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Summary: Bella's parents have comissioned a painting to be done of her by one Edward Cullen. Edward, though, is too suave for his own good and its not long before he's trying to talk Bella right out of her own clothes.
“You did really well,” Edward said, beginning to pack up his things.
I blushed. "Thank you."
“You ever thought about posing nude?”
My head went up in shock and I half expected to see one of those gotcha smiles plastered on his face. There wasn’t though. No, instead he looked deadly serious, like he was already taking my clothes off with his eyes. I felt the sudden need to cover up.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Charlie, Edward, Renee
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No
Word count: 117988
[Report This] Published: November 05, 2009 Updated: August 06, 2010
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: February 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Thnks fr th Mmrs
God, I couldn't even bear to read it again. Just getting this update made me throw up a little in my mouth..... I am shaking in rage all over again.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: August 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 19: The New Guy
Bella is moving on with her life. I am actually starting to feel badly for Edward. I don't want him to be intimate with anybody else. I like him wallowing. But I do feel badly for him. He realizes what he lost. He knows it was his fault. He sees her more clearly now than ever before. It will be interesting how his painting girls at Bella's school will go over. I am so addicted to this story!
Summary: “You’re just going to love him!” Rosalie had told me about her new boyfriend.
“I sure hope not. He’s your man, remember?” I replied.
One of Bella's biggest worries in life is never finding true love. However, when love comes knocking on Bella's door, the mystery man is none other than her best friend's boyfriend. Things are about to get tricky.
AU-Human
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No
Word count: 10150
[Report This] Published: November 08, 2009 Updated: February 21, 2011
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Perceptive Friends and Breaking Trends
Great chapter. I have to admit, however, that I don't think Bella OR Edward is thinking of Rose at all. If Bella truly considered Rose to ba a dear friend, she would NOT put herself in a position in which she would pine over Edward. She would avoid seeing him at all costs. A threesome at a nice fancy restaurant? Come on. Why would Rose want to share her man somewhere like that? Why would Bella want to see what a third wheel she is and watch them be together? And if Edward truly cared for Bella, then why wouldn't he break up with Rose? If they are new into their relationship, it would be easy to start dating Bella soon after. Why would he want to pursue a relationship with Rose and get deeper into it with her when she isn't who he wants? Rose cares for Edward and she loves Bella. They are both being coldhearted and insensitive towards her. Anyway, that is my opinion. I am eager to read how it all plays out. Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I appreciate it. I understand everything you've said, but I guess the only answer I can give is all will tell in time. Trust me, I do know how wrong it is for Bella to be doing this, but this is just a story I'm here to tell. Everything will work out, I promise.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Looks That Kill and Coffee Spills
Great start. I am eager to read how this story develops.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Coffee Dances and Weird Romances
I am definitely intrigued. He should break up with Rose if he already feels a connection with Bella. Will they keep their relationship a secret to protect Rose's feelings?
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 08, 2010
Title: Broken Boundaries
I liked Edward's POV. Great chapter. I would like to see Edward break up with Rose because he has these intense feelings for Bella. He pursues Bella. She tries to resist because Rose is so broken hearted over losing Edward. They can't stay away. They try to hide it from Rose. She finds out and Bella almost loses her best friend. ;o) I am looking forward to reading this, no matter how it plays out!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 22, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: My Girlfriend and Her Best Friend
You know when all you can think about it that person. You fantasize about them constantly- in all manners. You think about making love to them, but also, simply holding their hand, or brushing their hair out of their eyes. You simply want to be near them, touching them, seeing them laugh or smile. You miss them constantly when you are apart. Does that help?
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: February 21, 2011
Title: Chapter 5: Humiliation and Awkward Situations
I remember this story! I am glad you are back! I want to know how this all goes down! Great chapter!
Summary:
It's been 25 years after Edward left Bella. Now that the Cullens have reunited with Bella they are suprised to find that she is not running back into their open arms. Instead Bella tells them her story of how her life took a tragic turn after they left.
"Bella, can we just go back to the way things were?" Alice pleaded.
I wouldn't lie to her. "No."
Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No
Word count: 35122
[Report This] Published: November 12, 2009 Updated: July 31, 2010
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: My Alice
I don't know why you are nervous, you are portraying a very detailed and intense storyline. I am truly enjoying it and eager to read more!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: New Acquaintances
I really liked this chapter. I feel like we are really delving into the story now. Basil was ery protective of Bella. I am eager to understand this pull they have. Great update! Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I hope you like the next update.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Vistor
I am definitely intrigued!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Grace
I really am enjoying this story. I don't blame Bella for wanting to keep her distance. They all left her and she has been forced to live on without them. She needs to maintain her life, which doesn't include the Cullens.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: The Cullens
Wow. What a cliffie!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Staying Strong
Bella has really had a rough go of it. Poor thing!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Helpless
Poor Edward. He is heartbroken.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Rosalie vs. Bella
I think it is great that Bella and Rose were able to have such a deep and emotional conversation. Now Bella has bonded with her and Rose can help Bella return to the Cullen Family. Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I'm so glad you like the bond between Bella and Rose. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Curiosity
I am eager for Bella to spend some time really talking with Edward. Doesn't she feel badly for him being so heartbroken? Does she realize what that means?
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: July 31, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Not Fixed
I am really enjoying this story. I find it very intriguing. I am relieved that there will not be an intimate relationship between Bella and Basil, but I do really like Basil. He is just as much a pawn in all of this as Bella, it seems. Basil and Byron remind me of Stephen and Damon from Vampire Diaries. This was a great update. I really enjoyed the scene between Edward and Bella. The connection is still there. THey just have a lot to discuss and deal with before they can truly reconcile.
Summary:  Edward Cullen was a loner, an outcast. He clearly hated everybody, including himself. He was not a nice person. So, why was I so drawn to him? And why did I get the crazy feeling he felt the same way?
WARNING: This story will deal with the aftermath of child abuse and rape. If that bothers you too much, I strongly recommend that you don’t read.
Thanks to steffyxxface for the lovely banner!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 115 Completed: Yes
Word count: 365612
[Report This] Published: November 13, 2009 Updated: July 06, 2011
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71
This was heartbreaking. I know they can do this though. It will be that much better when they are reunited in three days!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 29, 2010
Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73
Good for Bella. I am proud of he for standing up for herself and sending Jake a message!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 11, 2011
Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88
This chapter was SO precious. We have all of this angst and then you give us a moment of pure bliss. I loved this!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: August 26, 2010
Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61
This is heartwrenching. I am so proud of him. He is so strong. THey are both handling everything SO well. I love how they've remained so solid throughout the healing. Excellent chapter!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 07, 2011
Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87
Way to go, Emmett! I'm glad he stoof up and defended his brother. They are getting closer and its nice that Edward is feeling a sense of family with his siblings.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: March 20, 2011
Title: Chapter 99: Chapter 99
Great chapter!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 20, 2010
Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66
Now he knows that Alice has always known the truth, yet treated him with love. His inner circle is getting wider to include his entire family. He is learning that he isn;t alone and that his family will support him no matter what. Great chapter!
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