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Broken Angel by drotuno Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 273]
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What if Edward didn't come back for 2 years after Bella's birthday incident?  What if Jake wasn't the sweet boy everyone thought he was?  What kind of Bella does Edward return to? 

This is my version of New Moon and after.  Slighty OOC, but canon couples, and some new situations.  This is the first story in the "Angel Series."


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie, Victoria
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Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: No Word count: 99270
[Report This] Published: February 04, 2011 Updated: August 17, 2011


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Really, Edward?????  Unforgivable.  I can't imagine a situation in which he could make it okay.  He can HEAR her heartbeat.. they all can.  He would know she was coming in.  WHY would he even entertain something like that?!?!?!?

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

This was an amazing chapter.  I think they are mending eachother's broken hearts.  Edward internalizes everything.  I think he's furious at Jake, but at himself as well.  He knows she wouldn't have spent any time with Jake if he had only stayed in Forks.  Ultimately it was a wasted effort anyway...

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Good riddance to Jake!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I completely agree with you end notes on this one!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I'm glad they had the forever conversation.  I am surprised Edward didn't bring up marriage at all.  Will Jake be able to smell Edward on her???  Well done!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I thought the scene with Jake and Charlie could't have gone any better.  It was perfect.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am SO intrigued!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow.  I am addicted!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This is SOOOOO good!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I understand Bella's trepidation.  She has been through so much.  Her one confidant has changed so much over the past two years and she has been forced to internalize everything.  I am thrilled with the way you are portraying these two!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I am completely intoxicated by this story.  These characters have completely captivated me!  They are so heartfelt and sincere.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Seth is awazing.  He is a good person and friend.  

I love that they can't stop touching each other.  I love that they both need more!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: August 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

THat song is SO New Moon!!!!  Great chapter!!

 
The Love Shack by beckyd1210 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 56]
Summary:

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It’s been five years since Edward left Bella in the woods. Everyone’s hiding something, and there’s more at stake than ever before. Will Edward and Bella find their way back to each other? They’ll find their answers and more at The Love Shack. 

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 24416
[Report This] Published: May 02, 2011 Updated: August 12, 2011


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: August 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Standing the Heat

Why can't Edward read Jacob's mind?  Won't he be able to see the truth of their relationship?  Or couldn't Jasper feel it?

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: August 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Getting to know you

Bella really is making things more difficult than is necessary.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: August 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Our Lips are Sealed

What a way for Edward to find out!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: August 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: FML

I am intrigued!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: August 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 No win situation

Hmm.  I am pissed at Carlisle and Esme.  If they knew all along and didn't tell Edward then that just makes them shitty.  They knew Edward left to protect Bella.  THey knew he was miserable without her.  What parent withholds information from their child that could aid him in his journey to true happiness???  I don't care what Bella wanted... Edward had a right to know.

 
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NOW COMPLETE!

"They have something I want..."

Aro has coveted the talents of Alice & Edward for a long time, but when human Bella weds into the already powerful Cullen clan, Aro sees the perfect opportunity to get what he wants -- and more. Armed with the information he took from Edward and Alice's minds, he recruits Gianna and a special young American, Dominic, to carry out his plan. Will Alice see it coming? Will Edward believe he's lost Bella forever?

Canon characters/AU, rated NC-17 for some lemon action and vampire immorality/violence. Dark but HEA promised.


Categories: Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Afton, Alec, Alice, Aro, Athenodora, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Carmen, Chelsea, Corin, Demetri, Didyme, Edward, Eleazar, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Garrett, Gianna, Heidi, Jane, Jasper, Kate, Marcus, Other Character, Renata, Rosalie, Santiago, Sulpicia, Tanya
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Series: None
Chapters: 44 Completed: Yes Word count: 193724
[Report This] Published: August 18, 2011 Updated: April 06, 2013


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: August 16, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chop and Change

I enjoyed their homecoming very much!!!  ;o)

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: August 16, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Neutron Star Collision

I do like him already.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: August 16, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I am very much intrigued!

 

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: August 19, 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Leave out all the Rest

Argh!  I'm caught up!  I am eager to read more!



Author's Response:

What a treat to come back from vacation and read all your reviews!  I love your enthusiasm for the story -- thank you so much.  How kind that you left me a little something for each chapter : )  Next update will be this weekend!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: August 19, 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Full Moon

I can't wait for Edward and Bella to have some time to really talk to eachother.  Excellent!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: August 19, 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Never Think

I am SO glad to be late coming to this story so I don't have to wait for the next chapter!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: August 19, 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Let Me Sign

Wow.  Things have certainly reached a fevered pitch in this story!!  I am loving it!

 




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