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Penname: Dulcinea21bella [Contact]
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Summary:

8 years.

8 years could mean a world's difference; a millenium's worth of time, names and faces; a generation apart.

Or 8 years could mean absolutely nothing at all.

AH, BxE (Romance comes when Bella is a little older.)

 

 Credits to readergoof for the awesome banner!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: No Word count: 30592
[Report This] Published: May 14, 2009 Updated: October 05, 2010


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: 15

I really hope that the next chapter picks up in two years time.  I am eager!!!

 
Seduction by blondie Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 85]
Summary:

Chapter 20 from Eclipse (Compromise) from Edward's POV.

Bella was intent on seducing Edward, but somehow he managed to get a ring on her finger.  His side of the story may surprise you - or maybe it won't!

Go get him, Bella!

Written for JAustenlover - she was the winning bidder for my services in the SupportStacie auction.  Be sure and send her some love for requesting this piece, and for her generosity.  Love ya, JAl!

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Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: Totality
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 10184
[Report This] Published: May 18, 2009 Updated: May 18, 2009


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Seduction

This was so very enjoyable.  You did Edward's POV so beautifully.  I was so moved by his intensity towards her.  His love is all encompassing.  I loved this so very much.  It was winderful.  SImply intoxicating. 

 
Summary:

Awesome Banner by Anne Cullen!

Awesome Banner by Anne Cullen!!

 

Edward's POV of Bella's pregnancy, burning and awakening in Breaking Dawn.  Covers all the missing moments with Edward, Bella, Renesmee and the Cullens, and everything that they went through. Starts when Edward and Bella arrive home from Isle Esme and meet the Cullens at the airport. Find out what happened after Bella ran into Rosalie's arms...  

In a fraction of a second, I was at Bella's side, the rest of my family still frozen. I put my hands on Bella's shoulders.

"Let her go, Rose," I said, my voice deadly.  She just stared back at me grimly. I searched her mind, trying to get a hold of her plans.  There was a resolve, a plan to protect the baby at all costs.  And an aching desire she couldn't hide to have that baby as her own....

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Her face was so deathly still, no response.  She was unearthly pale, and there was the slightest blue tinge to her skin, the sky pale at dawn.  As I pressed my lips to hers, they were too cool.  I blew in gently twice, watching her chest rise and fall mechanically. I moved my mouth to her ear as my hands began to move again.

"Come on, Bella, love," I whispered.  "Come on, sweetheart.  I'm right here.  You did it. You've got a healthy baby. She's so beautiful. You were strong enough.  Now it's time for you to come back.  She's waiting.  I'm waiting, love.  I'm waiting for you, always...

 

 


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 191547
[Report This] Published: May 28, 2009 Updated: August 18, 2010


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Motherhood

I just discovered this story and I sm hypnotized by it.  It is so powerful and emotional.  Poor Edward, his guilt and his rage.  I can't wait to read more!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: July 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Pain

Fantastic chapter.  They are so anguished.  I love reading Edward's POV during these gutwrenching few weeks.  You are doing an excellent job with this!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: July 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Intervention

You are doing such an excellent job with this.  It is heartbreaking.  Great update!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: August 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Visitor

Ah, this is so good.  Poor, tortured Edward!

 
Summary:

A real connection can only be denied for so long. Eventually, time has a way of unraveling it all. Romance. Lemons and Fluff - Rob/Kristen - A collection of shorts.

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Categories: Other Characters: Kristen Stewart, Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 8931
[Report This] Published: May 29, 2009 Updated: November 23, 2011


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: November 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: London - November, 2011

This was SO incredibly romantic.  In my mind this just happened between them yesterday!  I truly hope you continue with this.  You write them so beautiful.  They have such chemistry and passion yet still maintain tenderness and need.  I LOVE this!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Italy - May, 2009

Um, Holy Hot as Hell!  This was fantastic.  Continue, PLEASE, continue!  I love it!!!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: July 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: New York - July, 2009

Oh, so very good.  I love these little snippets.  They are romantic and erotic and sensual and just plain HOT.  Excellent job!  I hope inspiration strikes again!!!!  Keep them coming, please!

 
First Time by Viridis73 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 127]
Summary:

Edward & Bella on Isle Esme. Love, lemons and all kinds of awkward. A slightly different take on the wedding night.

 

 


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 5610
[Report This] Published: May 29, 2009 Updated: June 18, 2009


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

LOL.  I am loving this!



Author's Response:

I am so very glad you like it. Thank you for taking the time to read & review.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Wow.  Great update.  Very intense andpassionate.  I can;t wait to read more!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Wow.  Great update.  Very intense andpassionate.  I can;t wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it. One more tiny bit to go and that's it. I appreciate you taking the time to read & review.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Lusty and lovely.  This wwas winderfully erotic!



