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Penname: Dulcinea21bella [ Contact]
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Summary:
Bella is soul-searching at a quiet lodge in Forks and she meets the secretive, tormented Edward Masen. Just as their relationship transcends friendship, Edward’s past comes back to haunt him in the most brutal way. B&E are human, but oh…there will be vampires. AU.
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 36 Completed: No
Word count: 291742
[Report This] Published: April 16, 2009 Updated: April 21, 2011
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The Green Mile
I really like it. A lot. I am so intrigued by what is happening here. The mystery of it all I can't wait to read more! Author's Response: Thank you, I'm thrilled that you like it :) I'm glad that it sounds mysterious... that's what I was going for (obviously, everyone tells me I'm making it cryptic as hell) but that's the way I roll ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing, darlin', it makes my day!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 31, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Green Eggs of Jealousy
I love their relationship. I am so into this! Author's Response: Thank you :) Makes me happy to hear! Thanks for reviewing, hon!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Double Vision
Wow. I didn't see this coming and it was a surprise for certain. The story is really starting unfold now. I can't wait to read more. I love that the connections between them is so evident to bystanders. I love it!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Memories, Mitigation, and Morphine
Hmmmm, great chapter. I am more and more intrigued. So, Carlisle is a vampire but somehow Edward is human- but Carlisle knows him? Is that right? I can't wait to find out more!!!!!!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: July 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Pillow Talk
Wow. Edward is an enigma, he is so very fascinating. I am so captivated by this story... it is so intriguing. I can't wait to learn about Edward's mysterious past. Great update!!!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: August 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Stinging Shades of Grey
Poor Edward. He is so tormented and guilt ridden. But he acted on instinct and self preservation. I am eager for them to take the next step forward... kissing, perhaps? Some sort of declaration between them. When will these walls come down? I love this story. I am so captivated by the characters. I am SO enjoying it.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Countdown
Soooo sad. I feel so bad for both of them. They both feel like they have only cause the other more harm. I want more!!!! Great update!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Sunlight and Speckled Insight
I am thrilled that he stayed and gave her some insight into his feelings for her. Poor Edward. He is so tortured. I love this story. I feel so invested in the characters. I can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Clinging to Life
Wow, Poor Edward. I feel so bad for everything he has lived through. He deserves some happiness in his life. They keep getting closer and closer, he just needs to give in to his feelings for her. Kiss her, damn it!!! Excellent update and too funny about the Starbucks story!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: SoCo, and Oh, So Close
Well, this chapter definitely had some extreme highs and lows. WTF is going on with Edward? What is he hiding? He's trying to shield her from something! This story is epic. I fall more and more under its spell with each new chapter. At least now we know that Edward does, in fact have romantic feelings for Bella. I love it! Excellent update!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: November 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Blame Takes Two Shapes
Brilliant update, As always. Poor Edward. He is so tortured. Surely he must know how deeply Bella is invested in him, maybe not. She needs him. He needs her. Neither one of them truly understands the depth of that need. Sooo, Edward is searching for a murderer who is assumes is human. That seems to be a deadly assumption, huh? Interesting development. I can't wait to read more! I am eager to find out what Bella has planned to implement as her grand master idea to save Edward. I love it!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: November 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: How Deep the Bullet Lies
This was heartbreaking. Poor Bella. She has endured so much for him. How can he walk away from her like that? Why? He has a chance for a future with a lovely girl who is crazy about him and he is throwing it away... I can't wait to read more!!!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Aftershocks
I love it. Yes, of course, I miss Edward. This felt transitional, of sorts. She needs to have her journey while he is having his. I can't wait for him to return!!! I love this story!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Whispers and Wanting
This was brilliantly written, as always. That dream was haunting. I love that he called her... I am so caught up in this mystery. What happened to him? How could he get to Forks from Chicago so fast? I am a little bit freaking out here... Amazing chapter!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Crushing Blows, Velvet, & Stone Pt. 1
Well, I am thrilled that I waited to read this chapter because the next part has been posted. I am so hypnotized by Edward. No wonder Bella can't resist him- those EYES!!!! I enjoyed her reaction to Jessica and I am proud that she is standing up to Edward. I love it!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Crushing Blows, Velvet, & Stone Pt. 2
Wow. Well, okay, I wish you hadn't have ended the chapter there but it was a remarkable update. I loved Bella's realization in the diner. Edward is very trigger shy and is balancing on the edge of a knife. He is skiddish and doesn't know what, or who, he can really count on to be constant in his life. He is secure in being alone, but not happy. He has some thick walls but hopefully Bella will be able to burst through them now. Excellent update!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: February 08, 2010
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Cordial Confessions & Familiar Fire
God, I LOVE this story. Bella's internal musing are so endearing. She is so llikable. Their relationship, and their journey to this point, has been so full of starts and stops. I feel like we finally can understand the depth of Edward's darkness and why he tried to hard not to swallow Bella in his continued spiral into despair. She truly saved him in every sense of the word. I hope that we get to see more of their relationship, now that they seem able to move towards the light. Edward has suffered so much and he deserves some happiness. I am excited to see Edward smiling again!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: April 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: The Difference a Day Makes
This was a great chapter. I have missed these guys. The supernatural is all around them. I am just thrilled that they can spend some time simply being happy together.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 27, 2010
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Eggshells & Grand Scales Pt. 1
Poor kids. THey have undergone so much in such a short amount of time. I wish they would lose some of their restraint and let some more passion flow. I hope they intend to sleep in eachother's arms every night. How can they backtrack now? Brilliant chapter, as always!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Eggshells & Grand Scales Pt. 2
This was wonderful. I love that they were finally able to open up their physical intimacy. Hopefully now they will be more open about their feelings. Great chapter!
