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Penname: Melba87 [Contact]
Real name: Stephanie Duncan
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Member Since: May 04, 2008
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I'm a wife, and Mother of two daughters.  I love Twilight fan-fic...STF was smutterrific...and I trust I'll find more great reads if I follow Psymom around! 


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Restoration by texbelle Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 1147]
Summary:

Ten years ago, circumstance interrupted their destiny.  Now it's time for everyone to go back to Forks for their 10 year high school reunion to face their past with hesitation, hope and maybe even regret.  Can they reclaim what was lost?  All human.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 166805
[Report This] Published: May 06, 2008 Updated: June 01, 2010


Reviewer: Melba87 Signed
Date: April 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Better Man

tender and selfless...i've always loved your edward. 

sweet and perfect.  thanks for updating, texbelle!  it's been a great year!!

 

 

 

 
Reviewer: Melba87 Signed
Date: July 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Can't Take My Eyes Off You

oh my gosh, texbelle.

 

that was soooo worth the wait.  it was beautiful, romantic, and sexy.

 

what a freakin' dream come true for bella.  i'm sobbing like a baby!

 

WIN!

 
Summary:

Edward Cullen, just finished his senior year in highschool, decides to spend his summer vacation in Phoenix, Arizona. He's not expecting much - all he wants is to get away from the gossiping residents of Forks. He's certainly not expecting the beautiful girl next door. But can he trust her? After he's already been hurt once? And how much can three little months really change? AU All Human. Canon pairings.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 30394
[Report This] Published: June 01, 2008 Updated: February 21, 2009


Reviewer: Melba87 Signed
Date: July 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Sickness and then Some

Yay!!!! so happy you updated!  Edward is a frigid ice crotch....I can't wait to see if he will finally warm up!!!

It was great to have Bella's pov...

more more more. 

 

 
Something Mutual by cookybabe Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 17]
Summary:

This is in response to upthedownslide's challenge to write a very naughty one-shot.

 Warning: Explicit language, not intended for younger audiences.  May need a cold shower afterwards.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3549
[Report This] Published: July 17, 2008 Updated: July 18, 2008


Reviewer: Melba87 Signed
Date: July 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

We all need a shower after that one.  Whew!  Thanks.

 

 
Summary:

When Jasper Whitlock and Alice Masen tied the knot, they hoped their own siblings would have the same happy ending. Jasper's sister, Isabella, was at the peak of her career, leaving very little time for love. Alice's brother, Edward, was in the process of moving thousands of miles in the name of business.

What happens when Jasper and Alice insist on accompanying Edward to Seattle while he finds his new base of operation, all while staying in Isabella's penthouse?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Lauren, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes Word count: 77087
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2008 Updated: July 04, 2009


Reviewer: Melba87 Signed
Date: August 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Flying

Where's chapter 5???

Is this a labeling error or is a chappie missing???

 

 

 



Author's Response: I'm not sure what happened - but Chapter 5 is with the Beta. I think. I hope.

 
Reviewer: Melba87 Signed
Date: August 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Torino

I think this story is great.  I'm not sure I want Edward looking for another apartment, though.  Bella should let him stay with her to show gratitude for him holding her hair back!!!  :-D

 
Reviewer: Melba87 Signed
Date: August 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Go Ask Alice

Aaaagh!  Please, please, please make Edward snap out of this.  Please.

 
Reviewer: Melba87 Signed
Date: August 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Forrest, Forrest Gump

I'm glad Edward is coming to his senses.  Sweet, reformed Edward must come back.

Too short.  More, please.

 

 

 

 
Reviewer: Melba87 Signed
Date: August 14, 2008 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Dinner

Aaaaaahhhhhh!

 
Reviewer: Melba87 Signed
Date: August 14, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Tears

Noooooooooo!

 
Reviewer: Melba87 Signed
Date: August 15, 2008 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Ice and Snow

Oh Glorious Day!!  My soul sings for you.  Thank you for ending my torture.  Thank you. Thank you. Thank you.

I feel like sunlight has been restored to the earth, after a very long period of darkness.  Edward was lovely.  Thank you! 

 

 
Summary: A tale guided by the sexy songs of Maroon 5- one of my favorite bands. Bella and Edward are instantly attracted to one other when they lock eyes in a club. What more could you ask for?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 7012
[Report This] Published: August 06, 2008 Updated: September 08, 2008


Reviewer: Melba87 Signed
Date: August 14, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Secret

Ummm??  Wow!!!!!

 
Reviewer: Melba87 Signed
Date: August 14, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Kiwi

uhhh?

OMFC!

 
Inhibitions by Capricorn75 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 23]
Summary:

Edward is in for some surprises when Bella comes home after a night drinking with the girls. What's happened to his shy, sweet Bella?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4831
[Report This] Published: August 14, 2008 Updated: August 14, 2008


Reviewer: Melba87 Signed
Date: August 15, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Steamy! Thank you.

 



Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing!

 
Summary:

Ever since Bella and Edward were kids, they have always despied eachother. What happens when they are locked in a classroom together for one whole weekend. Will the hate for eachother increase or will they become friends and possibly even more then friends?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Laurent, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 7846
[Report This] Published: August 17, 2008 Updated: December 30, 2008


Reviewer: Melba87 Signed
Date: August 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yes!  Keep writing!  This could be fun.

