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Light of Day by heathcliff Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 197]
Summary:

 

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Edward and Bella finally got what they always wanted: to spend eternity together. Now, their relationship is free to thrive and flourish.  A very canon, very in-character, very romantic exploration of the depth of E&B's relationship as they adjust to their new life-- both Bella's new life as a vampire and Edward's as a husband. Lots of light, fluffy moments balanced by more serious ones.

It's just E&B in the first several chapters, but the rest of the Cullens show up later. The time frame is set during the summer following BD up to Edward and Bella's second wedding anniversary.

If you like canon and in-character, please have a read.

**Nominated for two Moonlight Awards** (Thank you, Serendipitous and None!)

Please vote!  http://themoonlightawards.yolasite.com/

 

 

 


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Nessie, Renesmee, Rosalie
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Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 51645
[Report This] Published: June 26, 2009 Updated: October 03, 2009


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: The Call of the Wild

Wow.  There is such an intensity to their emotions.  I feel surrounded by their love.  It is all encompassing and consuming.  Excellent update.



Author's Response:

Oh, thank you, as always, Dulcinea.  Above all, what you described is what I was going for.  I'm glad it worked!

 
Summary:

Pleasure. Torture. Frustration. Satisfaction. Fulfillment. Desire. Temptation. Set after Breaking Dawn. A day in the life of Edward and Bella. ExB. Smut/Lemons. One-Shot


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4192
[Report This] Published: June 27, 2009 Updated: July 12, 2009


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: July 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Um, this was hot as hell!  So erotic.  I don't blame her for asking for Dominating Edward for her birthday- that's what I want as well!!!

 
Summary:

Edward has put Bella in her place one too many times.  Can she prove to him that she is not the clumsy girl she once was?


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3129
[Report This] Published: June 27, 2009 Updated: July 12, 2009


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: July 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: The Cave

This was so incredibly hot.... yes, I do need to change my panties!  I love raw, primal fucking from these two.  Great job!



Author's Response:

Damn!  Is it wrong that I'm glad you had to change your panties???  Is there any other kind of fucking?? LOL!  Thanks for reading!

 
Summary:

Dr. Edward Masen is a single father of two, a recent widower, and in desperate need of a nanny. Bella Swan just graduated from Penn State University with degrees to become a teacher.  With dreams temporarily on hold, she is literally knocked off her feet by a certain Masen boy, or perhaps two.  After much public begging from them, Bella accepts the job.  Hey, it's not teaching, but a job's a job, and a job means money. What could possibly go wrong?

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Thank you Lou for the fabulous banner! I absolutely LOVE it!


Categories: AU, AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 47494
[Report This] Published: June 27, 2009 Updated: January 04, 2010


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Coffeeshop Soundtrack

This was soooo sweet!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Life is a Party

This was a great chapter.  I love that Bellad and the kids have really established a tight bond.  It is good that Edward is realizing his attraction to Bella and isn't trying to fight it.  He is treading carefully.  I like him alot.  Are they going to talk about the "almost kiss" when she arrived earlier?  I can't wait for more!!! 

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: November 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Kiss Me

I just discovered this story and I am hooked!  I am excited to read how this story develops.  Will Edward try to keep her at arms length?  Will she get discouraged and then turn to somebody else?  Will he be unable to stay away from her?  So many possibilities.  I am really enjoying this!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Watching You

I love that they are all bonding as a family.  Bella's place in all of their hearts is quickly solidifying.  I am eager for more Edward/Bella time.  Does he even realize how he is feeling towards her?  Does he want to pursue a relationship with her or is he hesitant?  Does he suspect her returned feelings?

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Go Girl

Wow.  Hot.  Excellent chapter!  Enjoy your trip!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: I Want a Mom

He called her Mommy?  How freaking sweet is that?  Did his Mom drown. btw?  I guess not.  They wouldn't have a pool party if that were the case.... so he truly thinks of her as a Mom?  Edward's heart musst have melted!!!



Author's Response:

Tanya Masen died in childbrith with Anthony

thanks fr the review

 
Summary:

Edward goes to watch Bella sleep as he does every night, when he spies her doing something naughty. He decides to join in on the fun.


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1696
[Report This] Published: June 28, 2009 Updated: July 12, 2009


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: July 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Random oneshot lemon

Smoking hot!

 
Re-Born by shelbielyncullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 389]
Summary:

 

You said you wanted forever.

You said you wanted me.

You said you'd never leave.

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Set in the perpetually dark times of New Moon and many years beyond, and shedding a new light on the story, Re-Born provides a sick and twisted alternative to what was written by Stephenie Meyer.

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After a terrible accident, Bella is changed into a vampire without her consent. Her transformation sets off an unforseen chain of events that no one is prepared to live with. In the end, some just can't hold on...

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WARNING: This story contains sex, violence, and high amounts of foul language. Not recommended for those with weak stomachs. ALSO, this story is VERY high-energy and VERY fast-paced. If you can't roll with the punches, I suggest reading something else.

-Shelbie Lyn Cullen


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Aro, Athenodora, Bella, Billy, Caius, Carlisle, Carmen, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Eleazar, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Irina, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Kate, Laurent, Marcus, Other Character, Rosalie, Sam, Sulpicia, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 40543
[Report This] Published: June 29, 2009 Updated: December 23, 2009


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: August 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Pressure

I did not see this coming!  I am eager to find out what happens from here.  Great update!



