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Penname: muldergirl [ Contact]
Real name: Jo Anna
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Love Twilight (obviously!) and enjoy reading everyone's interpretations of the relationships, Especially E/B! Sorry, canon shipper here; can't bear the thought of either one of them with anyone else. But I still read those fanfics; just can't see it. I write myself, but I've yet to submit anything. Guess it takes LOTS of courage, and I surely applaud those wonderful writers here who continue to make the rest of us giddy. This is an awesome site, and I spend at least 23 hours and 59 minutes a day here. Much to my husbands chagrin! :)
Due to a yahoo glitch, I have two accounts here: Muldergirl and Darcyfitz. We are one in the same. LOL. I have to use Darcyfitz on the forum, but Muldergirl in reviews. More of me to enjoy your work, I guess!
I am in awe of all the talented writers here. You guys Rock!
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Summary: Edward's thoughts as he leaves Bella in New Moon. Angsty oneshot. The story is inspired by the David Cook song "I Did it for You", but this is not a songfic.
Categories: New Moon Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 1337
[Report This] Published: October 15, 2009 Updated: October 25, 2009
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: November 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I agree, I think the books should have been written from dual POV's...can you imagine how intense it would have been to read Edward's pov from New Moon? We all know why he did what he did, but to experience it with him would have been something. I know why SM wrote the books from Bella's side, but I can't help but feel they would have been better from Edward's. Bella had a short, uneventful life before meeting Edward, and he had a centuries worth of experiences and lonliness. Not to say I didn't feel Bella's feelings, just she was too young and 'human' to really have that kind of depth, you know? Thanks for writing this; I wrote a similar one shot about the same thing; it is an awesome part of the story that invokes alot of emotion.
Summary: 
Bella is trapped in a loveless marriage with Edward Cullen - a man she hardly knows. When his father dies, Edward uproots them from their life in New York City and moves into his father's now-empty house in the heart of Colorado. Amidst the desolate, beautiful landscape Bella begins to realize that perhaps there is more to her cold, apathetic husband than she thought.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No
Word count: 41782
[Report This] Published: October 16, 2009 Updated: January 31, 2010
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: January 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: The Storm
I, like everyone else, is wondering of the back story of their past. I can't say I 'hate' Edward yet; sure he comes off like a bastard, but Bella comes off like a spoiled bitch too. Maybe he's just reacting to some transgression Bella committed. It's nerve wracking to watch the tense interactions between these two; there is alot of unspoken angst and I'm dying to find out why. Of course, an EPOV would be great; any chance of that? I think this story is enthralling. Please give us more insight to these two.
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: November 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: The Funeral
OK, SO WHAT HAPPENED TO MAKE THEM HATE EACH OTHER SO? DID EITHER OF THEM HAVE AN AFFAIR? WAS IT A MARRIAGE OF CONVIENIENCE? DID THEY EVER LOVE EACH OTHER? ANSWERS..YOU'VE GOT TO GIVE ME SOME ANSWERES. LOL
Summary: 
Robert Pattinson is twenty five years old and a solid A-list international star. He is on the last leg of a European promotional tour for his latest film, when he meets a sexy much older woman who has been hired to serve as his language interpreter. What will develop during their travels throughout Spain, Italy, England, France and America? Will this older woman teach Rob about love and lust or will he have something to teach her? Lots of ripe, juicy, delicious lemons and possibly other fruit, I promise.
Finalist for best RPF in the 2010 Faithful Shipper Awards
Winner for Best Comedy—Reality Rebellion Awards 2010
Winner for Best First Kiss—Reality Rebellion Awards 2010
2nd Place for Best Original Character—Marisa, Most Original Plot, Best One Liner—“Your scent is still all over my fingers. It’s driving me to distraction.”
Finalist for best RPF in the 2011 Faithful Shipper Awards
Thanks so much to all those who voted for OTI!
