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Penname: Alissie [ Contact]
Real name: Jessica
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Member Since: October 22, 2008
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::waves:: Hey, everyone! It's Jess, or Alissie, or whatever you want, really. I recently joined Twilighted because this fanfic site is made of epic win. ;) Seriously. I'm addicted to writing, so much so that it is ridiculous. I handwrite basically... well, everything, and then type it up. Some of my stories are really developed, but typing them up takes time that I don't have. I update as much as possible, though! I think that AU/AH fics are the bomb, though I still love writing about the vamps, including Bella as a human. What I look forward to is writing some sort of AU/AH with Nessie. ;) She's probably going to appear in one I'm currently working on, though I'm not sure. Everything in due time... I'm totally into Beta-ing, buuuuut be warned. I tend to be too picky, and I have a habit of re-writing. Not majorly... usually... ::winces:: You have been warned. And, yes, I read/write/beta smut fic. It's fun. :)
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Summary: Three very different women, with one thing in common, must deal with life, love and betrayal.   
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Angela, Bella, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes
Word count: 71422
[Report This] Published: August 29, 2008 Updated: February 16, 2009
Reviewer: Alissie Signed
Date: October 24, 2008
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Birthday Girl
I'm at the end of Chapter Three. I knew it. WHAT
A
MAN
WHORE
!!!!
=0 XD Sorry, I had to. But seriously! I love it so far. I knew it was him at the bar with Anthony, but then I realized what had to be going on with Tanya. I mean, who ELSE would she be with? And she usually only called him Masen.
But then Angela? EEP! <3 I seriously love it. They have to figure it out, right? I can't see this story going any other way, but I don't doubt that you'll surprise me. Keep up the EXCELLENT work! <3 <3J
Reviewer: Alissie Signed
Date: October 24, 2008
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Internal Struggle
::dies:: You know? When I said that I thought you'd surprise me, I never though you would SO DRAMATICALLY! O_O I have to assume he's speaking of Tanya, because Ange will be a /bit/ harder to get rid of. I think, anyway. I wonder if I'm allowed to submit more than one review. o_O Sorry, random though. I'm relatively new to this site. ^^; Anyway, back to the story! The lunch scene SO reminded me of Bella Italia, down to that waitress. ;) Not sure if that was a purposeful reference or unconscious. Whichever way, it works. Tanya can be perfectly happy with... Dante, is it? I believe it is. But Angela... poor, sweet Angela? I loved it when Bella slapped him. xD That TOTALLY made my day. ^-^ And when she said the thing about infidelity.... ::dies again:: He just crumpled, and I was like, OH NO HE DIDN'T! My predictions: a week-long international flight? Hmmm.... suspicious, /I/ think.
And the thing about him being a pilot sparked something in my mind. Are you going to crash poor Edward's plane and have the women meet in the hospital? That would be cruel, but AMAZING!
Reviewer: Alissie Signed
Date: October 24, 2008
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Dante's Ultimatum
Okay, altogether now: AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! <3 xD I'm kinda in love with Dante. Is he modelled after anyone I might know? ;) I'd go with Emmett, buuuuut I'm definetly wrong. He's most likely an OC, correct? Okay, NOW I feel bad for Tanya. ::frowns:: Still, she'll be happy.... right? :) Author's Response: Oh, Dante... Don't get me started on that fine piece of man... He is modeled after my husband *grin* He is just a character I made up... Tanya happy??? You will just ahve to wait and see... Thanks for the review Alissie!
Reviewer: Alissie Signed
Date: October 25, 2008
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - The Scare
O_O WOW! =D I flipped out as soon as I read Dante's name... Oooooh... THIS should be fun! ^-^ And Edward, oh my god, WHAT A DOUCHE! X_X He has THREE women, just has one for sex, one for babies, and the third to beat him up. Now he's naming one of the babies after the beater, and needs more sex with Tanya. Or Bella. I'm sure he won't be specific. Just WAIT until he says someone elses name during sex. I'm just waiting... I'm sure that Tanya would flip and figure it out ASAP (but wait.... Dante? Would she make that mistake? And what is she going to do about that whole bucket of fun?). Angela would be crushed, and a bit weirded out if he said Bella. XDDD Bella would be crushed, and pissed, and.... wow. xD
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