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Real name: Jo Anna
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Love Twilight (obviously!) and enjoy reading everyone's interpretations of the relationships, Especially E/B! Sorry, canon shipper here; can't bear the thought of either one of them with anyone else. But I still read those fanfics; just can't see it. I write myself, but I've yet to submit anything. Guess it takes LOTS of courage, and I surely applaud those wonderful writers here who continue to make the rest of us giddy. This is an awesome site, and I spend at least 23 hours and 59 minutes a day here. Much to my husbands chagrin! :)


Due to a yahoo glitch, I have two accounts here: Muldergirl and Darcyfitz. We are one in the same. LOL. I have to use Darcyfitz on the forum, but Muldergirl in reviews. More of me to enjoy your work, I guess!


I am in awe of all the talented writers here. You guys Rock!


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Reviews by muldergirl
 
Summary: Feature

 

Edward Cullen needs to pass Statistics. Bella Swan is his tutor. She thinks he's a flighty, arrogant--albeit sexy--asshole, and he thinks she's Bipolar, but tries to win her over, anyway.

Can he change her mind, or do first impressions really last?

 Thanks to my baby momma, Maximista, for the banner! <3


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Ben, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 34 Completed: No Word count: 258464
[Report This] Published: February 20, 2009 Updated: January 14, 2011


Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: May 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 28: Hello/Goodbye

Oh, no..please, let her realize she wants Edward...

 
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: August 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

looks like Edward has gotten himself into a world of shit...lol...can you make it better for him??? Please???

 
Summary: Feature

 

Bella begins working for the elusive and distant Edward Cullen who she discovers is hiding behind an elaborate charade to maintain his secret lifestyle. Bella is determined to find out the mysteries of Edward Cullen but with what results? AU. Mystery/Humor/Angst


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: No Word count: 173201
[Report This] Published: February 22, 2009 Updated: December 27, 2009


Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: August 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

You write just fine...Stephenie Meyer or not!!! I'm loving this story; ooohhh, tortured Edward. Yum LoL..Thanks for an amazing read

 
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: August 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

i love it. It's wonderful how you wrote Bella got to know the real Edward throgh his vast history of memerobelia. That's fantastic

 
Stages by bellabeth222 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 425]
Summary:

As a college senior, Edward can't wait to graduate.  He's made some great friends but that's all.  That is until he starts paying attention to the girl down the hall, Bella.  Something terrible happened to her and he finds himself watching over her and the downward spiral that is becoming her life.  Can he help her?  Can he save her when she can't even see she needs saving.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 56056
[Report This] Published: February 23, 2009 Updated: October 31, 2009


Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: September 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Edward is sooo sweet and protective. Good job. You have alot of talent. Can't wait to see more. Like, a relationship!! LOL

 
Summary: Feature

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Bella is devastated by the loss of her mother and is forced to go live with Charlie, her Mom's best friend, when there is no one else to take her in. She gives up on living, too lost in her own anger to let anyone close to her. Enter Edward, the handsome teenage vampire, and the beginning of a complicated love-hate relationship. Neither can deny the connection between them, but can their love survive the fear that rules her and the secret he hides from her? AU and OOC, Rated NC-17 for language and sexual content.


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 47 Completed: Yes Word count: 292396
[Report This] Published: February 24, 2009 Updated: December 25, 2009


Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: July 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 41: Juxtaposition

AWESOME CHAPTER. CAN'T WAIT UNTIL THE NEXT ONE. HAPPY HAPPY BIRTHDAY TOO!!!!

 
Summary:

Bella Swan, a young registered pharmacist from New Jersey, takes a job in the Forks, WA Regional Hospital, determined to start her life over.  She meets the handsome, brooding Edward Cullen, who also works in the hospital's pharmacy...but on the night shift, of course.

Will Edward be able to control his agonizing thirst for Bella's blood? How will the emotionally wounded Bella react to her increasing attraction to him? Can Jacob be effective as a minor, if consequential, character? And most important, can Serendipitous refrain from the gratuitous use of hokey questions to attract readers?

 

    Huge thanks to the talented and generous Anne Cullen for the banner!

 

 Canon pairings; the Cullens are still vampires.  Edward's and Bella's ages are advanced to their early-mid 20s, to give them more adult sensibilities.  Other than that, the story parallels "Twilight," with some new adventures in line with the characters' ages and situations.  The chapters alternate between Edward's and Bella's POV. While it's not a *funny* version of "Twilight," there are definite sparks of humor in it.

