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Penname: muldergirl [Contact]
Real name: Jo Anna
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Member Since: May 03, 2009
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Love Twilight (obviously!) and enjoy reading everyone's interpretations of the relationships, Especially E/B! Sorry, canon shipper here; can't bear the thought of either one of them with anyone else. But I still read those fanfics; just can't see it. I write myself, but I've yet to submit anything. Guess it takes LOTS of courage, and I surely applaud those wonderful writers here who continue to make the rest of us giddy. This is an awesome site, and I spend at least 23 hours and 59 minutes a day here. Much to my husbands chagrin! :)


Due to a yahoo glitch, I have two accounts here: Muldergirl and Darcyfitz. We are one in the same. LOL. I have to use Darcyfitz on the forum, but Muldergirl in reviews. More of me to enjoy your work, I guess!


I am in awe of all the talented writers here. You guys Rock!


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Reviews by muldergirl
 
Summary:

Life in a maternity unit is full of ups and downs!  

Bella Swan, an experienced midwife at Forks Hospital meets the new obstetrician, Edward Cullen and the attraction is instant.

As their hands touched, she gasped softly as she felt the shock of electricity that seemed to pass through their skin.  Dropping his hand abruptly, her brown eyes wide in surprise, Bella stepped back.  Without volition, Bella felt her face flame with another cursed blush.  Damn, she was 26 years old.  When was she going to stop blushing like a schoolgirl? 

Banner by Twimom817 @ TA


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes Word count: 226754
[Report This] Published: July 13, 2009 Updated: September 12, 2010


Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: March 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Can't type. Choked up. That was too lovely. I love these two and am thrilled they will have their family, finally.

 
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: April 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

So beautiful. xoxo

 
Programming by 1breezybri Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 498]
Summary:

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Bella is a plus-sized woman who loves her life. When she meets a man who has never been with a big girl before, she is reminded of the difficulties of a past relationship that left her broken. Can she overcome her insecurities and make him fall in love?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 34941
[Report This] Published: July 13, 2009 Updated: August 18, 2010


Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: February 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8 - Close to me

Hi..I was reading this story over at FF.net..glad to know you didn't abandon it! Can't wait for an update as I've read this last chapter before. LOL...

This story is great!



Author's Response:

LOL yeah Twilighted is always more slow-going than FF was...I'm on The Writer's Coffee Shop Library as well and that site will be updated a bit quicker than Twi since there's no validation process with it. I'm so glad you're sticking with me through slow updates and moving around!! Thank you :o)

 
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: July 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11 - Strawberry Swing

Yowza!



Author's Response:

Teehee

 
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: August 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12 - Set the Fire to the Third Bar

WTF??? NO Way, like seriously. I HATE that Tanya bitch, every time!! Make it better, please!!



Author's Response:

*snort* I'll kiss Edward and make it better.

 
Summary: Feature

 

Bella had the perfect life.  She was married to her longtime best friend, had a great job and a beautiful son…until a careless driver stole her happiness.

Edward was fulfilling his dreams.  His residency was almost over, he had a gorgeous fiancé, and he was ready to move forward, starting a family…until a devastating break-up and a health scare in his family shake his foundation.

See, sometimes, life doesn’t go the way you want.  Sometimes, things can happen that change the course you choose.  And most of the time, it takes courage to walk down the new path.

What if that new path started with a tee ball team?

 

Big thanks to sigh-for-sigh for the banner!!

 

Play with me on the forum.  I now have a thread in the Alternate Human thread.  

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie, Seth, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: No Word count: 116372
[Report This] Published: July 16, 2009 Updated: October 05, 2010


Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: November 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Holiday Plans

Dear God, pleaseeeeeee don't say that baby is Edwards! Yikes!



Author's Response:

I'll put your fears to rest...the baby is not Edward's.  :)

 

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: September 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 A Slight Change of Plans

How sad for Edward...it's nice he is so caring with his patients. And he really needs to open up to Bella now, if they are to move forward with their relationship. good so far



Author's Response:

I know.  He's had a rough year - and this didn't help.  He will talk to Bella...it's coming up!! 

