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Penname: Dulcinea21bella [ Contact]
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Summary: Edward and Bella have known each other since birth. After one moment at a party just months before their college graduation, Edward sends them on a journey that begins with a little pretending. Where it ends? No one knows. NC-17 for language and sexual content. AH/AU/OCC
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes
Word count: 52003
[Report This] Published: May 03, 2009 Updated: March 24, 2010
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: March 28, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: For All (VJGM)
So sweet!! Great HEA!
Summary:
Wet, slick, sexy, and sweet sweet firsts!
Edward and Bella blow off some pre-wedding steam. Bella blows off something more. Meanwhile, the Quileutes take on the remainder of the Cullens for a rousing superhuman game of water volleyball.
It’s all good, and it’s all plenty!
Canon (mostly), post-Eclipse, Bella and a slippery Edward.
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 8102
[Report This] Published: May 04, 2009 Updated: May 13, 2009
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Good and Plenty
Wow. This was so very erotic. I loved it!
Summary:
"His agony defines him. His memories destroy him.
But his hope is what sustains him, feeds him, encourages him. It's his purpose. And he doesn't deny it.
Offered the chance to leave all pain and misery behind, Edward knew that it was better to suffer his loss than to forget it. For in having it, Bella remains his and only his.
To forget would be the ultimate betrayal, abandoning her once again to a world of lonliness and despair. He had already done that once upon a time, and he did so spectacularly.
He'll find her. He has to.
HE HAS TO."
- icrodriguez (the most beautiful review I have ever received. THANK YOU for allowing me the honour of displaying it here. It sums up the tone of this story beautifully, hearts, Erin)
Left in the woods, an unfortunate run-in with Laurant and 45 years later - Bella finds herself facing everything she has ever wanted. Does it want her back? What will she discover about how Edward has been spending his time...
Rated for later chapters.
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No
Word count: 140624
[Report This] Published: May 06, 2009 Updated: September 22, 2012
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 18: Departed
Yes, I trust you. I trust you implicitly. This was intense and heartbreaking. What an excellent chapter! Now he knows how she felt to have reached that moment of supposed pure bliss only to have it snatched away. I love this story! Author's Response: "Now he knows how she felt to have reached that moment of supposed pure bliss only to have it snatched away."
True story.
Thank you so much, I am blown away by everyones trust and love. Thank you!
Air
xox
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Hope
I am proud of Bella for leaving. She is either going to try and off herself or try to start her life fresh. I want to see Edward jealous. RIdiculously jealous. I feel badly for him because he unilaterally fucked up his existence, but Bella needs to feel like she is on equal ground in order for them to have any shot. I love this story! Author's Response: Oh... You are REALLY going to like where this story is going then..... ;)
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Unforgiven
I am intrigued. I am eager to read more!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 23, 2012
Title: Chapter 24: Lost
I am SO excited for this story to finsh! I have been slaughtered because of this one! The pain and the heartache. I have to say that I am STILL pissed at him. I hope he DOES suffe more. I want her to hurt him. She should take a little enjoyment from this and make him really work for it. I hope she goes into great detail when talking about her relationship with Viktor!!! ;o)
Welcome back! Author's Response: Thank you!
And uh oh...if you think you are slaughtered NOW...well...you may want to quit while you are ahead lol
The next chapter is a doozy.
Good luck,
air
xox
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Alone
I am loving it. I am happy that Bella hasn't been alone all of these years. I can't wait for Edward to run into Bella!!!! Great job!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Immortal
I can't wait until they finally see eachother!!! I love it!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Trembling
WOW. This was intense. I loved his reaction, his words to her. Brilliant. She's a strong girl now, though, and he's not prepared for her reactions to him. I can't wait to read more! Great update!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Restraint
Wow. What a wonderful update. They are both suffering so much! I can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: July 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Touch Me
Oh for the love of all that is holy, please let Edward still be a virgin. I cannot stomach him loving Bella so abundantly and giving himself to another. He would have stayed true to his heart, right? No matter what. Ugh, I have anxiety. Please update soon!!! Author's Response: A virgin... really???? Uhm.... that would be a really shitty ETERNITY, no? I mean, technically, he thought he walked away from Bella FOREVER, right.... Ok now I am just giving away too much of chpt 7. You'll just have to keep reading ;)
Air
xox
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Unforgiven
Your comment on my review about the appearance of Jealousward seriously made me squeal in anticipation. He SO has it coming. I can't wait for him to swallow it!!!!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 08, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: Ready
I am eagerly awaiting her reaction to finding out that he has searched the globe for her. I am just still so mad at him.... I love this story!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Love Me
Okay, I have been fearful of this chapter since the last one..... petrified of the whole Tanya thing. Reading Edward's POV has made me back away from the ledge... I am still devastated over Edward's actions, just hurt adn betrayed- I definite sympathize with Bella. Is it wrong that I want Bella to have sex, too, to get even with him???? He has to work for it now.... Her heart is closed. Even better, indifferent. Done with him. Now she is released of his hold on her... God, I feel so affected by this story. I love it. Simply LOVE IT!!! Author's Response: OMG I love how passionate you are abou tthis lil story. Thats AWESOME! And no it isnt bad that you want Bella to go out and get her some... ar eyou on Twitter? Do you know Moon and UC and LTT "THATS NORMAL" <------------ if not than none of that makes sense.... sorry lmao.
