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Dark Side of the Moon banner

Thanks Roo, for the amazing banner! 

And more keep coming in!  Thanks to m81170 for this lovely piece of art:

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Here's another amazing pic that fits in with Dark Side of the Moon perfectly -thank you to JohannaL for ID'ing the author:  http://smirks-works.livejournal.com/ check out her (I assume) other manips - she's a genius!

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Updated November, 2009

This story is now COMPLETE!

Dark Side of the Moon is my version of New Moon from Edward’s point of view.  Witness how Edward agonized over leaving Bella, hunted for Victoria, faced the Volturi, and came to realize that with Bella was where he was meant to be. 

This tormented story has been a part of my life for about a year and a half – and what a ride it’s been!  Meant to be canon and in character, I hope you enjoy angsty Edward and his suffering during New Moon.  As unhappy as Bella was during this time, Edward suffered so much more (I think).  So be sure and crack open a fresh box of tissues before reading!

 Thank you to everyone for all the reviews, especially to those of you who reviewed each and every chapter!  Your support and loyalty have been the driving force to me getting this project finished – and I hope it’s lived up to all of your expectations.

Love you all,

blondieakarobin

PS.  As one last thank you, I’ve posted a formatted, printable copy of Dark Side of the Moon at http://bit.ly/2vLHMi, as will also post as an electronic version suitable for viewing on a kindle or MobiReader.  I’m also posting a ‘Director’s Cut’ that includes citations of all of Bella’s quotes from Twilight, research notes, and even funny comments from my betas in this version in the same directory.

blondie

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

Use of the dialog from the series is just for clarity - Stephenie Meyer owns all things twilight!  I'm making absolutely nothing from this work.


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes Word count: 163080
[Report This] Published: May 09, 2008 Updated: February 26, 2010


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: Distraction

Excellent!  Great update.  Poor Edward!!!!!

Author's Response:

8-)  Thanks!

blondie

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 15, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: Trick or Treat

Wow.  This story is so very intense.  I am overcome with grief when I read it.  Poor Edward.  He suffers so much,  Its amazing how much pain he is willing to endure to give Bella a normal human life.  I can't imagine what kind of sad place you have to put yourself in just to write all of this.  Its just so dark.  You are doing a tremendously amazing job with this story.  I can't wait to read the rest of it.  At least I know it will have a happy ending!  Great job!

Author's Response:

I re-read MS quite a bit, and the one outtake that SM wrote from NM...and a lot of twilight.  Believe it or not, I'm actually a pretty happy person...  I guess I just have a very dark side... 8-)

Thankfully I write fast, so I don't have to dwell in these depth for long periods of time.  And yes, there will be a happy ending (thank goodness!)

Thanks for reading, and for suffering with me 8-)

blondie

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Black Friday

Its been a while- I was thrilled to find an update.  Poor, tortured Edward.  If onlyhe couls see how truly good he is..... Ic an't wait for Volterra... great job!



Author's Response:

Yes, Edward doesn't see himself any better than Bella sees herself at times.  Sorry for the delay, but holidays and all had us all busy!

Happy 2009!

blondie

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Awake

Wow.  I LOVE this.  I can't wait to read what else is going through his mind....

 
Agape by websandwhiskers Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary: A conversation between Bella and Esme, on the subjects of marriage and religion and vampirism - Bella's having more difficulty than she expected adjusting to being a vampire, and Edward's not taking it well. There's Bella/Edward angst and Carlisle/Esme fluff, though neither of the guys actually appears in the story. 'Agape' means spiritual love.
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella, Esme
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2746
[Report This] Published: May 14, 2008 Updated: May 14, 2008


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I just read this and really enjoyed it.  I wish you would write a companion piece about Edward and Bella talking after this scene.  You have a great writing style.  Very well done!

 
Summary:

Edward/Bella. Bella POV. The wedding night. 'Nuff said.

