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Summary:

Edward Cullen, graduate student and Biology instructor, has a wild night with a beautiful stranger, and becomes obsessed.  Bella Swan, his student, has a crush on her teacher...  Things aren't always what they seem,and people look different in the light of day.


NC-17 for lemons, mature themes.  Canon pairings ... kinda.


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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jane, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Laurent, Mike, Rosalie, Victoria
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Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: No Word count: 75384
[Report This] Published: March 03, 2009 Updated: June 27, 2009


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20. Lost and Found

Um, Wow.  This was amazing!  AMAZING!  I actually felt the butterflies while reading the scene in Edward's car.  I cannot wait for more.  I am hopelessly addicted to this story.  Fantastic update!!!

 
Summary:

Bella and Edward just returned from Volterra. What will Edward do to assure Bella that he is hers, always and forever?

Storyline based off of a song entitled Blush by Ben Lee.


Categories: New Moon Characters: Edward
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Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 7306
[Report This] Published: March 04, 2009 Updated: May 18, 2009


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: March 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh this was so very erotic.  I don hope you are going to continue with this scene.  You are doing a wonderful job with it!



Author's Response:

I tried my best to make it as such. However, I don't think I'll continue it. I like it as it is...but I will never say never. I do have some ideas for more...

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this.  I do hope you continue.  It was so beautiful.

 
Summary:

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She got what she wanted. My venom flows through her bloodstream, changing her, reshaping her from a human to a vampire. Soon, that transformation will be complete. And I'll be able to keep her forever.

I am the most selfish creature that has ever walked this earth.

Edward's point of view in "Breaking Dawn", beginning with Book Three.

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Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Edward
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Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 250382
[Report This] Published: March 05, 2009 Updated: November 29, 2009


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: April 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Irresistible

The depth of your writing is so very intense.  I am completely immensed into the characters.   You write beautifully.  Excellent job!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: March 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: First Hunt

I am so very happy that you are writing this story.  I love reading Edward's POV.  You are doing an excellent job and I am eagerly awaiting more!!! 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

I love reading Edward's point of view, too - almost as much as I love writing it. The next chapter "Promised" is up, so I hope you'll continue reading and let me know what you think.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: March 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Promised

Excellent chapter!  I loved Edward's thoughts during the confrontation with Jake.  I can't wait to read more!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

The scene with Jacob was so much fun to write. Obviously, I'm a member of Team Edward – but through writing this story, I think I've come to a better understanding of Jacob's character.

The next chapter should be posted soon.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: March 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Favor

You are doing such an excellent job of capturing their insights.  I am enjoying this so incredibly much.  It is brilliantly written!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!

I hope that you continue to enjoy it, and that my muse continues to inspire me. :)

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: March 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: My Star

So freaking good.  Wonderful insights.  I love Edward's POV!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: April 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Talented

I just love it. 



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Thank you!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Declared

This was so wonderful!  The emotions are so very intense.  It is all encompassing.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

 
Switched by blue2185 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 368]
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Edward takes Bella to the carnival for the first time in her life. They play games and he wins her a teddy bear. Bella thinks it would be fun to go see a gypsy palm reader; Edward thinks it’s not such a good idea because of Alice . Bella drags him to the tent and they are greeted by Lady Zafrina. Edward excuses himself and goes outside. Bella apologizes to the gypsy and says they will be right back. Once outside, Edward yells at Bella. The gypsy hears everything and invites them in, promising nothing bad will happen. Frustrated Edward goes in and sits down. The gypsy has a plan that will help these two “walk in each others shoes” to understand one another more then they will ever know. Some OOC after the switch.

 

 

This story is Co-authored by JMCullen


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 57870
[Report This] Published: March 05, 2009 Updated: December 30, 2009


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: March 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: That Darn Pixie

I am intrigued by the premise and eager to read how this story develops.  Its a great start!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I love writing it.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: March 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Carnival

Great update! 

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: March 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Boys will be boys

Cute! Nice update!

 
Fall For You by Live720 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 672]
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Banner made my the wonderful, my hubby is no edward.

 

What if Bella never jumped off that cliff?  This story picks up from that part in New Moon.  It gives Jacob his chance, finally.  If Edward decides to come back, who will Bella choose?  Who is Cole and what are his motives? Bella/Jacob and Bella/Edward

 

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob, Other Character
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Completed: Yes Word count: 128687
[Report This] Published: March 10, 2009 Updated: October 12, 2009


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: March 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: A New Kind of Love

Great start.  I am excited to read how this story develops!



Author's Response:

Thanks for sharing your thoughts! :-)

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: March 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Promise

Great update!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: April 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Start of Something New

ARGH!  Cliffy!!  Great update.  I hope you update soon, I am eager to see how this "vampire" is...

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: April 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Awakening

Great update!!!!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: April 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Jacob, My Jacob

Great  update.  I am really enjoying this story.  I actually LIKE Jacob.... but he's no Edward!!!



Author's Response:

I loooooove Jacob! But, I'll have to agree with you that he most definitely is no Edward.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Why Do You Do This to Me

Great update!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: A Twist in my Story

I am happy she is able to have some happiness with Jacob but her heart still belongs to Edward, ultimately, right???  I am very much enjoying this.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Going Too Far

Great update.  I have to admit, although I am adoring Jacob in this story, the fact that Bella wants to pursue the physical aspect of that relationship is a bit disturbing.  I know she loves him... but she has experienced the Ultimate True Love, how can she just settle?  Is that really fair to Jacob? And meanwhile, Edward is alone, thinking only of her,  It breaks my heart.  I am really enjoying this story.  I am eager for more!



Author's Response:

I can understand your concerns.  Bella will NOT be just forgetting about Edward, I assure you.  In the entire 34 chapters that I have written he remains very much a part of her.  However, with that said, that doesn't mean that she can't find happiness and love with wonderful, sweet Jacob.  This is ultimately a Bella/Jacob story, but Edward is not going to be out of the picture.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: No More Secrets

Poor Edward.  He is off moping in a pit of despair over having left his heart back in Forks and she has no idea....



Author's Response:

I know! Poor fellow!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: The New Guy

Wow.  I love it!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: The New Guy

Wow.  I love it!



Author's Response:

:-) Thanks!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Twisted Grin

So far I am SO intrigued by Cole.  I am THRILLED that Edward is finally back in the picture.  Jake is going to freak!!



Author's Response:

So glad you're intrigued with Cole! I already submitted the next chapter for validation so it should be up soon!

 




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