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Summary:

 

Edward and Jasper are best friends and the sexiest guys at Forks High. They get what and who they want whenever they want it. When clumsy Bella arrives at Forks High and brings something new to the table, Edward and Jasper find they must work together to get what they desire. Some OOC, especially for some characters, but not so much for others. Rated NC-17 for very mature themes and can we say lemons?! later. Takes place during the same time as Twilight.

Collaboration between VoluptuousVamp and Puppymama0909.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Eric, Esme, Jasper, Jessica, Mike, Rosalie
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Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 26571
[Report This] Published: June 15, 2009 Updated: September 08, 2009


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: You Know That She's Watching

I just discovered this story and I am hooked!!!!  Will Emmett warn Bella of what the boys are doing?  Does Bella unerstand she is being seduced?  I love it!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: You Can Smell Her Perfume

Wow.  So hot.  So, is one of them going to really fall in love with her?  Then the real jealousy will begin....

 
Like Night and Day by EllaB Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1272]
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“Three things cannot be long hidden: the sun, the moon, and the truth.”

Alice’s werewolf blindness never allowed her to see Bella’s cliff diving at La Push, so she and the rest of the Cullens continued to stay away from Forks.

Bella struggles with her changing feelings for Jacob, her pain from Edward’s rejection, and her lingering feelings of love for the vampire who broke her heart and disappeared. Will Jacob and Bella find their way to each other and get their chance at happiness? And when a miserable and heartbroken Edward returns to beg Bella for forgiveness, what will she do?

As relationships change, Victoria continues her vendetta.

** Nominated for a Bellie Award for "Best 'Edward Who?' Fic!" **

** Nominated for two Indie Twific Awards for "Best Love Triangle" and "Best New Moon Story!" **

** Like Night and Day placed second in The Wolfpack Awards for "Favorite Jacob" **

Thanks you to catonspeed and the ladies of Altered Lions and Sacrificial Lambs for the new banner and your general awesomeness!

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Leah, Quil, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Victoria
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Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes Word count: 127337
[Report This] Published: June 16, 2009 Updated: July 19, 2010


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: July 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - I Want to Try

 A great start!  I am intrigued!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: July 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - My Only Chance?

Great update!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: July 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - The Funeral

Great update!

 
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THIS STORY HAS BEEN PUT ON HIATUS. At least until september-october 2010. I am getting married in august and it's hard to plan a wedding and write at the same time. I applaud those who can do that. I am NOT giving up on this story and I WILL finish it. Eventually. Thanks for understanding.

After Edward left in New Moon, Bella changed. She changed everything about herself in hopes of forgetting him. She graduated and moved down to California. The one place she knew she would never see the Cullens. 4 years later, she is now known as Elle Swan, a successful interior designer. What happens when she is sent somewhere else for her job?

 

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Favorite review so far:

Ahh... so good!! A perfect mix with fluff and reality, you're soo good at writing that I gets envious *envious sigh*.

Have I told you how good this story and idea really is. There are many different stories where Bella changes her personality drastically after Edward left. And of all those stories I have been reading I think you are the one that has captured Bella's personalty best. Many of the stories have changed Bella that much that if she wasn't namned Bella you shouldn't know it was her, but you, even if you see the big changes, you can find the Bella how she was shy, sweet and madly in love with Edward four years ago. With another words - I think you are the one that have captured Bellas character best.

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
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Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 69614
[Report This] Published: June 17, 2009 Updated: December 27, 2009


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: July 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Great start!  I am very intrigued by this story!



Author's Response:

Hey thanks. I'm glad you like the story. Thanks for the review!

 
Summary:

When his sex fantasy starts following him to class, Edward realizes that sleep deprivation and drug cocktails are not the best way to rid oneself of temptation. He does not remember the first time he saw Bella, only that she was probably on the arm of his lifelong rival, Jasper. He is haunted instead by the figments of her in his bed, on his floor, against the wall of his studio, atop his piano… He is convinced that if he wants to lose the ghost, he needs to seduce the real girl and begins a rather pathetic crusade to win the stranger’s heart.