 


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes Word count: 206646
[Report This] Published: March 16, 2009 Updated: December 01, 2010


Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: April 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Bella, Chapter 12

Thanks for the update. Good riddance to James. I love how tender Edward is with Bella. Sigh...



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you!  I'm so glad you like it.  Thanks also for leaving a review.

 

 
Summary:

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All told from Edward's POV, The Acclimation Diaries, chronicles Edward’s struggles with learning to control himself and taking things one step at a time as he acclimates himself to Bella sexually in preparation of their impending wedding night.  Can he keep his desire in check or will he snap?

 

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A companion story for my one-shot, “Show Me”

TAD Banner by: falconcranelove

Indie Banner by: AngstGoddess

 


Categories: Eclipse, Post-Eclipse, Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 84817
[Report This] Published: March 19, 2009 Updated: September 19, 2009


Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: June 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: The Fantasy

I've had to start taking heart medication after reading your story...LOL

It is really good and sexy and fun; just enough angst to be true to character for Edward, but a good dose of naughty just as we all hope he would be. Great job...Can't wait to read the rest. Please continue...asap...LOL



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!  I'm so glad that you are enjoying my little fic!! 

Please, stay tuned!!  *MWAH*

 
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: June 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Naughty Bella, Dirty Edward

You are too devious and deserved to be tortured.LOLOL

But I love you and your story...LOL

Wow...too hot. Keep it coming. NO pun intended.LOLOL



Author's Response:

I love you too babes *MWAH*

Thank you so much for reading and please, stay tuned!!

 
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: June 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Painfully Slow

Fantastic....I loved the bit about him scrubbing his hands through his hair and Emmet said "he's doing the hairpull again,this must be serious.." HaHa

So Robert!!!! More please!!!



Author's Response:

LOL!  Thank you so much babes!!  You are awesome!!

*MWAH*

 
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: June 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Soixante-Neuf

ANY IDEA YET WHEN WE CAN EXPECT THE NEXT CHAPTER??? HINT HINT



Author's Response:

LOL!  I will be working on it tonight bb, hang tight ;-)  Thank you so much for reading!!  *MWAH*

 
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: September 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: The Piano Bench

That bit about the spaghetti and garlic bread made me spit out my water!!! I could just imagine his fear at that conversation!! Who hasn't felt like spewing their food when right after they are forced into an uncomfortable conversation. Poor Edward. LOL



Author's Response:

LOL! I'm so glad you liked it!!  Thank you so much for reading and please, stay tuned!!  *MWAH*

 
Summary:

Diseased Affair

When Charlie is diagnosed with cancer, Bella decides to move to Forks to help him through his treatment and recovery. What happens when the resentful son of the new cancer doctor meets up with the reason he was dragged to this small town? AH. E/B.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Renee
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 99780
[Report This] Published: March 20, 2009 Updated: December 27, 2009


Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: October 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 30: Peaceful, Easy Feeling

SO SORRY ABOUT YOUR DAUGHTER..HOPE SHE'S OK. KIDS ARE AMAZING, NO? lol

SO HAPPY TO SEE THE UPDATE, TOO. CAN'T WAIT TIL TOMORROW TOO, HAHAHA

 
Summary:

Bella's injuries in the ballet studio were severe. This is the story of her recovery-from the hospital, back to Forks, to her return to school-and how Edward copes with it. All told in Edward's point of view. Angsty with doses of fluff. Enjoy!


Categories: Twilight Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 20210
[Report This] Published: March 20, 2009 Updated: August 07, 2010


Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: October 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

doesn't suck and was worth the wait!!!!

 
Summary:

 

Bella meets Edward when he picks up his nephew from her Pre-K class and the sparks fly.  As their feelings for each other grow, Edward has a prior commitment that he is convinced must be seen through. A commitment that is effectively keeping them apart. Are there some complications that even the strongest hearts can't overcome? Can they resist the one thing they can't have--Each other?

To get to the prize, they'll have to survive the temptation of one another, in this emotional waiting game.

Show and Don't Tell.

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Stephenie Meyer owns any Twilight characters and Twilight plot lines that may appear in this story.  The remainder is my original work.    No copying or reproduction of this work is permitted without my express written authorization.  Copyright 2009 by Brits23.
 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Kate, Rosalie, Sam, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 124914
[Report This] Published: March 25, 2009 Updated: December 16, 2009


Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: August 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Uuugghhh...I wish that bitch would just fucking DIE already!!! Wow...what a fantastically erotic chapter. And what a cliffy at the end. Psycho bitch better watch out! LOL

I've waited all week for this update, and it was well worth the wait.