Summary: We've all turned the pages on the four blank months in New Moon. Edward left Bella in the woods and told her didn't want her anymore; his arrogance expected that she would just move on with her life. What he never expected was that she wouldn't be able to move on any more than he would. An angry Bella is something he couldn't fathom. What he didn't take into account is that Bella believes that true love is worth fighting for, and she's going to fight to keep Edward and her family. The Cullen abandonment hurt her deeply, but she's turned that pain into rage. What will happen when Bella decides to let them know she's not willing to let them walk away and leave her behind? How will they handle one mere human girl that's extremely pissed off, and willing to do whatever takes to bring them back? The saying "hell hath no fury like a woman scorned" has never rang more true. Bella's angry and on the warpath. Not even a clan of vampires will be able to stop her.
"My heart may have fractured when he left me, but I adamantly refuse to let it shatter. I'm stronger than that, and I'm ready to get nasty. This is going to be a side your family has never seen out of me. I hope you're prepared, because when I'm done taking your stupid, arrogant brother down a few notches, I'm coming after you. Yes, you heard me correctly. You may be small, fast, and graceful, but I'm filled with enough rage at this point to go vampire on your pixie, ballerina ass!" ~Bella - Chapter 2: Voicemails
Special Thanks to achelle131 for the amazing banner!
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Laurent, Quil, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges: Series: The Dirty, Horny Girls Chronicles
Chapters: 30 Completed: No
Word count: 225614
[Report This] Published: April 16, 2009 Updated: October 25, 2010
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: April 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Pendulum
I am definitely intrigued by this and eager to read how it develops! Author's Response: Thanks for reading and leaving a review. They mean a lot.
Much love,
~Lisa
Summary: It's another boring, Summer day in Forks, Washington. Everyone seems to be entertained aside from Bella. What will she do to alleviate some of that monotony?
Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 2303
[Report This] Published: April 17, 2009 Updated: April 19, 2009
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: April 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
This was so sweet! Great snipet!
Summary: "Do you have any idea how close I came to crossing the line today?" How close was it? What went through Edward's mind when Bella went to La Push and how does he come to terms with her visits? An emotional Eclipse missing moment from Edward's POV!
Categories: Eclipse Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Jasper
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes
Word count: 6173
[Report This] Published: April 17, 2009 Updated: June 01, 2009
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: July 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
I really enjoyed theses four chapters. They were brilliant insight into Edward's mind. The poor guy, he was so tortured and worried about her. This was very well done. I loved it!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: April 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed this chapter. It is a wonderful insight into Edward's POV during this stressful time for him. I am so excited that you are contining it. I am looking forward to the next chapters!!! Great job.
Summary:  AU version of the "New Moon" reunion scene. Bella is not quite as quick to accept Edward's explanation for his actions in leaving her.
Banner credit goes to addicttwilight2, who is the most awesome person on the planet!!
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes
Word count: 45075
[Report This] Published: April 18, 2009 Updated: June 30, 2009
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Sorrow
Holy shit! Reading this story actually gives me butterflies and makes me break out into a sweat. I am always left wanting more. It is so very intense and the emotional climate is so heightened. How freaking romantic is he!! Dear Lord, you are a goddess for writing this.... Author's Response: I am so very very very happy that you enjoyed this!!!!!! :) You're the best. x
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