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Penname: Charmie [ Contact]
Real name: Aimee Hadley
Status: Member
Member Since: May 10, 2009
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Hi, I'm a new fan of Twilight - I found this lovely series back when the DVD was released at the end of March. I fell in love with the romance, intrique and impossibility of it all. I then read all of the books and now i'm hooked!
I'm 31, married and an amateur writer - trying to work on my style of writing...Currently I have no fanfics but would love to work on one with another author...
Favorite Quotes:
Passion, it lies in all of us, sleeping... waiting... and though unwanted... unbidden... it will stir... open its jaws and howl. It speaks to us... guides us... passion rules us all, and we obey. What other choice do we have? Passion is the source of our finest moments. The joy of love... the clarity of hatred... and the ecstasy of grief. It hurts sometimes more than we can bear. If we could live without passion maybe we`d know some kind of peace... but we would be hollow... Empty rooms shuttered and dank. Without passion we`d be truly dead. JW
Hey, look at me. I'm not asking you for anything. When I say, "I love you," it's not because I want you or because I can't have you. It has nothing to do with me. I love what you are, what you do, how you try. I've seen your kindness and your strength. I've seen the best and the worst of you. And I understand with perfect clarity exactly what you are. You're a hell of a woman. You're the one. Joss Whedon
The red rose whispers of passion,
And the white rose breathes of love;
O the red rose is a falcon,
And the white rose is a dove.
But I send you a cream-white rosebud
With a flush on its petal tips;
For the love that is purest and sweetest
Has a kiss of desire on the lips.”
John Boyle O'Reilly, White Rose
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Summary: Bella takes a trip to Vegas with her roommates Alice and Rosalie. After one wild night, Bella's life is turned upside down. A marriage certificate, a pregnancy, and a best friend in ICU send Bella and her friends into a whirlwind of emotions. Canon pairings and future LEMONS!
Much thanks to readergoof and annamorphos (respectively) for the awesome banners! Also, to Project Team Beta for taking this story on! You all are the best!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges: Series: Always Human
Chapters: 32 Completed: No
Word count: 206944
[Report This] Published: June 12, 2009 Updated: December 01, 2011
Reviewer: Charmie Signed
Date: October 31, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Visiting the Past
awww poor jake. It was really good to see Bella's past, and her reasoning for ending things with him. Author's Response: i'm glad you like the jake plot. i have no interest in a love triangle.
Reviewer: Charmie Signed
Date: October 31, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Scotch and Memorabilia
wow - edward takes dickdom to a new level and one time without a condom...I had to go back and read that lemon like 3 times...to make sure i didn't miss something...uh-oh i'm sensing bella getting sick had nothing to do with stress but baby batter :) Author's Response: lol- baby batter. That's funny:)
Reviewer: Charmie Signed
Date: October 31, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Endings and Beginnings
So interesting turn of events with Jake...but now what happens with Edward....
Reviewer: Charmie Signed
Date: October 31, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Remembering
okay - i hope you take this in the way it was intended as something constructive rather than critical. I feel like there is not enough forward momentum...sort of like the last 3 chps have been the same thing...i'd like to see some forward momentum. Author's Response: i love the constructive criticism & always welcome it. thanks 4 your honesty.i made the mistake of putting them n different time zones which gave me tons of issue.i hate stories that recount the same events over & over. i hope 2 get things moving. thanks
Reviewer: Charmie Signed
Date: October 31, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Are You Sure?
Absolutely dying for the next chappie!!!!!! Author's Response: shouldn't be too much longer. thanks so much for reading and reviewing as you have!
Reviewer: Charmie Signed
Date: December 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 The First Goodbye
loved this chapter...really felt like they are in this together.
Hope you take your time with it.
a gift for her...maybe something for them...canon edward would be a lil over protective...something for their future maybe. Author's Response: Thank you so much! Edward is still trying to decide what to get. I've had lots of suggestions, I'm sure he'll come up with something great!
xoxo,
Jen
Reviewer: Charmie Signed
Date: January 14, 2010
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Stupid Happy
what a great chapter!!!!! can't wait for more...darn you for the cliffie Author's Response: Sorry for the cliffie! Next chap coming soon!
Reviewer: Charmie Signed
Date: May 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Nervous Determination
sometimes its hard for me to follow your story b/c it's so long between chapters....
having said that --- you laid the angst on thick this chapter didn't you? I'm a bit surprised you had bella behave so childishly without even talking to edward...that's a move a teenager would do not a 20something one!
Reviewer: Charmie Signed
Date: May 27, 2010
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
Geez, I was seriously hoping after ALL THIS TIME...you would have had SOME progression.....and im betting the same amount of time will pass again.
Seriously disappointed. Author's Response: So sorry that you're disappointed. I do the best I can to write when I have the time, but as the single mama of two active boys it's sometimes hard. There will be progression, I just needed to reveal what was going on with Bella on the other side of that door. I hope that you'll continue to read, but completely understand if you don't have the patience for it.