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Now, the closer Jasper comes to finding out, the closer the truth behind "the feud" threatens to reveal itself and tear their relationship to shreds.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 134153
[Report This] Published: June 18, 2009 Updated: February 05, 2010


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 13, 2010 Title: Screwing Up

I so love this story.  I can't wait for everything to come out. 

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 03, 2010 Title: Screwing Up

Great update.  Sooooo what is the deal with Esme ?  I figure that she may be worried about Edward but she freaked Bella out!!!  Bad, Esmem bad.  I am eager to read that conversation...

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 23, 2009 Title: Screwing Up

Poor Edward.  He is so caught up in her.



Author's Response:

Yup. And he's only going to get worse by indulging his fantasies, but it's the only way if he hopes to get better.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 02, 2010 Title: Screwing Up

Well, shit.  How can I ever watch my kids have piano lessons now....

Excellent update.  I am SO proud of Bella for taking matters in her own hands and seducing Edward.  Clueless Edward when he walked in the room with Emmett was classically funny.  Mmmmmm, my piano man.  I love it!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 06, 2010 Title: Screwing Up

I SO love this.  I hope Edward and Bell progress with their relationship.  I don't understand why Dream Bella is still so prominent in Edward's head.  What is she supposed to represent?  He has her now... 



Author's Response:

EXACTLY! What is she supposed to represent? I mean, she's a manifestation of his subconscious desires, that's true. But that's not what she was originally supposed to be. The hints are everywhere but the revelation won't come till Thanksgiving dinner. Sorry.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Welcome to My World

I am SO intrigued.  I am eager to read how it develops.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 19, 2009 Title: Screwing Up

I am very much enjoying this story!!!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 28, 2009 Title: Screwing Up

Wow.  I know Edward is jealous of Jasper's relationship with Bell but surely knowing that he has a thing with Alice should quiet some of his fears, right?  I am slowing making my way through this story- savoring it.  I love it!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 28, 2009 Title: Screwing Up

Mmmmm, so yummy.  I am eagerly awaiting that kiss!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 28, 2009 Title: Screwing Up

Woah.  This chapter made MY heart beat furiously.  Poor Edward- he mus tbe freaking out!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 28, 2009 Title: Screwing Up

Ahhh, this was HEAVEN!!!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 28, 2009 Title: Screwing Up

I love that they are able to express themselves to eachother now.  They still need to spend some time really getting to know one another.  Excellent chapter!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 28, 2009 Title: Screwing Up

“I’m going to show you the only thing I ever loved, before you.” - Um, woah.  This was Hella Hot!



Author's Response:

That's actually one of my absolute favorite lines. He kind of says he loves her. Kinda doesn't. It's all up in the air!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 28, 2009 Title: Screwing Up

Poor Baby.  I don't like to hear that he has nightmares...

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 28, 2009 Title: Screwing Up

I am happy that Jasper finally fessed up to Bella about Alice.  Hopefully this will ease tensions all around.  I am eager for more Edward/Bella interactions.  Poor Edward, he is still in such denial that Real Bella is, in fact, HIS Real Bella!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 28, 2009 Title: Screwing Up

Okay, I love this.  I am sad to be finally caught up and out of chapters.  My poor Edward.  He is so tortured.  I wish they would just come out with their relationship and move on.  Jasper would have to accept them.  What else could he do- it's Bella's life!  Is Bella falling in love with Edward?  She didn't delve too deeply into her reactions upon hearing him say he loved her.  Yes, he was drugged but surely it had to have an impact on her.  Excellent chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! It was a pleasure to read your reactions and I'm so glad you understand my characters so well. Happy New Year!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 31, 2009 Title: Screwing Up

Wonderful chapter.  I am SO happy that Edward professed his love for her while he was awake.  I am excited for Bella to reciprocate them!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 07, 2010 Title: Screwing Up

I am SO happy for them.  They have crossed the last physical boundary.  Now they have to overcome that Dream Version Girl who keeps hanging around.  And tell Jasper..   One Q, was that sex without a condom???  I love it!!



Author's Response:

They used condoms! No Renesmees in this story.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 15, 2010 Title: Screwing Up

Wow.  Poor Edward.  What is torturing him?  I am eager for Thanksgiving.  He is so lost.  Excellent chapter!

 




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