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Penname: Dulcinea21bella [ Contact]
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Summary: 
Edward left Bella after she was almost attacked by Jasper at her birthday party. A few months later a tragic accident leave Bella all on her own. Will the return of the Cullen's be a good thing or will it just turn her world even more upside down?
Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No
Word count: 34059
[Report This] Published: November 24, 2009 Updated: June 27, 2010
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: April 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Forced to Remember
Poor Bella. She basically had to endure the death of her parents for a second time!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: April 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Dealing with the Pain
This was a sweet reprieve for them in the midst of so much chaos. What a wonderful distraction!!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: April 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Memories
I feel so badly for Edward and Bella. They had just moved past all of the pain and hurt from these memories and now they have to relive it all.
I am so sad that I am almost caught up in these chapters!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: April 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Catching Up
This was SO romantic. So sensual and so erotic!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: April 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Brothers and Sisters
I am thoroughly enjoying this story!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: August 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: A Moment
Yummy lemony goodness!
Summary: What if Jacob and the Quileute werewolves never showed up in the meadow that day to save Bella? What if Bella became a vampire and Edward wasn't the one to do it? Bella is turned and forced out of Forks, up North to the Denali clan. New bonds are formed while old ones are nearly broken. Read as Bella adjusts to her new life, and possibly, a new mate. Special lovely thanks to M1187 for my fanstical banner :)
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Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes
Word count: 46381
[Report This] Published: November 28, 2009 Updated: July 04, 2010
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Nocturne
Interesting premise. I am intrigued!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Morning Passages
This is a great twist!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Primavera
At least Laurant is being protective of her. I like that. Poor vamp. He was lonely.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Truman Sleep
I am already addicted to this story!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Indaco
I am really enjoying this storyline. I like the characters, they are real and compelling.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Voices
Poor Bella. It isn't as if she really had a choice in the matter. It was this or dead death. I am really enjoying your characterizations and thrilled that I stumbled across this story.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Valse d'Amelie
Why would they go after Edward???? Aren't all newborns out of control? SHe has a family to mentor her. Couldn't she go to Italy to prove her control?
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Andare
Wow. I really need to go to sleep but I can't stop reading!!!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Requiem
What a sweet reunion!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Rose
Of course she would run to Edward. I think that is right on target. She is immortal and Edward IS her soulmate. Their is no question of her future. Author's Response: Yeah, that's kind of what I felt like. Although I may be team Jacob, hehe, I just couldn't deviate that far from the original story (fan fic or not).
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: All Of Me
THe only problem I have with this chapter is that I don't think that Edward would want to wait under the circumstances. The Volturi are coming to potentially kill them all. I would think that Edward would want to spend as much time as possibile tangled up with Bella while they had the chance. It might be their ONLY chance to ever be intimate together. Author's Response: ah, yes, but Eddie boy is a stickler for that whole, "We gotta be married before we do the dirty" sooooooo... I just kind of left it as he wanted to stay virginal and keep his morals until they were married. I honestly don't think that being a vampire would truly change that. It was one of the traits I did like most of him-- that he tried to stick with his old fashioned ways. It was sweet.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: String Quartet, Op.1:II. Adagio
I wasn't a fan of the Bella/Jake/Edward triangle in the chapter because I feel that once Bella was turned, it would have been over for him. He couldn't have thought of her that way anymore. In the orginal books, it was more about Bella choosing Jake, which represented her humanity, a lifetime full of kids and growing and changing, versus, Edward, and unyielding immortality and the unending thirst. I just feel that once that equation has been taken away, there was no choice to be made. SHe wanted Edward. If Edward had been human as well as Jake, it would always had been Edward. Does that make sense? Just my opinion. ;o) Author's Response: Yeah, I totally see this.... butttttt hehehe I have a mad infatuation for the boy so I couldn't just hang him out to dry..... So.... I sort of... wrung him out first haha. I truly felt the same way as you-- once she became a vampire, it just would have been plain impossible for Jake, but at the same time-- he is a truly stubborn person and just won't take no for an answer. I wanted to give him a chance to try-- he earned it. At least-- in my view he did :)
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Adagio G Minor
Great chapter!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Oltremare
This was sweet!!
Summary: 
He's 32, married and completely broken. She's 17 and a closet recluse. When Bella Swan finally breaks out of her isolation by getting a weekend job in a bakery and serves the broken man, they unexpectedly form a taboo yet beautiful relationship. ExB
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No
Word count: 69976
[Report This] Published: November 29, 2009 Updated: March 02, 2011
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: The Connection
Wow. This was intense!! It was sensual and erotic and pure passion. I could feel the depth of their love. How can they let eachother go after this? Thier connection was just strengthened one hundred times more by being intimate together. This was amazing!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: The Breaking Point
Poor Edward. I feel so badly for him. I am eager for more. I hope he ends up genuinely having feelings for Bella. Great chapter.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: The First Day
I am already captivated!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: The Man
I can't wait for things to heat up between them!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: July 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: The Rude Awakening
Wow. This was intense. I hope Charlie doesn't freak....
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