Thank you so much!

 
Blackout by MandyLeigh010 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 248]
Summary:

 

All human, Edward and Bella POV. Edward and Bella live in two different worlds, even though they live next to each other. Things get complicated when Edward, the leather jacket wearing cigarette smoking rebel falls for the girl next door.

*Banner by readergoof* : )


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 97025
[Report This] Published: July 19, 2009 Updated: March 23, 2010


Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: October 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Crash and Burn

WTF?? Seriously, how could you just leave it THERE??? LOL...

 
Stripped by reagan Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 83]
Summary:

Bella finds herself trapped in a bad relationship and takes off to start a new life. She finds work as an exotic dancer, and finds she must overcome many issues in order to build a new relationship with a new man, Edward Cullen. Contains adult themes.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, James, Laurent, Mike, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 29458
[Report This] Published: July 28, 2009 Updated: June 04, 2010


Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: November 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Your A/N about Edward were spot on!! LOL...enjoying the story so far!

 
Summary:

***Nominated for the Indie TwiFic Award for "AH Story that Knocks You Off Your Feet (WIP)"***

I know what Bella wants.  And, even though I know it means nothing to her... God help me, I want to give it to her. I thirst for her body almost as much as I thirst for her heart. It is undeniable; I want all of her. But I will hold onto this small piece of her if this is all she is willing to give.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 63662
[Report This] Published: July 29, 2009 Updated: July 14, 2011


Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: February 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Double Entendre

Awesome!

 
Summary:

Bella Swan has moved home to Forks. It's only a matter of time until she crosses paths with Edward Cullen, her former best friend and first love. They parted on bad terms years ago, and both thought that they had moved on... All-human, LEMONS.

touchstone67 - hollaaaaa

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Completed: No Word count: 132849
[Report This] Published: August 04, 2009 Updated: April 11, 2010


Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: February 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: You're Invited

Poor Bella...I think Edward needs to keep it in his pants for awhile; lest he impregnate half of bloody Forks!!! LOL

 
The Best Man by Whitney Love Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 392]
Summary:

Womanizer Edward meets Maneater Bella let the sheets fall where they may. It's not the average every day lover story between Edward and Bella. He's not into the one woman kind of deal and she's not into the one man kind of deal. The meet at a wedding, Edward is the Best Man and Bella is the Maid of Honor. Anything goes with these two so hold on tight and enjoy the ride.

Out of Character, All Human, Cannon Pairings.

Potty mouth and lots of lemony goodness included.

First chapter is kind of risky but I gotta show you just how naughty my Edward is. Give it a chance you won't regret it!

This banner is by Readergoof. I have another one that was up before but I'm switching to just this one for now.

 

banner new readergoof


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 41376
[Report This] Published: August 04, 2009 Updated: February 27, 2010


Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: October 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Loving it so far; boy they ARE getting in deep.



Author's Response:

Neither one knows what is going on exactly. They've never felt this before and they are enjoying the feeling. Something will happen between them to stop them I'm sure.

 
Summary:

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Thanks to TellyTubby101 for the fantastic banner!

What if Bella realized Edward was planning to leave her after the incident at her 18th Birthday party? Could she let his family give up the one place where they could be truly comfortable? Would she be able to disappear to give the Cullens a chance to live normal lives? She has to find the strength to walk away before Edward has a chance to break her heart – something she is certain she would not be able to survive.


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 65697
[Report This] Published: August 06, 2009 Updated: June 03, 2010


Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: November 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Invitataion

Ok, give the poor vamp a break!! LOL

Great chapter!

 
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: November 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Consequences

Wow, this was a tough one; I think it was such a shock because Edward always had the upper hand in their relationship, making all of the decisions. Bella took that out of his hands and you could just feel his grief. I really like this story and can't wait to see what happens

 
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: November 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Momentos

ok, it's about time Edward grovels. lol...please update soon!!

