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Summary: 
Nominated for Indie TwiFic Award. Thank you all!!!
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Also: nominated for the Immortal Cookie Award. Many thanks to those who nominated it. Further submissions and voting can be found on www.immortalcookieawards.moonfruit.com.
Thank you again!!***
Edward, Bella and Alice face the Volturi in Italy and are not prepared for the test which Aro places upon Bella. Edward must now decide what he will do when he risks losing her again.
However, when a menacing creature decides to take on the entire Cullen family, will Edward ultimately have any control over Bella's destiny?
Welcome to all my Newest readers!!! Thanks for reading and for all your reviews!
Categories: New Moon Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No
Word count: 58508
[Report This] Published: March 11, 2009 Updated: June 29, 2009
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: March 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Wow. This story is so intense. I feel emotionally exhausted after reading it. Poor Edward. I loved the way he asked her not to force his hand.... I can't wait to read more!!! Author's Response: Yes, I wanted them to have some special time, before it was too late. Thanks! Debra
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: April 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Wow. This is so freaking intense. Please update soon!!! I love it! Author's Response: Thanks!! I'm so glad you are enjoying it and mostly, that my story is coming across like I hope for it to. Keep reading, more twists and turns to come. Debra
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: April 07, 2009
Title: Good-bye Too Soon
Great update!!!! I can't wait for more. I am so intrigued by this story. Author's Response: Thank you, thank you. I'm so glad you're still enjoying it. Debra
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Wow. Very intense! I want more! Author's Response: Darn good thing, since more is coming, lol. Thanks! Debra
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Well, YES, he should change her. He can't just let her go!! Author's Response: We don't want to lose Bella, but I think it will now be out of Edwards hands, if he will allow others to help. Thanks for the review! Debra
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Wow. I did not see that coming! Author's Response: LOL, I think i surprised a lot of readers. Thats kinda fun, lol. Thanks for reviewing for me. Debra
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Wow. I am so focused on Bella and Edward, my vote is to keep with them right now. Poor Edward. He has to be so scared and confused. He just got her back. Well, I mean, they haven't even been able to talk about the past few months. She has to still be concerned that he will leave her again. I feel like they need to have some time to themselves to reestablish their ties. Rebuild some trust between them. This chapter was intense. It was excellent! Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yes, they need the time, but Charlie will at least to attempt to interfere with that. But our other two gals are in trouble and that is stil the tie that binds them all together. Much more to come. Debra
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Well, Possessiveward Does kind of have it coming.... he needs to get used to her being a little bit more independant. I do love him jealous, and possessive. I can't wait! Author's Response: First, he's gonna have a rude awakening, just wait...lol Debra
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
I think Bella is reacting the way she should. Edward does need to own up to his actions of abandoning her. He has a lot of work ahead of him to earn her trust back. He needs to assure her of his devotion and commitment. I am enjoying this story so very much. Great job!! Author's Response: Yes, there will be some trust earning coming up. It's gonna kill our Edward, as he learns about Jacobs. Let the angst and drama continue, lol. Debra
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
I do so love this storyline. I am so emotionally involved with alll of the characters and can really understand their pain. You are doing a remarkable job and I am very much enjoying this journey! Author's Response: Thank you so much, that is such a compliment. I know what its like to get invested in the characters of a story. I only hoped that mine would work as well. There is much more to come :) Debra
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Wow. This was intense. Charlie is going to freak, but I am glad Edward wouldn't leave her. They still have so much to discuss between them! I love this! Author's Response: You're right. No matter what happens, I think Edward should have been there with her, to help her through the dreams. Much more to come. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. Debra
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Poor Bella, she has to be so confused and overwhelmed. I can't imagine what they are going to tell Charlie, but I doubt that Edward will be leaving Bella's side for even a moment after this dream/trance/astral travel incident. He is so fiercly protective of her. This was a great update!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Poor Bella, she has to be so confused and overwhelmed. I can't imagine what they are going to tell Charlie, but I doubt that Edward will be leaving Bella's side for even a moment after this dream/trance/astral travel incident. He is so fiercly protective of her. This was a great update! Author's Response: Thank you so much. They all have so much to say, the worst part is figuring out who gets to talk next. Thanks again. Debra
Summary: My perception of what might have been going through Edwards head as Bella awoke as a vampire.
