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Produttore by marve Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 712]
Summary:

Bella is convinced that Edward has fallen out of love with her.  His constant disappearances, his avoidance of her touch - there are so many signs that it's true.

But when she starts to notice some strange changes in Edward and Alice, Bella starts to suspect that something else is going on.


Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Edward, Esme, Jane, Jasper, Marcus
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No Word count: 21093
[Report This] Published: November 20, 2008 Updated: February 28, 2009


Reviewer: born2dance94 Signed
Date: January 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

"The best way to get over a man is to get under another one."

Wow! I swear to freakin' God that is the most insightful thing I've ever heard. Ever. I like that. It's a good philosophy to live by. Lol. XP

 
Reviewer: born2dance94 Signed
Date: January 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Really powerful. Your writing style is super unique, and totally beautiful.

 
Summary:

Edward does something that makes Bella question their relationship.
What does Edward do to make Bella's fears go away?
Does Bella decide that the lies she's been telling and the secrets she's been hiding are worth staying in a relationship with Edward?

(a teacher/student story) A/H

[[this story is rated because of a lemon]] Oh, and also, I'm not SM and I own nothing. [[though, I wish more that anything that there was a human Edward out there for me to own]]


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 12111
[Report This] Published: January 09, 2009 Updated: January 22, 2009


Reviewer: born2dance94 Signed
Date: March 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Please turn this into a full story!!! It is amazing!



Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it! : )

 
Summary:

Edward didn't come back after Volterra. In fact, he went straight back to the Volturi, asking to die. This time, they granted his request. But Bella doesn't know that, she thinks he's with Tanya.

Songfic, based on Taylor Swift's Teardrops On My Guitar.


Categories: AU, New Moon Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: Songfics
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1176
[Report This] Published: March 14, 2009 Updated: March 19, 2009


Reviewer: born2dance94 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Woah. That was so super sad. Great job! Your writing is amazing, and you did an excellent job with the emotional aspects! :D



Author's Response: Thank you! You're an author I admire, so it's pretty cool you like this!

 
Summary:

Companion to Teardrops On My Guitar. A year later, Bella finds out what really happened after she and Alice left Volterra.

Songfic, using All-American Reject's 'Move Along'


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Songfics
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2043
[Report This] Published: March 20, 2009 Updated: March 22, 2009


Reviewer: born2dance94 Signed
Date: May 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very creative idea! It is ironic how Rosalie' wish for vengeance actually brought together Bella and Edward. I'm so happy for them! :D



Author's Response: Thank you so much!

 
Summary:

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Lt. Edward Platt, a German soldier, has been assigned to the Auschwitz Prison Camp. He learns much more than the horrors of war and falls for a beautiful Jewish girl named Bella. Can Edward save Bella before they both become ashes in the sky?

Rated NC-17, AU/AU, Romance/Angst, Historical, OOC, ExB, HEA

ALL MUST READ:

This story has a backdrop of WWII and the Holocaust. It is a love story between a German soldier and a Jewish prisoner of war. I am Jewish so this setting is something that is a part of my family's history. I would never disrespect the Jewish culture and history nor my family's history.

There's no rape, coercion, etc, of any kind in this story. There is a scene with dominance, but not rape. Rape is a serious crime that should never, ever be confused with dominance. Never at any point in this story, does Edward use his position to force Bella to have sex with him. Bella gives her consent freely and truly wants to love Edward and have him love her in return. Again, it is a love story.

If anything about this story confuses or bothers anyone for any reason, please contact me or visit the thread: http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=4718. There is no need for harassment, insults or general bashing. I will not hide nor take down any stories solely because some people have chosen to make false accusations that are both hurtful and disrespectful to all those involved. This story is my gift to those who have been following my writing. I am leaving this story up for those who have read and appreciated it. If you don't like this story, then please simply don't read it.

Thank you very much for taking the time to read this note and thank you for reading Ashes in the Sky. I sincerely appreciate those who see the beauty I put into the story.

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psymom, Twilighted Owner/Administrator
Twilightzoner/Validation Beta
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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 7932
[Report This] Published: June 15, 2009 Updated: June 20, 2009


Reviewer: born2dance94 Signed
Date: November 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Ashes in the Sky

Very beautifully written! I mthink you broached the subject with the right subtlety, and it was done with sensitivity.

