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Summary:

The story begins six months after Edward left Bella in the forest, but unfortunately things have taken a darker turn than our beloved SM wrote. This is the tale of how Edward and Bella eventually find their way back to each other, although it is a difficult road traveled. There will not be any reference to the events in Eclipse or BD.

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Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Mike, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 39 Completed: Yes Word count: 94579
[Report This] Published: January 06, 2010 Updated: July 11, 2010


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: April 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Wow.  Vampirism gave Mike a confident boost for certain!  I am eager for Edward to return to Bella so they can really talk about their feelings.  I love this story.  This was a fabulous update.  Now poor Angela has been pulled into all of this drama.  How are they going to explain all of these deaths?  Are the Voluri on their way to intercede? 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the wonderful feedback!!!  Yeah Mike is definitely a character!!!  Having alot of fun making him crazy!

 
Summary:

Did you read the Twilight series and wonder what it would be like if SM included more...passion?  Heat?  Lemons of ANY kind?  Ever wanted Bella and Edward to have a steamy meadow scene?  Smexin' in the shiny silver Volvo?  Wished that leg-hitching scene in Eclipse went where you wanted it to?  You're in luck...me, too!  Join me and my wonderfully pervy mind as we go through the books, sprinkling lemon drops along the way. 

AU, OOC, all canon pairings.  Rated for sexual situations and language.

Thank you to Readergoof for the awesome banner!


Categories: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 41173
[Report This] Published: January 09, 2010 Updated: November 02, 2010


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: April 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I am really enjoying these chapters!



Author's Response:

Thank you for all of your lovely reviews!  I hope you enjoy the others, and there's much more on the way.

xoxo Sarah

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: April 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This was brilliant.  I love that it was all a dream!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I tried to do it as something that happened, but it was such a sad part of the book that I couldn't make it work otherwise.  :-)  

xoxo Sarah

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: April 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Possesive Edward is SO arousing. mmmmmmm. Finger licking good!

Author's Response:

Yes, I love a possessive Edward.  He is very delicious.

xoxo Sarah

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: April 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow.  Um, this was HOT!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I'm glad you liked the chapter.  :-)

xoxo Sarah

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: April 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Holy Hell.  THis was lifted from my dreams....  ;o)



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it!  Maybe it will inspire fun dreams tonight ;-)

xoxo Sarah

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: April 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I would have never thought of using this scene but it flowed brilliantly.  I almost want you to continue an entire story on this chapter alone!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  It definitely was a more obscure scene to chose, but I liked the idea of it being such a nice day outside, and Edward making it sooooo much nicer, lol!  If you'd like to read something longer by me, check out Kindred Spirits, which is completed, or The Disillusioned, which is a work in progress multi-chapter.  Stay tuned here for more!  The next post will be a Smut Monday's feature on April 26th.

xoxo Sarah

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: April 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Ah, yes, I liked this chapter VERY much!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm so glad you liked it.

xoxo Sarah

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: August 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Now THAT was a meadow scene!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks, sweets!  I really do think this is how it should have gone, haha.  

xoxo Sarah

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: August 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

These are so much fun to read!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I'm so happy you're enjoying the story.  I love your reviews! :-)

xoxo Sarah

 
Broken Dawn by Narasen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 309]
Summary:

What if Rosalie had refused to help when Bella called from Isle Esme?  How much damage would the repercussions of that decision cause?

Rated mostly for language, but there may be some lemony goodness in future chapters.

Some OOC behaviors, because I'm not SM.  Non-canon pairings, and a character death.


Categories: Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Carmen, Charlie, Edward, Eleazar, Emmett, Esme, Irina, Jacob, Kate, Leah, Renesmee, Rosalie, Seth, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: The Broken Dawn Chronicles
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 62909
[Report This] Published: January 10, 2010 Updated: April 14, 2010


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: April 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Over My Pile Of Ashes

I just discovered this story and I am so very intrigued!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: April 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - An Unlikely Alliance

Wow.  This is so intense!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: April 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Dividing Lines

Holy crap.  So good.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: April 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Reckoning

NO!!!!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: April 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Supplement

I am still reeling in shock that he's gone... that she told him to leave!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: April 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Moving Day

I am a little concerned that Emmett cares too much for Bella...

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: April 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - An Explanation

Is Emmett mated to the baby???  Poor Edward. 

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: April 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - An Arrival

Rose really went over to the dark side...

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: April 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 A Departure Imminent

So sweet.  Edward is missing it all...

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: April 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - An Ending

Edward is freaking out.  He should be- he has no idea what has been happening back home. 

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: April 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 A Beginning

Emmett bites her????  So, so wrong.  Rgh.  I can't stop reading.  I am thrilled that I discovered this story already completed!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: April 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Burning

I am SO disappointed in Edward...

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: April 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - The Tree of Knowledge

Okay, I am getting a little sick here...

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: April 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - The Realization

I know you warned us of this at the start, but actually reading it is haard to do.  ;o)

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: April 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - When it All Falls into Place

Now I am speedreading.  It's good.  It just didn't go anywhere near where I expected.

 




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