amazed at where she takes him. The third date is arranged by someone else in their lives. Next, Bella and Edward both give their perspectives of a double date with Rose and Emmett. Last (for now), Edward has a new idea that includes Renesmee and Jacob!
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Renesmee, Rosalie, Seth
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No
Word count: 18135
[Report This] Published: December 05, 2008 Updated: February 02, 2009
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 05, 2008
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
I really enjoyed reading this. It was very sweet and very romantic. I can definitely see Edward and Bella planning something like this. Well done!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 14, 2008
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Love it! Keep it coming!!!!
Summary:  You know those fics where Edward doesn't come back and Bella forgets about him and five seconds later she's in bed with Jacob and none of it makes any damn sense?
Yeah, this isn't one of them.
This story picks up from the moment in New Moon when Jacob has driven Bella home after the cliff diving incident, right before he catches the scent of Alice. Only in this telling, Alice wasn't looking, so there's no sudden appearance at Bella's house, no Rosalie calling Edward and sending him on a suicidal mission to Volterra, and no reason for Bella to do anything but believe that Edward didn't love her anymore. This is simply a story of what might have happened if everyone stayed mostly in character and Edward's return was delayed. Yes, delayed. Because we all know that he was "this close" to coming back on his own anyhow.
So what would have happened if Bella had tried to move on with her life? Would she have found happiness with Jacob? And would Edward be too late?
* First in a series of stories
~I thought of Jacob’s warm arms wrapped around me, his infectious laughter, and his ability to keep me from falling to pieces again… The pain choking my heart relaxed and I could breathe.~
~“More than anything,” I whispered, not caring what I'd just agreed to. When it came to Bella, it didn't matter what the question was. I just wanted.~
Winner of:
Best Author, Most Romantic, Favorite Jacob, Most Suspenseful, & Best WIP in the Wolfpack Awards | Best Non-Canon Pairing (Incomplete) and Best WIP in the Moonlight Awards | Best During the Series in the Razzle Dazzle Awards | The Storyteller Award in the Shimmer Awards | Best JacobxBella in the Silent Tear Awards
Categories: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Jacob
Challenges: Series: A Blazing Sun
Chapters: 76 Completed: No
Word count: 164405
[Report This] Published: December 07, 2008 Updated: September 11, 2010
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Dilemma: Jacob's POV
I am loving it!
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