I'm Jewish (My father is from Israel, as is 80% of my family), and I found absolutely no offense in this. In fact, my grandfather was in Poland during the war and he and his family members were sent to various work and concentration camps. He was lucky enough to survive (and his parents and sister, too, as they hid in a closet) but the rest of his family was killed. I think the research and knowledge your story displayed wass spot-on.

Thank you for this! Although, I am a bit sad that you no longer write fanfiction. You're great at writing! Good luck in all of your future writing endeavors!

 
Summary: Feature

An uptight Edward meets a carefree and vivacious Bella. How does their meeting change Edward's life... forever?

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 7551
[Report This] Published: July 29, 2009 Updated: July 29, 2009


Reviewer: born2dance94 Signed
Date: January 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thank you, thank you, thank you so much for this! The writing was beautiful and the plot was haunting and gorgeous. I just read it and cried my eyes out. It really hit close to home.

Almost 3 years ago (it will be the 3rd aniversary in February), my good family friend suddenly died of a heart attack. He was 46, and his son (who I've grown up with) was just 12. Just a few weeks ago, the widow (my mom's best friend) got engaged again. She's getting remarried in a few months and this story reminded me so much of this. It really helped me see the situation in a new light. Again, thank you!

 
Summary:

 

 

When Bella and Edward meet the first day of High School, he is a chubby misfit with no friends in a new town, aside from his popular cousins.  He meets Bella Swan, a well-liked, if uncoordinated, local with problems of her own.  This is the story of their friendship, their loss, their love and destruction.  Can they find their way back to each other?  And can they survive the changes they have both gone through since the fateful day they met?

HUGE THANKS TO ATHENALOVE and READERGOOF FOR THE AMAZING BANNERS!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Edward Masen, Sr., Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 41 Completed: No Word count: 164271
[Report This] Published: August 12, 2009 Updated: December 03, 2012


Reviewer: born2dance94 Signed
Date: July 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: 2009-Ordinary World

Hahaha! I though Publisher's Clearing house sounded familiar, so I googled it and found out it's based in my town. I pass it all the time but never really gave any thought to it. Funny how it was mentioned...

 
All of Me by flibbins Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3592]
Summary:

Bella lives to serve her Master. It can be tedious at times, titillating at others, but always, her world revolves around his. Come take a peek at the trials and triumphs in the life of a 24/7 consensual slave and find what happens when outside forces threaten to expose her lifestyle.

 

All of Me

 

Please note that this story contains graphic language, graphic sexual situations and is only intended for a mature audience. The BDSM relationship described herein is entirely consensual, but may be offensive to some readers. Read with caution. OOC, AU/AH


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: All of Me: The Series
Chapters: 25 Completed: No Word count: 109463
[Report This] Published: September 01, 2009 Updated: June 29, 2010


Reviewer: born2dance94 Signed
Date: October 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It seems that you new batch of reviewers are all wondering where Flibbins is. I know a while ago a bunch of us were wondering as well. Unfortunately, real life dealt her an unlucky hand, so she has not yet finished the story, but has said she plans to eventually. If you visit this story's forum here on Twilighted, there should be more information.

 
Reviewer: born2dance94 Signed
Date: June 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

don't listen to that last review. this story is so well written, and one would be hard-pressed to find errors. they're probably jealous because of your huge following and number of reviews.

 
Auld Lang Syne by niknox Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 596]
Summary:

In the dead silence, all of the details suddenly fell into place for me. I’d made an absolute fool of myself. Jacob was smitten, thrilled that I cared so much for him, while my husband stood there, betrayal and disappointment written across his face. He turned away from me, and the realization hit me: in all my efforts to right Rosalie’s wrongs, I lost sight of what was actually important. And on top of that, he’d given me ample enough warning. He even went as far to tell me to fix it. And I made it worse. And now Edward wanted nothing to do with me. “Edward-”

“I don’t want to hear it,” he said dejectedly. I could tell by the tone of his voice that he was hurt. The last thing I wanted to do was hurt him. Pangs of regret attacked me. I should’ve kept my mouth closed.

 Should auld acquaintance be forgot,
and never brought to mind?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Other Character, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 97999
[Report This] Published: January 12, 2010 Updated: July 06, 2010


Reviewer: born2dance94 Signed
Date: February 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Suspect

Wow! I absolutely love this so far! The plot is so creative, and I love all the little twists so far. Please update soon! I can't wait for more! :D



Author's Response:

aww, thanks !

keep reading and i'll keep writing !





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