Warnings: There is definite implication of sexual situations in this story. However, the descriptions focus on the emotions and sensations and are only mildly graphic.

Disclaimer: Twilight and all associated characters and concepts are the property of Stephenie Meyer. I'm just borrowing them and wreaking mild havoc~


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2222
[Report This] Published: May 14, 2008 Updated: May 20, 2008


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: On the Edge of Forever

I loved this piece.  Adored it, actually.  It was ridiculously romantic.  Wonderful.

 
Summary:

What if Edward had gotten to Port Angeles too late and was faced with Bella begging him to do everything in his power to save her? She knows he has the power no one else does...what will he do? One night changes everything.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 38841
[Report This] Published: June 11, 2008 Updated: April 30, 2009


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Flying

Wow.  I just read this story for the first time and I am completely caught up in it.  I can't wait to read what happens when Edward gets to Bella.  Its so good!!!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: February 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Hunter

Great update!  You have been MIA for a while now.  I'm glad you aren't giving up on this story- its fantastic.  I hope that's Edward's car.... I am eager to find out!!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: April 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Wanted

Wow.  I love this.  I am so sad that it's almost over!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: April 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Epilogue

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story.  I am sad that it has ended but you provided such a satisfying ending.  It was wonderful.  Great job.  I will be looking for your next piece!

 
Summary: Feature

Stranger than Fiction is the FANTASY story of Robert Pattinson and Kristen Stewart's FICTIONAL off screen romance while filming Twilight.   I have a slide show of their pictures running in a small window on the upper left hand corner of my computer screen and they whispered this little story to me one day.


NO HARM IS INTENDED BY THIS STORY.


IT IS A TRIBUTE TO MY TWO FAVORITE ACTORS.



 



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Categories: AU-Human, Other Characters: Kristen Stewart, Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 72497
[Report This] Published: June 11, 2008 Updated: April 09, 2009


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: April 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: STF Anniversary Bonus

Wow.  This was the first time I read this story and I am blown away by it.  More, please, more!!!!  I need a cold shower now, definitely.

Are you considering a New Moon sequel?????  Please?!??!?!?

Excellent job with this story!

 
Summary: Feature

Seven years have passed since Edward and Bella last saw each other. They grew up as children and even became good friends. Once they entered high school, Edward became distant and eventually severed all ties with her. Confused and hurt, Bella moved on with her life in Seattle.Through it all, Bella had her older brother Emmett to get past the estrangement. Now, with Edward's imminent return to Seattle to help out with his sister Alice's wedding, Bella can't help wondering what drove away her brother's best friend all those years ago.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4369590/1/My_Brothers_Best_Friend

Nominated for Best Novel-Incomplete at the Eddie and Bellie Awards.

http://www.thecatt.net/tw/Vote/aspx

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: Always Human , SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 36 Completed: Yes Word count: 247400
[Report This] Published: July 14, 2008 Updated: February 28, 2010


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: March 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 36: MBFS Outtake (vjgm)

God, I love him.  Thanks for this.  It was beautiful!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 17: Dexter Part 2

Wow.  I just discovered this story the other day and have spent hours on my computer reading it from start to finish.  I am addicted.  THese characters are so passionate, so compelling, I have enjoyed every moment of their journey.  I can't wait to read more!  Excellent job!!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: July 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 18: Pink tulips

What an excellent update.  I love these characters.  I am eager to find out how they are going to handle Edward having to return to work...  maybe a sequel is in the makings???  Great job!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 21 Part 1 A Long Time

Excellent chapter.  I love how Bella got her digs in with Edward when she saw him.  I don't blame her for being hesitant and holding herself back from him.  He has really tossed her on the back burner.  With their past history, it only heightens the hurt.  I am looking forward to how he is going to convince her that he is sorry and that she IS No. 1 in his book.  I love this story.  I will so sad when it is over.  I am thrilled with the upcoming plans, however!!!!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: August 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 19: Be Good Part 2

This was excellent.  I love that Bella decided to stop wasting time so that they could simply BE together.  I love that they can't control the passion they feel for eachother.  They've wasted 7 years... they need to enjoy every minute.

