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Penname: Dulcinea21bella [ Contact]
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Summary: 
He's 32, married and completely broken. She's 17 and a closet recluse. When Bella Swan finally breaks out of her isolation by getting a weekend job in a bakery and serves the broken man, they unexpectedly form a taboo yet beautiful relationship. ExB
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No
Word count: 69976
[Report This] Published: November 29, 2009 Updated: March 02, 2011
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: The Spill
I love the chemistry between them. I am so excited for them to realize that the other one feels the same way. Great update!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 22, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: The Seduction
I am so captivated by this story. Rose is trying anything and everything to keep Edward. But his heart is closed to her forever. Maybe Edward will hire Bella to care for Honey during the week? She is almost finished with school. THat would give them the opportunity to spend time together alone. They could even go on outings together without raising suspicion. I love this story. I can't wait to read more. I am so eager for their friendship to transform to something more. The sexual tension is there. The passion is building. They care for eachother and are drawn to eachother. I can't wait for it all to take off. I LOVE this story!!!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: February 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: The Offering
Wow. I LOVE this.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: February 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: The Babysitter
Woah. I am eager to discover Edward's thoughts when he came upon Bella sleeping in his bed! Soon the chemistry will be too much to bear. I love this.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: February 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: The Confession
MMmmm the sweet seduction. Now at least they both know that the other person is feeling that same electrical pull. I wouldn't mind a full time live with Edward nanny job!!! ;o)
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: February 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: The Graduation
I am so intoxicated by this story. Edward has to be freaking out at her crytic messages. I can't wait to read more. Excellent chapter!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: The Birthday
Wow. What a cliffie!!! I really hope she goes with him. I have missed this story!!! I cant wait to read more!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: March 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: The Return
I do love this story. I am thrilled that he came back for her!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: April 23, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: The Kiss
I love this story. I was actually thinking about it earlier today. I am so excited that their relationship is progressing. Excellent update!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: The Decision
I am so captivated by this story. I get so excited when I get an e-mail alert of an update. Poor Bella. She has been so traumatized. I hope she doesn't have to endure any more torment. What proof does Irina/Rose really have? Some potential flirting? Edward hiring a babysitter? She has nothing to go on. I can't wait to read more. Great chapter!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: March 04, 2011
Title: Chapter 17: The Danger
Wow. Great twist there. I didn't see this coming. Was Charlie relieved that Edward could take care of Bella? I'd love some insight into the phone call between Bella and her Dad. I have missed this story and am thrilled that you are back!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: The Exile
How can she let him go? I really hope she can't!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: March 04, 2011
Title: Chapter 16: The Connection
This was beautiful!
Summary: Bella and Edward are "buddies" and while Bella wants more, Edward pulls away every time she tries to make things more official. Then one evening, she meets a tall, dark, handsome man out in a club, and he promises her everything she always wanted. Will Bella take it, even if it's not with the person she thought it would be with? And what will Edward do when his friend is suddenly no longer available?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes
Word count: 36646
[Report This] Published: November 29, 2009 Updated: February 11, 2010
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Ch 3: NYC
Hmmmm, enter Jacob Black, perhaps? I am eager to delve into Edwawrd's jealousy. Great chapter!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Ch 5: Conversations and Promises
Great update. I am eager to read Edward be jealous. You never know what you have until it is gone.... ;o)
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Ch 9: History Repeats...
Wow. I didn't see this coming. I appreciate the heads up on the Non Bella sex. Is there a chance that the baby isn't Edward's? I hope so. That would suck to have to deal with Tanya- who is clearly manipulative, for the rest of their lives. This definitely explained Edward's attitude. He wants to let Bella go because he thinks that she deserves better, but he can't help but want her. I am SO excited to read more. Excellent chapter!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
Wow. I am SO intrigued. I can't wait to read how it develops!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Ch. 1: Enter Alice
I can't wait for this to REALLY get into the story. I love the premise.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Ch. 2: Unwanted Memories
Wow. I love it. I can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Ch 4: Olympia
I am SO looking forward to Jealousward, I cannot tell you. Exellent update!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Ch 6: New Beginnings?
Woah. The thing about this story is that I get SO into each chapter and I CAN"T WAIT for the next one. It has me completely captivated. I want to read it all. It is fantastic!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Ch 7: First Date
(sigh) I just love it. I am Team Edward 100%, but Jake is treating her the way she deserves to be treated. Edward needs to get his head out of his ass before it is too late! Great update!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Ch 8: Reflections and Surprises
Stupid, stupid, Edward. He HAS her and he is going to have to truly lose her in order to see the light... tragic. I SO enjoyed the lemoy goodness!!!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Ch 10: Ready for More
I am so excited!!! SO, maybe we find out that the baby isn't Edward's once it has been born but by then, Bella is involved with Jake? I love it!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 08, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: Ch 11: New Spaces
Ah!!!! I am really enjoying Jake. He's fun and happy and light hearted. I am ultimately Team Edward all of the way... but some suffering on his part is definitely justified here ;o) Great update!
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