Author's Response:

Thanks mucho for the praise :)

 
Hunting You by Purple Akua Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 182]
Summary:

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Edward’s vigilante days have come a little later in his existence. He lives in solitude, the rest of his family dwelling in Alaska and hunts the truly evil across the US.

Bella knows nothing of the vampire world, and although she was never involved in an icy car accident, she is still a magnet for trouble.

If he had met her alone in a dark alley, say, after saving her from creepy guys in Port Angeles, would it have been different?


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 21246
[Report This] Published: June 29, 2009 Updated: March 23, 2010


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Decisions Made

Wow.  I just read this story for the first time and I am SO addicted to it.  Enjoy your vacation, then come back and write!!!!  I love this!  Poor Edward.  He is so lonely and lost.  Did Alice just have a vision of him falling in love with Bella?  Ahhh, this is soooooo good.  Excellent idea and very well written.  The characters are vey compelling.  I can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!!! I am so glad you're enjoying it, and that you're intrigued!! You'll find out about Alice's vision in the next chapter, which you shouldn't have to wait too long for!! I'm working on it diligently, despite being on vacation. ;) Thanks again for the awesome review!!

 
Summary:

Alice and Bella want what any couple wants, a baby. Bella asks her best friend Edward to contribute to the cause. He agrees but on one condition.  B/A and B/E pairing.  NC-17 for lemons and content.

 

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Thank you christine30974 for this new banner!

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 49873
[Report This] Published: June 29, 2009 Updated: February 02, 2010


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Bed of Roses

Okay, so I have seen this fic but tonight was the first time that I read it.  Holy fucking Hell it is good.  I am completely hooked.  I can't wait to read more!!!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: February 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Finding Bella

Oh, God, what a cliffy.  I love it.  My heart breaks for all three of them, but I want her with Edward so badly...  I am eager to read where they all go from here!

 
Summary:

He loved her so much, even then, that he'd tried his hardest to hold them together. Tried to talk, and when that hadn't worked, he'd tried to keep his mouth shut. To patiently bear her rebuttals and her undeserved scorn, to put up with her insults and her barely-veiled jibes, poking at his manhood, his family, his former and present life - poking holes into the fabric of his very existence until he was brought to his knees under its weight.

He'd tried. But in the end, it hadn't mattered.

She'd left anyway.

 

Banner credit goes to addicttwilight2 - words cannot express how uniquely fabulous she is!

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Categories: Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No Word count: 55326
[Report This] Published: July 01, 2009 Updated: July 25, 2010


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: November 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Helpless

This was so heartfelt and sincere.  Poor Jacob was willing to sacrifice everything for Bella.  It was a profound moment when they let eachother go at the end.  Very well done.  That was a profound moment for Edward, as well, realizing that Bella's heart truly belongs to him- exclusively.  Excellent chapter!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: November 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Return

Brilliant.  I love that she hid the note in their wedding photo.  At last he knows the truth of her feelings for him.  They are reconnecting.  He can trust in her love for him.  Now that they are together forever, in love, they can be thrilled, but they need to figure out why all of this happened this way.  Edward was going to turn Bella himself and that was stolen from them.  They need to find out why.  Great update!!!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: July 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Monster

Wow.  Go Edward!  Go get her!  Poor guy- he's devastated.  There has to be a valid reason.  Edward is Bella's life.  She could never leave him without a reason.....



Author's Response:

*clamps mouth firmly shut* Thank you so much for reviewing again! I know that I'm being a complete ass with the not even giving a slight hint thing but I really want you all to be surprised when you find out her reasons... teehee. Hope you enjoy. xx

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: July 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Blood

Poor Edward.... he has lost his heart, his very soul... how much he needs his Bella!



Author's Response:

He does indeed!! Hehehe... thank you so much for reviewing!! :)

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: July 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Alone

I knew she still loved him.  What could have possibly happened???  I love this story!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!! :)

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: August 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Echo

Holy crap!

Excellent update, although I still have no idea what is really going in.  She still loves Edward, that's good.

I hope that you are alright after your car accident!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reviewing! Delighted you're still reading :)

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: August 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Fire

Wow.  So Aro bit her.... hmmmmm.  What law did Edward break?  Argh!!  Great update!!!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: August 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Lost

NOOOOO!!!!  I felt my gut clench at the end.  Poor Edward.  Will anybody explain to him (and us) WHY she did this???  And what the hell happened to her?  This was a great update.  I get so caught up in your stories!!!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Shadow

He is coming out of shock now.... I can't wait to read more.  What the heck happened to her?  Why can't she remember?  And what happened to Jake?  Great update!!!



Author's Response:

thanks a million! More shortly!! :)

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Reluctance

Holy crap!  I love how this is developing.  I feel so bad for all of them.  They were all pawns... but why?  Her words have to have some effect on him.  I love that she's giving him hope, but that he is so terrified to really hear what she is saying.  He couldn't handle her walking away from him again.  Excellent update.  Things are coming back to her.  I wish she would just grab him and kiss him.  Surely that would bring some more memories to the surface.  I can't wait for more.  Write now!!!  ;o)



Author's Response:

Thanks so so much, so glad you're enjoying the story! :)

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Silence

Wonderful update.  I feel so badly for Edward.  He has suffered so very much.  It must be torture for him to have Bella so engaging with him when he knows she doesn't truly feel that way... or so he thinks.  I can't wait to find out why she acted the way she did.  I love it!

 




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