Banner created by the wonderfully talented DreamySims1
Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 43 Completed: No
Word count: 289023
[Report This] Published: October 25, 2009 Updated: August 04, 2012
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: August 31, 2010
Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34--La Folie
The 'poor baby' here is Marisa. She has everything to lose by letting him into her heart; if it was just a fling for 'Rob', he could move on to the next in line. That was totally wrong of his mother to do what she did. Ambushing her at lunch was unforgivable. And where the HeLL are those condoms???? LOL
Please make it all better for our girl. She deserves love and security. Author's Response: I heart you hard for caring about Marisa's well-being so much. Yeah, Clare is having quite a difficult time coming to grips with her "poor baby" loving an older woman. The mystery of the missing condoms will be resolved in the next chapter, in Paris. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: August 07, 2011
Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40--Surrender
Hi! Welcome back! So good to see an update..I loved the chapter. So sexy! Author's Response: Thanks, hun!
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: September 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35--Oh, là, là
Oh, la la for sure. Oh, hell. Mrs. Pattinson. Now there is a name I would proudly carry. I am so happy Marisa's heart wasn't broken. She's too good a person and too alive to experience that type of pain. Thank you for not prolonging her agony. :)
Rob, Rob, you dirty boy. Gah, the thought of him REALLY doing that is just, well, thud....
Thanks for the lovely update. Yay! Author's Response: Mrs. Pattinson does sound nice, doesn't it? We'll see. I'm glad you see Marisa that way, I do too. Dirty, forceful Rob is so hot. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: February 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21--Stage 5 Acceptance
So what excuse will playa Rob have. I love, love, love 'real' Rob, but something tells me he gets exactly what he wants. LOL ..can't wait to see more.
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: February 20, 2010
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...
Sexy!!! Couldn't help but wince though; it would be irony if she showed up at his place, and say, some tramp was there, or worse: Sienna!! Have a sinking feeling it's not over yet. The angst, that is.
Hope you feel better soon. Bronchitis sucks! I had pneumonia last year for 5 weeks! So take care of yourself. :) Author's Response: Wow, 5 weeks, that's awful. I'm feeling a bit better thanks to the antibiotics. This story will be long, so no, the angst is not over, but it won't resurface just yet. Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: June 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30--Meet The Pattinsons
Hilarious chapter, really. All that peach pie talk...LOL
Your story is fab and I enjoy it so. xoxo Author's Response: Thanks so much muldergirl, I cracked myself up writing this chappy. That's a good thing, I guess, lol. Glad you liked it. Thanks so much for reviewing. Hugs.
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: August 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32--Au Revoir, Mon Amour
Gulp..I hate seperations and always worry about what's gonna happen. It doesn't help with your talk of cliffhangers next chapter!! LOLOLOL
This story is awesome. And I'm sure he has alot of stalking stories. I adore the guy, but could never stalk him.That goes beyond healthy. And we all know how much he fears it. Hopefully people will leave real Rob alone to live his life in peace. I know, doesn't seem likely. Author's Response: There will be lots of twist and turns, so hold on tight. Yeah, Rob being stalked is a scary prospect. Let's hope it's not happening in real life. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: August 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33--Quelle Horreur!
Yikes..missing condoms..I was fearing Rob took them, but Geez..he'll be in Paris for 2 months, and if he wanted to cheat, I'm sure Paris has plenty of condoms. One of Rob's sisters maybe? Or maybe that crazy stalker bitch, as a souvenier? Yes. I think we have a winner. (hopefully?) *bites nails* cause I'd be heartbroken if he cheated. Author's Response: Muldergirl, what about this horrible possibility, what if he used them already? I know, I shudder to think that too. You'll find out very soon what happened to the missing condoms. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: December 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38--La Vie en Rose
OMG, I'm game...poor Marisa. But to have two men fighting for her affections...wow. Thanks for that lovely chapter. Looking forward to the 'showdown'. LOL
Summary: 
I had known him my whole life, but it had only been five months, two weeks, and six days since I’d realised I was in love with my best friend, and I still hadn’t worked up the courage to tell him.
