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Penname: muldergirl [Contact]
Real name: Jo Anna
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Member Since: May 03, 2009
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Love Twilight (obviously!) and enjoy reading everyone's interpretations of the relationships, Especially E/B! Sorry, canon shipper here; can't bear the thought of either one of them with anyone else. But I still read those fanfics; just can't see it. I write myself, but I've yet to submit anything. Guess it takes LOTS of courage, and I surely applaud those wonderful writers here who continue to make the rest of us giddy. This is an awesome site, and I spend at least 23 hours and 59 minutes a day here. Much to my husbands chagrin! :)


Due to a yahoo glitch, I have two accounts here: Muldergirl and Darcyfitz. We are one in the same. LOL. I have to use Darcyfitz on the forum, but Muldergirl in reviews. More of me to enjoy your work, I guess!


I am in awe of all the talented writers here. You guys Rock!


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Reviews by muldergirl
 
Summary:

Bella Swan has moved home to Forks. It's only a matter of time until she crosses paths with Edward Cullen, her former best friend and first love. They parted on bad terms years ago, and both thought that they had moved on... All-human, LEMONS.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Completed: No Word count: 132849
[Report This] Published: August 04, 2009 Updated: April 11, 2010


Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: February 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: You're Invited

Poor Bella...I think Edward needs to keep it in his pants for awhile; lest he impregnate half of bloody Forks!!! LOL

 
The Best Man by Whitney Love Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 392]
Summary:

Womanizer Edward meets Maneater Bella let the sheets fall where they may. It's not the average every day lover story between Edward and Bella. He's not into the one woman kind of deal and she's not into the one man kind of deal. The meet at a wedding, Edward is the Best Man and Bella is the Maid of Honor. Anything goes with these two so hold on tight and enjoy the ride.

Out of Character, All Human, Cannon Pairings.

Potty mouth and lots of lemony goodness included.

First chapter is kind of risky but I gotta show you just how naughty my Edward is. Give it a chance you won't regret it!

This banner is by Readergoof. I have another one that was up before but I'm switching to just this one for now.

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 41376
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2009 Updated: February 27, 2010


Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: October 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Loving it so far; boy they ARE getting in deep.



Author's Response:

Neither one knows what is going on exactly. They've never felt this before and they are enjoying the feeling. Something will happen between them to stop them I'm sure.

 
Summary:

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Thanks to TellyTubby101 for the fantastic banner!

What if Bella realized Edward was planning to leave her after the incident at her 18th Birthday party? Could she let his family give up the one place where they could be truly comfortable? Would she be able to disappear to give the Cullens a chance to live normal lives? She has to find the strength to walk away before Edward has a chance to break her heart – something she is certain she would not be able to survive.


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 65697
[Report This] Published: August 06, 2009 Updated: June 03, 2010


Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: November 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Invitataion

Ok, give the poor vamp a break!! LOL

Great chapter!

 
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: November 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Consequences

Wow, this was a tough one; I think it was such a shock because Edward always had the upper hand in their relationship, making all of the decisions. Bella took that out of his hands and you could just feel his grief. I really like this story and can't wait to see what happens

 
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: November 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Momentos

ok, it's about time Edward grovels. lol...please update soon!!

 
With Teeth by TalulaBlue Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5907]
Summary: Feature

Edward is a 27-year-old alcoholic/addict struggling with his recovery. Bella is a 23-year-old who's moved back home after college. This fic chronicles how they meet, fall in love, and struggle with the complexities of their relationship. Not nearly as maudlin as it sounds (I hope).

Rated NC-17 for graphic (and sometimes non-romantic) sex, drug and alcohol use and abuse, profane language, and brief (very brief) suicidal ideation (although NO suicide attempts). No sexual assault, no cutting.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 183053
[Report This] Published: August 07, 2009 Updated: August 22, 2010


Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: August 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Beautiful end. I will miss them alot, but you should be proud. xoxo

 
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: November 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

WOW. THIS STORY LOOKS LIKE IT WILL BE A GRITTY ONE...IT BREAKS MY HEART TO SEE HOW ROCK BOTTOM PEOPLE CAN GET; I'VE NEVER HAD A SUBSTANCE ADDICTION BUT I FEEL FOR THOSE WHO HAVE. LOOKING FORWARD TO SEEING HOW IT PROGRESSES

 
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: November 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I HAVE TO SAY, I'M REALLY PROUD OF EDWARD. EITHER HE REALLY TAKES HIS SOBRIETY SERIOUSLY OR HE REALLY LIKES AND RESPECTS BELLA, OR A COMBO OF BOTH. BUT EITHER WAY, HE'S DOING WELL. BABY STEPS ARE GOOD, ESPECIALLY WITH SOMEONE AS MESSED UP AS HIM. PLEASE UPDATE SOON, I'M SO EXCITED TO READ MORE. THANKS

 
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: December 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

This story is fantastic and I anxiously await updates...It is just angsty enough to not be too melodramatic, but each sentence and Edward's internal dialogue break my heart. It's wonderful that they are 'forced' to start a relationship by being friends, as that will lay a great foundation for them. From the earlier, gritty chapters, it's clear Edward never had real respect for a woman, made worse by his constantly being under the influence. He's going to have to work hard for this, and his sobriety. I like how the story pushes constantly toward Edward wanting to be better, but cautious enough to realize he's treading on a tightrope. And that line you wrote, about him not knowing how to kiss someone senseless... awesome! Dare I say with Bella he may finally figure it out?? LOL.. Keep writing, and I'll keep reading!

