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Penname: Dulcinea21bella [ Contact]
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Edward’s rebellious period didn’t last a few years; it lasted seventy. A solitary hunter on the fringe of society, he stumbles across a young woman praying. Can he seduce her away from everything she's ever known? And will he be willing to fight for Bella instead of fighting against her?
AU, a bit OOC, canon couples. Rated for lemons, violence and adult subject matter.
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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes
Word count: 129165
[Report This] Published: August 18, 2009 Updated: March 27, 2010
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 The Prodigal Son Returns
Wow. This has the begininngs to an epic story I can't wait to read how it develops and takes shape. Exellent start! Author's Response: Thanks! We'll have to see how it goes but updates coing quickly! Thanks!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Innocence and Ecstasy
I love DarkEdward too. THis is fascinating. I love this version of him!!! Author's Response: Thank you! I think its the combination of strength and vulnerability which is so appealing.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Apologies to Isabella
I was at Disney last week and I can't tell you how thrilling it was to come home and find all of these new chapters. I love this story. It is so captivating. Poor Edward. He is so tortured by his destiny. He needs her so much. I love that last line. "I am coming for you, Isabella. I am so sorry." I love this story. I can't wait to read more. I am eager to find out how this courtship will progress. Will Edward let Bella continue to believe that he is an Angel when he thinks of himself as anything but? Author's Response: Thank you so much! I hope Disney was great, I love going to Orlando. You will see in upcoming chapters how he tries to break out of her skewed vision.
Thank you so much for all the encouragement!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Into The Den of Lions
Wow. This was SOOOO intense. My heart was actually pounding while I read. Way to go, Edward. What a testament to his control, to the strength of his love for her, that he was able to send her away while her blood was flowing freely in the air. His anger, possesiveness, and protectiveness, kept him focused and sane. Instinctually, he wanted to keep her safe. Author's Response: Thanks! You'll get to hear some of Edward's struggle next, Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Choices
Wow. I am left speechless. Edward is so tormented. It is interesting that he has such little regard for human life. He has yet to fully fall in love with Bella. He is so eager to rid her of her humanity, without more than a few words from her. What if she refused him? Would he simply walk away from her? Or would he take her anyway? Hmmm. I am looking forward to his courtship of her. I love it.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Chariot Ride
Wonderful update. Bella had to be shocked. I can't wait to follow where her thoughts are going to take her now..
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Cygnus
Mmmmm. I love this. I love how his humanity is coming through and he has fallen to his knees at her feet. She owns him now. His life is so hauntingly tragic. I love that she can save him, in so many ways. I love it. Author's Response: Thank you so much! Edward sees Isabella as a way to change his life, but this story is different than Twilight, because in SM books it was always about Edwards choice, I'm trying to turn it a bit so its about Bella's choice. We'll see if I pull it off! ;-)
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 The Caged Tiger
I love that Bella is both drawn to him and is afraid of him. I love that she feels his loneliness. They are both searching, lost together. Great update!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 I Will Not Be Denied
Poor Edward. He still doesn't get it. He doesn't value human life like he did in the books. I like this Edward. He's dark adn lonely. Bella signifies salvation for him. She is everything. I love it. Great update!!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Lazarus Rising
I love this story so very much. It is so difficult to only be able to read one chapter at a time. I want to know it all. I am hypnotized. Reading it I can feel the pull between them. I can't wait for that first kiss. Which will happen first? Will Bella know the truth? Will they share that first kiss? I can't wait. Excellent update, as always!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: November 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Raven's Reflection
Poor Edward. He is so lost without her. Bella truly is his salvation. I can't wait for Bella to figure things out, or will he tell her first? Hmmm. He is changing more and more simply be being with her. I love how this story is developing. WOnderful update! Author's Response: Thank you, the news is coming but from an unexpected source...
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: November 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Burning
Dear Lord, I felt that kiss in MY core as well!!! Now we are getting somewhere. He is opening up to her, letting her see more of who is really is. He wants her to really know him. I am thrilled that he kissed her. Her physical response to him had to be obvious. He knows how much she wants him. Edward saving the child was great. He has changed so much, because of Bella. He probably doesn't even realize the depth of it. Brilliant update!!! Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: November 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Pouring Gas on the Fire
I just feel so bad for Edward. He is SO lonely. He needs her so badly... wonderful update!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Fusion
Wow. Breathtaking.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Seeds Of The Whirlwind
Well, that was simply cruel to leave us there until after the New Year!!! What a brilliant chapter! I love that Jake told her the truth. I love that his transformation tied into why he treated her the way he did when he found out she was pregnant. This story has captivated me. I love how Bella has changed Edward for the good. He must be panicking beyond belief now that she knows the truth. He can no longer live without her. Now that she knows, won't she be subjected to the Volturi? After the shock wears off, will she realize that she loves Edward no matter what? I can't wait to read how this all plays out. Wonderful update!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Delivering The Wind
WOw. Excellent chapter. Poor Edward. His future is tied to her heart's. I love it!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Before The Fire
Wow. This was a beautiful chapter. Edward is laid bare before her. He needs her. He can't go on without her. Bella needs him as well. She is still in shock and she's scared. Once she realizes that her feelings for him are still true, hopefully she will want to join him. I can't wait to read more. I love it.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 A Bite To Eat
Oh, poord scared Edward. He needs to be honest with her. She feels the connection, too. He needs to trust in that. I love this story so very much!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: February 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 1743
My heart is breaking for the both of them. I mean really, Bella, what does she really have in her life worth staying human for? Ugh!!! I am intoxicated by this story. I love it!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: February 14, 2010
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 The Nature of Being
Ah, my heart breaks for them. They both want eachother. Edward loves her enought to let her go, is she wishes it. Bella needs to realize that she loves him enough to deny God. Woah, that is a gravity. I love this story.
I hope Bella is able to choose this of her own free will. Excellent update.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: February 21, 2010
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 The Whirlwind
Wow! Tense moments, indeed. I love that Bella is handling herself with such strenghth. Inside. she is freaking out, but outwardly, she is brave. Edward is protecting her with everything he is. I believe he would sacrifice himself to keep her alive. Things are really flying now. I LOVE this story!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: March 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 The Pride of Lions
I am left hanging here. This is tremendously good. I can't wait to read more!!!!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: March 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 This Is My Blood
I am 100% satisfied with Bella's choice. I love that Aro is forcing Edward to be the one to do it. The story is so emotionally gripping. I am completely enamored by it. I am thrilled that they will have eachother for all of eternity. Excellent update!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: March 14, 2010
Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 Gethsemane
Brilliantly written. I love that Edward found himself in church, facing done the crucifix. His anger, his pleading, it was all so powerful and compelling. I am constantly amazed by this story. This was amazing.
Summary: Bella decides to give Professor Cullen a very special lesson of her own.
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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes
Word count: 9097
[Report This] Published: August 18, 2009 Updated: October 01, 2009
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-The Plan
Um, holy hell this is hot. I can't tell you how eager I am read read the next chapter. This is fantastic!
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