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Penname: maizeandblueinvalpo [Contact]
Real name: Ahlania
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By the Numbers by Carson1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 738]
Summary:

 

Five people take a trip to Alaska.

One hike to a hot spring and everything changes.

Two people find something they never expected.

Sometimes spontaneous is a good thing.

 

Many thanks to the incredible xrxdanixrx for the wonderful banner! Thanks so much hun! XO

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 130205
[Report This] Published: January 04, 2011 Updated: July 25, 2012


Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: April 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Didn't know if poor Edward would survive the strip club. He managed better than I thought. Even with the offer of a private dance.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading & reviewing!

*shudders at private dance* Poor guy... it's all a bit overwhelming for him.

XO

 
Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: March 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Sounds like Bella is making a booty call.  It is kind of sad how low Edward's self esteem is.

 
Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: January 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Edward seems sweet.  He just needs someone who can accept him the way he is quirks and all.



Author's Response:

Hi there!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Edward does have his quirks... You're right, he needs someone to accept him the way he is. *sigh*

XO

Les

 
Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: January 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

There is a lot to be said for manners.  I'm sure he will be out of  his comfort zone at the bar.



Author's Response:

Hi there,

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

There is a lot to be said for manners!

More on the way.

XO

Les

 
Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: February 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

It seems that regardless of how uncomfortable he may be Bella can talk him into anything.



Author's Response:

Hi there!

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

She's trying, that's for sure.

More on the way.

XO

Les

 
Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: February 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

They can definately help each other out with their quirks.  I have to admit i'm much lie Edward when it comes to keeping things neat and tidy.  Much to the chagrin of my family.



Author's Response:

Hi there!

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

I'm more on the Bella side of things. I wish I could be more organized!!

More on the way.

XO

Les

 
Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: February 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I love that he's realized that it's okay to be spontaneous.



Author's Response:

:) Yeah! He's getting there...slowly.

XO

 
Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: February 26, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Edward is too cute.  Bella gets him so flustered.  Looking forward to seeing how the rest of the evening goes.



Author's Response:

She does fluster him!

Good to keep him on his toes.

XO

 
Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: April 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I couldn't believe Riley came at Bella like that with Edward standing right there. The kiss was perfect. It was so sweet.



Author's Response:

*grumbles at Riley*

Stooopid man.

Thanks for reading & reviewing!

XO

 
Art by FumansGrl Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 81]
Summary:

Art

 

Sarah Elizabeth "Dallas" Etheridge meets Robert Pattinson unexpectedly at the Dallas Museum of Art. Five years later, they run into each other again at the DMA, and Rob meets Art.

 

Winner of Best Angst/Drama and Best PG-13 at the Robert Pattinson Fiction Awards.


Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 30464
[Report This] Published: January 06, 2011 Updated: October 20, 2012


Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: March 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

It was nice that he was able to spend some time with Art.  Art definately seems to like Rob quite a bit. 



Author's Response:

Art does adore Rob.

 
Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: April 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

It was nice that Rob was able to spend some one on one time with Art.



Author's Response:

Definitely was ... :)

 
Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: January 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

He seems quite calm about this.  Perhaps it hasn't sunk in yet.



Author's Response:

Perhaps ...

 
Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: February 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Wasn't expecting her to have cancer.  That definately takes some of the fluffiness out of it.  It will be interesting to see how they try and make this work.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

 
Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: February 26, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

I'm sure this is a lot for Rob to take in.  He is making an effort which is good.

 
Little Bits of Control by KrisB Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

The characters in this story came to life in Loss of Control, an RPF on this fabulous site.  I've been assured that, even if you haven't read LOC, you can read this and understand it.  Of course, I'd prefer that you go read all of LOC and Taking Control immediately.  And review.  That is all.


Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: The Control Series - LOC, TC, and Outtakes
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 4247
[Report This] Published: February 04, 2011 Updated: February 28, 2011


Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: March 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Let It Snow

I really enjoyed that and what a nice surprise for Tina to have him show up.  Hopefully that took the sting out of her team losing.



Author's Response:

Hi, Ahlania!  Yes, indeed, she recovered from the loss much better after Rob got there!  Of course, Lou had to tease her about her cocky commentary during the game, but she was so happy to have Rob home, she got over it quickly.  But really, what a lovely surprise.  Of course, Rob's going to have to tease her about her "sea of biscuits," but he's really thrilled to be with Tina, so it's all good.

I'm so glad you enjoyed it.  I started this "story" as a place to put any and all of these little snippets of their life.  More to come, I promise!  Thank you for reading and reviewing!

 
Summary:

Edward Cullen lives in a world with no complications, and he likes it that way.

 

An undeniable attraction, a motorcycle, a blog, and a complication. What is really going on down at the Lone Star?

 

Down at the Lone Star Banner

 

Blinkie by the wonderful melmelee


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 43921
[Report This] Published: April 26, 2011 Updated: July 19, 2012


Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: May 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Look forward to seeing where you go with this.

 
Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: May 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I love this Bella. I love a girl that takes no shit.

 
Wild Card by Carson1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 349]
Summary:

Edward Cullen's life revolved around his casino. He thought he had it all. She would prove him wrong.

Wild Card

Banner by the amazing xrxdanixrx!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 38379
[Report This] Published: May 11, 2011 Updated: May 05, 2012


Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: May 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like where you are going with this. Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading & reviewing!

More on the way.

XO

 




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