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Penname: muldergirl [ Contact]
Real name: Jo Anna
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Member Since: May 03, 2009
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Love Twilight (obviously!) and enjoy reading everyone's interpretations of the relationships, Especially E/B! Sorry, canon shipper here; can't bear the thought of either one of them with anyone else. But I still read those fanfics; just can't see it. I write myself, but I've yet to submit anything. Guess it takes LOTS of courage, and I surely applaud those wonderful writers here who continue to make the rest of us giddy. This is an awesome site, and I spend at least 23 hours and 59 minutes a day here. Much to my husbands chagrin! :)
Due to a yahoo glitch, I have two accounts here: Muldergirl and Darcyfitz. We are one in the same. LOL. I have to use Darcyfitz on the forum, but Muldergirl in reviews. More of me to enjoy your work, I guess!
I am in awe of all the talented writers here. You guys Rock!
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Summary: 
Her life was uneventful until she met a stunning, mysterious, obsessive man with a monstrous hidden past. What happens when the past catches up with him and throws them both into the unknown?
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes
Word count: 262583
[Report This] Published: December 19, 2010 Updated: August 15, 2011
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: January 23, 2011
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Creepy's Desk
A few things:
It's becoming clearer and clearer Edward can read Bella's mind. And she's totally clueless. And there were ALOT of clues.
I'm glad Edward did want to be with her, and their rendevous on Creepy's desk was totally hot. But why the hatred between Edward and Carlisle? Are they both Vamps? His stealth, his cold skin, his beauty, his mind reading...Edward is not what he seems. Talk about being addicted; I'M the one addicted here. I cannot wait to unravel this puzzle.
And WTF was that at the end about the ring? Who's ring is that, and why is he angry at Bella? Doesn't he know she IS keeping it safe for him?
Update soon. Before I die. LOL Author's Response: Woah... so many questions... where to start?
Glad you've picked up on Edward reading Bella's mind... it's been there since the beginning, he's quite funny at times.
Edward and Carlisle will be explained in a future chapter - I'm planning on an EPOV soon. Both vamps...hmmm, maybe the next chapter will answer that question for you.
And the ring...very important to Edward. He was worried more than anything...
Hope you continue to enjoy the story
lizzy xx
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: January 23, 2011
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Family Connections
Hmmm...something is not right with Carlisle and Edward. I'm seriously questioning whether they are human. And Edward, dangerous? Yeah, you could say that.
:)
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: January 15, 2011
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - The Morning After
good grief, even without a lemon, it's still hot. What is it with him?? I need to go take a cold shower now. Curses! LOL
Summary: This story is based off the song What Do You Want From Me? by Jarrod Niemann.
Edward recieves a call from a person who has haunted his dreams. Can he forgive? Will he?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 4713
[Report This] Published: December 23, 2010 Updated: December 28, 2010
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: December 28, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: What Do You Want From Me?
Let me be the first to say that was awesome. And I hope for E's sake Bella means it. Lots of angst, but a happy ending....? Author's Response: Well you are the first to review, so congrats! The ending is up to the reader at this point. I left it where I did because I don't know if I'll be able to come back to it, so for those who like happily ever afters they can imagine Bella truly remaining with him. For those who are more hard-hearted, well screw them, I imagine Bella staying, LOL!
Summary: Edward Cullen was a man who liked order. He arranged his life into neat little segments, exercising rigid control in all areas of his existence. Then one day, all of it was brought tumbling down by one simple question.
The lovely banner is courtesy of Readergoof, and I think it is amazing! Thank you!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes
Word count: 52050
[Report This] Published: March 22, 2011 Updated: August 08, 2011
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: May 30, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Wow. That was some first chapter!
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: May 30, 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Peeks around the corner....oh, boy. What is he doing??
This story is so witty and dry; I laugh at Edward's internal monologue.
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: May 30, 2011
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Good grief, that was shocking! Bella is lucky he didn't go off on her! LOL
Excellent so far!
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: May 30, 2011
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Beautiful. Will Edward allow Bella to heal him?
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: May 30, 2011
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Whoa...looks like Edward's routine is a bit off kilter?
I have to say, I love your writing style. Your third person narrative is wonderful!
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: May 30, 2011
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
That was so lovely, Bella telling Edward her mother would have loved him. Sigh...
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: May 30, 2011
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
OMG, so beautiful! I love how she has worn down his carefully constructed order and wove her way into his heart.
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: May 30, 2011
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Lay down the law, Bella. Sometimes a guy just needs to be put in his place. :)
Summary: Bella Swan is a down on her luck, single mom whose son suffers from an extreme medical condition. Edward Cullen is a medical student who is assigned to help Bella and her son find affordable medical care as an ethics project. Needless to say, he's not too happy about the assignment as he would prefer to focus on what he feels is important, and Bella is not thrilled with a snobby medical student butting into her life. Will they be able to get along so Edward can get his project done and Bella's son the medical attention he needs, or will they end up hating each other on the way?
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A huge thanks to fallanydeeper for making the awesome banner!
 
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No
Word count: 52297
[Report This] Published: April 20, 2011 Updated: September 11, 2012
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: May 15, 2011
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
So moving. And I thought I'd mention, because I work in pharmacy, that I know many times medicaid patients are treated poorly. Sometimes I see what is called a prior authorization for an antibiotic!! Which could take 72 hours to be approved, AFTER the doctor calls medicaid. An antibiotic!! Which is something needed asap. It's very sad, indeed.
Back OT, I felt so bad for Bella, admitting to Edward she didn't think she was good enough for him. Thank God Edward is better than that.
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: May 15, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Ooh, found this story and I love the idea of snobby Edward. I know how tough it is for a single parent; my mother passed away when I was ten and my father struggled to raise me on his own. I didn't have any health issues, but I couldn't imagine if I did. Single parent's should be applauded and supported! xx
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: May 15, 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
I can totally understand getting upset at the idea she is being pitied. I guess she was defensive, but what can you do? LOL
Anyway, I hope Edward doesn't muck things up again! xx
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: May 15, 2011
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Let me just say that Mike harrassing Bella for a date is totally inappropriate. LOL.
Jerk.
So, Edward and Bella made a truce. How long will it last?
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: May 15, 2011
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
I knew that the niceness couldn't last. LOL
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: May 15, 2011
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Hmm..looks like meeting Edward has given Bella a step in the right direction!
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: May 15, 2011
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Yes. Denial is great. But it doesn't last. :)
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: May 15, 2011
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Stupid, silly Bella. Put that pride aside, girl! Geez...I don't blame Edward for calling her on her behaviour.
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: May 15, 2011
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Loved the internal monologue, although it's sad to witness Bella being so hard on herself. Poor thing.
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: May 15, 2011
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Well, damn. I'd be a freaking mess if I was sitting alone with Edward Cullen, him staring at me intently and wondering if it's a date. Yowza!
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: May 15, 2011
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Oh, Lord. The boy has gotten a clue. Yes!!
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: May 15, 2011
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Edward and Carlisle to the rescue! The dynamic duo in all of their sexy glory. LOL
I love how sweet Edward is to Bella, and how he took charge of Matt's care. Such a gentleman. Sigh...
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: June 01, 2011
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Ooh, the big date!! I'm so excited...please, as you know Bella pretty well, don't let her say anything snide to ruin things. LOL
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