Thanks,
Jen
Summary: "Should a man be sentenced to hang, he may be saved by a virtuous maiden who agrees to marry him." -Early French Colonial Law
E/B, AU, AH
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: No
Word count: 79344
[Report This] Published: June 24, 2009 Updated: November 17, 2009
Reviewer: Charmie Signed
Date: June 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Alone (V)
I like this story - can't wait to see what's next! Author's Response: Thank you! I can't wait for you to read what's next. ;)
Reviewer: Charmie Signed
Date: July 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: First Night (V)
I love this story --- and its just started...I really am hoping to see updates soon :) Author's Response: Yes, we have only just begun! I will say that the updates may be slower at first... my beta is super busy and well... something is a cookin' in Delta Land... I'll talk about it more on the thread tomorrow, I'd love to hear from you over there!
Reviewer: Charmie Signed
Date: July 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Wedding (v)
okay i am super excited that you have decided to extend this story - i absolutely adore it!!! Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're excited! I am too ;)
Looking forward to hearing from you again!
Reviewer: Charmie Signed
Date: September 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Home
loved the declaration!
I would love to see the courtship of jasper and alice
The romance and eventual consummation of edward and bella
I'd like to see more of Edward's family - meeting bella.
Summary: A pregnancy changes everything in an instant. Bella went from being a Godmother to a mother and ended up raising her best friends daughter after she died from giving birth. With her families support, she makes it through obstacles until she meets a gorgeous guy at a rare night out. Something in his past could tear her world apart, will it end up that way or will love conquer all?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes
Word count: 52897
[Report This] Published: June 29, 2009 Updated: August 04, 2010
Reviewer: Charmie Signed
Date: February 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Wedding
the introduction of edward and him asking her out went VERY quickly....hoping you take your time with some of this.
Reviewer: Charmie Signed
Date: February 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: The Date
again it seems rushed...i don't know what's missing but maybe drawing out the romance, the ust factor more.
Summary: They were the best of friends, "The Sovereign Six" as they were most notably called. After being apart for eleven years, they are all brought back together by a tragedy. Is their friendships strong enough to overcome the time they've missed together?
Here is the link for my thread over on the forums! Come and check it out!
http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=5213
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: No
Word count: 135161
[Report This] Published: July 03, 2009 Updated: May 27, 2010
Reviewer: Charmie Signed
Date: August 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue/Chapter 1- Juicy
This is the beginnng and yet it was so bittersweet! can't wait for more
Reviewer: Charmie Signed
Date: August 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2- This Time of Year
Oh god that was the saddest chapter...I'm bawling my eyes out over here reading!!!!
Reviewer: Charmie Signed
Date: August 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4- Who Dat?
I just loved this chapter - Emmett is always fun. Poor Jake...always getting the short end of the stick.
Reviewer: Charmie Signed
Date: September 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9- Somewhere Over the Rainbow
I just LOVE LOVE LOVE this story! So much so that it warranted sayingit 3 times and posting on Twitter :)
I am hoping i'm wrong about the tragedy!!! about who and what it is...but if i'm right...it will bring everyone together and apart....
I can't WAIT for more! Author's Response: Thanks BB!!! FOR EVERYTHING!!!
So, who do you think the tragedy is about? I can't remember if you've ever said and honesly, I'm too lazy right now to go back and look through reviews.
Your the best!! Thanks again!
Reviewer: Charmie Signed
Date: September 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue/Chapter 1- Juicy
I could be wrong let me PREFACE with that okay?
I'm thinking Emmett dies maybe in a plane crash or a car accident. It forces Bella to think what he was going to do. Everyone gets together in Forks...and Bella starts to see how short life really is - along with the rest of the crew
Am I close? or just way out of left field... Author's Response: hun, you are way out in left field but that would make a great option. Hmm.... should I rewrite? Lol, just kidding.
Reviewer: Charmie Signed
Date: September 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue/Chapter 1- Juicy
whew! because i love me some emmett!!!!!! Author's Response: lol, me too. I also love Jasper, but I haven't been able to really work any quality time for him yet in the story. I'm still working angles for him.
Reviewer: Charmie Signed
Date: September 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue/Chapter 1- Juicy
I really can't wait for the next chp.
I love me some Jasper too....I am writing for the love of jasper contest b/c of my love for him :)
Reviewer: Charmie Signed
Date: September 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10- I Run to You
Argh....can't wait for more!!!!! Author's Response: Thanks!!!
Reviewer: Charmie Signed
Date: September 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12- Hallelujah
LOVE this story....it pwns me hard week after week! Author's Response: lol, thank you!!!
Reviewer: Charmie Signed
Date: October 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15- Breathe
poor Jake - such a good guy and he was just shit on! Author's Response: yes, yes he was. But he'll get his HEA. Let me tell you, I had an exboyrfriend leave me a note outside my house once that read and I quote- 'Thanks for shitting on me'. I still have the note by the way because I thought it was funny. Is that mean of me to find that funny? oh well, it was years ago.
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