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 528
[Report This] Published: March 11, 2009 Updated: March 15, 2009
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: March 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: one shot
You did a great job! This was a nice read. Author's Response: Thankyou!
Its lovely to see how encouraging and supportive ppl on this site are!
:-)
xxx
Summary: 
NOW COMPLETE! We all wailed a collective 'ugh!' on the fade to black scenes during Edward and Bella's honeymoon, not to mention the frustratingly limited Jacob POV. This canon story fills in all the holes that were left by SM -- mostly from Edward's detailed POV.
Enjoy a captivating look at the romance, emotions, music and imagery of Bella & Edward's honeymoon, the struggles of the pregnancy, the bliss over Edward hearing the unborn child's mind, the harrowing birth, and finally Edward's joy as he bonds with Nessie during Bella's transformation.
Banner by the talented m81170
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Nessie, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes
Word count: 96645
[Report This] Published: March 12, 2009 Updated: December 29, 2011
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: March 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Forbidden Love
This was a great take od Edward's POV. I am excited to read the next chapter. Great job! Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to comment. Right now the story is 3 chapters long. The next 2 (waiting for approval) are in Bella's POV, but I am considering writing a 4th in Edward's POV (but it would be kind of dark), not sure if I want to mess with my happy ending in Ch. 3!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: March 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Expectations
I like how the tension is building between them. Great update! I am ager for Chapter 3!!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: April 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Finally
Oh, please stay. You write so romantic, so warm. I am so enjoying this.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: April 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Consequences
I loved this so very much!!!
Summary: This is a canon piece that illustrates Edward's point of view as Alice gives Bella her 19th birthday gift of the cottage that the Cullens renovated.
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes
Word count: 8700
[Report This] Published: March 13, 2009 Updated: March 28, 2009
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: March 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Cottage
Wow. This was wonderful. It was erotic and sensual. I would love to read yoru version of the rest of the night. I loved how he was able to get a glimpse into her mind. That was brilliant. Well done!!!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: March 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - The Garden - Edward's POV of Chap. 24 in BD
I simply love this!
Summary: This is a series of missing moments from Breaking Dawn, starting with the wedding night at Isle Esme.
Will include Edward's POV when Bella realizes she's pregnant, and many other scenes that we missed during 'Book 2' - Jacob's perspective. Most chapters will be Edward POV, but some will be Bella POV as well.
***PLEASE NOTE: This story is on a temporary hiatus until I've completed my other multichaptered fic, In Pursuit of Normalcy. I apologize for the inconvenience, but I encourage all my readers to check out IPoN.***
Thank you so much to achelle131 for the gorgeous banner!
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: The Dirty, Horny Girls Chronicles
Chapters: 7 Completed: No
Word count: 38973
[Report This] Published: March 14, 2009 Updated: May 27, 2009
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: March 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Isle Esme
Wow. This was very erotic and extremely sensual. You did an excellent job with this scene. I know Isle Esme is done a lot but I have to admit that your version is a quick favorite. You truly captured the characters and painted a romantic and passionate scene. I loved it. I can't wait to read more! Author's Response: Thank you so very much! As always, your comments are highly appreciated. :) I'll have chapter two in queue for validation very soon!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: March 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Isle Esme II
Excellent chapter. I, for one, LOVE dirty talking Edward. I don't think it is OOC at all. I agree that he's got a lot of pent up passion and he's eager to release it all. He just needs to feel like it is alright for him to do so! I can't wait to read more!! Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you agree, lol! ;)
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: March 31, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Practice Makes Perfect
I am so enjoying this story. You are doing a wonderful job. I love reading about how they ara exploring each other! I can't wait for more! Author's Response: Yay, I'm glad you're liking it! ;)
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: April 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: The Unforeseen
What a wonderful update. This was so very intense! Author's Response: As always, thank you very much! ;)
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Desperation
What an excellent update. This was so emotional. I loved the sexual need Bella still feels for Edward, and his self loathing, yet instinctual sexual need for her as well. Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it! ;)
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