 
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: December 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

This was so beautfiul I cried...it was just lemony enough to not be too much, and so sweet. I love this story with a passion; to see how Edward has evolved is wonderful, and so heartbreaking. But I can only guess there will be angst ahead. Sigh...

 
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: December 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

This story is just awesome. What began as a heartbreaking insight into one man's downward spiral and subsequent 'redemption', has morphed into a sweet story of healing and love. From how you write Edward, it's clear he never loved a woman before and these alien feelings of shall we say wholesome attraction are sending him reeling. I always look forward to an update because each chapter breaks my heart in some way. I'm sure before we've finished, you will have Edward face down some demons, but it will be equally as fascinating to read. Please update soon, and happy holidays!

 
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: January 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Such a great chapter, filled with tension and truth. It's great how even though Edward is seriously attracted to Bella, and his first instinct is to just let go, he had enough respect for her and foresight to slow down and not have sex. I think he's grown up alot, as well as recovered.The Edward of seven months ago would not only have had sex with her, but probably in the bathroom of the diner!! Kudos to you for making him try to be a better man. I love this story and look forward to more.

 
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: February 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

So...have to say I'm a bit scared for them now that they've been intimate, but have high hopes Bella can help Edward heal. Loving the story as usual.

 
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: February 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Oh boy, the man is in love. and that could be the best thing for him, or the worst. Please let these two admit how they feel, and hopefully he can go to Seattle with her. I   cant bear the thought of poor Edward falling apart when she leaves.  :(

 
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: March 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Oh poor boy...he took a big gamble telling her I love you...hopefully she can say it back soon. Doesn't she? Sigh...

 
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: May 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Okay. I'm going to go curl up in a dark corner and weep myself into a frenzy. That is all.

 
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: May 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Total heartfail. Yikes, almighty...knew it, expected it, but...the reality was just too hard to bear. Poor Edward. He didn't just fall off the wagon, he flew down the rabbit hole. I think I'll go to my dark room and cry now. :(

 
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: June 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Broke.My.Heart

But it looks like Edward's doing better? And in school!?

 
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: June 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I'm so glad to know Edward is doing well. Wow...five years...

 
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: July 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

so glad that went well; it's better than feelings of anger and resentment hovering, even if they only wind up as friends. But if you do send them in the direction of love again, than friends is the best place to start. Either way, hopefully this will be a happy ending for them both.

 
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: August 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

So sweet...reminded me of their first kiss in Bella's bedroom, all awkward and sensual.Oh, I'm going to miss this story so. Whatever happens, at least they are back together, and forgave each other. It's so clear they need each other, hopefully they can overcome Edward's struggles and forge a relationship. This time, with lasting results.



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed the chapter. I love me some awkward....

Thanks for taking the time to review.

 
Summary:

Edward Masen is a former NFL football player who was injured and could not return to playing. After taking some time off to figure out what he wanted to do with his life, since playing football was out of the question, he decided to go with coaching high school football. He leads a simple, quiet life with his friends in Forks until he meets the woman that will change his life forever. Bella Swan decides to move back home with her younger brother when she gets a teaching position at her old school in Forks. AH/Canon Couples/alternating between Edward and Bella POV. Rated M ;)

Huge thanks to Jessica1971 for being my beta once again.  I could not do this without her. :) 

Disclaimer: SM owns Twilight.

Thank you to Heatherdawnc for making another terrific banner for me. =)

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie, Seth
Challenges:
Series: Always Human , SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes Word count: 170353
[Report This] Published: August 09, 2009 Updated: March 02, 2010


Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: September 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Cookie Deception and Caught Red Handed

Too Hot!!! And how could you leav that little cliffhanger there? LOL

 
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: September 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Fireworks and Late Night Talking

Lovin it...way hot!!

 
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: October 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Blushing TILF and Naked CILF

WOW..FUCKING HOT!!! POOR BELLA; CAN'T IMAGINE HER BLUSH NOW. LOL

 
Summary:

 

 

When Bella and Edward meet the first day of High School, he is a chubby misfit with no friends in a new town, aside from his popular cousins.  He meets Bella Swan, a well-liked, if uncoordinated, local with problems of her own.  This is the story of their friendship, their loss, their love and destruction.  Can they find their way back to each other?  And can they survive the changes they have both gone through since the fateful day they met?

HUGE THANKS TO ATHENALOVE and READERGOOF FOR THE AMAZING BANNERS!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Edward Masen, Sr., Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 41 Completed: No Word count: 164271
[Report This] Published: August 13, 2009 Updated: December 04, 2012


Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: December 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Two is Better than One

Wow..awesome story! I've cried in a almost every chapter. so beautiful



Author's Response:

Thank you!  We have kleenex and vodka on the thread.

 




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