 

 

 
Summary:

Bella Swan meets a beautiful stranger, lawyer Edward Masen on a holiday in Rome. The chemistry is palpable, the sex passionate - and a physical relationship grows into something more. The days fly in a whirlwind of clothes, sand, sex and wine. After a painful realisation that the fantasy has come to an end, Bella returns apprehensively to Seattle, heartbroken at the loss of her love. 


But, little does she know that the 'beautiful stranger' isn't such a stranger, after all.

 

A surprise awaits Bella Swan in Seattle.

 

 

Rated for explicitly detailed sex scenes and language.

 

 

Beautifully accurate banner by the beautifully talented MrsC. Thank you!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 65735
[Report This] Published: August 18, 2008 Updated: September 09, 2009


Reviewer: Melba87 Signed
Date: October 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Back to My Place?

Wow!!! Thanks for the awesome update.

Can it get any better?

yummy and steamy. thank you, may I have another????

 
Reviewer: Melba87 Signed
Date: July 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Introducing Jalice and Irreversible Heartbreak (shabby my love)

OME! I giggled, yes giggled, when I saw the update alert for this story.  I am so exceited to see what will happen.  I'm a bit surprised Edward completely lost it with Jasper.  Whoa!  I hope he doesn't have time to become bitter before running into Bella again.. Thanks for the update!

Congrats, on the exam completion!

 

 

 

 
Reviewer: Melba87 Signed
Date: September 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Cocktails with Jalice (shabbyapple)

I've loved this fic from the beginning.

 

I do a little dance whenever there's and update. 

 

The angst was fine.  It was good to see Bella feeling something after she just up and left like she did.

 

Thank you for making my day better with an update from an old friend.

 
Summary:

Three very different women, with one thing in common, must deal with life, love and betrayal.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Angela, Bella, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 71422
[Report This] Published: August 29, 2008 Updated: February 16, 2009


Reviewer: Melba87 Signed
Date: August 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Hallmark Holiday

Very intriguing!

 I'm hooked.

 

 
Can you save me by Goo82 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 30]
Summary: Done for the sexy Edward contest. Edward was recently crushed by the love of his life. What happens when his brother and friends throw a party and a tipsy Bella walks into his room while he is sulking. Lemon ExB
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3106
[Report This] Published: September 19, 2008 Updated: September 21, 2008


Reviewer: Melba87 Signed
Date: September 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very nice!  Very hot.  Just what I needed, this morning.

 

 
Summary:

Marve's Edward meets Wish_girl's Bella in high school. Hilarity and hijinks ensue.

 

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Categories: AU-Human, Crackfic Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 88732
[Report This] Published: September 29, 2008 Updated: December 14, 2008


Reviewer: Melba87 Signed
Date: October 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: The Rapture

that was a beautiful chapter....

absolutely love that his arms had to be wrapped around her for the ride home and she was able to stay strong and kick him to the curb (doorstep) anyway....

Guts!!!

 
Date Night by RedChevy Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 25]
Summary:

One shot. Written for the Dirty Talking Edward Contest. Edward is anxious to see Bella again after a week apart, making plans for their reunion. What happens when Bella has made plans of her own? AU AH OOC BXE. First Fanfic.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4509
[Report This] Published: October 04, 2008 Updated: October 05, 2008


Reviewer: Melba87 Signed
Date: October 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is the kind of erotica that turns me into a smut addict.  I always want more.

 

 
Sanctuary by Jfly Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2144]
Summary: Feature

Edward faces a monumental crisis and finds Sanctuary in the one place he refuses to look for it. All Human.

This story contains Religious themes and Mature themes: Edward is a priest struggling with his role in the Church and as a man.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: No Word count: 99900
[Report This] Published: October 11, 2008 Updated: February 03, 2010


Reviewer: Melba87 Signed
Date: January 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Prodigal

Aaaah!  There seemed to be so many little details that i missed when i read it over on ADF...

the weathered hand with ginger ale..

the shared looks with esme..

re-reading esme's reaction makes me think that this isnt about a transfer request to another parish...but, she was still assuming a lot, wasn't she? she hadnt read the letter, and yet her reaction was as if she had...

man, i can't wait for more.  i hope Fr Edward's been whispering to ya!

 
Reviewer: Melba87 Signed
Date: March 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Embrace

you made my eyes leak.

my tortured sweet edward.  i want to hold him.  but, mostly i want him to hold me.

i thought he was being kind of ridiculous by letting her continue to grip him all night.  jeez, louise!  but, then he said the torment was Heaven...i should have gathered as much.  it all made sense then.

and then her exploration...i hope i'm not a freak, but i think that was totally a realistic thing...if she's as innocent and pure as edward would have us believe.  i suppose she could be a schemer, but i'm guessing she was curious...love love love.

 

 

 
Reviewer: Melba87 Signed
Date: April 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Stones

oh, jenny! 

you color my world.

edward seems so sad and alone.  i'm gonna sleep on it and read again in the morning.  see ya on the forums.

just a note on P.A.  loved loved loved the aunthenticity there.  as someone who has spent a fair bit of time with the fuckers from forks, no one says, "Port Angeles"...it is always called P.A. 

thanks for the update.

you really are a brilliant writer.  there isn't a better fic out there right now.  nothing compares.

 

 

 

 




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