Author's Response:

I'm very glad you liked it. Thank you so much for taking the time to read & review.

 
Summary:

Bella wakes up from a disturbing nightmare, but fortunately Edward is there to comfort her. Tiny bit of angst, some fluff. 


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 911
[Report This] Published: June 01, 2009 Updated: June 06, 2009


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was a wonderfully tender scene.  It was so very romantic.  Excellent job!!!

 
Irresistible by femme_fatale Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 79]
Summary:

AP English Lit ought to have been a piece of cake for Bella. But then she gets a B on her first paper, and notices that her teacher has the most incredible eyes. It gets harder and harder to concentrate on Faulkner with Mr. Cullen around, he's just... irresistible.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 10441
[Report This] Published: June 04, 2009 Updated: April 11, 2010


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: July 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I am addicted to this.  I love it.  I can't wait to see how they come together.  Do you have any plans to do a few chapters from Edward's POV?  Does he have an interest in her at this point as well?  I love it.



Author's Response:

at this point I'm planning on making the epilogue EPOV, but i think the rest of the actual story will remain BPOV. thanks for the compliment, i really appreciate it.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: August 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I LOVE this story.  I loved the bloodtyping parallels.  I can't wait for their relationship to progress.  It is obvious that their feelings are intense!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: April 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 (vjgm)

Hmmm.  He's trying so hard to resist her.  Hopefully we won't be able to hold out for much longer ;o)

Great chapter!

 
Summary:

Edward plans something beautiful for Bella just as her human frailty begins to rear its ugly head...


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Esme
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 17325
[Report This] Published: June 05, 2009 Updated: July 08, 2009


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: July 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 (N.)

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story.  I wholeheartedly request an epilogue from Edward's POV.  Please do it.  It was so tender and sweet.  These were precious moments shared between them!  Excellent idea and brilliantly written!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your lovely comments.  I think that tenderness and care are often best expressed in times of illness or other distress, so this was a good vehicle in which to explore that.  I am working on a little epilogue now, so please keep checking.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: July 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

This was such a tender scene.  I love how Carlise is taking care of her, tending to her needs.  When he told her that she was family, my heart warmed.  I love that she is snuggled up in Edward's bed.  He is going to freak when he comes home to find her there.  Great update!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  You read the chapter exactly as I intended it to be understood.  I find comfort scenes to be among the most rewarding and enjoyable in any story (and am a bit addicted to both reading and writing them!).  I hope you'll like the final couple of chapters, too. 

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: July 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 (N.)

This is a very precious story.  I am really enjoying it!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I've never had a story described as precious before--how lovely.  I hope you will enjoy the remaining chapters, too!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: July 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 (N.)

They are all taking such good care of her.  Edward will be so happy that his famliy has been caring for her.  He will be so bad that he wasn't there to take care of her himself, but overcome with emotion that she was trying to safe him from the burden and the guilt.  This story is just so tender and heartfelt.  I love it!



Author's Response:

"Tender and heartfelt"--thank you!  That is just what I intended.  I'm so happy that you're enjoying the story, and I hope you'll like the final two chapters just as much.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: July 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 (N.)

This was SO touching.  I love how Bella realized that "the flu" is more frightening to Edward in light of his past... they both are so selfless when it comes to the other!  Excellent update.  I do hope when you finish this story that you write other ones about Bella and Edward's relationship.  You do amazing characterizations of them!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your lovely, encouraging words.  My stories tend to focus pretty heavily on character interactions and relationships, so I think you will see elements of those in anything else that I write.  I'm just thrilled to know that you're enjoying the characterizations.  Thanks again for letting me know! 

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: July 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Epilogue

Seriously this was phenomenal.  Excellent.  You captured the characters with such depth and emotion.  I can't wait to read what you are going to write next! 



Author's Response:

Wow, thanks!  I love exploring characters' emotions, so I am thrilled to know that I succeeded.  With luck, I should have a new story ready in a couple of weeks.  Thanks again!

 
Submission by Crittab Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 22]
Summary:

Edward wonders if he will ever be able to lose control with Bella. He gets his answer.

Rated NC17 for explicit sexual themes. Set after the first movie, before the second one. Within the world of the film.


Categories: Twilight Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1548
[Report This] Published: June 07, 2009 Updated: June 23, 2009


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Submission

Great one shot!!

 
Summary:

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After a fight with her husband, Bella ends up in a bar with her best friend. The path she chooses that night will change every aspect of her life from that moment on.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 49641
[Report This] Published: June 07, 2009 Updated: June 01, 2011


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11:Blowing Up

I just read this story and I am intrigued by it.  I know that Bella is the cheater, but Edward is guiltless.  Sometimes you can't deny true love! 

 




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