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Disillusionment by Bkwrm Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 135]
Summary:

Set in New Moon. A series of betrayals has left Bella bitter and alone.

With the threat of Victoria looming, she takes desperate action to protect herself and the people of Forks; setting off a chain of events that may lead to tragedy.

The Cullens' "perfect family" slowly unravels as long-hidden resentments come to the surface.

What happens when those we love show their feet of clay?

NO RAPE.

Don't own, (I wish I did!) don't sue!


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 14475
[Report This] Published: July 05, 2009 Updated: December 19, 2010


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: July 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow.  This is really intriguing.  I am addicted.  I can't wait to read more.  I think I am going to be hanging on every chapter.  Great update!  More, please!



Author's Response:

Chapter 3 is in the queue. I'm working on 4.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: August 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Grest update!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: August 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Yeah!  Who the fuck is it???????   ARGH!!!!



Author's Response:

You will find out in later chapters.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: August 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

aaaahhhh!  What a tense scene.   I feel all jumpity.  I can;t wait for more!!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Poor Edward.  He has to feel so lost and so guilty....  He also has to be so furious!  Thinking that some human hurt his Bella.  Wow.  Of course he will avenge her.  Then he will join her.  So good.  I love it!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

At least they understand why Bella is so bitter.  Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Yes. Alice and Jasper get it. Will the rest of the Cullens?

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Wow.  The tension is building!  I can't wait for it!!!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Well, Go Bella!  She put Rose in her place!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: March 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Great chapter!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: July 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Wow.  I can't wait to see Edward's reaction to finding Bella alive...

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Ah, what a cliffie!!!!  I can't wait for the next chapter!

 
Summary:

Bella's first french kiss with Edward.


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 947
[Report This] Published: July 06, 2009 Updated: July 19, 2009


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: July 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great job!  I liked this little one shot alot!

 
Simple by SubtlePen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 69]
Summary:

 

When you’re too broken to acknowledge you have a heart,

what do you do when it starts beating?

 

 

Awarded the "Host's Mention" in LolaShoes and tby789's contest, "Love Through Lemons"

 

Simple:  When you are too broken to admit you have a heart, what do you do when it starts beating?

Chapter Two,  Anything But Simple:  How do you read the emotions of someone to refuses to feel them?

 

AU/AH    Mature Content. 

Twilighted Beta:  VJGM       *with gratitude*

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 17455
[Report This] Published: July 08, 2009 Updated: August 19, 2009


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: July 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Simple

HOly Fucking Shit!  You totally Crying Gamed my Ass!  THat was brilliant!  Well done, indeed.

 

Although I would LOOOOOVEEEE  a chapter story like this, only with B/E- since I envisioned it was them almost the entire time!  Great job!



Author's Response:

hah!  'crying gamed' - you know, i've never seen that movie, although i know exactly what its about.  i'm THRILLED that you enjoyed the mystery pov!  i feel kinda bad dumping slash on folks without warning, but i had to do it.  had to.  it was in my head that way all along, it was JxE from the very beginning when i came up with the idea - and it adds another layer to the 'non-simple' outcome. 

there will be a companion one-shot 12K word alt pov in early august...  keep your eyes peeled...  LOTS more info on the development of this relationship....  the contest limited me to 5K words, but the characters weren't done with me after only 5k, so i just rolled with it and came up with 12K more.

 
Dusk to Dawn by willis713 Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 35]
Summary:

Twicon 2009 Top Ten Finalist

The family is throwing Bella and Edward a one hundred year anniversary party. Edward gives Bella a special gift before they go down stairs to meet the guests.  This gift stirs up many wonderful memories. 


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn, TWICON 2009 FINALISTS Characters: Bella, Edward, Renesmee
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3006
[Report This] Published: July 09, 2009 Updated: July 10, 2009


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: July 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Dusk to Dawn

This was such a wonderful insight into their eternal bliss.  What a wonderful oneshot.  I thoroughly enjoyed reading this.  Great job!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review.  I thoroughly enjoyed writing it.  It gave me another Twilight outlet (books, movie, partiies, forum, and writing).  They all got me through my Twilight addiction when I finished reading the saga.  :-)

 
Broken Dawn by thejamster Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

What if Bella had an epiphany before the newborn army came to Forks and decided to take matters into her own hands?  What will protecting her family cost?  This story begins during Eclipse and chronicles a very different ending to a phenomenal saga.

Broken Dawn


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 1805
[Report This] Published: July 12, 2009 Updated: July 16, 2009


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: July 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Epiphany

Great start!

 
Broken by Cinnamint Kitty Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 44]
Summary:

They were the best of friends who promised to stay in touch after graduation. But that all changes when a night of romance turns into something so much more. Now seven years later, they are forced to meet up again. How will everyone react? Will true love prevail? And will they ever learn to be friends again? First AH story.

The above image was created by me. Make me a banner for my story?

The above banner was made by me. Make me a banner for Broken please?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Nessie, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 10215
[Report This] Published: July 13, 2009 Updated: October 28, 2009


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Broken

I am intrigued by this story but I DO have some questions.  Is Edward Nessie's father?  If so, then why would Bella keep her a secret?  If not, then why not tell Edward to move on?  She is stringing him along by not letting him go.  I jst don't understand her motivations...

 
Summary:

Bella is all kinds of trouble, and Renee and Phil have had enough. They send Bella to live with her dad in Forks hoping he can rein her in. Forks is a punishment that Bella would do just about anything to get out of, including find more trouble, with a Cullen.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Charlie, Edward, Emmett
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No Word count: 56065
[Report This] Published: July 13, 2009 Updated: May 14, 2010


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I love that she slept in his bed.  I am so eager for their relationship to blossom.  He is so endearing.  Great update!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Wow.  I just started this story and I am hooked.  I really hope you get through your writers block.  I cannot wait to read how their relationship progresses.  You have set the stage for a wonderful courtship.   Excellent job!!!!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I was out of town and got to read 2 chapters today!  I love this story.  I can't wait for Bella and Edward to get more involved in eachother.  He is so shy, it is endearing!  I love it.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Wow.  Hmmmm.  Bella and her mischevious ways.  But little does she know the power of those sparkling green eyes!  Wonderful update!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I am completely enjoying this story.  I am so eager for Edward and Bella to spend some more quality time together.  I love that they are so drawn to eachother but can't understand why yet.  Great update- I am eager to read more!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

UM, Yay.  Poor Bella.  She doesn't really understand what love is.  SHe was victimized by James.  Hopefully Edward will teach her what it means to truly love another person.  This chapter gave us some great insight into Bella's state of mind.  Maybe now that she and Charlie have opened up to eachother, their bond will have stregthened and they can trust eachother better.  I hope Bella starts to let her walls down.  Great update!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: November 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I am so eager for them to really talk to eachother.  I love this story... I saved reading this chapter until I could sit alone and devote my entire attention to it.  I just get so caught up in it.  I love it.  Excellent update!!!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: November 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I do love Jealousward.  I hope Edward gets the understanding between Emmett and Bella.  Maybe, by some miracle, Bella will somehow be found curled up sleeping next to Edward.  I truly hope so!  Great update!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Poor Bella.  I hope all of this doesnt backfire on her.  Emmett needs to defend her.  Great update!

 




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