The poor girl has been through so much.  Her father finding out about the rape and losing her job.  My heart breaks for her.

I have truly enjoy this story.  They have been through so much and it's nice to see that they were able to weather the storm and get everything they wanted.

That is definately progress.  Things will be even more difficult for them because of Edward's issues.  He is willing to try and that's a start.

Under normal circumstances angry sex can be hot, but that was rather frightening.  Edward was obviously out of control and I don't think Bella handled the situation the best either.  I can understand why she was upset with him.  She had every right to be, but her reaction only made things more volitile.  I will say that I am pleased that he tried to get in touch with his therapist.  It shows he's aware of when things are getting out of control.  Perhaps they should go to some counseling sessions together.  I'm sure it would help Bella to have some tools to assist her when Edward has his moments.  It wouldn't hurt her to get some help dealing with her issues either. 

Well this will be interesting indeed.  I can only imagine Edward's reaction to the move.  Perhaps he would be able to work of NY.  Can't wait to find out what happens next.

Mrs. Alistair was straight and to the point.  Continue to fuck with my man and I will ruin you.  Wasn't expecting it to turn out like that.

I'm glad she talked with James.  She needed to close that door.  I know people wanted them to get together right away but they both had issues to resolve first.  Things would have never worked otherwise.

Whether or not people agree with where the story is going isn't important.  It is your story to write as you wish.  If they don't like it they can stop reading it.  It is obvious that both Bella and Edward have issues.  The both need to work on themselves before they can have anything substantial with each other.  I'm sure it was painful for Bella to walk in on what she did but in all fairness she knew he was a manwhore.  They aren't together and he doesn't owe her anything.  It doesn't make it right but it is what it is.

I hope they find him soon and gets him the help that he needs.  He obviously needs to get himself straightened out before he can have anything meaningful with Bella.

I really don't know what to say about Tanya.  She is definately persistant.  I can't wait to find out what Bella has planned.

I have to say I love a drunk Alice.  She is a hoot.  Can't wait to see how things play out with James.

I'm not sure what I think about Nick.  I hope that he is only an associate of James and nothing more.  Bella and Edward really needed this time to be in their little love bubble.  They will have to get back to real life soon enough.

Anyone who can keep you in a constant state of arousal is all win as far as i'm concerned.  I loved Edward interacting with the kids.  He really seemed to be in his element.