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The List by Laura Cullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13645]
Summary:

Four weeks before her wedding to Edward, Bella is frustrated. She knows there's little-to-no chance of getting him to bend his rules and boundaries now, but there's no harm in fantasizing about what could happen later. So she begins compiling a list of things that she and Edward can do together once they're happily married. She's surprised to find she might be able to cross some things off earlier than she thought...

Story contains mature themes and is not intended for younger readers.

Thanks to Mandi, aka m81170, for the great banner!


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
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Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 187877
[Report This] Published: December 28, 2008 Updated: March 18, 2010


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Date: January 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Good-Byes

Damnit, woman, stop making me cry!  I could barely read through the tears when Bella was saying good-bye to Charlie.

On a happier note, I LOVE that B & E broke his bedroom door!

 
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Date: January 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

Amazing!

 
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Date: January 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Games

Holy mother of fuck, Bella's not the only one who's going to explode!

 
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Date: January 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Frustrated

HA!  It never occured to me that a cold shower would have the opposite effect on Bella.

 
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Date: January 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Accomplice

Holy hell, I think *I* almost came.

 
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Date: January 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Additions

I'm really liking Bella's list so far; can't wait to see what gets added as the story progresses.

 
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Date: January 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Consequences

What wet Edward wants, wet Edward gets.  Damn, that was hot!  Can't wait to read the "confrontation".

 
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Date: January 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Unexpected

Number 10 deserves bells, whistles and pom-poms.  And I think I might need a cigarette...or a cold shower.

 
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Date: January 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Awkward

Ha! Edward Cullen, panty thief. :D

 
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Date: January 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans

*thud*

 
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Date: January 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Control

 I didn’t know how much more of this I would be able to take before I threw her down and helped her find God.

Fuck. Me. That's one of the hottest things I've ever read.  And the rest of this?  There are no words.  Best "practice" fic I've read.  I owe the ladies at Twigasm HUGE for rec'ing this.

 
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Date: January 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Music

*thud*

 
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Date: January 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Words and Letters

LOVE the tatt idea!  I'm thinking she got it over her heart.

 
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Date: January 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Teasing

The whole "let him taste it from the source" thing kinda squicked me out, but the rest was fuckhot.

 
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Date: January 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I

Daaaaaaaaamn.  That was amazing!

 
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Date: January 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II

As hot as the semi-public blowjob was, the ending was my favorite part.

 
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Date: January 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III

LOVED this chapter.....perfect mix of sweet and sexy. 

 
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Date: January 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: 7 Days

LOVE Edward's addition to the list!

 
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Date: January 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

I actually got teary when Bella and the Cullens were having their little chats.  And the lab table?  HOT!

 
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Date: January 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: The Wedding

Well done!

 
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Date: January 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change

Hottest. Chapter. Yet.  But what happened to Carlisle giving her a morphine shot before?

 
Reviewer: robsessed09 Signed
Date: January 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change

Another favorite chapter.  I cried again, not only because of the book that Bella left Edward, but for what Jasper willingly put himself through for his new sister.

 
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Date: January 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

Fabulous!

 
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Date: January 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

I can't begin to tell you how much I've enjoyed reading this--or how excited I am that you'll be doing a sequel.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for all the reviews!

 
Reviewer: robsessed09 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake

That was just.....wonderful, fabulous, amazing...

 




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