Basically, yeah, this is what we all want. Bella will run and she will find whatever she needs to put herself back together, yet again. Poor B.
I love that you love it so much!! Thank you!!
Air
xox
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Help Me
I was so excited to see this story updated. I always feel like I am emotionally drained when I finish reading this story. It is like the adrenaline can slow down. I just feel so emotionally involved with these characters. I mean, I felt incredibly devastated by Edward's actions- the same as Bella. I don't fault Bella for running at all. I want Edward to have to work for it- hard. I can't wait to read more. I seriously love it!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: November 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Leave Me
Wonderful update. I don't blame Bella at all. Her reaction is justified for certain. I hope she finds some peace and some happiness. Edward needs to work for this one. I can't imagine a reason that would nullify his actions. He slept with Tanya. I don't care whether he was lonely or whatnot. He did it. Fine. It is his life. But I don't want to hear that he has always only loved Bella.. blah, blah, blah. NOT GOOD ENOUGH. He put Bella in a humiliating situation. He has to earn her back. I love this story. I was a little nauseated there for a little while... but now I am on board. Riled up and on board. I love it! Oh, and I am SOOO appreciative of the more frequent updates. You are saving my sanity with that! ;o) Author's Response: HAHAHA thanks for the review, and the, uhm, honesty. HEHE. And yeh, updates are back on track now that the entire story has been outlined thoroughly, that was the hold up before. I needed to have it all planned out.... and now that it is, fuck I am excited!
thanks
air
xox
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Find Me
I feel badly for Edward, I really do, BUT I am also still pissed as hell at him. I want Bella to have a little fun, live a little. Is it wrong that I want him begging??? ;o)
I love it! Author's Response: You and me both baby! This boy needs to be on his knees if you ask me.... Here's hoping Bella asks ;) Thanks for the review! Air xox
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 23, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Set
This was SOOO good. I am so eager to read what our dear Bella has been up to! I can't wait!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: February 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: No
You know that I literally jump when I get the e-mail update for this story. I am completely on board with Bella having moved on. She needed to be on equal footing with Edward. Now it is time for Edward to prove his feelings to her. She needs to know that he hasn't stopped searching for her. I'd like to see him on his knees.... ;o)
God, I am such an addict to this story!!!!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 21: Stay
This was beautiful!!! My heart breaks for both them. THey have both endured so much pain and separation. I am still angry at him, but, I want them back together. I LOVE this story!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: March 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: Bella
I feel like we are teetering on the edge here.... I am SO ready to jump!! I can't wait! Author's Response: ME TOO!!!!! *reaches for your hand*
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: April 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: Shattered
Wow . This was so incredibly intense!!!! Holy shit!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 19: A Sign of Life
It is about time, Edward. He SO caused all of this. Now he needs to pull out the big guns and win her back. I am just happy that he has to face the rejection and the jealousy that he instilled in Bella all of those years ago. I love it!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: August 08, 2010
Title: Chapter 20: Haunting
This is SO intense. I love it. THey have both suffered so much. THey need eachother now. This was a briliant insight into Bella's mind.
Summary:
This takes place in New Moon toward the end of Chapter 16. Bella has just been saved by Jacob from nearly drowning and he’s taking her home. Imagine if Bella had the courage to make the choice she was afraid to make. That instead of just thinking of the words she wanted to tell Jacob she actually said them.
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Jacob, Jared, Quil, Sam
Challenges: Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 9 Completed: No
Word count: 20855
[Report This] Published: May 07, 2009 Updated: September 09, 2010
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
I am definitely intrigued! Great start!
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