 
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: August 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Great chapter!!! I could feel the love between Edward and  Bella...good job. Please don't make us wait too long for another chapter!! LOL

 
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: December 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue

So sorry it's over, but what a way to go. Thanks for a great story

 
Summary:

"The light had gone completely from my universe when I’d left her behind; as though it had been sucked into a black hole; still in existence, but invisible to me. I was the Event Horizon on the outside of the light. "-Edward Cullen

This is Edward's side of the story of New Moon. Mostly cannon, except for places where I had to fill in the blanks and use my imagination. A big thanks to annamorphos for the fabulous banner. The sequel to this story, called Dark Matter, which is Eclipse from Edward's POV has been posted.  


Categories: New Moon Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 120447
[Report This] Published: April 03, 2009 Updated: October 29, 2009


Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: September 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17-Domino Effect

Awesome chapter!!! Serves Edward right for being a dumbass; of course, I'm team Edward so I'll let it slide on his part. lol

I really enjoy your style of writing; you bring Edward's angst out quite well. Any idea how many chapters to go?



Author's Response:

Thank you.  There will be at least one more chapter, possibly two. I had planned to put a scene in this one from the guys' hunting trip and I really didn't know what I wanted to do with it, so that might be an extra and there will also be a one shot companion piece to this story from Victoria's POV that has her conversation with Laurent in it.  

 
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: October 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19-Disquiet (Edward's Epilogue)

This was a fantastic story and I'm so sad it's over. sigh...I absolutely loved the line

"The mistake I made on a chilly wet day in September would haunt me for the rest of my life."   So awesome, and really sums up the damage poor Edward caused. Please, write a story on EPOV of Eclipse. Thanks and good luck!



Author's Response:

Thanks.  It was a little hard for me to let go of too.  But I got to spend some time working on my Eclipse outline today, including some chapter titles.   I don't think its going to take me too long to get started.  I'm really focused on my original stuff too though.  I thought about making the line you mentioned the very last one in the story, but I thought it was a little too open ended.  Thanks again. 

 
Summary:

Edward Cullen is a vampire living alone, away from the rest of the Cullens, with nothing but his music to fill the emptiness of his lonely heart. Little does he know that his quiet seclusion will never be the same again when the shy, beautiful Bella Swan comes into his life. Quiet but inquisitive, Bella is more than curious about Edward and his strange habits. Little does she know that his secret could threaten her very life. Will Edward be able to control his appetite for her blood and satisfy his yearning for this enchanting young woman?

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Categories: AU Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 34559
[Report This] Published: April 03, 2009 Updated: August 14, 2009


Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: July 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

GREAT STORY...I EAGERLY AWAIT THE NEXT CHAPTER. THANKS FOR WRITING



Author's Response: THANKS FOR READING!! Haha it means alot!

 
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: September 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I'm waiting forever for this story to update...please, please, don't abandon it..it's too good!!

 
Summary: Feature

Bella is married...for now...and starts a new job at a local bank. Edward Cullen is a ruthless overachiever that will stop at nothing to get what he wants. Their two worlds collide...will she be able to soften his hardened heart? Eventual Canon couples...AH!!! A bit OOC.

Edward and Bella--Devil In Disguise


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 26584
[Report This] Published: April 08, 2009 Updated: June 10, 2010


Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: August 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: A Little Bit of Heaven and A Whole Lot of Hell

When are they going to meet??? aahhhh!!! I'm still here here, so please update. LOL

 
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: August 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: A Little Bit of Heaven and A Whole Lot of Hell

When are they going to meet??? aahhhh!!! I'm still here here, so please update. LOL



Author's Response:

Soon...thanks for the review.

 
Summary:

Bella works at an uber trendy fashion magazine at the Upper East Side. She also took a part time job at an orphanage. What happens when her path crosses with a gorgeous, but distant and ever furious soccer coach, Edward Cullen? Ratings may go up.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: No Word count: 88858
[Report This] Published: April 10, 2009 Updated: May 18, 2010


Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: November 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Tongue Tied

iT'S ABOUT TIME! i'LL MISS YOUR STORY WHILE YOUR ON HIATUS. gOOD LUCK STUDYING AND UPDATE ASAP



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: April 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31: Heartbeats

That was...whew...very sensual. Your story doesn't suck. Not at all. Now get working on the next chapter post haste!! :)

 




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