Bella & Edward are next door neighbours, and since childhood best friends. Bella is the shy and clumsy girl at school, picked on by the other students in her class; Edward the popular jock with flocks of girls who like him. How can Bella ever express her feelings of more than just friendship for him?
AU/AH Canon Couples.
Thanks to Ellashy for help with the banner.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No
Word count: 43391
[Report This] Published: October 28, 2009 Updated: March 08, 2010
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: November 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Settling Disputes
great chapter; i don't know why, but I feel something bad coming...LOL...New Moon was awesome, I thought, although much conversation was cut out. I had a best friend who was a guy a long time ago, and he was upset I wouldn't break up with my boyfriend who was a total nut! Stupid me, but I lashed out at him for 'interfering' with my life. I see alot of my friendship in your story here. Sighs...
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: March 08, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Get This Party Started
great chapter; sooo, was edward jealous??? i think he was!!! when can we start seeing some honesty between these two??
the most interesting gift i ever received was from an old boyfriend. He was a composer and wrote me a song, bound it in lovely paper, and then played it on the piano for me. sigh..
Summary: 
After an emotionally abusive marriage Bella finally finds the strength to leave. With the help of her friends and a new mysterious stranger she starts to discover who she really is. Will she allow her past to keep her from true love or will she risk heart again?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No
Word count: 92425
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2009 Updated: April 03, 2010
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: November 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Destiny Be Damned!
I'm really enjoying your story so far; boy that Edward is nothing if not persistent. LOL
So...could it be Jake making all of this trouble? Author's Response: Thanks for reading and i'm glad you like it so far!
Edward is very persistent. When he sees something he wants he goes after it and Edward really wants Bella. Under normal circumstances this would not be a good thing because he is something of a womanizer, but in Bella's case Edward feels something entirely diffrent.
I'm so not giving up who it could be, and if you don't know but have suspitions then I'm doing my job right! I hope to keep you guessing.
XOXO~MB
Summary: 

Bella is a family attorney & Edward seeks her help. Friendship abounds, maybe more? AH, AU, OOC,
Rated M for later, they are adults & will do adult things!
Canon Couples
My BFF is Twitter: Mrs_Robward
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character
Challenges: Series: Always Human
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes
Word count: 92216
[Report This] Published: October 31, 2009 Updated: December 27, 2010
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: February 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11, Beauty & The Beast
I'm like freakin' dying here for an update; can you like type a little faster?? LOL
I say this with alot of merriment, of course. This story is great and I can't wait for the angstfest that's awaitin' when Edward realizes Bella just bailed. She's got a lot of 'splaining to do!! Poor Bella. Can't Tanya like, trip and break her neck or something? I was reading the wedding scene in Breaking Dawn when she meets Bella, and wanted Bella to just stick out her tongue and say na na na, he's mine. Not very mature, but, eh.. who cares. I don't think I'd care if Tanya was a saint and did more charity work than Mother Theresa. The bitch has to go down. LOL
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Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: February 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12, Lyrical Flowers
WHAT????!!@#$%
Summary: Bella's parents have comissioned a painting to be done of her by one Edward Cullen. Edward, though, is too suave for his own good and its not long before he's trying to talk Bella right out of her own clothes.

“You did really well,” Edward said, beginning to pack up his things.
I blushed. "Thank you."
“You ever thought about posing nude?”
My head went up in shock and I half expected to see one of those gotcha smiles plastered on his face. There wasn’t though. No, instead he looked deadly serious, like he was already taking my clothes off with his eyes. I felt the sudden need to cover up.

Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Charlie, Edward, Renee
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No
Word count: 117988
[Report This] Published: November 05, 2009 Updated: August 06, 2010
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: February 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Thnks fr th Mmrs
I feel like nauseous now...so unexpected that it would take a turn like that, but not unexpected given how Edward is. I think, honestly, that Bella should just forget him. Not every story has a HEA, and sometimes it's just not worth the heartache. He needs to know what he's thrown away, that Bella isn't some random piece of ass. People have feelings, and fall in love, sometimes with the wrong person. I can't see how any repenting on his part will make up for what he's done.Accidents happen my ass; we're all adults and we know what we're getting into. Whether it was a purging goodbye screw, an angry screw, or an honest to goodness he really wants her screw, the point it, he's a slime for doing it fifty feet away from Bella after their earlier discussion. And I think Peter should beat the shit out of him!! Sorry...I think your story is wonderfully heartbreaking, but I can't see how they can move on from this. It just seems so..final. He's really fucked up this time, and he needs to pay for it. Why should she forgive and forget, when the image of them getting it on is quote "burned in her retina's." That's just harsh and cruel to expect it of her. On a happier note, update soon. :)
Summary: 
Stephenie’s cut-away during the honeymoon left many of us extremely frustrated! What exactly happened from that touching moment in the bay until morning, when Bella woke up with feathers in her hair? Did the rest of the honeymoon proceed smoothly?
No honeymoon is completely perfect—especially when the two people involved have never done anything like this before. And especially when the couple is Bella and Edward, with all their unique problems.
Join me as I explore Edward's thoughts and feelings during his most intimate moments with Bella. Watch these two grow and learn about each other as they fall deeper in love. I hope you will agree that I have treated their love with the utmost respect and good taste that it deserved.
Categories: Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes
Word count: 64151
[Report This] Published: November 07, 2009 Updated: January 14, 2010
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: January 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Sexy as hell!!
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: January 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Wow, that was very moving..yeah, not ashamed to admit I'm all teary eyed. LOL..your story just keeps getting better each chapter. You can really feel the playful, hot as hell lust they have for one another, but over that is the deep love they share which continues to grow stronger. It' so great to see Edward 'maturing' with each day, controlling his urges and allowing himself to love her like a normal man. And I have to say, EPOV is my absolute FAVE!!! Thanks for writing this; it's on my favorites and I do a happy dance whenever I see an update!! Author's Response: I'm sure you won't believe this, but this was the hardest chapter for me to write. When I was in the midst of writing this story, I hit a writer's block at this point as solid as a brick wall. I wrote this chapter in my head for two weeks!! My readers were screaming for an update and I couldn't get anything happening that felt right. Everything I wrote came out so cheesy and yucky (because I'm not really a romantic person in real life). I was having trouble setting up a romantic scene for what I wanted to happen (the touching of their minds). So...I consulted a friend of mine, Randall Miller, who also contributed the poem that Edward recited to Bella in a previous chapter. The man is a true and hopeless romantic. I told him I was stuck, and this romantic scene just flowed out of him right away. Come to find out, it was something that he actually did with his wife on the beach in Cancun! LOL I'm eternally grateful to Randall for helping me write this chapter. And I'm sure you guys are too...
Summary: 
Bella has spent her life abused and betrayed. Now she feels nothing. When she meets the new boy in school she starts to feel again. But is the pain worth the possibility of something better? NC-17 for violence, language, possible lemons in later chapters.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Jessica, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: No
Word count: 102338
[Report This] Published: November 10, 2009 Updated: May 23, 2013
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: December 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Your story is great, very moving. I'm a-hatin' Charlie right about now. LOL..can't wait for an update. And for God sake, give poor Bella some color. LOL Author's Response: It's ok to hate Charlie, especially this Charlie. Thanks for the review. I'll work on the color.
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: February 22, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Thanks for the update. Poor Bella...but I think Edward will understand. Author's Response: He will understand, and then things will get really interesting. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: May 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
So sad...I'm sure it's hard, being the child of someone in authority and afraid because you feel you have no voice. I think Edward will blow a gasket once he finds out, right?? Sheesh, it won't be pretty. Thanks for the update; always happy to see one. Have a great week. Author's Response: Always happy to make you happy. Thanks.
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: June 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
I usually love Charlie, but this Charlie is more like James!! LOL
Hopefully either a) Bella will stab her father or b) Edward will arrive and kick his ass. Either way, both scenarios work for me! :) Author's Response: Unfortunately, neither of those on the horizon. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: August 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Ah, let the healing begin.
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