 

Are you planning on writing a sequel?  I would love to read where they go from here!



Author's Response:

At this time, I have no plans to write a sequel. :)

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 20: "It's You" Part 2

I love this story so very much.  I am so sad this is almost over.  I love their relationship.  They have come so far.  I DO hope they have their HEA.  They are destined to be together!!!  I wish he would have asked her to come with him...   I love this.  It is excellent!!!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 21 Part 2 A Long Time

Exellent chapter.  I love these two so very much.  I am looking forward to the epi, then I am going to reread the entire story.  It has captivated me!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Epilogue: Every Time

I have enjoyed reading this story so very much.  These characters were so very endearing and compelling.  I was captivated by them from the very start.  I am so grateful to you for sharing this story with us.  I am looking foward to the outtakes.  This was a beautiful chapter!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: February 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 35: MBBF Outtakes

Gah, I loved this!!!!  I miss them already!

 
Vision by fioredellaluna Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 11]
Summary: Alice has a vision that she thinks Edward should know about. Takes place after the last chapter of Eclipse.
Categories: Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1955
[Report This] Published: July 18, 2008 Updated: July 21, 2008


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Vision

This was a aweet scene between Edward adn Alice.  Poor Edward.  At least he gets his happiness in the end!

 
Summary: Bella has a terrifying dream about Edward's past. Takes place in an Eclipse time-frame.
Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2264
[Report This] Published: July 18, 2008 Updated: July 20, 2008


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One. EPOV

This was very powerful.  The emotions were very intense.  I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.  Great job.

 
Their Singer by SarahJayne Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 498]
Summary:

In Twilight, Edward told Bella that if her blood sang to James like it had to Edward, it would've meant a fight right there in the field. What if this was the case? Follow Bella as she is kidnapped and turned by James, and the Cullens' fevered attempts to get her back. Features James/Bella, but this is ultimately an Edward/Bella story. "NC-17" for language, situations, and eventual sexual content.

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Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Jessica, Laurent, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 34456
[Report This] Published: July 24, 2008 Updated: November 01, 2008


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: November 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Great story.  This was very original and very enjoyable.  I am thrilled that true love prevailed at the end.  Great job!

 
Wishing Star by Mystic_Ice24 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 4551]
Summary:

WRITTEN REWRITTEN REWRITTEN REWRITTEN

After her parents are killed in a plane crash, a young girl is rejected again & again by foster families for being too old. She wishes on a star nightly, but will she find what she seeks? Will the Cullens be that family?

NC-17 for later chapters. Warning" Violence, and sexual aggresion may be part of this story.

Winning Summary:

"I wish I may, I wish I might, have the wish I make tonight."  With that one hope Isabella Swan faces life as best as she can.  The tragedy of her parents' death, leaves her alone in a system where her age leaves her undesirable for adoption.  That is until one day two people come into her life offering her a chance at hope.  The Cullen family takes to Bella like a long lost sister.  What happens when Bella is taken from the Cullens by a lost relative?  Will Bella's hopes be destroyed?  What happens when fate steps in years later to reunite Bella with the one's she loved and who loved her so long ago?

Bella knew what she would say, "Don't you want to be my sister?"

 

 

Thanks to Mrs C for the above Banner and my beta readergoof for the below Banner!Wishing Star Banner Readergoof

Thanks to Sleforever for below banner!

Wishing Star Banner Sleforever


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 40 Completed: No Word count: 137752
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2008 Updated: April 12, 2011


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: March 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: First Day

I am a first time reader to this story.  I had seen it in the past but never got the chance to get into it... I am now.  I am looking forward to reading it all!!!!  I love it already!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: March 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: First Night

I love it!

 




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