This is fascinating and compelling.  I appreciate the research you completed to make the setting and events feel so real and accurate.  I know this story will not end happily, but I'm still anxious to read more!

That was marvelous!  Truly, you did a superb job capturing Edward's thoughts.  You found the perfect balance between his emotions and his rationality.  This is one of the best "first" scenes that I have ever read.  I am eager for you to continue the story from Edward's perspective!

I am still absolutely captivated by this story!  It is a relief that all made it home safely, but of course there is still much healing to be done.  Bella still has the punctures on her back, doesn't she?  And poor Alice... I know that the next chapter will be rich in emotion and depth of character, as have the previous ones.  Thank you for your beautiful, excellent work!

Oh!  This is so gripping; I want to read it over and over again.  Please, please fill in the scene when Alice and Jasper arrive back home after the hunt.  And of course I am on pins and needles waiting to see what will heppen next with Bella.  Superb work...and I know it will only get better!

Thank you so much for writing this.  It is exactly what I was hoping for when I read your summary.  This feels so very true to the book with perfect characterization and excellent voice.  Honestly, I coud not have imagined a better story to fill in Bella's perspective during this time.  Again, thank you!

Intense?  Oh yes... intensely amazing!  I am in awe of your ability to step into Edward's mind and convey his voice with such perfection.  This is one of the most gripping chapters I have ever read, despite the fact that I knew precisely how it would end.  What a testament to your writing skill!

I am an avowed hurt/comfort addict, and this is one of the best I have ever read.  It's heart-wrenching yet hopeful, with beautifully articulated emotions shown by all characters.  I will awair your next chapter eagerly--but I know these things take time.  Thank you so much for this thoroughly enjoyable tale!

This is a beautifully crafted, in-depth look into that massive missing scene, and I send you my gratitude for writing this.  It's really wonderful! 

Once again you've written a powerful chapter, rich with emotion and depth of character.  I'm enjoying seeing the sterner side of Carlisle; I think you've explored that well, and I find it believable in this circumstance.  I am enthralled by your portrayal of Bella's and Edward's love for each other.  You've conveyed that beatuifully.  I have to confess, however, to feeling a bit disappointed that you didn't really continue the scene with Carlisle and Bella at the beginning of this chapter.  I was very interested to hear their discussion and see her reactions.  Perhaps you could slip in a little flashback?  Regardless, I am very, very eager for the next chapter!

Oh, I love this!  And I didn't think it implausible, either.  I live in the Southwest, and rare tornadoes/microbursts can do severe damage in an instant.  But poor Bella and Edward--stuck right in the midst of it.  I'm eager to see what the damages will be and how Edward will cope with them.  Please share your next chapter soon!

You surprised me again!  I love the "yellow brick road" being the highway to Denali.  This is just fascinating; the alternate reality is painful yet intriguing.  I'm really looking forward to the next part!

Ooh, truly excellent chapter, full of action, angst, and revenge--I loved it!  I've enjoyed the entire story, but this chapter really brought things together.  You did a marvelous job of shifting POVs effortlessly and naturally, and I compliment you on that.  Also, I loved the way Bella brought out the best in everyone even in this world.  She really is good for the Cullens, no matter where she is.  I look forward to the remaining chapters!

Wow, I wasn't expecting this twist at all!  That was clever and surprising, and I enjoyed it--and the entire story--very much!