 
With Teeth by TalulaBlue Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5904]
Summary: Feature

Edward is a 27-year-old alcoholic/addict struggling with his recovery. Bella is a 23-year-old who's moved back home after college. This fic chronicles how they meet, fall in love, and struggle with the complexities of their relationship. Not nearly as maudlin as it sounds (I hope).

Rated NC-17 for graphic (and sometimes non-romantic) sex, drug and alcohol use and abuse, profane language, and brief (very brief) suicidal ideation (although NO suicide attempts). No sexual assault, no cutting.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 183053
[Report This] Published: August 07, 2009 Updated: August 22, 2010


Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: August 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Beautiful end. I will miss them alot, but you should be proud. xoxo

 
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: November 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

WOW. THIS STORY LOOKS LIKE IT WILL BE A GRITTY ONE...IT BREAKS MY HEART TO SEE HOW ROCK BOTTOM PEOPLE CAN GET; I'VE NEVER HAD A SUBSTANCE ADDICTION BUT I FEEL FOR THOSE WHO HAVE. LOOKING FORWARD TO SEEING HOW IT PROGRESSES

 
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: November 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I HAVE TO SAY, I'M REALLY PROUD OF EDWARD. EITHER HE REALLY TAKES HIS SOBRIETY SERIOUSLY OR HE REALLY LIKES AND RESPECTS BELLA, OR A COMBO OF BOTH. BUT EITHER WAY, HE'S DOING WELL. BABY STEPS ARE GOOD, ESPECIALLY WITH SOMEONE AS MESSED UP AS HIM. PLEASE UPDATE SOON, I'M SO EXCITED TO READ MORE. THANKS

 
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: December 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

This story is fantastic and I anxiously await updates...It is just angsty enough to not be too melodramatic, but each sentence and Edward's internal dialogue break my heart. It's wonderful that they are 'forced' to start a relationship by being friends, as that will lay a great foundation for them. From the earlier, gritty chapters, it's clear Edward never had real respect for a woman, made worse by his constantly being under the influence. He's going to have to work hard for this, and his sobriety. I like how the story pushes constantly toward Edward wanting to be better, but cautious enough to realize he's treading on a tightrope. And that line you wrote, about him not knowing how to kiss someone senseless... awesome! Dare I say with Bella he may finally figure it out?? LOL.. Keep writing, and I'll keep reading!

 
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: December 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

This was so beautfiul I cried...it was just lemony enough to not be too much, and so sweet. I love this story with a passion; to see how Edward has evolved is wonderful, and so heartbreaking. But I can only guess there will be angst ahead. Sigh...

 
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: December 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

This story is just awesome. What began as a heartbreaking insight into one man's downward spiral and subsequent 'redemption', has morphed into a sweet story of healing and love. From how you write Edward, it's clear he never loved a woman before and these alien feelings of shall we say wholesome attraction are sending him reeling. I always look forward to an update because each chapter breaks my heart in some way. I'm sure before we've finished, you will have Edward face down some demons, but it will be equally as fascinating to read. Please update soon, and happy holidays!

 
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: January 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Such a great chapter, filled with tension and truth. It's great how even though Edward is seriously attracted to Bella, and his first instinct is to just let go, he had enough respect for her and foresight to slow down and not have sex. I think he's grown up alot, as well as recovered.The Edward of seven months ago would not only have had sex with her, but probably in the bathroom of the diner!! Kudos to you for making him try to be a better man. I love this story and look forward to more.

 
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: February 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

So...have to say I'm a bit scared for them now that they've been intimate, but have high hopes Bella can help Edward heal. Loving the story as usual.

 
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: February 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Oh boy, the man is in love. and that could be the best thing for him, or the worst. Please let these two admit how they feel, and hopefully he can go to Seattle with her. I   cant bear the thought of poor Edward falling apart when she leaves.  :(

 
Reviewer: muldergirl Signed
Date: March 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Oh poor boy...he took a big gamble telling her I love you...hopefully she can say it back soon. Doesn't she? Sigh...

 




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